TORN 48

Ajibade and Jibike stood outside the house with their daughters. Their in-laws, friends and other guests had just taken their leave.

"Tell your husband that I have fined him for not coming," Folake addressed her elder sister.

"Don't worry, he will make it up to you," Foluke winked at her.

The security guard approached them.

"Sir, there is someone here to see Aunty Funmike."

Ajibade frowned, "Isn't she in school?"

"No, sir. She came home this evening."

"Oh my God!" Jibike panicked, "Hope none of the guests saw her," she turned to her husband.

"No cause for alarm mum. I saw her when she arrived and locked her up in her room," Folake winked at her mother.

"Wicked," Foluke tapped her on the shoulder.

"In this case, wicked is good," Folake winked at her.

They both bursted out in laughter.

"Let the visitor in," Ajibade said to the guard.

"Yes, sir," he hurried away.

"Folake get your sister," Jibike faced her youngest daughter.

"Yes, mother," she took her time and cat-walked into the house.

nice one dear More update. plsss

OMG.... I will kill Dat little sister of heirs... if it was my girlfriend.... Dat is attempted murder

@she writes..you are doing a great job.please conclude this story
hope nothing bad happened to funmike

what a wicked life

TORN 49

Ajibade and Jibike exchanged glances when they saw the tall, dark, broad shouldered handsome young man in a white long-sleeve shirt, black jeans and black leather shoes, approaching them with majestic strides.

Foluke stared at him, akimbo. Where did her sister find the Adonis? Assuming she wasn't married, she would have made him hers. She turned green with envy.

"Good evening sir, ma."

"Evening," they chorused. Their curious gaze regarded him.

"I am Dantenimu, the son of Yaro Sheu Danjuma."

"Nice Baby Limited CEO?" his eyes sparkled with excitement.

"Yes, sir."

"I know your father. He is a very calculative business man."

Jibike felt elated that her daughter knew the son of a very wealthy business magnet.

"You are welcome. Let's go in," Ajibade led the way in.

"Thank you sir," he walked behind the couple and noticed a tall dark skinned lady who looked like Funmike's father.

The way she stared at him reminded him of the look the lioness gave her prey before giving it a chase.

u are talented dear

Go on......I'm following!

TORN 50

Folake hurried down the hall. She found her parents and sister in the company of a handsome stranger.

"Where is Funmike?" Jibike glanced at her.

She halted and stared back at her in fear.

"Where is your sister?" her father frowned.

She swallowed hard and met his questioning gaze, "She is not breathing," she whispered.

Four pairs of eyes drilled an invincible hole in her head.

"I... I called her, she didn't respond. I shook her, but, she didn't move. I am not sure she is breathing," she looked back at her parents. What if Funmike had been telling the truth about her health? She wished she had listened to the guard.

"Funmike ooo!" Jibike placed her hands on her head and ran towards her daughter's room.

Ajibade and Foluke ran after her.

Panic paralyzed Dantenimu briefly. The last time he spoke with his love, he was about getting into a cab. The last time he called her, she didn't pick his call.

He directed his gaze at Folake. She was trembling. He was gut sure that she was the little witch.

since you said, you have finished writing this story, please complete it so that I can rest. i hope my funmike has not died.

Nice. One op...more ink to your pen!!

@Op someone is waiting ooo

Op... dis suspense tho..!
U can write for africa sha
Keep it up darling

Please mention on next update

Bibijay123

Hope Funmike Is Nt Dead?? God Pls Ooooo Wrt A Wicked,heartless Family!!

TORN 51

The elderly couple sat on the long bench outside the emergency room, awaiting feedback from the doctor.

Ajibade couldn't erase the images that tortured his enraged mind. They found Funmike lying on her bed like a log of wood that night.

Every attempt to wake her up was unprofitable. What in the world made Folake to lock her up? He glanced at her and found her seated at a corner, her head in her hands.

Jibike crossed her arms and seethed. She glared at her youngest daughter. She didn't understand why Folake thought her sister was lying about her health. She could have pleaded with Funmike to stay in her room until the party was over. Locking her up was the height of malicious intent.

