adegwurulez: in as much as i appreciate your advice, i dont think you should tell him what to write. I believe he already has an idea of how the end would look like so if he decides to change the storyline to suit what you pointed out, it might not really pass his message. Btw d9ty7, u r doing a great job

thanks

speeder: I'm the kind of those who read and won't comment. I love books that talks about love. And urz caught me in the web. I shall try come a day with my own novel which I intend to use the "First Person Narrative. The name "Foot-Print."



nice one dude. I hope you dedicate the next one to my honour.

thanks 4 d compliment. Can't wait for foot-print to start.
Btw next update is dedicated to you.

Tuniks2: Segun too dey vex... Me I'm looking for a wife I won't mind if he dash me Jummy

make i give you jummy's number. At your own risk ni o.

blekko101: Pretty work you've got here. Keep it coming.

dammygoody: Move on Brother,nice update...........have a good night rest.

spactacus: more power to your elbow. keep it up

Thanks very much @ all.

shegzi: Omo see gobe which kind segun be dis o. I different o

This one na version 2.0. Btw you got a dedication to yourself in the next update.

arolexwalex1: Hey, dearea, more ink in ur pen

Amen

Gud mawnin guys. Next update as said earlier is gonna be posted around 3pm.
And i promise you at least 2 updates.
Signed:
d9ty7

guy i got ntin 2 say only u gud, i damn enjoyd it, i strtd readn 4rm to 7pw til to 3am 2 c hw captivatd i ws, kp it up man, thumbz up. Segun na gr8 guy, nd if na me i no go evn luk doz 3 witch faze

U trilling me great with ur work, #thumbs up#

Welldone Boss... I dey your follow you bumper to bumper...

D9ty7: Gud mawnin guys. Next update as said earlier is gonna be posted around 3pm.
And i promise you at least 2 updates.
Signed:
d9ty7

#waiting bro#

E don de 2 much 4 segun.Jummy self don 2 cool

D9ty7:
This one na version 2.0. Btw you got a dedication to yourself in the next update.

o sweet you thanks alot

Dchiefpriest: oh my jummy why is segun treatin u lyk dis na Oya dnt worry ,take dis love portion,put am 4 segun food nd he will b urs foreverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr hahahhahahaahahhahaahahhahahahahahahaehehehehehehehhehehhiiihihiihihihihiihohohohoohooh nd u nike take ur tym before i lose my temperooooo

I quoted this from page 17. This guy is so funny. Chai! Great story anyway. am on page 17

adegwurulez: in as much as i appreciate your advice, i dont think you should tell him what to write. I believe he already has an idea of how the end would look like so if he decides to change the storyline to suit what you pointed out, it might not really pass his message. Btw d9ty7, u r doing a great job

He is nt telin him wat 2 do, he is jst makin his point n sugestn.
And U D9st7 u jst like d weldone n neglect d questn n sugestn. Pple ask 2 knw nt 2 tel u wat 2 wrte,so rply d questn part nt ol d weldone His pride is 2 much n h succeed. Na pride u wnt us 2 learn. lols

D9ty7:
thanks 4 d compliment. Can't wait for foot-print to start.
Btw next update is dedicated to you.
make i give you jummy's number. At your own risk ni o.

Gimme the number jawe I'm worse than segun... Besides I think segun will be happy and give me his blessing

Na smal pikin stl dey worry dis Jummy gal, let her stop tlking 2d madboy and c if he'll cum back or nt. U don't force urself on a guy, it's nt easy 2 convince a guy 2 luv a gal bt easy 2 convince a gal 2 luv u, a guy knws wot he wants.

finally caught up*****am grateful to God

That's what happens when u force urself on a guy!!! Love is not by force

oga sir nawetn thnz on point o 4 d nxt update. Nd hey i got nokia 3310 dat snapz. Dz ws a shot of d wrld fastest man

Come nd update o

shegzi: Omo see gobe which kind segun be dis o. I different o

Haahaha. Thumbs up man@D9ty7. Waiting for the next updates. Make I send you one soft drink dey chill as u dey use ur brain box dey try write something down. More strength to ur fingers and glucose to ur braaineeee!

2:42

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Guy u prmsd tew update by 3pm na

oga 3 dn nak na, na wetn hapn, we dy wait o

Still waiting.... It's past 3pm... Plssss

Waiting...

##t¥ping## with cheetah's speed.

--continuation--
¤¤dedicated to my new readers Shegzi & Speeder¤¤
Segun held his cheeks as he stared at his mother with a look of disbelief.
Its been a while his mother beat him last.
"You father never for once laid his hands on me. So where did you get that trait of yours?" she asked as she moved towards him.
He retreated and moved towards the dining area. Just then the door to the living room opened and Mr Akinola walked in.
"Welcome dad." Mary and Jummy greeted in unison.
"How are you girls?" he asked.
"Fine sir." the chorused.
"Welcome hon." His wife greeted.
"Yeah, thanks dear." he replied.
He looked at Segun angrily.
"Are you dumb? Or don't you know how to greet?" He asked as he walked towards his son.
"He has grown wings, he now has the ability to beat a woman in public." His mother cuts in.
"Who did he beat?" his father asked as he looked at Jummy. Then he concluded she was the victim.
"Were you the one?" Mr Akinola asked facing Jummy.
"Yes. But its not in the public. We were....." she was saying.
"Hold it there." mrs Akinola cut her short.
"But where did you go and what made him slap you?"Mr Akinola asked.
"We were in a wedding ceremony, then i mistakenly spilled a drink on his shirt." Jummy explained.
"The ceremony i gave you two the money to buy the cloth?" Mr Akinola asked.
"Yes sir." Jummy replied.
"Segun is that true?" His father asked him.
He kept quiet and looked down at his feet.
"Go and wait for me in my room." his father commanded.
He walked out of the living room and headed for his father's room.
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Segun came out of his father's room with marks on his body. He was beaten like a thief. It took the intervention of his mother when the sound of his beating became unbearable for her, before he was released.
He walked to his room in pains. He got inside removed his shirt and looked at himself in the mirror.
"Beaten like a gladiator." he said and smiled.
There was a knock on his door. He pretended like he didn't hear. The person at the door made the knock more persistent.
The door opened gently and Jummy walked in.

--to be continued--

Nice 1 bro. Av bin following silently al diz while. More ink to ur pen.

[right][/right][i][/i]I'm enjoyin dis story. I really want 2 keep along as d story goes. A well-done job 2 u. Cheer..........

Nice piece d9ty mre strenght 2 yuh elbow...wait'n 4 dah nxt update lky diiieee:-D