Hadampson:
Aye, aye captain.. reporting for duty.. my duty is to read stories

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lol u are funny

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The sounds of heavy feet marching on the muddy floor drew nearer at the ticking of every seconds."They are closing in on us.let's get out of here when we can still make it"Derek screamed angrily."We can't leave Jim here"Kane stated firmly"he's one of us...."Kane was saying before Derek cut him off."and so what?"Derek said frustratingly and continued"Does that mean we should all die with him?"
"oh God!you guys should stop this already,it's not gonna solve anything.We will figure out a way around this"Adams said sharply.
The others all looked at Adams and Kane who were unwavering in their quest to save Jim.Is this the right step to take?hope they are not all going to die here?.These are the questions racing through their mind as they stood staring at Derek retreating figure as he wandered away into the darkness of the night........
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The woman on red tattered gown kept sniffling in tears as she remembered how her husband head has been cut off like a slice of banana being prepared to be fried.she remembered how she had begged and plead with the monster-like creature who clutched tightly to an object which looks like a long curvy blade with a sharp shiny edge that sent sparks of fear into her system. she recalled that look of longing to be with her or better still touch her,on her husband long pale yet handsome face before everything happened in a split second and how the bastard holding the blade had tossed the blade in the air with a loud grunt before he finally slash up his precious head which roll in the air for a second or two,while people cry out in jubilation with no iota of pity and how the idiot had carried the head up in the air,as if it was some kind of a medal,with a smile lingering on his ugly face......

AlamienDagash:
Ah hope they make it out. buh bro why is it dat u dnt want 2 update on time

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Sorry 4 d delay in updates bro.But am still a hustler trying to make ends meet.work has always been so hectic.datz not an excuse though! But believe me,I'd surely make it up 2 u.

hardeygbolar:
. lol u are funny

Lol nd u r great writer

Hadampson:
Lol nd u r great writer

. oh!stop d flattering man.thanks 4 d compliment anyways.I appreciate it

hardeygbolar:
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Sorry 4 d delay in updates bro.But am still a hustler trying to make ends meet.work has always been so hectic.datz not an excuse though! But believe me,I'd surely make it up 2 u.

Ah understand u, may god bless ur hustle.

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Wow at last am back in nl,let me quickly go through the story.thanks for the invite dear

The Forest is a short poem about Nigerian youth, we are tired of old men in government. read splashonpoint..com/2017/03/the-forest.html

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Jim dragged his wobbled feet slowly after the man on black.His head was banging really hard as he tried very hard to keep up with the pace of the huge man ahead of him.His hands was binded together with a rope,making his walking slow and uncalculated.His breathing was heavy and loud,and his mouth was completely dry.His mouth longed for thirst of water.He remembered how everything had started.How he had wandered into the woods alone.He could not recall his motive of going into the bush in the first place.All he just knew was that something was drawing him away from the others.He had walked deeply into the woods before he realised he no longer knew the way back to the others.He then wandered around looking for the right route to take.But,he did not find any.That was when it dawned on him he was lost.He looked back and could make out the silhouette of a man at his back,he turned swiftly but the man was faster.The last thing he remembered was something heavy hitting him before passing out....
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He had woken up later on,his brains completely hazy as he stared all around the unfamiliar little room.His legs was firmly bonded together with ropes.He kept wondering how he got into the place.He tried really hard to remember how or what got him there but the only effect that did was his head banging harder.He then gave up and sat calmly on the cold floor,surrendering himself to fate.The door then creaked open and a man on a long black robe walked into the room.In his hands was an old flashlight which kept flickering,making the room partially visible to the eye.The man walked closer to him and his heart raced even faster."Who are you?"Jim had asked with fear."I am nobody"the man stated firmly."knowing me would do you no good"the man added with an husky voice.....

