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Re: Nairaland Detection Club by MaziOmenuko: 9:19pm On Mar 12, 2013 |
Uniquexty: thanks. But the only character i introduced was mrs Ajoke. Oooopss, my bad. Had to go back to check the origin of JayB and Jack. Mehn, I'm loosing grasp of this story line! Had to start all over to read it again. Nice work all the same. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by LarrySun(m): 9:38pm On Mar 12, 2013 |
Ishilove has said it all...however, I'd disagree that her use of the word 'badder' is wrong. The word 'badder' could be used metaphorically, and mostly to emphasize humour and degree of a complicated situation. Grammatically, it isn't advisable for the use of a student sitting for SSCE, but a fiction writer could be excused. Liberty thingy |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 10:19pm On Mar 12, 2013 |
Short time interval thinqy, i culdn't hav done beta |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Nobody: 11:39pm On Mar 12, 2013 |
So in essence you guys are saying I should wait a little before reading the new update |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Uniquexty(f): 6:00am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Alright. I wil make adjustments later today. Thanks @Ishi. But i didnt write that Lucan was shot at Mr. Ibe's huz. JayB sent d team 2 also check out Mr.Ibe's death. The limping man has already been seen with Jack. He was marked because of dat picture. If he has dat pix, then he saw more dan d snapping. Cant HBG do d killing? My work is already long. I really dnt understand wot u mean by reversing my chapter. But i wil reread what i wrote cos i did d writing in a hurry and thumbing of heart. Even at d time i told Larry dat d work was ready, i didnt even knw wot d first paragraph was. So pls sorry. Btw, d next writer has seen d changes i'v bin asked to make. Can't she start work? |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by HumbledbYGrace(f): 6:47am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Uniquexty: Alright. I wil make adjustments later today. Thanks @Ishi. But i didnt write that Lucan was shot at Mr. Ibe's huz. JayB sent d team 2 also check out Mr.Ibe's death. The limping man has already been seen with Jack. He was marked because of dat picture. If he has dat pix, then he saw more dan d snapping. Cant HBG do d killing? My work is already long. I really dnt understand wot u mean by reversing my chapter. But i wil reread what i wrote cos i did d writing in a hurry and thumbing of heart. Even at d time i told Larry dat d work was ready, i didnt even knw wot d first paragraph was. So pls sorry. Btw, d next writer has seen d changes i'v bin asked to make. Can't she start work?I can't start work with all the changes you are supposed to make, wait; what picture are you talking about? The picture that Jack had left on his laptop/ the one he wanted to sketch was that of Ayodele. The 300 level student with the missing rib right? |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 7:15am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Uniquexty: Alright. I wil make adjustments later today. Thanks @Ishi. But i didnt write that Lucan was shot at Mr. Ibe's huz. JayB sent d team 2 also check out Mr.Ibe's death. The limping man has already been seen with Jack. He was marked because of dat picture. If he has dat pix, then he saw more dan d snapping. Cant HBG do d killing? My work is already long. I really dnt understand wot u mean by reversing my chapter. But i wil reread what i wrote cos i did d writing in a hurry and thumbing of heart. Even at d time i told Larry dat d work was ready, i didnt even knw wot d first paragraph was. So pls sorry. Btw, d next writer has seen d changes i'v bin asked to make. Can't she start work?The limping man hasn't been seen with Jack, yet. The person who Jack took a picture of is the late Ayodele. I didn't say 'reverse'. I mean 'revise'. That is, look through your work and make corrections. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 7:16am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Larry-Sun: |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:19am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Another thing I saw last night, Chapter2, 3, 4, 5, and 7 have some grammatical errors that were pointes out but were never fixed. Frank here (Lucan was just 3inchis taller than his father who was 5ft 3inchis.) Inches is the right word ( The 29years old young man) get rid of the "s" please ( “Mnnn, still on boxer, I bet you haven’t even brushed your teeth.”) "In" instead of on (He stretched his and back, the pain was subsiding.) I don't think the "and" in that sentence is needed. Since Redmosquito is nolonger a part of this I think Larry should ask Cuddlemii for permission to edit that post, or Cuddlemii edit it for us. Thanks Morning all |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Uniquexty(f): 7:24am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Ishilove:thats my 2nd portion before the last. The man jack met on his way to his office, i think i mentioned he was limping? I'l sure correct the boy to man |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by LarrySun(m): 7:59am On Mar 13, 2013 |
I used to think that Ayomide was disguising as the limping man, now that Ayomide is dead, I guess I was wrong. So, the limping man hasn't been given an identity yet, right? The HIM...what's his name again? |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by FoxyUltimate(m): 8:06am On Mar 13, 2013 |
