Voting Criteria :

Opener
Rhymes
Similes/ Metaphor
Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Wordplay
Closer

Rules

-10 bars

- Deadline is 8pm (Nigerian time) on Tuesday 30th Sept, 2014.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

- A no-show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments.

- Voting is open to regular members only.

Best of luck!!!

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He was removed from danger zone tourney...he asked y, but got ignored
'I' from illness...but pronounce the 'I' as 'e'


Illness ??


..............I've ready my guns to slay this lil princess/i've been killing a few in recent/adding u to the list, that would be pleasant...................but fùck guns, my verse is drug enough to rid of this 'Illness!!'

..............Drawing out my sword; I'm really tempted/i can kill u in erri1's prescence/every 1 hates illness...............but I'm blessed here/thats y they didn't listen 2 his complains...............'presbycus' every1 turned a deaf ear!!

............He's got no guts, always hasting/my bullets arround him, they embrace him/its all expected..........cus my body is the temple of the lord 'illness' can never face me!/

............See, I'm heinous/my bullets got diff' tastes and flavours/and my verse is 'Cray thus'............ far.....its no surprise wen I turn 'God of War' and kill him with my blades of Chaos!!/

...........Now he's bout 2 get hanged/vampires tryna eat him with dem fangs........I with my guns, bout 2 do a cross fire. .but I'd 'burn him alive' if he hopes 2 survive the cross fire!!

..........I'd shove a knife dwn ur throat/i got many colors, josephs coat!.........ur balls I'd incinerate 'em/and we knw ill can't best 'Me cus' I'm döper, bt if he tries I'd give him injuries still he's gets stitched in 'threads!!'

..........My guns are in action/i cus gr8 disasters and havoc/u cant best my wack drops.......cus ur goons would cry as I get ill 'nailed' lik Jesus Christ, 'The Passion!!'

.........All my punch, are real fresh/i'd beat him up with 'canes' and it'd surely ring 'a. . .bell' in illness/bt if the dude is acting tough........I'd cme with 'electrical bars' to 'Shock I' lik lil kesh!!/

.........The dude is cartoon/i divide his body,leave it as two/i'd then start shooting tha dude/with no 'musics' he'd start 'dancing to my tune!!'/

............Ill is gon' die mehn/cus I'm gon kill all his vibe here/leper! He doesn't stand a chance with high men/cus Ill would only be a[b]'püssy nigga'[/b] if he's looked on as 'High men!!'



Geoxpress!

NOTE
(1) Lost to Krone in the Lord of The Rings.

(2) eel is a tiny fish. So dig the play

(3) Deitrick Vaughn Haddon is an America preacher.. Also get d play

(4) Check Newcastle United's team Jersey, Wongai supports them.





He'll be left bleeding alone/ when I break all his bones/I be celebrating.. while he gets choked with a chrome/
I'll not only leave with d win here buh Yall 'll applaud me a genius when I also rack up the 'votes' even in 'Geo-political zone!!'/

The content in his raps are rotten/soon dis animal be forgotten/
And put in a coffin/...
I'll triumph in dis brawl regardless of the 'auspices' cos errytin about Geo is useless even the.. 'meat of the beast of burden'!!/ (Ox pieces)

Krone came after ya madness lyka psycho doctor/ and with the verse he contoured/
he proved u a wack author/
By scripting lines that left u 'shouting on top of ya voice'.. Like..'Apapa bus conductors'!!/

Dis imp a nerdy biitch/ I'll use his blood as sauce in a dish/
he's to get schooled while I teach/
So shud run fast away from me or bear the risk of watching 'ill'.. transform him into a 'Jellyfish'!!/ (eel)

Ma flow marvel the gees/ I'm known for spitting ill frees/
This boy can't wrestle with me/
So way I'll make Geo 'flee' this scene yall 'll mistake him a...Carrier of a vector disease!!!/ (flea)

Don't get amazed when I get the fool quiet & shunned/
Cos with his trashy bars of confusion/
I still maintain my position/that in dis contest.. Geo'll never 'fall Ill' even in his... 'healthiest condition!!'/

I'on need kaboom to hv his head rolling/nor stress myself to murder his whole being/when I say no metals to dis brawl, I aint joking/
All I do is beat him with bare hands, stay mute & win the ultimate prize to prove that...Silence is golden!!/

We'll see his head bounce/ when the spray counts/
I can hv his death anytime, so its time wasting setting traps for the mouse/
When I can easily get 'Press' by visiting a...'Media house!!'/

I've come to bring him pain/ then strip him off his reign/ this f@g is battling in vain/
Cos after smashing his scrotal sac, we'll never see the gay activist with a 'hard on' even as a kid brother to... 'Deitrick Vaughn!!'/

Am the favorite in this battle/ holding the leadership mantle/
So'll order the slaughter of this cattle/ to prove that after this brawl Geo'll definitely end up a 'won guy' without... 'Supporting Newcastle!!!'/

illness
how can someone fall Ill in his healthiest condition?

anyway considering both verses......I'll say this one is a tie

Opener - Tie (both came with a bang)

Rhymes - Geo (I see fall offs but Geo was more consistent)

