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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:26pm On Oct 22, 2013
festwiz: Dude,nice.keep it up,and update regularly.
. Thank oga at the top. Am happy for everything. More up dates are coming.

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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:29pm On Oct 22, 2013
MIKE4CHRIST: just keep trying the use of past tenses. make do with it more than ever since the start of the story.
"moved", instead of "move" and the like. with time you wil be better. also its "wrapper".
GOD wil bless and help improve your syntax IJN.
am taking front seat, just need some popcorn.
. MIKE4 christ. You are welcome and honored as well for reading my thread. Thanks for commenting. As for the adding of "ed" to show the paste tense, i vow to put it in. Thanks jor!
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:33pm On Oct 22, 2013
chinedumo: This story promises to be sweet
. A salute from p. All you need to do is putting on your seat belt. Grab this (can of malt), and stay tune, and thanks for commenting.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:41pm On Oct 22, 2013
My oga if you cut off my head to read, what will i use then ?. Thanks for passing by to check, i really give thanks too to everyone here,who has shown me luv. Welcome back the rock.... Your front seat is here. Thanks for the comment.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Therock5555(m): 10:43pm On Oct 22, 2013
Foxy_Flow: Wait... Make I talk my mind... I no fit read this story.. No paragraphing, nothing. The sentence ma bad.. Sorry bro.. I am unfollowing.

Rock.. Give me something good to read. Sorry bro

I actually skipped the story at first cus of the chokeness, but wait small na, d bros has upgraded, remember say na small small person dey start o.

Kai @prince mbok, zain baka bulala o, come update ne
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:48pm On Oct 22, 2013
The rock5555: Ok
(1). Am sorry i have not been branching through here, my time had been shortened by the colabo with Foxy n flow but no probs, am back now.

(2). Prince i must say you have over improved alot, am so happy for u. But add alittle suspence even though the gift that ur school mom promised is kiping me on my toes, me wan know abeg.

(3). Festwiz i want to thank u for helping him through, his work is more organised now.

And to all of una, i dey hail jare.

@prince-i guess its time i fufil my promise bcus u have improved alot. I dey go advertise ur story for my thread now, i just wish that u wont disappoint me o.

BTW u beta come update or i kidnap u and cut out ur brains and read it from theregringrin
. You are highly welcome. Thanks for checking up on me. But you don scare me oh!, because i don the wonder, if you cut my head off what will i use for thinking?. extend my greetings to your friends and those you invite ( foxy flow etc), for coming into my thread. As for the up dates, you will be suprised to see whats next.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:56pm On Oct 22, 2013
Foxy_Flow: Wait... Make I talk my mind... I no fit read this story.. No paragraphing, nothing. The sentence ma bad.. Sorry bro.. I am unfollowing.

Rock.. Give me something good to read. Sorry bro
. Thanks for commenting sha!. Everything has like and dislike. But can you do me one favor, by reading the story from the last up date upwardly?. Em there is a saying that no one is above mistakes, so i made mistakes too and i hope you should be in the right position to correct me. Thanks for speaking your mind tho!
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 11:00pm On Oct 22, 2013
janetDurling: Weldone, bro................................nice story
. Thanks mrs janet. Ehmmm... your darling to me is really passionate, i must confess. You are so caring, and i want you to keep on following thread till the end. I wish to see your reply soon. Thanks
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 12:30am On Oct 23, 2013
***CONTINUATION***
******************


After she had banged the door close behind us, she stretch her hands and gave a hand sign of (come closer). I moved closer to a stool at the corner of the room to seat. After i had settle my bottom down, mrs Grace went to her frigh and brought out an apple juice, and pour it into a glass cup before she handed it to me. I prayed in my mind,

MY PRAYER: " papa God, i put dis glass of juice for your hand, anytin wer de inside let it be burnt wit de HOLY GHOST FIRE...!, if na luv portion de inside, i don send dam back to de sender ", i ended the prayer by shouting the AMEN! out loud for mrs Grace to hear.

MRS GRACE: " PRINCE SOooo you use to pray before eating? ".

ME: " It depends "

I took in a little of the sweet fresh fruit juice, before questioning her why she wanted seeing me.

ME: " pls ma, may i know the reason why you invited me over to come see you? ", i asked nonchalantly.

MRS GRACE: " prince you bother yourself too much, pls wait i will show you something and also tell you why i invited you ".

