Can u drop the shitty now and let's see wat's in there ma'am?

Queennelly:
HumbledbYGrace

wow.....that was educative
as you said I really didn't have a detailed plot. I saw stories I started writing mine. have taken note of all the dos and donts. my best all the way and be ready to help me when I ask for help please. ok?

wrapping this one up soon to start another. thanks very much.

Sure, anytime dear.

deleib:
Can u drop the shitty now and let's see wat's in there ma'am?

deleib:
Can u drop the shitty now and let's see wat's in there ma'am?

gud job dear.u ar doin gr8

nice story, but why give her cancer? can't begin to imagine what the kids will go through

deleib:

she dey come o.... abeg be patient....

Quatermaine:


Incredible Story.

I feel like I'm watching an american - hollywood - movie. Nice one ma'am, really nice.. The Promotion to FP was worth it.

But I must bring certain things to your knowledge and I just hope that I'm speaking the minds of a good number of the members of the "readers club" ..
- Please try as much as possible to have at least one or two posts per page and if it's the former it should be lengthy, very lengthy.
- Having observed the Title and the Story line thus far, I've found no form of correlation and with the way the story is going I might find none. Please see to this or maybe I'm wrong and then perhaps you have to enlighten me.

Again, it's a really great story you've got up there, please keep it up and just so you know, i'm your number one fan and be rest assured that i'll be following you till the very end..








P.S : CANCER?!!!

this guy

I'm just going to read this story without dropping any comment

Queenelly please continue the story

U try baby, u re a young ACTOR 4 dat matter

a very very nice story
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Quatermaine:


Ghyft.. WHAT I DID

how are you doing?. are you on whatsapp?

I'm fine...are you still in school?
And yes I'm on whatsapp

Devil na liar! I almost slept. Fully awake. Let.s roll. Good job madam writer

Quatermaine:


I'm at home. Good, pm me your number or inbox it to me via fb.


Your Diary sha..

you no serious....

Quatermaine:


I'm at home. Good, pm me your number or inbox it to me via fb.


Your Diary sha..

sent!

Queennelly u can do it! U can do it!! U can do it!!! Pls continue more brain to ur head lols!!!

Queennelly please Nah I dey beg

please bear with me....trying to add somethings to the story
will update unfailingly tomorrow evening

I have got suggestions and advice trying to add something new

manage this for now till tomorrow evening

thanks all

Hannah had cancer.
Joe allowed himself to feel the full impact of the news. Fear and grief twisted through him. They'd just gotten together, Ben was finally talking and laughing again. They'd started building the foundations for a new family, a new way of living. Rage gripped him, so powerful he wanted to slam his fist into the wall.
She deserved better. So did he. He'd buried his wife, his kids had buried their mother. Didn't they all deserve a freaking break?
Without stopping to think, he strode out of the house. He stopped only when he'd arrived at her front door. He hammered on the door, anger and fear driving him. He waited a few heartbeats, then knocked again, his muscles tense.
He was raising his hand to knock a third time when the door opened. Robyn stood there, her face very pale.
"I need to see her."
Robyn shook her head. "I'm sorry, but she doesn't want to see you."
"I don't care. There are some things she needs to hear."
Robyn eyed him steadily. "Have you ever dealt with a very sick person before, Joe? I have. My mother died from bowel cancer. Took her two years to fade away to nothing. "
'I'm sorry, that must have been tough. But that's not going to happen to Hannah. "
"I hope not. But it might. Things are going to get scary. She's going to be up and down, weak and strong, high and low."
"I don't care."
Robyn nodded. "Good. Now come back tomorrow and say the same thing. "
He swore. "I want to talk to her now."
"She won't talk to you. She wants to protect you. "
"That's my decision, not hers."
"What about your children? "
"They love her."
"And what if they lose her?"
"Hannah is not going to die."
He closed his eyes and swore again. He had children. He was their sole guide in life, their everything. No matter what he wanted to do, what his gut was telling him, he had to put his children first.
"I'll be back tomorrow. "
"Good."
He made the short walk to his house. He went straight to the cupboard in the living room where he kept his stash of whiskey and poured himself a drink. He sat down at the table, the bottle on one side, the glass on the other.
And then he thought about Hannah, Ben and then Ruby.

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Hannah sniffed loudly. Her mother passed her another handful of tissues, her third since Joe had marched away from their front door.
"This is the right thing. Hannah said for the tenth time. He sounded angry. I knew he'd be angry, but once he thinks about it he'll know I'm right."
Her mother shifted on the bed beside her. "He was very angry. Sad too. I think."
"Thank you for answering the door. I appreciate it."
"He said he'd be back tomorrow. "
"Fine. I'll tell the same thing. "
"He loves you."
Hannah took a deep breath. "Mom, I'm scared. "
Her mom pulled her against her chest. "Of course you're scared. Cancer is scary. But people beat it all the time, Hannah. And you're going to be one of them."
"Thank you, Mom."
Her mother looked surprised. "What for?"
"Not falling apart. "
They talked until they'd both run out of things to say. Finally Hannah let her mother tuck her into bed.
She rolled and stared into the darkness. She had no tears left to cry. Tomorrow she will face the reality of her new life.

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BabieGhagha:
gud jod dear.u ar doin gr8

thanks

phadat:
nice story, but why give her cancer? can't begin to imagine what the kids will go through

yeah. . its not going to be easy for them but lets see how it goes

keep up reading and commenting

sammyomotola:
U try baby, u re a young ACTOR 4 dat matter

lol

u.think?

uwc.thanks 4 d update

mariamferanmi:
Queennelly u can do it! U can do it!! U can do it!!! Pls continue more brain to ur head lols!!!

Lols thanks dear

Quatermaine:

Queennelly how far you now?, have you given up on the story?.

how can I?

Queennelly, queennelly, queennelly !!!

Aw many times did i cal u , ntin mst hapen 2 hannah pls













#nt a command oo am begging u ni oo

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm,
i just started following your story,
its a nice one,
i am so loving it

queennelly...........I just have one favour to ask, pls don't let Hannah die. is it much to ask for?