men me wia no sabi post i try learn am 2da dis ur story jst da giv me inspiration i beg me da fear 2 talk gal mak una help me i beg

I must confess, I hardly comment on nairaland but this story caught me. When i started reading it was the thought of a "science boy" with not much literary ingenuity that engulfed my mind. As i levitated to subsequent pages i saw a writer filled with potential that can be likened to gold in it raw state - rare, not-fully-tapped and priceless.
Your style is unique, you at one point said the story drafts some scenes from your real life, what an adventurous life you have then - scaling from your banging escapades to your pun prowess to your skillful use of words. Your suspense can be likened to the stimulation of the clitoris* of a woman who was stricken mad by conji**(libido) and then left void of no OGA to help her to a denouement or a man who is being given a blow** job and just before he want to realease the girl left his OGA to dangle.
You body ingenuity, I advice you take a career in writing no matter how small is the time you devout to it, just try and give it a little of your time. One thing amazes me about your writing - the way you create fictional charaters and their behaviour show underailed linearity at all parts of the write-up yet i can't still predict the story - femi is known to be sucker for sex* or would we say he has a god given aphrodisiac influencing his fictional persona, but on some occasions he doesn't push as much as i would predict in the face of sex, just like when he wanted to sleep with ruka but she wouldnt let him get to the promised land - normal femi we know in real life would talk ruka into sex because he has a way with words and he loves sex but why wouldnt the fictional femi do that?. The answer is not far - femi has another character that respects peoples choices.
I wouldnt have an answer but one, if i asked how could this your first write up and it has much coherence? - It was modelled from a real life experience. Am so happy to read your write-up bro, more strenght to your phalanges and more strenght to your d*ck( may it neva limp). I did science too in high school, am almost done with a degree in electronic engineering in college and am passionate about writing.

IKOKO TUTORING FUMILAYO SINCE 19-GBOGBORO..
CONTINUUUUU...!!!

Banjousman:
why dem ban u

I DHEY BUY SPACE...

how I which d admin or even Seun, could see this..... let them close this thread gan. make we all rest


This is unfair, guy... mind your language and besides, This thread is now in tne front page!

Story Writer I Salute.......
MayGod continue to bless you....
Nice One ....keep it up....






Pls I cnt be waitin for Game of thrones update nd stil be waitin for your updates......Your Readers ar starving..

]Wow! This is super fantastic. Love the story so much! #hazardous walahi you be bomb. Your own pass boko haram. Keep it up bro]

Yeah, his own pass Boko Haram bomb, Maybe he is one of the retired BOKO boys! Lol_

can't wait for d next update pls. ur story is just wonderful

themonk:
I must confess, I hardly comment on nairaland but this story caught me. When i started reading it was the thought of a "science boy" with not much literary ingenuity that engulfed my mind. As i levitated to subsequent pages i saw a writer filled with potential that can be likened to gold in it raw state - rare, not-fully-tapped and priceless.
Your style is unique, you at one point said the story drafts some scenes from your real life, what an adventurous life you have then - scaling from your banging escapades to your pun prowess to your skillful use of words. Your suspense can be likened to the stimulation of the clitoris* of a woman who was stricken mad by conji**(libido) and then left void of no OGA to help her to a denouement or a man who is being given a blow** job and just before he want to realease the girl left his OGA to dangle.
You body ingenuity, I advice you take a career in writing no matter how small is the time you devout to it, just try and give it a little of your time. One thing amazes me about your writing - the way you create fictional charaters and their behaviour show underailed linearity at all parts of the write-up yet i can't still predict the story - femi is known to be sucker for sex* or would we say he has a god given aphrodisiac influencing his fictional persona, but on some occasions he doesn't push as much as i would predict in the face of sex, just like when he wanted to sleep with ruka but she wouldnt let him get to the promised land - normal femi we know in real life would talk ruka into sex because he has a way with words and he loves sex but why wouldnt the fictional femi do that?. The answer is not far - femi has another character that respects peoples choices.
I wouldnt have an answer but one, if i asked how could this your first write up and it has much coherence? - It was modelled from a real life experience. Am so happy to read your write-up bro, more strenght to your phalanges and more strenght to your d*ck( may it neva limp). I did science too in high school, am almost done with a degree in electronic engineering in college and am passionate about writing.

* * smiling * *, this is actually my first story and I never knew that it would bring so much publicity like this... most of the events are not real (my wife to be is reading ooo), but I try to make it look real with the little experience I have. I'm very glad that you guys appreciate it.

