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| Criticize This Poem by mrlycan: 12:38pm On Apr 21, 2012 |
Love is me, love is you Never a lie , love is true Always enough, love aint few Love is what you got for your hommies and crew Love is not just doing what you could But what you should From my birth love is the first thing I ever knew The first thing I ever received from my maami and baami too Love is the best thing in the world God is love, love is God. |
| Re: Criticize This Poem by Nobody: 1:10am On Apr 22, 2012 |
its too simple, and rhyming poems always look kiddie, try making it ambiguous...nice try though. join the club of young Nigerian writers... |
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