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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 12:57am On Dec 14, 2014
Onemansquad:
Dm jst lift my ban
#oga d9ty7 ah hail o ah go cum bk 2 comment 2moro
*gudnyt*

as usual
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Moyosi(f): 1:19am On Dec 14, 2014
I like all the actions,the Suspense...am not a fan of stories Involving too much voilence but I just kept reading your story,kept coming back for updates...nice one!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 10:26am On Dec 14, 2014
We'll to that
stuff46:



do you think 30 of oms type can do Mr ANything
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 10:39am On Dec 14, 2014
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:52am On Dec 14, 2014
MherihGold:
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink
oya bow down lemme rub ya head with anointing oil grin

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:55am On Dec 14, 2014
onosj:
Na only him waka come Rahmon house ooooooo......
d guy na mumu,I sure say na money d idiot dey expect...instead na knife dem dash am 4 neck
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:56am On Dec 14, 2014
Anyways,happy sunday y'all
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 11:05am On Dec 14, 2014
MherihGold:
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink

Belated Happy Birthday to You... God we make you bigger in all areas of you life...Amen.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:10am On Dec 14, 2014
MherihGold:
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink
13th of December, that was yesterday right? Be sure to get an update for that cause(your birthday) when I update in the afternoon.
I pray God grant you every of your heart desires as you add another year yesterday. The grace of the lord shall never depart you or any of your loved ones.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:43am On Dec 14, 2014
MherihGold:
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink
hapi birthday in arrears
Wishing u long life, prosperity and property ...hapi celebration
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bigwig97(m): 12:32pm On Dec 14, 2014
d9ty7....m nw hungry o, serve me with more updates....happy sunday to every1
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bigwig97(m): 12:34pm On Dec 14, 2014
MherihGold:
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink
happy birthday in arrears...god will give u more wisdom n undastanding IJN....send my own rice oh
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ritababe(f): 2:53pm On Dec 14, 2014
Happy sunday all
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 3:03pm On Dec 14, 2014
Lol.. D9ty7 made the rule known 'Dont derail the thread'.. D9ty7 is derailing the thread. I just dey observe with my two eyes closed.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ultraawesome(m): 4:28pm On Dec 14, 2014
Oga d9ty7...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:47pm On Dec 14, 2014
Hey guys, sorry for the delay in update. I have been very busy.
Will update as soon as I am done.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 5:18pm On Dec 14, 2014
D9ty7:
Hey guys, sorry for the delay in update. I have been very busy.
Will update as soon as I am done.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ritababe(f): 6:09pm On Dec 14, 2014
D9ty7:
Hey guys, sorry for the delay in update. I have been very busy.
Will update as soon as I am done.

ok
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 6:32pm On Dec 14, 2014
Chai !
Today na today*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 8:28pm On Dec 14, 2014
Nice one hapi sunday
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ajaxtea(m): 9:12pm On Dec 14, 2014
1) please D9ty7 na beg i dey beg, please free my Girlfriend's namesake "Dolapo", that emotional crisis is too much (but I didn't tell U to kill her ooooo).
Reading about her character reminds me of my girl though my girl is this outspoken type (she can talk like) but when troubles comes she becomes gentle like a Dove