As for the writing, I never really puts much into it. I just write for pleasure because I studied electrical/electronics engineering (a graduate.. power option) as well. I just took my time off when I was on working leave to write a piece of my life.


Thank you for your time to write all these things to inspire me (blushing).

Updating soon!

Haaaaaaaa,kilodesorry abt ur sysem but hv bn waiting since weekend 4 updates......hmmmmmm,will keep waiting sha#redeyeso#

She looked at me with guilt already in her eyes. I already got the answers that I wanted and she knows that within herself. I felt like scolding her but I knew it's not the right time to.

Me: (forcing a smile) that's what usually happens when you have an opposite sex as a best friend. I'm still in some mess myself. It's just a pity that you are the one that's hurting the most; because I'm very sure that he will be hurting with the way things are going on right now.
Funmilayo: (tears rolling down)
Me: will you stop that and cheer yourself up. I hope that you guys have not started sleeping with yourselves?
Funmilayo: (shouted) no ooo... I'm still a Virgin.

The tone in which she reacted to the question confirmed that they have not gone too deep. I believed her and show the sign of relief by putting on a heavy smile as I cuddle her lightly on her shoulder; signalling her to calm down.

Me: (smiling) it's well my dear! I will try to get in touch with him tomorrow. Maybe I can talk some sense into him as he did to me at the eatery.
Funmilayo: I don't want you to talk to him; he might think that I can't live without him.
Me: (smiling) I'm not comfortable about chatting a guy up for my sister but I just hate you being like this. I will try as much as I can to protect your dignity and self esteem.
Funmilayo: (smiling) thank you Brother Femi... I'm sorry if what I told you... (cuts her off)
Me: it's okay. Just go shower, get a nap and try to put a smile on that face.
Funmilayo: (pecks me) thanks bros

She rushed out of the living room with her spirit a little heightened. I will chat Bayo up tomorrow, I just hope he doesn't see it as an opportunity to sleep with my sister. I will surely kill him if I get to know. I kept thinking about my sisters problem when my phone rang... it's from Adedoyin. I have not heard anything from them (including sarah) since morning. I picked.

Me: (excited voice) hello dear, I was about dialling your number when your call rang on my phone. Hope you day went on smoothly?
Adedoyin: (smiling) yes oooo, Sarah just received a call from one of the office that our proposal has been awarded. We are going there tomorrow to finalise everything.

I shouted as I showed how happy I am to hear the news. She passed the phone to Sarah and we chatted for awhile. Sarah told me that they are coming on Friday to celebrate the contracts with me and they will leave on Sunday. They made me promise that I would be chanced over the weekend. I ended the call making the promise.
The thought of seeing my lovely Adedoyin and Sarah back on Friday brings a sudden rise between my thighs. I fantasies about both of them but I don't know how both of them would handle the fact that I'm doing the other. I sense trouble.

I gave myself a lift by picking up my phone and dialling Motunrayo's number. I can still make use of the little time I have left to enjoy myself. She picked after dialling her number for the second time.

Motunrayo: hello Femi
Me: (voice happy) hello dear! I hope you will come early tomorrow.
Motunrayo: I hope so too but I can't come early.

Hmmmmm,comment my reserve 4 now...

Ikoko.... Ikoko....I jus dy pity ur sister when Guys strt banging ha lyk drumset.....then You wil understand wah yuh doin to someOne Sister nd wife

What goes around comes around, yur 6ta ez going 2 harvest what yu sow.... #Fact

If am u, I will take on both of them at the same time, afteall it's business

Exdon10:
Ikoko.... Ikoko....I jus dy pity ur sister when Guys strt banging ha lyk drumset.....then You wil understand wah yuh doin to someOne Sister nd wife

Lol! Everyone has his/her own life to live. Just be a nice brother the best way you can... you can't be blame for your siblings misfortune (joking); But in any joke, there's any iota of truth. **winks**.

hazardous:


Lol! Everyone has his/her own life to live. Just be a nice brother the best way you can... you can't be blame for your siblings misfortune (joking); But in any joke, there's any iota of truth. **winks**.

So, when is the next update?

This is the best story I have ever read on nairaland.i can't just wait till u finish the story. Nice one bro.

Lovely, nice piece,read al thru yesterday,the last tym I got captivated like this,was unfilled something by Audrey timms,well done bro that all I can say,may God strengthen you ,hugs.

Oga harzardous... keep up the good work and Abeg post Frequently

hazardous:


* * smiling * *, this is actually my first story and I never knew that it would bring so much publicity like this... most of the events are not real (my wife to be is reading ooo), but I try to make it look real with the little experience I have. I'm very glad that you guys appreciate it.