**Passing by chewing Kilishi and kunu** Good morning y'all |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 8:10am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Larry-Sun:HIM doesn't have a name yet. I have always known Ayomide and the Limping Man are two different characters because: Ayo is anti-social and a geek. The limping man has a certain suave confidence which Ayo lacked. The limping man is also a professional, unlike Ayo. The next writers should shed more light on why an anti-social, forex trading geek was chosen to be an assasin. 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 8:15am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Larry-Sun:lol... I kinda diferentiated the limping man from Ayodele in chapter 6 when I introduced him. As for HIM, let's leave that for latter writers to give him an identity that is true to the hype that has been built around him already. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 8:21am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Oahray: lol... I kinda diferentiated the limping man from Ayodele in chapter 6 when I introduced him.You well done with this Him character |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 8:23am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Ishilove:lol... Because e badt gan! So glad he is out of the pic. They almost made him a professional Jack the Ripper 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 8:25am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Ishilove:Thank you... Thank you! *takes a bow* |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by LarrySun(m): 8:31am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Ishilove:A fictitious hero should have a vice while a villain a virtue...I guess Forex trading is Ayomide's virtue. Or is it vice? |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 8:43am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Foxy_Ultimate: **Passing by chewing Kilishi and kunu**Oya giv me my own na now |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 8:53am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Pyguru don attack person again 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 9:12am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Oahray: Pyguru don attack person againLmao!! |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by frank317: 9:19am On Mar 13, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: Another thing I saw last night, Chapter2, 3, 4, 5, and 7 have some grammatical errors that were pointes out but were never fixed. effected the changes u suggested, thanx 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by LarrySun(m): 9:40am On Mar 13, 2013 |
It seems like all the writers are going on a killing spree. There is scarcely a chapter that doesn't have one character or the other being killed. Our murderous intents are taken out on the poor pens and papers. The plot thickens though. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by channel190(m): 9:40am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Mazi_Omenuko: Read the upload.she didnt introduce more than one character, just like we have discovered. larrysun, not all writers are masters of all genres. her update is to me better, if deleted. as in it fall short of the previous standards. uniquesty, i might not b frequent in this section but have always followed this story. for the fact that you made mention of HIM in an ordinary manner killed my joy. my cents is that it shou,d be deleted. 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by channel190(m): 9:48am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Ishilove: Nice work Unix,considering you had a very short time to work. Thumbs up.it takes just another follow up to restor the deed she sealed |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 9:50am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Larry-Sun:as in eh... The ladies are scaring me. First madam Efe killed Tracy, then madam Ishi killed Mr and Mrs Ibu, now madam Xty has killed Ayodele. Only male killing was by Mr Sigmund. Statistics: -6 male and 3 female writers have submitted so far. -Killings by female writers=4 -Killings by male writers=1 -All female writers that have written so far, have killed at least one character. Conclusion: *shivers at the thought* 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 9:57am On Mar 13, 2013 |
channel 190: [color=green]she didnt introduce more than one character, just like we have discovered.nah... It should only be edited. I think she should relax and read everything again, from chapter one, slowly, and try to touch certain parts of her post. She did well in my opinion, considering the short notice and the pressure to perform. 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by jiraiyas: 10:09am On Mar 13, 2013 |
channel 190: she didnt introduce more than one character, just like we have discovered. This I think is very discouraging why not give her idea on how she should have gone and if possible edit other than saying it should be deleted or do you think is as easy writing as to we reading. from this end you did well unique ,going with the advice and suggestion will make it far better than it stands.that's not to say i wasn't impress though |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by LarrySun(m): 10:09am On Mar 13, 2013 |
channel 190: she didnt introduce more than one character, just like we have discovered.I'll go with Oahray on this. Let's allow her to edit the work. Beheading is not the cure for headache. The lady really tried, I must say. She just needs to revisit some few irrregularities in the plotting (which dear Ishilove has kindly outlined). |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Jumizie13(f): 10:16am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Oahray: nah... It should only be edited. I think she should relax and read everything again, from chapter one, slowly, and try to touch certain parts of her post.i agree with you. Deleting it will only discourage her. So i tink the work should be edited. 10ks 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by channel190(m): 10:45am On Mar 13, 2013 |
Oahray: nah... It should only be edited. I think she should relax and read everything again, from chapter one, slowly, and try to touch certain parts of her post.we the audience ebi readers can wait for the end time to get a close shot at the best from you writers. let her read from chapter one, and see the usefulness and reason behind every created characters. she will then have noticed where the climate pointer is at the moment, shifting the pointer from any present speculations will only raise the tempo, curiocity, suspense, and will improve tense in plot. however care is to taken when shifting a pointer, it must always go up but when otherwise it must stop at a suspense, dat what the chicks have always done here. she should learn the ropes of the detection club 2 Likes |
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