Kingademos: okay na gud luck

Barbienice: Back for real?

Danpersie31: back again indeed. I ve hrd dat line b4 bt it was an empty statement..u disappointed me prince..infact i don dis-broda u.

360prince: of course, i'm back again...

Hav yøu been reading my story?

Thanks før the comment

Barbienice:
Welcome back please don't keep us waiting for long. I have been reading your story "my complicated love story with my school mum" awaiting the part 2 of it.

360prince: .. I started the part2 of my complicated lov story but because of the attach, the part vanished.. But am still working on it again and i think i'll mak y'all proud.

Invite yøur friends tø read this particular thread, okay?

Barbienice:
Ok I will invite my friends to read your thread

Barbienice:
Ok I will invite my friends to read your thread

olarafiat:
y baby

murtaj:
just passing nw

360prince:
no pass.. Come back here!

murtaj:

com update or continue

Therock5555:
Em atleast make i talk some thing.

1) ur story make sense but e dry.

2)i wan know if ur are through with sec skul bcus ur write ups is really filled with errors(no pun intended)

3)pls are u from akwa ibom state? Bcus u kip on calling those names but the one that is provoking me is the way u spell my name- its UDUAK and not UDAUK, abeg correct that. Its my name so i hate when pple mispell it.

4)make use of ur commas, full stop, exclamation marks, apostrophs an other tenses, it makes us understand better.

Example: "prince, are you not eating before you go to school?" my mother asked.

"No mummy, i would eat in school" i replied back.

U see the space and my punctuation marks i used. Do it like that it would be more easier.

5)space ur work, it makes the post longer and easier to read.

I actually jumped all ur updates to comment bcus it was hurting my eyes. I would come and check back on u. This ur story is front page material if u polish it well, mistakes are bound to occur so dont too bother urself, just avoid making them too often.

I fit use a whole 5000 words encouraging and slamming and correcting u. But i have only one promise for u.

If i come back and see this story has improved i would bring my entourage of fans over here, u want comments abi, u go see am tire then, dont just lose focus.

Nland is ur stepping stone to greatness.

Peace..

olarafiat:

y baby

360prince:
hi... I'm back t0 nairaland. I'll soon continue my story.

Watch out!!

chilordson:
chai u don suffer physically,emotionally,socially even sexually .Nawaooo dia is Godoooooo

360prince:
i don finally come back.. Watch out for the part 2 of my complicated love story.

linpok:


Mr Prince!!!

360prince:
oboi, i tink say you don forget about me?

linpok:


Lol...how can i forget my Senior Boss..How r u, and Happy New Year!