As for the writing, I never really puts much into it. I just write for pleasure because I studied electrical/electronics engineering (a graduate.. power option) as well. I just took my time off when I was on working leave to write a piece of my life.


Thank you for your time to write all these things to inspire me (blushing).

Updating soon!

Bro, nothing do you.
sorry about the stories you lost.
Am not suprised that the semi-fictional femi has a way with girls
i dont know for other places sha but in my school and in other schools in the east, engineering boys are always good with girls. Infact in my school some boys lie that they are engineering boys just to get a girl. As an engine boy, I also have some of the charateristics of femi(women magnet) but am not into cougars. that doesnt mean am not thinking of trying sha

maryhaam:
Lovely, nice piece,read al thru yesterday,the last tym I got captivated like this,was unfilled something by Audrey timms,well done bro that all I can say,may God strengthen you ,hugs.

Thanks dear! Updating soon.

Hazardous I am waiting now...ur story is sweeter than chase sef...keep it up my broda

Dunno what to say buh I wanna comment...

Good work...thumbs up, Harzardous.

She explained that she's going to see her dad tomorrow but she will definitely come. I was very happy when she assured me that we are going to have fun tomorrow. She ended the call telling me how much she can't wait to see me.
I'm a very happy man now. At least before my sugar mummies come around on Friday; I would have done two beautiful young ladies. I smiled as I walked down to my room a fulfilled man. I laid on my bed and started fantasising how I will allow the devil to use me when Motunrayo comes around. I was brought back to reality when my phone rang. It's Bidemi's. My mind skipped. I just have to hear whatever she wants to say. I just don't want to have any negativity tomorrow when Motunrayo is around. I picked.

Me: (forming being happy) hello Bidemi, I'm just thinking about coming over to your place now.
Bidemi: (smiling) that's very thoughtful of you, but we are not at home now. We are about leaving Luth hospital now. Dad went for his final checkup. He's resuming for office tomorrow.
Me: (happy voice) that's the best news that I have heard all day. I'm very happy for the Adeboye's.
Bidemi: (smiling) I'm very happy too. I miss you Femi. Can I come over to your place tomorrow?
Me: (muted with a confused mind)
Bidemi: hello ooo are you there?
Me: I... I'm here... it's just that I have tutorial tomorrow with Chidinma and I'm going out to meet my mum afterwards.
Bidemi: okay... no problem. Just make sure we see tomorrow.
Me: (smiling) sure...
Bidemi: (smiling) okay, got to go now. My parents just stepped out of the doctor's office. Later dear.

She terminated the call before I could say anything else. I hope the excuse I gave her is genuine for her to stay home tomorrow. If she comes and found out that I scooped her to be with another lady; I'm in trouble. Bidemi is becoming a thorn in my life but I can't just imagine a world without her. I smiled as I thought over the childish things Bidemi and I have done. She's actually my life. I was thinking about Bidemi that I slept off.
I woke up around 8pm... I'm very hungry. I went to the kitchen and found out that the ladies in the house are still cooking. I decided to take a stroll down our street to buy suya to hold on to the hunger for awhile. I changed my tee shirt and I headed for my destination.
I was walking very fast to the suya joint because I locked the gate from outside and I don't want Baba Custom to get home before me. As I was approaching my destination, I saw the bread seller I saw few days back. My mind skipped as she walked pass me. I looked at her behind and I shook my head in disbelieve with what I'm seeing. I just have to chat her up; maybe we could just be friends.
I rushed after her, shouting sister! Sister!! She looked back with her bread tray held firmly on her head. I couldn't find my voice but I just managed to say something that came out of my mouth.

Me: (confused) I... I... sorry, I meant good evening
Bread seller: (looking impatient) good evening, what do you want?

The question got me off track that I forgot all the lines that I have crammed.

waoh!!! oga femi.... your story is fantastic!!!




in PHYNO VOICE....femi ikoko eh....brother funmi.....oko bidex.....boyfriend motunrayo...... sugar boy sarah..... aburo badoo..... sex machine adedoyin.... student chidinm
a...... ko ma r*di.....ko tun ma j*di.... IRANO....... ABASHA......



THUMBS UP BRO!!!

Lol...u no get shame at all

Ds ur story done turn to Sumfin else woo...!!!!!..I cnt stop readin nd yuh dnt want to give the whole of it...

Femi don't tell me u wanna Bleep this bread seller again ooo...

Guy am beginning to forget some episodes ooooo
do dis tin na, I mean update all pls

Good story bross very intrestin keep it up with d update

....weldone