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"You can also decide to follow him but am going nowhere"Kane said,keen on not running away."Derek is right,we don't know how powerful these people are"Maxwell stated and walked away."I'm not gonna stand here and watch those monsters come take me away"Bob retorted and followed Maxwell,three other people also ran after them,then the heavy steps become louder."They are here,let's hide and watch the situation for some time"Kane advised."And where the hell are we gonna hide?"Pedro asked,looking at Kane for answers while Kane only shrugged.He had not really thought of where they could hide."What the hell!Don't tell me you don't have anywhere in mind all along"Josh shouted angrily."Calm down guys,I think we should try opening that lid over there"Adams suggested while moving to the lid."Common are you kidding?we don't know anything about that lid,and for all I know it might be a trap or something"Maurice plainly stated."Anyone knows that popular saying about a beggar having no choice?"Adams replied with a question."Please we have to be with Adams on this.We have no other options"Kane pleaded with them.They all nodded and made to help Adams in opening the lid."How much time do we have left?"Kane asked Adams."Am not sure,but let's say two minutes tops"Adams replied as the lid open with a creak."Oh my God!that's too close,go,go,go"Kane motioned with his hands and they all climbed down the ladder fast before closing it after them."Welcome to navodan"a voice reverberated sending goose bumps all over them.............

AlamienDagash:
Ko? it is pronounce like AL-amin and dagash was mah nickname

I see,sounds interesting
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Azeequeen:


I see,sounds interesting

Adesina12,where u see Oyinbo bae??

Azeequeen nooni abi albino ni

Adesina12:

Azeequeen nooni abi albino ni

Nooooo,not at all

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The man's words had scared Jim to the marrow as he tried to understand what he just said.He then concluded that whoever this man is,his intentions and attitude towards him couldn't be good.The man walked closer to him,his every steps imposing fear on Jim.He had that intimidating height that could make even the best of wrestlers cower in fear.His athletic frame was supported by bulging veins with fine chiseled abs that remain glaring even with his robes.His glowing amber eyes made him look like the roman god-cupid.He was just a perfect definition of handsome.Even Jim couldn't believe he was fawning over this perfect creature.He for once wish he could have this physique of masculine excellence standing before him.He knew how girls would have gone crazy to have him.However,he let the thoughts slip out of his mind just as quickly as it has come.He couldn't even believe he was envious of a man like him,for all he knew this man here is just an evil incarnate with a fine face."Get up!"the man said suddenly out of the blues.Jim refused to believe that someone of this amazing personalty could be this cruel."Please don't hurt me"Jim pleaded softly."Don't let me use force,if you continue like this you would leave me no choice"the man stated curtly."But...but...where are you taking me to?"Jim asked stuttering.The man didn't reply,he only go closer to Jim and dragged him up."Okay...okay....i will follow you"Jim said,breathing heavily."Fine"the man said calmly and he turned,while Jim followed him,letting out an heavy sigh.......

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The smell of fresh blood lingered in the air making the atmosphere filled with a nauseating for Jim as he walked on,following the man with his heart almost jumping out through his mouth.He wondered who these people are and what they wanted from him,so many things that he longed to ask but couldn't just muster the courage to ask the questions that kept bubbling in his head.He wondered and hoped everything would be a bad dream that he would soon wake up from.He so much longed to have his girlfriend wake him up with a kiss but that would not happen,not now or ever.Jim wondered if he's not going insane with all he had seen for the past hours is too much a cross for him to bear.The fact that all the past happenings had been so real is really eating him up,he hoped these monsters would just send him back to where he had come from. He so much longed to see the others and tell them about this tale,he pictured how her girlfriend--Jessica would cling to him in a sensual hug,how she would cry and not want to leave him,how that perfect moment together with his better half would have been,how---.The clang of a metal revived him out of his train of thoughts and he suddenly became conscious of his surroundings,he noticed the area looked like a prison. He moved his gaze around and he saw human skulls littered all over the floor in great numbers. His fears tripled and his mind suddenly became numb,he felt something like a liquid dropping slowly and he looked up to see a human head hanged up with fresh blood dripping from it and he stood there,rooted to the spot,his legs feeling so heavy and weakened with fear,then he heard the sound of a metal door being opened and a hand shoved him hard inside.........

