Hi guys, this is my first time publishing here. I started writing stories since I was 17 but never published any. I have them all stashed somewhere in my cupboard but decided to publish this one.

So, I would love your comments, praise and criticism.


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Title: Boodshot

Cast
Babine
Alex

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Guys, I need comments please.

Kay29000
Karchisbarbie
LordReed
Adesiji77
Cetona

Godmother:
Guys, I need comments please.

Kay29000
Karchisbarbie
LordReed
Adesiji77
Cetona

Ok

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Godmother... I love this. I love u

Hot damn! Feels like this shouldn't be a romance story but an action thriller. Nice flow, a few spelling mistakes though.

LordReed:
Hot damn! Feels like this shouldn't be a romance story but an action thriller. Nice flow, a few spelling mistakes though.

Thanks, was beginning to think no one read it. The romance part will come in later. I'll proof read and correct the mistakes.

Divepen1:
Godmother... I love this.
I love u

Thanks Divepen1

More power to your elbow.

wow...continue

please continue... please continue...

Hey, Godmother, I am just reading this. I was offline for a while.


Nice! Great writing technique...great prose (a skill I personally kinda lack ). And You have a great vocabulary. Even though you don't overuse it, and you use the right word at the right time. I also like the way I can actually see (in my mind's eye) the visuals of your story. Your words come to life. You are pretty good writer and should write more. Let your light shine...publish this on Amazon if you haven't already done so. And publish another, and another, and another. By the way... complete the story.

kay29000:
Hey, Godmother, I am just reading this. I was offline for a while.


Nice! Great writing technique...great prose (a skill I personally kinda lack ). And You have a great vocabulary. Even though you don't overuse it, and you use the right word at the right time. I also like the way I can actually see (in my mind's eye) the visuals of your story. Your words come to life. You are pretty good writer and should write more. Let your light shine...publish this on Amazon if you haven't already done so. And publish another, and another, and another. By the way... complete the story.

Wow, thanks. Yes, I'll finish it. I have it typed on my lappy but my hubby goes to d office with d internet connection so I can't update. But will update tomorrow.

Godmother:


Wow, thanks. Yes, I'll finish it. I have it typed on my lappy but my hubby goes to d office with d internet connection so I can't update. But will update tomorrow.

Okay. I wish you all the best.

Nice work.... Read and follow this interesting story https://www.nairaland.com/2887605/journey-supernatural-aliens

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Godmother pls complete this story,it's so captivating,i can't wait for the remaining

Chizzyblinks:
Godmother pls complete this story,it's so captivating,i can't wait for the remaining

Thanks Chizzyblinks, I'll put the next update tomorrow morning.

On this Nairaland? Waoh!
Godmother, I don't know what to call this, but you are doing a great job with this thriller of yours.
#Following and waiting for the next update.

Killer- Killer...

So so enthralling



Kudos Godmother.

Godmother you must complete what you've just started, will you?

Dklef:
Godmother you must complete what you've just started, will you?

Definitely.

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NORMALLY I DNT COMMENT ON NAIRALAND, BUT AFTER READING THIS EPIC PIECE, I JUST COULDN'T RESIST. NICE ONE. WAITING IMPATIENTLY FOR THE UPDATE. *SCADUSH*

Mynd44, Lalasticlala; this piece is worth gracing the Nairaland homepage.

Nice one Godmother. Following

Cetona:
Nice one Godmother. Following

Thanks, babes.

@ All
The romance part is about to start. Thanks for following and dropping your comments

Addictive! Just the name brought me here and I am not disappointed one bit. Keep it up and I hope you don't dump the story half-way like others do.

Yeh... But I'm guessing the next line of action.

Godmother:


Thanks Chizzyblinks, I'll put the next update tomorrow morning.

alright dear,i'll be waiting.

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