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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:42pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
seriously am a very bad guesser. Tell me. SexySapphire: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:56pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
More comments and criticism is all I ask for. It won't take you up to a minute to type and post words of encouragement and if it is criticism it won't take you more than five minutes. But if you really want to help someone today to get better in what they do, five minutes is not too much. I will always take your criticism in good faith even if they are destructive. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by princesssusan(f): 4:00pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Ekushe sir! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Queenxstar(f): 4:04pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
This guys sef, are they going to force a lady to feed them too. Kushe brothermi. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:09pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
--continuation-- TIME: 10:00AM VENUE: THE STATE'S TEACHING HOSPITAL. __________________________________________ Ngozi has been sleeping for over ten hours now. Right from when she woke up the previous day and grown hyperactive and dangerous. The doctor treating her sedated her with a very strong drug and it has been having effects on her. She woke up twice yesterday and all she asks for was food and water. Same thing with this morning and based on calculations made by her watchman, Thomas. He knew she'd be up in a matter of time Maybe minutes. Just then the door into the ward opened and Inspector Burahimo walked in with the CSP(Chief Supritendent of police) of the Area F-command, Haruna. "Sir." Thomas saluted the two officers immediately they walked in. Burahimo eased him with a wave of hand. "How is she now?" CSP Haruna asked. "Her condition is improving gradually all thanks to the infatigable doctors that we have here." Thomas explained. "Have you asked the doctor when she'll be discharged?" Inspector Burahimo asked. "Actually sir...." She coughed thereby bringing everyone's attention to her side. She opened her eyes slowly afterwards. "How you feeling now?" Haruna asked with concern after the two senior officials had told her to stay put and not bother to stress herself in greeting them. Ngozi felt important the moment she saw CSP Haruna inside her ward. The Police boss is someone who believed in himself and thinks he is above every other policeman under his jurisdiction. The last time Haruna visited a policeman in the hospital was when the state's commisioner of police was shot by some unknown gunmen who attacked his church. Haruna visiting her placed her cards high alongside top police officials. This shows the level at which her contribution is appreciated. Ngozi who could vividly remember what happened last before she woke up in the hospital. She was shot in the arm and at the same time witnessed a fellow policeman killed with a grenade bomb. The sight was horrific and she passed out. ++++++++++++++++++++++++ Hakym and his boys had their van parked in a bush behind the deputy governor's villa just opposite his office in the Government residential area of the state. The big mansion which was painted white housed the state's deputy governor and few of his family members, his wife and first son to be precise. The others are far away in the western countries. The mansion stood opposite the deputy governor office as the GRA road demacated the two buildings from eachother. "We all know how tight the security of this house is and to carry out our mission successfuly at night is very dangerous and am sure if we leave some stones unturned, we'll end up leaving this place in pieces. So let us all pay attention to detail." Hakym lectured. A man in his late twenties dressed in a blck pullover and a black jean trouser removed some set of papers lined inside a brown envelope. "This is the main gate through which the convoy will drive in, it is guarded by five uniformed men on the outside and three inside. Its is a no go area. The west entrance on the other side leads to an underground system which is connected to the governor's chamber. Ten millitary men are on ground. I believe our best option is to attack from a vantage position and drop the men guarding the east entrance. we'll move in in mass and advance from there." The young man continued. "What are our chances?" Hakym asked. "We are between twenty to thirty percent." The man who was later introduced as Joe replied. "Which means we are far from being successful?" Hakym asked. "Yes. And I don't see a reason why Maleek wanted us to attack the deputy governor. And he refused to let Danger-kelv come here with us." Joe compained. --to be continued-- 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by dammygoody(m): 4:10pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Welldone Boss, All these killings here and there...hmm... I really look forward to knowing about those assassins one by one like you said, seeing them in action, Inspector Clement and his crew also......, etc.. I also noticed some typos like using ''Am'' for ''I'm(I am)'' etc.., I've decided to leave that to Ma'am Audrey Timms to fish out ............ #Following ardently.. Following ardently... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by SexySapphire(f): 4:12pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
D9ty7: seriously am a very bad guesser. Tell me. DOLAPO |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:05pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Dollyp.... A nice name you've got here. SexySapphire: But I used to think you are from the east. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:08pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: Gideon9947, stormybucci, Perfectbeauty, Kingzpen, Fatalveli..... SAY SOMETHING. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:14pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Are you a fan of stories that reflect family life and scandals. THE WEB is one of such stories. Written by Candy. This is the story of two women whose lives are interwoven in ways they can't even imagine...a story of desperation and survival at dangerous costs. This is the link.... https://www.nairaland.com/1902597/web... Read and be glad you did. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stormybucci(m): 5:18pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