Just incase eff u got scared, remember vampires do really exit, even in 9ja

AlamienDagash:
Just incase eff u got scared, remember vampires do really exit, even in 9ja

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lol bro,u ar funny

Hey guys! I hope u are all doing well.Am rili sorry 4 d inconsistent updates.please bear wit me for now.and don't 4get to always state ur views concerning each updates. ur encouragements kept me going

Stay tuned
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hardeygbolar:
Hey guys! I hope u are all doing well.Am rili sorry 4 d inconsistent updates.please bear wit me for now.and don't 4get to always state ur views concerning each updates. ur encouragements kept me going

Stay tuned
Hardeygbolar cares...

Hey, we re doin well, u dnt nid 2be sori, okay we'll bear &stick to it, lastly bout the view, well the last update freak the shit outta me

Chapter two
Underground cellar...
Cold silence descended into the room as they all instantly became numb to the voice that had just spoken.They could not just believe they had tried running away from the monsters outside and they had just gotten into a bigger trap.They stood rooted to the spot as they heard big feets stomping on the lid above their heads.Their heart panted louder chasing away the heavy silence in the room as various questions rang through their heads.What if they had just walk into the den of this unknown monsters?Are they all going to die here?who are these people tormenting their lives this way?what do they really want from them?is there really--.The sound of something flickering had invaded into their train of thoughts,snapping them out of their reverie.They all watch with wide-eye and gaping mouth as the room was suddenly revived to a sparkling beauty with illumination from huge giant chandeliers that stood firmly in strategic positions all over the roof."Wow,can't believe something so beautiful actually exist in this God-forsaken place"Jessica muttered happily."God,is this some kind of hallucination or what?"Adams asked,not believing the moment,thinking this is some kind of hallucination or sweet dreams that he would soon wake up from."Damn it man!this is just simply too good to be real"Josh admitted and chuckled."Hey guys,we don't have to allow this moment take over our reasoning"Kane paused letting the word sink into their brains"for all we have seen and heard,this might be some kind of a trap,we have to proceed with caution"Kane ended with a sigh.They all nodded in agreement,as they tried to put two and two together."I agree with Kane.This could be some kind of a trap,i mean all that we have seen,and now we suddenly we stumbling upon this 'disney island' of a place,we have to be careful.I'm having a feeling that there is more to this place"Adams said with mixed feelings..........

[quote author=hardeygbolar post=55286604] Chapter two
Underground cellar...
Cold silence descended into the room as they all instantly became numb to the voice that had just spoken.They could not just believe they had tried running away from the monsters outside and they had just gotten into a bigger trap.They stood rooted to the spot as they heard big feets stomping on the lid above their heads.Their heart panted louder chasing away the heavy silence in the room as various questions rang through their heads.What if they had just walk into the den of this unknown monsters?Are they all going to die here?who are these people tormenting their lives this way?what do they really want from them?is there really--.The sound of something flickering had invaded into their train of thoughts,snapping them out of their reverie.They all watch with wide-eye and gaping mouth as the room was suddenly revived to a sparkling beauty with illumination from huge giant chandeliers that stood firmly in strategic positions all over the roof."Wow,can't believe something so beautiful actually exist in this God-forsaken place"Jessica muttered happily."God,is this some kind of hallucination or what?"Adams asked,not believing the moment,thinking this is some kind of hallucination or sweet dreams that he would soon wake up from."Damn it man!this is just simply too good to be real"Josh admitted and chuckled."Hey guys,we don't have to allow this moment take over our reasoning"Kane paused letting the word sink into their brains"for all we have seen and heard,this might be some kind of a trap,we have to proceed with caution"Kane ended with a sigh.They all nodded in agreement,as they tried to put two and two together."I agree with Kane.This could be some kind of a trap,i mean all that we have seen,and now we suddenly we stumbling upon this 'disney island' of a place,we have to be careful.I'm having a feeling that there is more to this place"Adams said with mixed feelings..........
Hello guys, please always state ur views concerning each updates. thanks!