ME: " something ke!, mbok ikpe-esit ", i meditate this in my heart, and finally spoken to her openly,

ME: " ok ma, am waiting patiently ", i said.

I kept quite and said this in my mind ( i pray that this does'nt have to do with energy requirement). Mrs grace was actually busy that moment, she moved up and down the room like person who had taken stomach upset tablet. She prepared to cook.
I sat patiently for her to finish cooking. I remain there untill she gave me her phone to keep myself busy, but my mind wasn't on the phone she gave me any more as i saw a magazin of Unclad girls on a sexy fashion post. I picked the magazin paper and started reading it. Sooner, she completed cooking, and she took the food closer to her bed side and drop it.
I was emotionally focus on the post of the Unclad ladies in the magazin that i didnt see when mrs grace went into the bathroom. Door closer so hard, and i lifted up my face to look, LO! and BEHOLD, mrs grace was just on panty only. I became stiffed and fixed on the chair i seated, i was shivering all over, as if i had a malaria fever. I stood up to leave the room for her to put on cloths, but she refused to let me excuse her.

MRS GRACE: " Are you afraid of me? "

ME: " yes ma.,".
I tremble with fear so badly, and i guess my THIRD LEG was eventually displaying funny moves as well (winks). Mrs grace came close to me Unclad and kiss me and then she concluded to do what she was suppose to do.


** TO B CONTINUED **

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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 12:38am On Oct 23, 2013
GOOD MORNING TO EVERYBODY. IT BEEN QUITE LONG SINCE I CAME TO UP DATE MY THREAD. SO I USE THIS OPPORTUNITY TO APOLOGIEs FOR BEING SO LAZY TO REPLY YOU GUYS AND DOING THE UP DATES AS WELL. Pls 4 giv me. Eket ide-dung oh....!.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by swaggerkid(m): 2:18am On Oct 23, 2013
No problem bro
Stop Putting uS on suspense cant wait for the next update
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by janetDurling(f): 7:31am On Oct 23, 2013
Lol.......erm a Miss, sire.....sha dey update regularly and be mindful of yo tenses
360prince: . Thanks mrs janet. Ehmmm... your darling to me is really passionate, i must confess. You are so caring, and i want you to keep on following thread till the end. I wish to see your reply soon. Thanks
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 8:42am On Oct 23, 2013
The rock5555:

I actually skipped the story at first cus of the chokeness, but wait small na, d bros has upgraded, remember say na small small person dey start o.

Kai @prince mbok, zain baka bulala o, come update ne
. The rock, am here now. Am sorry for not up dating, i was sick due to the whether condition of kano state. I will up date sooner.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 8:44am On Oct 23, 2013
swaggerkid: No problem bro
Stop Putting uS on suspense cant wait for the next update
. Good morning swaggerkid. Am really seeing your swaggs pls keep on swagging by commenting. Thanks sir
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 8:45am On Oct 23, 2013
janetDurling: Lol.......erm a Miss, sire.....sha dey update regularly and be mindful of yo tenses
. Ok ma or my lady, i will do exactly what you said. Good morning
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by festwiz(m): 9:30am On Oct 23, 2013
Your last post was nice, and its "fridge" and not "frigh".

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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 9:59am On Oct 23, 2013
** CONTINUATION **

Mrs grace walk pass me, and advance to where she normally drop her travelling bags, she brought out a skirt and wore it on. She turned again after putting on her shirt she threw herself on the bed beside her, before beckoning on me to join her. I actually threw my face side ways when she dress, so when she called me to come and join her, as i turned to face her oppositely, i could see her flabby legs, the short shirt she wore barely covers her bottom and hips. But i still had the confident that nothing can happen.
I sat on the foam, and she told me to pray but i rejected the idea, and i told her to pray since she was the one who cooked the food. Mrs Grace starts praying..

MRS GRACE:" in JESUS name, father LORD in HEAVEN, i thank you for the food, and bla...bla....bla..! ".

My eyes were opened while she prayed. I observed everything that was distracted by my eyes, and they were all nice could have been smooth to hold. Her hips were like that of an elephat, and her a*§ rounded like that of (nicky minaj).

MRS GRACE: " in JESUS name i pray !".

ME: " I quickly conclude her prayers with AMEN...!".

