cutediva87:
queenbee na God go Bless you, which kind stupid memory be that

lol

madam Chumzypinky,b4 mummyM lost her memory,she knew Kaniene and her mom,and were both frds,and she knew chuks was Kaniene father,she lost her memory, on the wedding day then remember that chuks is the father on Nathan, mummy Chumzypinky I am nt understanding u again o.

mummy pinky y are yhu doing this to oua blissful lover nah...

mummy pinky y are yhu doing this to oua blissful lover nah...

When this story started I didn't read it. I was like what's the difference between this and other romance stories. I did that even up to page 100,but the moment I started reading it I saw the twists in the story I was like wow!!! When u think you know what's gonna happen something comes up.
I like this. Nice one sis.

hmmn this is where i sigh n say wahala don wear covershoe

clearboos:
madam Chumzypinky,b4 mummyM lost her memory,she knew Kaniene and her mom,and were both frds,and she knew chuks was Kaniene father,she lost her memory, on the wedding day then remember that chuks is the father on Nathan, mummy Chumzypinky I am nt understanding u again o.

If am right, before mummyM lost her memory, she know Kaniene but she never knew she's her Friend's daughter. Remember she never liked Kaniene then cos she had a plan to get Nathan married to Jolade before her memory loss

clearboos:
madam Chumzypinky,b4 mummyM lost her memory,she knew Kaniene and her mom,and were both frds,and she knew chuks was Kaniene father,she lost her memory, on the wedding day then remember that chuks is the father on Nathan, mummy Chumzypinky I am nt understanding u again o.

its not me u are not understanding, its the story u're not understanding.

Go back to previous updates. When Jude was in the hospital, you remember Mabel saying she had lied to d extent that she had started decieving herself?
There was an update or updates where i bolded some sentences. If you go bak 2 dos updates and read the bolded parts, u'll understand everything now

Chumzypinky thanks for the updates more grace to u

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wizsolzy:


I want to be everything King Solomon is because he is my name sake. but d polygamous aspect I no follow

No wonder the oza oza blood is in you
*****winks. Runs to carry broom in case of you know na*****

what a wonderfull story. But it didnt end well for Kainene. And that Myra of a girl sha the thunder wey go faya am go come with doctor's prescribtions ; one in the morning, one in the afternoon, one in the night. Myra is to be blamed for Nath's death.

That kainene is a big idiot. ....she killed that Nathan with her stubborn attitude..... The girl was obviously a spoilt brat...her mum didn't bring her up well atall

Wow...........wat a story..........

4 me...........Nene is 2 blame.

Chumzypinky:
CHUKS.
NATHAN.
'Kainenechukwu Claire Chioma, do you take Nathaniel Imore as your lawfully wedded husband, to love and to cherish. In sickness and in health, richer poorer, till death do you part?'

'yes i....'

'Noooooo!' There was a loud scream.

We quickly looked. MummyM was on her feet. Everyone looked towards her direction.

'No, you two cant get married!' She screamed again.

Nathan and i exchanged glances. What was happening?

Then she pointed at my father.

'Nathan...thats your father. Thats Kainene's father. You guys are siblings' She said.

I didnt know how it happened, but i knew i found myself falling to the floor with Nathan's strong arms around me.

TBC

BLOOD OF TheBlessedMan. What in the world of bikini bottom is this. *****cleans eyes with hands, cleans ear with cotton Bud, places his hands on his head***** heeeeeeyyyyyyyyyy. Chumzypinky did I hear you say "SIBLINGS!!!!!!!!!!". mmbanu, it can't be possible, I say it can't be possible. Infact I'm going to consult amadioha.
*****leaves nairaland enroute amadioha's shrine*****

Chumzypinky:

lol. Muahhh. Chop kiss

Shey you know say your husband dey view this thread.

One word "THRILLING"

So Nathan finally died, what a tragedy!!!.Please where is the continuation abi epilogue. Don't tell me that's the conclusion, please I can't take it. Myra supposed to pay for her sins, kaka married, chuks DEAD, Nene and Mabel accepting their mistakes. Seriously I blame Mabel for her annoying amnesia that decided to return with a lie, chuks for being a stupid father, Nene for her stubbornness. If only she dropped the gun, this wouldn't have happened. Truly the ASHES were really RED.

You kept me glued to my phone like an addict, wanting and begging for more like a newborn baby. Now my data subscription can expire in peace and I won't be bothered. You're good Bae, very very good with your ink. I wish you safe delivery, may you have a stress-free, no drama delivery and may God bless you and your family. Ezinwaanyi dị ụkọ.

lmao.....like seriously Nathan died?choi
I'm really lol here o,thought the gun part was gonna be a dream,kai...
ma chumzy well done,so Tory iyaff finish,thought it would be a 'and they lived happily ever after story'so so tragic, sorry Nene,*cries*ma chumzy let's rewrite the story that the accidental discharge, claimed Myra and Chuks life...not Nathan.....*wails*
Thank you ma,for your time...have a safe delivery.....