[quote author=hardeygbolar post=55286604] Chapter two
Underground cellar...
Cold silence descended into the room as they all instantly became numb to the voice that had just spoken.They could not just believe they had tried running away from the monsters outside and they had just gotten into a bigger trap.They stood rooted to the spot as they heard big feets stomping on the lid above their heads.Their heart panted louder chasing away the heavy silence in the room as various questions rang through their heads.What if they had just walk into the den of this unknown monsters?Are they all going to die here?who are these people tormenting their lives this way?what do they really want from them?is there really--.The sound of something flickering had invaded into their train of thoughts,snapping them out of their reverie.They all watch with wide-eye and gaping mouth as the room was suddenly revived to a sparkling beauty with illumination from huge giant chandeliers that stood firmly in strategic positions all over the roof."Wow,can't believe something so beautiful actually exist in this God-forsaken place"Jessica muttered happily."God,is this some kind of hallucination or what?"Adams asked,not believing the moment,thinking this is some kind of hallucination or sweet dreams that he would soon wake up from."Damn it man!this is just simply too good to be real"Josh admitted and chuckled."Hey guys,we don't have to allow this moment take over our reasoning"Kane paused letting the word sink into their brains"for all we have seen and heard,this might be some kind of a trap,we have to proceed with caution"Kane ended with a sigh.They all nodded in agreement,as they tried to put two and two together."I agree with Kane.This could be some kind of a trap,i mean all that we have seen,and now we suddenly we stumbling upon this 'disney island' of a place,we have to be careful.I'm having a feeling that there is more to this place"Adams said with mixed feelings............

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The clanging of a metal awoke Jim from dreamland as he stared all around the little cage he was in. He couldn't remember how he got into the place,that part of his memory had completely gone fuzzy,his whole body felt so heavy and weak-and damn the clanging of metals coming from wherever wasn't helping matters at all-not even a bit,his head was banging really hard that he felt like passing out yet again. But no,that would not solve anything-yes he knows,the only solution that came to his brain is getting out of here in one piece,if that is anything possible,but one thing was sure if he's to die here,then he would not be going down without a fight,that he's sure of.
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"Let's check out other rooms before getting out of here"Adams suggested,he was having a feeling that there is more to this place and he was sure that his guts had never failed him,and he hoped and silently prayed that he wasn't about leading them on to danger."What the hell are you talking about?"Josh said and continued"we are in more danger than we could ever imagine-and here you are speaking some gibberish about we checking other rooms".
"Josh!please let's respect Adams decision, he can never lead us to danger, that I believe"Kane injected."Believe,that word is not appropriate here,I mean everything that has happened was because of him,he led us right into this lid and now this-come on guys,this is all pointers that this guy is one hell of a traitor".Josh said angrily,pointing to Adams who was visibly angry but tried hard in controlling it."Damn you Josh!what are you insinuating?that I sell out my friends to some fucking monsters and then-to what end,what do I....?"Adams was saying before Josh interrupted in between his speech."I don't know, you could have plead with them to let you and your nagging girlfriend go,while they imprison us or worse-even kill us"Josh accused and that got Adams really infuriated and he stepped closer,throwing a punch at Josh which caught him unawares,straight in the jaw........