She opened the big bowel of food . I could say it was delicious even when i had'nt tasted it yet . Indomie, fired eggs, fired onions and tomatoes were the content in the plate, and beside the plate, was a big bottle of red wine. { Her dad was wealthy and famous, rich so I guess}.
Before we ate, mrs Grace brought the idea of "FEED ME, I FEED YOU".

ME: " ma pls i cant do it, for God sake you should be doing all these to your guy ".

MRS GRACE:" you are right, am suppose to do it with my boyfriend, but i really dont have any guy in my life ".

ME: " ubok abasi!, So na me wan com be your guy, right?. Whe mrs grace heard my said this,
She look at me and started laughing. We ate without doing the idea of " FEED ME, I FEED YOU" again. After the delicious mill, she stood up and move closer to her desk drawer and brought out something that was wrapped and headed it over to me. This was something i had been dreaming of for years but i could'nt afford it, it was costly, but all my friends has it except me. I opened the present and LO!, it was a "PHONE" . I gladly hugged her, my excitement has made me forgotten that she did'nt put on a shirt to cover her body, when felt the touch of her b¤¤bs on my chast, i quickly separated myself from her.

ME: " Thank you very much ma! ", i praised her excitedly.

MRS GRACE: " no worries, it just a friendly gift to you ", she said smiling.

ME: " Thats nice and kind of you ma! ".

I spent my whole day with here to make her laugh out loud. Mrs Grace really did enjoy every moment i stayed with her that saturday afternoon. By 8:30pm in the evening, mrs grace excurted me to the school gate and i headed back home smiling. WHAT A WONDERFUL SCHOOL MUM!. I reached home by 9:45pm and here awaits another joy......

**TO B CONTINUED**

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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:00am On Oct 23, 2013
festwiz: Your last post was nice, and its "fridge" and not "frigh".
. Thanks sir, corrections know. Good morning my editor.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 10:12am On Oct 23, 2013
LOVE QUOTES TO ALL MY FRIENDS: LOVE IN THE AIR, EVERYONE ONE RUSHES TO HAVE IT. IT GOOD TO LOVE, BECAUSE LOVE I GOD AND GOD IS LOVE. FRIENDSHIP BRINGS ABOUT LOVE AND LOVE BRINGS ABOUT FRIENDSHIP. IF YOU LOVE SOMEONE, THEN IT MEANS YOU ARE CAPABLE OF SUPPORTING YOUR LOVER OR FRIEND. YOU WONT ALLOW YOUR FRIENDS TO DO THINGS ALONE. Pls if you never knew how to love, lEARN NOW BECAUSE LOVE UNITe.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by chinedumo(m): 10:28am On Oct 23, 2013
You mean she was top-less?

No bra or shirt or blouse?
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 11:07am On Oct 23, 2013
***CONTINUATION***

I walk home that evening bouncing like a big guy who had just recieved an offer of 10million naira. I greeted our landlord who was at the main gate leading to the compound brushing his mouth. I passed him feeling like a king. I got closer to my mum door and before i got near, i heard sounds of a familiar voice laughing from inside. I opened the door and reluctantly walk in as if had a boring day.

UDUAK: " There you are, welcome back prince "

ME: " How are you doing, and why are you here by this time ? ".

UDUAK: " i came here to check up on you, since you refuse coming to my place. Your mum told me that you went to mrs grace place "

ME: " no oh!, i was at the field playing football", i lied.

UDUAK: " You were at the field playing football while dressing this way ?"

ME: " see, if na send them send you to me, go tell them say prince no de ? ", i said changing my tune.

She took a good look at me from my head to my feet, and she said, prince you were staying at mrs grace place. When i heard this i shooked my head. She stood up and walk out on me leaving my mum and i in the room.

MY MUM: " prince you for no do like dat, and beside she be your best friend since wen una de small. she com here since 4:30pm wen you leave house "

when i heard what my mother said about her coming when i left, i immediately ran out to caught up on her. She had already waited outside for me to come out. I got close to her and i held her right hand.

ME: " am sorry uduak for acting that way "

UDUAK: " no problems, it my fault, i should'nt have question you in the first place when your mum had told me that you were invited by mrs grace"

ME: " No now, at least i was suppose to control my feelings"

UDUAK: " besides thats not why am here, i actually came to check on you and at same time to inform you of something", why is everyone saying SOMETHING?, i asked myself.


ME: " So whats that thing, if i may ask ?"

UDUAK: " my uncle came back today from london and he wants to see you ".