2) I guessed right in my last comment when I said that Underground leads directly into the Kharl Corp....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:23pm On Dec 14, 2014
--continuation--
Clement drove into his compound later in the evening very tired and worned out. As he lazily alighted from the car, there was only one thing on his mind, which was to enter the house, take his bath and sleep.
"Welcome oga." Akpan said running towards his boss car.
"Akpan, how you dey?" Clement asked.
Suprised to see his boss speak in pidgin, which has been the order of the day since his wife put to bed.
"Oga, I dey o." Akpan replied leaning against the car.
"See you tomorrow." He said and walked towards the main house.
He was taken aback when he saw Dolapo sitting on a chair in the verandah.
"Dolapo, what are you doing here?" He asked.
"Welcome sir." She said going on her knees.
"Yeah, thank you. Why are you sitting all alone here?" He asked.
"Nothing. I just felt like sitting alone." She replied smiling.
Thank God he didn't notice her gloomy face which has since been replaced with smile.
"Don't stay long outside, okay?"
she nodded her head slowly and watched him as he bounced into the living room. How she wished, everyone on earth could be down to earth like Clement, how she wished everyone could be as nice as this, this world would definitely be a safe place to live.
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"My in-law." He exclaimed as he walked towards his mother-in-law who was eating at the dinning table, alongside Chidinma.
"My son, how are you?" The woman asked all smiles.
He settled on the empty chair beside her and chatted with her for a while.
"Is my wife in?" He asked.
"Where else do you want her to be?" His mother in law asked and they all laughed.
But he noticed something was not right. If they are just eating dinner and Dolapo was seated outside, does that mean, she has no share in the food or she doesn't want to eat.
"Chidi, what of Dolapo? Has she eaten?"
"Erm, she said she'll eat when she is ready." Chidinma lied.
Who would eat amidst tension? When you are seated opposite and enemy in an eatery, no matter how delicious the food may be, it won't just go into your mouth.
"Okay." Clement said and walked into the room where his wife and the baby was.
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"You see that's what I am telling you. There is something going on between them" the elderly woman said.
"Mama, there is nothing between them, I trust Dolapo and I trust Uncle Clement. He was only helping her and it was normal to ask if she has eaten because it looked odd that we are eating here and she is outside." Chidinma replied.
"You are still a child. I have seen so many things, even before you were born. I just hope Rachel listen to me."
"She is listening to you already, at least, you have her under control and she is ready to make life difficult for the girl." Chidinma said.
Right from when they were young, their parents has always been dominating their lives and making decisions for them. They told them what department to join in secondary school, the university to apply for, the course, even the kinds of friends they moved with. Rachel has always been the their prey, she does whatever her parents want her to do, but Chidinma who spent the majority of her teenage life as a tomboy. She lived like a man, fought like a man, did everithing like a man. Their parents had little or no control over her decision which till today still made Rachel the favourite child.
"I am only doing what I think is the best for my daughter."
"What you think? So you are not even sure?" Chidinma asked laughing.
"I am very sure. The girl was implanted by the devil so she can destroy the happiness in this family."
"Mum, I believe you'll go to your husband's house very soon. Will you teach Rachel how to live her marital life? Will you tell Uncle Clement what to do to keep his family intact?" Chidinma asked.
"Don't you dare talk to me like that." Her mother said hitting her fist on the table.
Chidinma's anger reached its limit that moment as she dropped her cutlery and stood up.
"Where to?" Her mother asked.
"I am done eating." She replied.
"My friend sit down there and finish up your meal. Have you forgotten you are an ulcer patient?"
She reluctantly sat down and picked up her cutleries. Even though she was angry, she still had to eat.
"Weldone ma." Dolapo greeted as she walked accross the living room towards the visitor's room which she was expected to share with Chidinma.
She was sure, the woman didn't reply, but Chidinma said something about dinner which she ignored.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 9:27pm On Dec 14, 2014
haydot95:
oya bow down lemme rub ya head with anointing oil grin
Lol am here
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 9:30pm On Dec 14, 2014
macpetrus:


Belated Happy Birthday to You... God we make you bigger in all areas of you life...Amen.
Amen,thanks so much
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 9:49pm On Dec 14, 2014
D9ty7:

13th of December, that was yesterday right? Be sure to get an update for that cause(your birthday) when I update in the afternoon.
I pray God grant you every of your heart desires as you add another year yesterday. The grace of the lord shall never depart you or any of your loved ones.
Ameen... Thanks soo much
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 9:49pm On Dec 14, 2014
This old woman should better do and leave that house
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:55pm On Dec 14, 2014
This update is dedicated to our one and only MherihGold who added another year yesterday 13-12-2014. Every good thing in life you shall recieve from God shall be in 13-folds. Amen!!!
--continuation--
Rahmon walked into the living room where five of his boys were seated all dressed up and evident they were going out.
"Are you guys set?" He asked.
"Yes boss." They replied in unison.
He led the way out of the house and hopped into a waiting black Toyota while the rest of the guys entered a hilux bus and they drove out of the compound with one place in mind, Victoria Vicky's residence.
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Matilda was begining to loose interest in the assignment she was asked to handle. How on earth could someone with his right senses keep twenty four hours surveillance on an individual who was a suspect by mere speculation and not caught in any illegal activities. She couldn't place why someone would be suspected because she visited a criminal, she could just be in a wrong place at the wrong time. She was not tottally convinced of Victoria's innocence, because she had outsmarted her once and the way and manner which she conversed with her showed she actually know a lot about the system.
Maybe she should just prepare a fake report emphasizing Victoria's innocence, but Sergeant Mike actually reported Vitoria to Clement. And as junior officers in the force were made to understand, a level four or Bronze level officer will only pick interest in any case because they are sure of it. It was also believed that in every five lies that a bronze level officer in the police, FBI or the SSS said, there must always be an element of truth, if not more.
Could sergeant Mike be lying? Maybe they just wanted to test her knowledge, but on a second thought, the way Clement had spoken to her on phone the day he gave the assignment told her he was passionate about either the lady, Victoria, the house she lived in or her relationship with criminals.
Then she saw two vehicles came to a halt a few metres away from her car. A black toyota and an hilux bus.
She carefully switched off the car stereo which was solemly playing a soft music before the arrival of the vehicles. From her point, she knew these men meant no good for whoever they came accross because the way they are dressed and the looks on their faces said it all.
She grabbed her gun and tucked it in the hip holster ready for some action. Then she saw it, a bag was opened before them where each of the men picked a weapon of two each, after which they crossed over to Victoria's residence.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Victoria was lying on a three seater couch as she watched a philipean romance series. He mother had since gone to bed and she was all alone by herself watching the film which said everything about high school romance and heartbreaks. How she wished she had a guy to show her love. But who would love a criminal, but now that she had dropped those old habit, she expect the Mr Right to show up soonest.
Just then she saw a man's shadow run past the window of the dinning room which was adjoined to the living room and directly adjacent to the couch on which she was lying down. Then it happened, there was power outage.
She stood up, walked to the window to check if it was all over the estate, but to her suprise, only their apartment was affected, then she knew something was wrong.
She could hear the sound of someone trying to break the kitchen door, and that was all she needed before she flew into her room and with one swift yank, she opened her wardrobe and picked her guns which she was yet to dispose, and awaited the arrival of whoever was trying to break into the house.
But the main problem was the darkness.
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Matilda who had carefully succeeded in crossing to the other side of the estate road where Victoria's apartment was without being spotted by the two men manning the ouside gate with their weapon ready for some action.
She lurked behind the fence to know what would happen after the power supply into the house had been disconnected.
She was half scared and half excited, scared because she didn't know how she could handle seven able bodied men without hitches and excited because, this would be her first real action.
She just hoped she would be successful, but she was confident of one thing, she won't die.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 9:59pm On Dec 14, 2014
Onemansquad:

hapi birthday in arrears
Wishing u long life, prosperity and property ...hapi celebration
Thanks so much
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 10:10pm On Dec 14, 2014
bigwig97:
happy birthday in arrears...God will give u more wisdom n undastanding IJN....send my own rice oh
Amen lol alright
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:30pm On Dec 14, 2014
MherihGold:
d9ty7 13th of dec was my bday... have been following your story since some days after you started.. have been busy thats why i didnt say it since.. biko dedicate an update to me nd u guys should pls drop a word of prayer for me. smiley wink
hapy birthday, you shall suffereth no mosquitoe bite, amen
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 10:48pm On Dec 14, 2014
The element of confidence is clearly involved in matilda's role. Thanks d9ty7.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MherihGold(f): 11:24pm On Dec 14, 2014
D9ty7:
This update is dedicated to our one and only MherihGold who added another year yesterday 13-12-2014. Every good thing in life you shall recieve from God shall be in 13-folds. Amen!!!
Special thanks #FeelingLoved

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