Foluke noticed the way her parents were staring at Folake. She pited her. Under the same circumstance, she would have done exactly the same thing. It was so unfortunate that Funmike wasn't feeling fine.

Their parents would definitely tongue-lash Folake. That was something they all tried to avoid as often as possible.

pls am waiting for d end of d story ooo

@all... Thanks for your patience.
Four more updates to go.
Abeg, endure now.
Nepa is playing with our light.
The story ends tonight *winks*

This is really short, please make longer,so you can finish. I am refreshing my page minutes after minutes. you are really doing a good job. more grease to your elbow and other joint of the body.

SheWrites:
@all... Thanks for your patience.
Four more updates to go.
Abeg, endure now.
Nepa is playing with our light.
The story ends tonight *winks*

Tnx for the updates following bumper to bumper

SheWrites:
@all... Thanks for your patience.
Four more updates to go.
Abeg, endure now.
Nepa is playing with our light.
The story ends tonight *winks*

am on heat ooo my temper to high ooo am waiting oooo,it jst life touching to

SheWrites:
@all... Thanks for your patience.
Four more updates to go.
Abeg, endure now.
Nepa is playing with our light.
The story ends tonight *winks*

am on heat ooo my temper to high ooo am waiting oooo,it jst life touching story

SheWrites:
@all... Thanks for your patience.
Four more updates to go.
Abeg, endure now.
Nepa is playing with our light.
The story ends tonight *winks*

am on heat ooo my temper to high ooo am waiting oooo,it jst life touching story

*trembling*please o.let nothing happen to funmike.chai

nice piece...Im tuned up here.Btw,pls make ur updates longer.....Love the story

TORN 52

Dantenimu stood outside the emergency room. Several thoughts ran through his mind. He blamed Funmike's family for her present condition. She was the love of his life. How he wish he could take her place. He would trade his life for hers without thinking twice.

A female doctor came out of the emergency room and turned to the couple.

"We found toxins in her system. We flushed it out, but, she is still unconscious. You brought her here rather too late."

Jibike jumped to her feet, "Please tell me that my baby will be okay," tears gathered in her eyes.

"We will do our best ma, but, you need to pray," the doctor returned to the emergency room.

She turned to her husband and collasped in his arms. Foluke and Folake held gazes. It dawned on them that their sister was in a critical condition.

Dantenimu faced Funmike's family, "We need to pray."

They looked up at him.

"We need a miracle, it is only God that can save her now."

"Let's pray," Ajibade held his wife's hand and beckoned at his daughters.

funmike wat did u eat! which kind toxins again. hope its not from pure water. haba. is she sickle cell @ she writes.

Biko nothing must happen to funmike oh............such a wicked family

SheWrites:
@all... Thanks for your patience.
Four more updates to go.
Abeg, endure now.
Nepa is playing with our light.
The story ends tonight *winks*

...abeg.... end am with nigeria movie way.... jux put d sound track.....and tell us how angels wake her up.....

TORN 53

Funmike opened her eyes and saw her fiance seated on a chair beside the hospital bed.

"Hey you," he got up and stood by her side.

"Dante," she whispered.

"Welcome back to earth."

"How long... have I... been here?"

"Three days."

Her surprised gaze captured his happy face.

"You scared us all. Even the doctor thought we might lose you."

"You ain't getting rid of me that easily."

He started to laugh.

Ajibade and Jibike came in looking tired and worn out. They stood at the edge of the bed feeling grateful to God for answering their prayers.

"How are you feeling?" her mother smiled at her.

"I feel light," she responded.

"The cook will be here soon. You will feel better once you have eaten," her father assured her.

Foluke and Folake came in together. They approached the bed and settled at the edge.

Funmike turned to look at them. Worry-lines decorated their faces. She felt pleased that her family were at her side in her weak state. She believed that somewhere deep in their hearts, they cared.

honestly I wld hv loved to see a picture of funmike. this story is captivating. love sweet

Chai.to GOD b da glory.Hallelujah bye n bye.she's alive

yvelchstores:
honestly I wld hv loved to see a picture of funmike. this story is captivating. love sweet

I will like to see d real picture of dose two evil genius.... Foluke and Folake...
dy wicked pass devil