I didnt waste anytime when i heard that her uncle had arrived and he wanted seeing me. I quickly moved inside the house and informed my mum. I came out and place my right hand across uduak's shoulder as we both headed to her place. By 8:00pm that same evening, uduak and i reached, i allow her to walk into their house first before her mum called me in called in. I greeted everyone and went straight to hug her uncle. Mean while, uduak uncle and i were best friends, when ever he comes back from london, he will check up on me or he simply invites me. Her uncle and i chatted for hours before he took me to a corner at the compound, and showed me something what was covered with (kanopy). I opened it and to my greatest suprise, it was a new brand bicycle. I thanks him with full heartly, and claim on the bike and ride off. I had forgotten to greet everyone before leaving. I reached home that nighht and told my mum everything that happened. I actually slept like a baby smiling while thinking of the event of joy that took place.

**TO B CONTINUED**
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 11:08am On Oct 23, 2013
chinedumo: You mean she was top-less?

No bra or shirt or blouse?
. Yah you are right, she didnt put on her bra, blouse, and neither did she put on shirt.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Therock5555(m): 11:45am On Oct 23, 2013
360prince: . Ok ma or my lady, i will do exactly what you said. Good morning

Na my property u wan yarn abi, i go kick u o, beta trowey ur facegringrin

its Meal not mill

nd escourt not excurt. Now the story is becoming sweet, but nawao for u, only u come dey open two threads. BTW that other thread is not Marry, its Mary(i mean that gal that was molested in ur second thread)
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 11:54am On Oct 23, 2013
The rock5555:



nd escourt not excurt.



escort, not escourt
*smiles*

ride on 360prince
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 12:57pm On Oct 23, 2013
The rock5555:

Na my property u wan yarn abi, i go kick u o, beta trowey ur facegringrin

its Meal not mill

nd escourt not excurt. Now the story is becoming sweet, but nawao for u, only u come dey open two threads. BTW that other thread is not Marry, its Mary(i mean that gal that was molested in ur second thread)
. Thank God you are following which make things easier for me. Well as for the MARRY, if you read down you will notice that i had change it to MARRY before you even correct me(winks). And meal, and escort, i will observe those in my write up when ever i write. Thanks for commenting. I de hail with my two legs up
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by adegwurulez(m): 12:59pm On Oct 23, 2013
I dont know if i'm qualified to advice you cos i am also a learner, i just started my work about three weeks ago. In my three weeks of writing, i learnt two importand secrets of being a good writer, there are;

1.READING
being a writer doesn't mean you will stop reading other people's work, there are lots of very talented writers on nairaland and they can really be resourceful. Take your time to read the works of people like kayemjay, chistar, flow1759, foxy_flow, the rock, repogirl, ishilove, E<R>F, Ezepromoe, frank3:16etc. like i always say, nairaland is a very large forum that can contain as many writers as possible, we could be of help to eachother. My sister would always bring novels home but i was never a big fan of novels or literature, i was this "SCIENCE GUY". When i started my work, i decided to read one of the novels. I saw authors like john grisham, shakespear, james hardly chase, steve kahn etc. I decided to read The Mall by steve kahn. After chapter two i started noticing improvements in my work.
NB: i am not telling you to emulate other writers, be yourself. I even enjoy ur style of writing.
About your spelling, i'll give you just one advise; it doesn't take up to 1minute to look up a word in the dictionary. let the dictionary be your friend. There are some words whose spellings may look wrong but they are correct, especially words with both american and british spellings. e.g americans would write color while british would write colour. both are correct but we were colonised by the british so we go with the british spelling, again the dictionary will also differentiate. we also have search engines for research. ur work is non-fiction so i dont think you need it but if u want to venture into fiction, they would be of help.


2.WRITING writing regularly is as important as reading. just keep on writing and you will learn.


N.B: hope you took out time to read my rubbish, i would have used that time to update my thread but i used it to advice you cos i saw something in you. Though still crude, but i know you will surely get there, nigerians are talented.
sorry for using a large portion of your thread in spewing trash, i just thought i should help a promising writer.

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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 12:59pm On Oct 23, 2013
[quote author=MIKE4CHRIST][/quote]. I guess we all made mistakes. I now take note. Thanks man
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by SexySapphire(f): 1:03pm On Oct 23, 2013
360prince: Pls followers the bible said no man is perfect. In case of any miss typing or wrong sentence constructions. Pls dont blame it on me. Just tell me the corrections i need to do. Pls encourage me to do better. And i promise to do better for you guys.