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"What the hell!come on!stop this nonsensical action of yours"Kane said,moving between them."You dare punch me,Adams am so gonna deal with you"Josh raved angrily,veins showing on his forehead."Josh stop behaving like a kid who wants some chocolate"Caroline admonished,it was obviously she was in support of her boyfriend."Please let's stop all this - or we are gonna be stuck in here with no headway"Jack said with concern."I'm really shocked at how Josh acted,he's never done that before"Jessica stated looking at Josh who had a scowl on his face."Well,maybe he had been possessed by some demons - who knows"Abraham said and chuckled."OK, now guys,let's be serious here,should we go exploring this place or we quit and go back up there?"Kane enquired,throwing the big question and the room suddenly become silent,so silent that one could hear their heart thumping loud as each of them had his own thoughts filling his head and,one thing was sure,all of them were scared of the unknown - they are indeed torn between facing the devil and the deep blue sea.............
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Derek ran with all his might as the sound of the whistle from the 'bush-man' kept drawing closer at every passing moment.They had wander farther into the jungle unknowingly,with only one thought in their head - to get away from this whole saga unscathed and alive.But,however,fate had other plans for them,which they failed woefully to take note of,even from all the obvious pointers that they had seen with their eyes.They were unreasonable enough to walk farther - into the den of the looming danger.......
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Jim watched groggily with sleepy eyes as the door to the old,damp cage,where he had found himself opened with a loud noise and he saw an ugly looking short man walk in,clutching onto something which looks like an animal skin.The man moved closer to him and for once he wished his hands were loosed - to get out of here when he still can.He could see his face more clearer now,all thanks to the torch in his left hand that bring illumination into the earlier dark cage.Jim watched the man as he walked slowly towards him,calculating his every steps - an action to defend himself if the man try to harm him.He tried to calm down his mind as the man walked closer,he could see the snare on his scar-filled face.The man suddenly stopped in his tracks,standing close to Jim who looked so scared like a kid watching an horror flick in the wee hours of the night.Then he brought out something from his bag and flung it straight at Jim,who gasped really loud before bellowing "God save my soul"........

Hello guys am rili sorry abt d inconsistent updates,my phone was stolen,but am planning on getting a new one

hardeygbolar:
Hello guys am rili sorry abt d inconsistent updates,my phone was stolen,but am planning on getting a new one

Sori bout your phone

AlamienDagash:
Sori bout your phone

, Thanks man!

Hi guys!been a while,i actually got a new phone today and i promise to make up for all the lost time.trust me when i say it wud b worthwhile

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The full crescent moon shone brightly from the night sky with galaxies of stars perched firmly on the beautiful night sky while the wind was blowing mildly from the west and leaves rustling and bowing to mother nature as if pledging some sort of allegiance.The sound of people snoring in deep slumber was audible enough even for a slightly deaf person standing a mile away to hear.
Some distance away from the snoring group,a figure crept out carefully from inside the woods and advanced closely to the group sleeping on the other side of the woods.The figure who obviously was that of a man look carefully all over his area,as if scouting for any sign of an intruder or an impending danger before gesturing with a nod and the others with him lying flat begin to stand up from their earlier position and they all advanced noiselessly towards the group that were still sleeping peacefully.........
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Jim closed his eyes and breathed in what he think to be his last and waited for the effect of whatever object the 'short devil' had thrown to him to hit him or worse even slash and cut deep into his frailed bones.But was however surprised when he had waited for some moments and still could not feel any pain.He slowly opened his eyes just in time to see the ugly man walking towards him with a wicked grin......
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"Now what?"Josh asked exasperatingly.He was still angry that Adams hit him and had already sworn under his breath to pay him back.Although,he knew he went quite overboard by calling and painting him a traitor,but to hit him - in front of everyone and to think that his long time crush - 'Eva' was even among those that are chastising him for being 'unreasonable' was really pissing him off.
"I'd personally say we do as Adams suggested earlier or anybody got a better idea?"Kane asked looking at all their faces for them to speak."And what if this your 'disney island' of a place turns out to be one hell of a nightmare after all the false hopes?"Josh asked looking at Adams and Kane."what's wrong with you Josh,has something come over you or....."Jessica was saying before Josh cut her off roughly."Hey,please.I wasn't talking to you by the way so watch that tongue of yours or you may regret it".
"And if i don't.What are you gonna do,hit me?Then i bet you will be the one to regret it"Jessica replied and scoffed."Guys,please stop this already,and please Josh please try to be optimistic for once,i didn't know you to be a saddist so don't let this cursed place turn you into one"Eva admonished looking displeased with Josh."Okay,fine then.Since you have all agreed to this,i have no choice but to also agree".Josh said and added."But you two just know that if anything goes wrong down there,you will have to take full responsibilities".........

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