nothing 2 say.... am jst waiting till d tym clement would know dat his broda(kelvin) is a notorious assasinator.... nice write up bro, more milk 2 ur @@@@ |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by SexySapphire(f): 5:18pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
D9ty7: Dollyp.... A nice name you've got here. Thanks. I'm a yoruba girl to the core. I've heard the "I tot u're from the east" line tire. *singing, omo yoruba ni mi o.....* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by iyamchee(m): 5:38pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
cool story cool story |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Beckytee(f): 5:52pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
[Quote author=D9ty7]#typing# All thanks to Beckytee.[/quote]tanx boss for d update |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mohammad11: 5:56pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Much gracias @op. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:26pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Eniqurl: 5K for zobo?? No p.I'm serious ooooohh |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:31pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Mimisboygreat: *** brings out my bible n start fireing prayers** na me get dis babe ghanwill take care of u later |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:30pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
stil folowing |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Gideon9947: 7:40pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
D9ty7: Viewing this topic: Gideon9947, stormybucci, Perfectbeauty, Kingzpen, Fatalveli..... SAY SOMETHING.I am yet to read it,i just follow so i won't miss it when i'm ready 2 read it |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:34pm On Sep 20, 2014 |
Definitely following this |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 7:32am On Sep 21, 2014 |
[b] frank reporting for duty sir! D9ty7 am sorry to have not started with you am was busy hangling for money bt am sure i will be consistent on ths new story... This story really caught my rapt attention bcux i like anything criminal its gud thou bt i wasn't what am expecting... Actions precisions hit and disappear things like that. Secondly i will be most pleased if you win dis month Writer of the Year..being your the official P.R.O of D9ty7 fans page i will do everthing within my power to make u win that token #youReallyDeservit. Thirdly Audreytimms i have notice ur very notorious (sorry very popular) bfor u stone me mango tree... I noticed you at temitopeDaniels my crony story d rate at which your name was mention gave me concern. Na im i come stroll go ur profile but fear catch me wen i see ur story dy almost 93pages. Hah!!!!?! Wen i wan finish dat one hmmmm... I dy hail mrs president gracy my honouable man divepen and Dlogowhiz.. [\b] |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 7:36am On Sep 21, 2014 |
[/color][/b][b] frank reporting for duty sir! D9ty7 am sorry to have not started with you am was busy hangling for money bt am sure i will be consistent on ths new story... This story really caught my rapt attention bcux i like anything criminal its gud thou bt i wasn't what am expecting... Actions precisions hit and disappear things like that. Secondly i will be most pleased if you win dis month Writer of the Year..being your the official P.R.O of D9ty7 fans page i will do everthing within my power to make u win that token #youReallyDeservit. Thirdly Audreytimms i have notice ur very notorious (sorry very popular) bfor u stone me mango tree... I noticed you at temitopeDaniels my crony story d rate at which your name was mention gave me concern. Na im i come stroll go ur profile but fear catch me wen i see ur story dy almost 93pages. Hah!!!!?! Wen i wan finish dat one hmmmm... I dy hail mrs president gracy my honouable man divepen and Dlogowhiz.. [b/] |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by harhormhidey(m): 9:10am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Danger-kelv....y was he left behind |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by princesssusan(f): 10:26am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Queenxstar: This guys sef, are they going to force a lady to feed them too.I wonder o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:38am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Today marks exactly 9yrs that I lost my dad. Hon. Prince Adeoye Durodola, continue to rest in peace sire. We love you. Your son is now a writer and not the footballer you used to know. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:39am On Sep 21, 2014 |
There will be no updates today. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by talk2riel: 10:55am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Sorry for your loss, may God grant you the fortitude to bear the great loss. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Skyfornia(m): 11:02am On Sep 21, 2014 |
I thought you said end of september? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:10am On Sep 21, 2014 |
ThaRuthlxx7: [/color][/b][b] frank reporting for duty sir! D9ty7 am sorry to have not started with you am was busy hangling for money bt am sure i will be consistent on ths new story... This story really caught my rapt attention bcux i like anything criminal its gud thou bt i wasn't what am expecting... ActionsThanx baba |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:12am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Yes. But I decided to start now becos that time(sept ending) will be activity filled for me. Skyfornia: I thought you said end of september? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:12am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Amen. Thank you sire. talk2riel: Sorry for your loss, may God grant you the fortitude to bear the great loss. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:13am On Sep 21, 2014 |
Thanks baba. ThaRuthlxx7: [/color][/b][b] frank reporting for duty sir! D9ty7 am sorry to have not started with you am was busy hangling for money bt am sure i will be consistent on ths new story... This story really caught my rapt attention bcux i like anything criminal its gud thou bt i wasn't what am expecting... Actions |
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