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(ARTICLE)A Poetry Piece Dedicated To The Super Eagles BY Dare David James Pascal / New Literary Prize In Ibadan / Are You A Good Poet? (2) (3) (4)
If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by lonelypal(m): 2:16pm On Nov 24, 2007 |
Hi guys, I need y'all to rate and vote for my poem on this blog http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12661720 |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by gwatala(m): 7:26pm On Jan 08, 2008 |
WILL YOU PLEASE STOP GOING TO POETRY.COM?!!! I'll comment if you would kindly place a copy here. |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by lonelypal(m): 3:58pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
Amidst the tide of lonelyness Lies an epitome of happiness The Angel of my time, the angel of my world Winning and dinning with my cardiac chip, Confined in my castle of obsession Throwned upon my glare of passion Endless emissaries,gem of my life The Angel of my time, the angel of my world, In the abstract realm,I am the knight. Now I unravled the misery, The Smilling Sun does not wait for her treachery Amidst so much conquest, emanates a futile bravery when ur done pls kindly vote for me on the blog pasted on my first thread.[color=#006600][/color] |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by colors(f): 8:03am On Feb 17, 2008 |
in my opinion, this is quite superfluous WHAT ARE YOU SAYING? there is no flow to this poem literary writing is about communication, you should be able to connect with your audience through your words, but most times we make the mistake of crowding our writing with "big words" in our bid to impress the audience. lonelypal, i must say, you've lost me on this one. but i'll like to see more of your work, |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by lonelypal(m): 8:21pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
@ colors I appreciate ur comment though, but I must say u r not being objective enough, it will interest u to know that one of the cardinal principles of poetry is that a poet is equipped with what is called POETIC LICENCE i.e the freedom to use words and phrases with less regards for rules of grammar. I must also add that poetry has different tones and levels. The tone of this poem is high and I will say it takes an audience with sound poetry knowledge to deduce the theme and the various poetic devices employed by the poet. |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by colors(f): 4:11pm On Feb 19, 2008 |
lonelypal, you asked for a rating and i gave you one. if you cannot handle constructive criticism then why ask for it. besides all that talk about tones and levels and as you said ", audience with sound poetry knowledge to deduce the theme and the various poetic devices employed by the poet", is a bit too far fetched dont you think. from what i've read you are still at the amateur level of any form of literary work, poetic license or not. i will still reiterate my position on your work, SUPERFLUOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by lonelypal(m): 8:35pm On Feb 20, 2008 |
, u are entitled to ur opinion |
Re: If You Are A Good Poet Please Rate This Literary Piece 4me by Trevelyan(m): 12:06pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
Lonelypal, sumhow u were quite complacent on dis 1 but i agree with u on this against colors, analyticaly speaking,the lines were nt forced nor contorted as u did nt lack the elements of an emotionaly inclined verse, Its clever n better yet speaks poignantly though the expression was intricately woven,u were able 2 achieve dat special poetic effect bt if i may suggest,work on simplicity n style, cheerz man,ure gud at it! |
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