Similes/ Metaphor - Geo

Punchlines - Tie

Personals - Tie

Flow - Illness

Wordplay -Nil (Kratos and Auspices. The rest are generic)

Closer - Illness

Mvgt - Tie

JigsawKillah: illness
how can someone fall Ill in his healthiest condition?

anyway considering both verses......I'll say this one is a tie

Jig you didn't get the line rite? I didn't say he'll fall Ill in his healthiest condition.. Check the line again

Opener.............. tie(both had direct shots)

Rhymes.............. geo (far better. illness was barely rhymin)

Similes/ Metaphor...... tie (gay activist with a 'hard on'/ 'presbycus' every1 turned a deaf ear!!/)

Punchlines...........geo (what does illness mean by Geo'll never 'fall Ill' even in his... 'healthiest condition!!'/..... dude, u just dissed urself. should have been geo would never 'fall ill' even in his MOST VULNERABLE CONDITION/ or did u forget the meanin of illness?? and then All I do is beat him with bare hands, stay mute & win the ultimate prize to prove that...Silence is golden!!/ wtf! whatever gave u this idea...after beatin him with bare hands, u stay mute and win, silence is golden? no punch here)

Personals.........tie

Flow...........geo (easier to follow)

Wordplay...........geo (flea, ill, hymen are overused. and auspices is forced. the shock i that's meant to be shock e is a waste of time. i is i and e is e ...u just wanna force the word to rhyme. so the only wordie standin out is kratos)

Closer.............illness (no direct shot but illness got it cos geo repeated highmen in the same bar..doesn't make sense)

all in all, geo was more consistent in dissin his opponent while illness used too much fillers. after his first bar and the krone personals there was no other shots at geo from him

my-fuckyouhard-v........geoxpress

more votes pls.

Tag:
Coogar
Guykhena
Kr0ne
Limerick
Ibime
Teddybiyasi
Yeyenatu
Giyaz
Elvisonjack2
Warriblood
Jigsawkiller
Wrongturn
Ckushy
emaprince
ojoawo
thunderstorm
Testerfuze
ELYMAXiimus
iamaromolaeran
Ksslib
mikuz
geoxpress
Heywhizzy
illness
captainflash
YoungDaNaval

This ba2l sef e get as e be

Opener=> None
flow=>tie
rhymes=>Geo
pun=>both of em are forcing it ill gat an edge dou buh stil its a TIE
Meths/Simile=>Ill
Punch=>Tie
personal=>Nil
Closer=> illness
MFVGT=>ILLNESS

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Illness could have bodybagged geo.. But you're still struggling to convey your idea well.... With practice you'll get better...

MVGT = geoxpress.....

Wasn't sure what to make of both but anyhoo:

Opener: tie

flow: geo

Rhymes: i'll go wit Geo on this one.

Simile/metaphors: tie

Opener:
Punchlines: illness had more but wasn't that easy to spot. I would tie this.

Personal: same same (tie)

Closer: i'd give illness.


MFVGT: tie


YeaYeaNot

Opener - Illness (I like how he started off here wit the Geo political stuff)

Rhymes - Geo-xpress (he was more consistent wit his rhymes..cudnt really feel illness's)

Punchlines - tie (both did well tho bt cnt seem 2 understand illness even tho he was makin points)

Similes/metaphors - tie

Personals - tie (didn't even see any)

Flow - geo (easier 2 understand)

Wordsplay - Illness (geoxpress's cray-thus is forces as it is pronounced kraktos,illness on the other hand won in dis dept with that wongai newcastle shii)

Closer - Illness

MVGT - ILLNESS

Opener... tie . Illness could have won this if geo too didnt play his name. Plus ur build up watered the wow effect the geo political zone ish could have had
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Flow... geo
Rhymes... geo
Simile/metaphor. ... illness
Personals.... tie
Punchlines... illness was more creative but geo's carried attack that his. One lacked attack, the other was less creative. . So TIE
Wordplay... geo
Closer. . Illness

Illnesses could have won if he used his creativity well.

Mvgt..... geo

Testerfuze: Opener - Illness (I like how he started off here wit the Geo political stuff)

Rhymes - Geo-xpress (he was more consistent wit his rhymes..cudnt really feel illness's)

Punchlines - tie (both did well tho bt cnt seem 2 understand illness even tho he was makin points)

Similes/metaphors - tie

Personals - tie (didn't even see any)

Flow - geo (easier 2 understand)

Wordsplay - Illness (geoxpress's cray-thus is forces as it is pronounced kraktos,illness on the other hand won in dis dept with that wongai newcastle shii)

Closer - Illness

Nawa. Oga....check the pronunciation of Kratos online.

neighy: Opener=> None
flow=>tie
rhymes=>Geo
pun=>both of em are forcing it ill gat an edge dou buh stil its a TIE
Meths/Simile=>Ill
Punch=>Tie
personal=>Nil
Closer=> illness
MFVGT=>ILLNESS

U saw the tags right? Y still forcing urself 2 vote?