I got to know about this story from Rock's thread. Really, I think the story looks promising but the problem is your control of English. The first three updates that I've read so far is so full of errors that I had to take my time to read it. I think u shud always take ur time to read and read all over again after u might have done ur editing cos its gonna discourage people if u don't correct the mistakes. Always take ur time to write, don't be in a rush and pls try to modify them correctly so far its not a pidgin write-up. My two cents though. Amma kip reading sha. Thanks
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by SexySapphire(f): 1:04pm On Oct 23, 2013
360prince: Pls followers the bible said no man is perfect. In case of any miss typing or wrong sentence constructions. Pls dont blame it on me. Just tell me the corrections i need to do. Pls encourage me to do better. And i promise to do better for you guys.

I got to know about this story from Rock's thread. Really, I think the story looks promising but the problem is your control of English. The first three updates that I've read so far is so full of errors that I had to take my time to read it. I think u shud always take ur time to read and read all over again after u might have done ur editing cos its gonna discourage people if u don't correct the mistakes. Always take ur time to write, don't be in a rush and pls try to modify them correctly so far its not a pidgin write-up. My two cents though. Amma kip reading sha. Thanks and I wish u all the best.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 1:11pm On Oct 23, 2013
adegwurulez: I dont know if i'm qualified to advice you cos i am also a learner, i just started my work about three weeks ago. In my three weeks of writing, i learnt two importand secrets of being a good writer, there are;

1.READING
being a writer doesn't mean you will stop reading other people's work, there are lots of very talented writers on nairaland and they can really be resourceful. Take your time to read the works of people like kayemjay, chistar, flow1759, foxy_flow, the rock, repogirl, ishilove, E<R>F, Ezepromoe, frank3:16etc. like i always say, nairaland is a very large forum that can contain as many writers as possible, we could be of help to eachother. My sister would always bring novels home but i was never a big fan of novels or literature, i was this "SCIENCE GUY". When i started my work, i decided to read one of the novels. I saw authors like john grisham, shakespear, james hardly chase, steve kahn etc. I decided to read The Mall by steve kahn. After chapter two i started noticing improvements in my work.
NB: i am not telling you to emulate other writers, be yourself. I even enjoy ur style of writing.
About your spelling, i'll give you just one advise; it doesn't take up to 1minute to look up a word in the dictionary. let the dictionary be your friend. There are some words whose spellings may look wrong but they are correct, especially words with both american and british spellings. e.g americans would write color while british would write colour. both are correct but we were colonised by the british so we go with the british spelling, again the dictionary will also differentiate. we also have search engines for research. ur work is non-fiction so i dont think you need it but if u want to venture into fiction, they would be of help.


2.WRITING writing regularly is as important as reading. just keep on writing and you will learn.


N.B: hope you took out time to read my rubbish, i would have used that time to update my thread but i used it to advice you cos i saw something in you. Though still crude, but i know you will surely get there, nigerians are talented.
sorry for using a large portion of your thread in spewing trash, i just thought i should help a promising writer.
. Thanks goes to you my guy. I salute you. Am happy to have someone like you say something on my thread. Am also glad that with ppl like you, i will be well known and connected. Am a commercial student tho!, but sometimes i see myself writing. But before i became a commercial student, i was talented with this act of drawing, "PAINTING PIX". So it not a bad idea for you to throw in more light on what you know. You can have all the space you want to put me through. Thanks for commenting.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 1:14pm On Oct 23, 2013
Sexy Sapphire:

I got to know about this story from Rock's thread. Really, I think the story looks promising but the problem is your control of English. The first three updates that I've read so far is so full of errors that I had to take my time to read it. I think u shud always take ur time to read and read all over again after u might have done ur editing cos its gonna discourage people if u don't correct the mistakes. Always take ur time to write, don't be in a rush and pls try to modify them correctly so far its not a pidgin write-up. My two cents though. Amma kip reading sha. Thanks and I wish u all the best.
. Pls read and follow you will see my quick improvement. Thanks for commenting.
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 1:17pm On Oct 23, 2013
ABEG NA WHO GO COME HELP ME COOK, MAKE I TAKE THAT CHANCE UP DATE THIS THREAD.smiley?. Amma boil fu-fu, and then share it to every one. So wash your place come here.

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