Going with the criteria
Opener-Illness(both were tight attacking each personality,but illness punch wasn't predictable)

Rhymes- Geoxpress

Similes/Metaphor-Geoxpress

Punchlines- Illness(more sting)

Personals- Illness

Flow- Geoxpress

Wordplay - Geoxpress(tho not feeling that "Shock I",not a good idea changing the pronounciation of 'I')

Closer - Geoxpress(,ill's won guy,I got the wordie but the way it was used,erred a bit..)

MVGT - Geoxpress( this battle could go either way,I really did enjoy ill's verse)

Geoxpress:
U saw the tags right? Y still forcing urself 2 vote?

jex coz my verdict ddnt favour you??

Opener....Geo

Rhyme....Geo

Similes/metaphor....Geo

Punchline....Illness

Personals....Geo

Wordplay....Geo

Flow....illness

Closer....Geo

MVGT....Geoxpress

neighy: jex coz my verdict ddnt favour you??

I care less if I win or lose...cus I knw my verse is dõpe......so delete ur verd

Geoxpress:
I care less if I win or lose...cus I knw my verse is dõpe......so delete ur verd

smh.. Geo just let the guys vote stand.. I've already sensed dickriding in some verds

fuckyouhard: Opener.............. tie(both had direct shots)

Rhymes.............. geo (far better. illness was barely rhymin)

Similes/ Metaphor...... tie (gay activist with a 'hard on'/ 'presbycus' every1 turned a deaf ear!!/)

Punchlines...........geo (what does illness mean by Geo'll never 'fall Ill' even in his... 'healthiest condition!!'/..... dude, u just dissed urself. should have been geo would never 'fall ill' even in his MOST VULNERABLE CONDITION/ or did u forget the meanin of illness?? and then All I do is beat him with bare hands, stay mute & win the ultimate prize to prove that...Silence is golden!!/ wtf! whatever gave u this idea...after beatin him with bare hands, u stay mute and win, silence is golden? no punch here)

Personals.........tie

Flow...........geo (easier to follow)

Wordplay...........geo (flea, ill, hymen are overused. and auspices is forced. the shock i that's meant to be shock e is a waste of time. i is i and e is e ...u just wanna force the word to rhyme. so the only wordie standin out is kratos)

Closer.............illness (no direct shot but illness got it cos geo repeated highmen in the same bar..doesn't make sense)

all in all, geo was more consistent in dissin his opponent while illness used too much fillers. after his first bar and the krone personals there was no other shots at geo from him

my-fuckyouhard-v........geoxpress

FYH, so you don't know what it means to fall somebody? To fall Ill also means to fall sick so relate it with the healthiest condition line.. Also, haven't you heard the adage that says Silence is golden before? Pls any other person that didn't dig some of my lines should not vote. Thanks

Illness: FYH, so you don't know what it means to fall somebody? To fall Ill also means to fall sick so relate it with the healthiest condition line.. Also, haven't you heard the adage that says Silence is golden before? Pls any other person that didn't dig some of my lines should not vote. Thanks

you didnt word that "fall ill'' well... Which could have been the best punch of this bout...
You could have tried something like this: geo still wouldnt fall "ill" if he infects himself with ebola

ELYMAXiimus:
you didnt word that "fall ill'' well... Which could have been the best punch of this bout...
You could have tried something like this: geo still wouldnt fall "ill" if he infects himself with ebola

so I should lose the brawl cos of that line.. SMH
More votes shaa

Geo's Ma Nigga. I Expected Him To Win This Brawl But Be Frank, This Brawl Went The Other Way Round. It Would've Been A Tie, But I Fink Illness Edged This A Little With More Punches. I Mean They Both Tied The Whole Critz Except Punchez Which I Fink Illness Took. For That,


MVGT==> ILLNESS!






Wait ooh! Una Sure Say This Illness Na Newbie??

YoungDaNaval: Geo's Ma Nigga. I Expected Him To Win This Brawl But Be Frank, This Brawl Went The Other Way Round. It Would've Been A Tie, But I Fink Illness Edged This A Little With More Punches. I Mean They Both Tied The Whole Critz Except Punchez Which I Fink Illness Took. For That,


MVGT==> ILLNESS!






Wait ooh! Una Sure Say This Illness Na Newbie??

DaNaval
Meanwhile more verds

Mikuz, Iamaromo, Krone, Coogar, Ibime ya sincere votes on this pls

I'ma be honest lads, it was a struggle to finish both verses. Not the greatest battle hence votes are low.

Verdict = tie

Illness: smh.. Geo just let the guys vote stand.. I've already sensed dickriding in some verds

Hw?

Lagunna....update the scores

Scores:

Wrongturn: tie
fuckyouhard: geo
neighy: ill
ELYMAXiimus: geo
yeyenatu: tie
Testerfuze: ill
Ksslib: geo
Guykhena: geo
sosiqdude: geo
YoungDaNaval: ill
Ibime: tie

Geoexpress:5 Illness:3

This una battle get as e be..I recommend a rematch

Nobody dominated anybody in this fight. U may call for a rematch
MVGT- - -Tie

Rematch? ok no wahala buh mk Mikuz and Iamaromo drop their own verds mk we see