Prettyhurts:
So Nathan finally died, what a tragedy!!!.Please where is the continuation abi epilogue. Don't tell me that's the conclusion, please I can't take it. Myra supposed to pay for her sins, kaka married, chuks DEAD, Nene and Mabel accepting their mistakes. Seriously I blame Mabel for her annoying amnesia that decided to return with a lie, chuks for being a stupid father, Nene for her stubbornness. If only she dropped the gun, this wouldn't have happened. Truly the ASHES were really RED.

You kept me glued to my phone like an addict, wanting and begging for more like a newborn baby. Now my data subscription can expire in peace and I won't be bothered. You're good Bae, very very good with your ink. I wish you safe delivery, may you have a stress-free, no drama delivery and may God bless you and your family. Ezinwaanyi dị ụkọ.

lol, thanks. Mabel was just confused sha. U know she was sleeping with Jude and Chuks together. And she slept with Chuks more so when d pregnancy clicked, she naturally thought it was Chuks.
Thanks for reading dear. U were one of the people that inspired me more in this story

I ave only one person to blame wch is nene...she is so aggressive, she never take things easily. I dont think killing chuks is d next thing for her to do. We all know dat chuks is a moster. She suppose to disown him and not to kill him. We all know what d laws entail, if u kill someone u shall also be killed by hanging...myra is a devil, even some women are devil. Guys u need to pray fervently befor u choose a partner. Nathan am sm sorry

I don't really blame anyone. But Kainene is too hot headed and lacks patience. She is always jumping into the conclusion. A woman must have self restraints in everything.

However, I don't know y U had to kill Nathan. Although a beautiful twist, it's kind of a kill joy. Gut shots hardly turn out fatal unless it hits a vital organ. U could have simply injured Nathan critically without killing him. It's so irritating.

I know some injustices go unpunished but Myra should get something coming to her. Chuks already had his own.

In all, I'll rate ur story 7.5 out of 10 points. U really tried.

mummy chumpzy iyaff kill me o........Holy jeeezzz!!!.....why do u av to kill Nathan-my red ashes crush nau?
*crying*

Chumzypinky:

lol, thanks. Mabel was just confused sha. U know she was sleeping with Jude and Chuks together. And she slept with Chuks more so when d pregnancy clicked, she naturally thought it was Chuks.
Thanks for reading dear. U were one of the people that inspired me more in this story

Ywc dear. Let me know when you start another interesting story.

I guess they all have their flaws.

Part of the blame should be on chuks for always sticking his joystick in every skirt.

Mabel too have Some share of the blame letting herself to be seduced by her friend's husbnd...

Nene should have been a bit patience her being too forward and not taking things calmly has caused her Nate....
It sums everything up that we are humans we have our flaws that means we ain't perfect at all

Well this has taught us a lesson we shouldn't be quick to take drastic actions concerning things that happens to us we might just end up getting burned

chei...I did really picture a sweet, romantic, awesome happy ever after for Nene and Nate but u twist it and make us realise that life can't be all sugar.it's a bit complicated with its ups and down...that's really good and i must commend your good work and always finding time to put a smile on your readers faces thanks ma'am for this interesting piece You are simply unique more wisdom to u and God's blessing on u and your family.

pinky am crying naw ooo

y na choi
yhu must buy bobo anbd indomie for me oo before ah stop crying

for me ah fink chuks is too be blame for all this

if he neva seduced mabel, she would neva had thought that nathan was his son
and the weeding would have gone sucessfully..

meanwhile if nene control her temper for a minute
jux a minute!
nathan would be living naw and their will eventually be planning for their next wedding



ok lawd wat appen to myra jux bcuz of a guy
mehn left to me she must rot in jail


madam pinky nice piece den

though ah dunno like the ending
buh the story line is awesome
wif so many connection er and dere
yhu are the best dear...

ah wish yhu progress in yhur career(writing ah guess)

lol

buh yhu must still give me ma bobo o
cuz am still crying

ladyverere:


In all, I'll rate ur story 7.5 out of 10 points. U really tried.

Mummy verere like seriously 7.5?? Wawuu!! If you're a lecturer you go stingy with mark.
Is not easy for someone(especially a mom of 3 & expecting 1 with a hubby to take care of) to combine her family chores and still come online to write. You're a mom too, one pikin self na work.

Prettyhurts:


Mummy verere like seriously 7.5?? Wawuu!! If you're a lecturer you go stingy with mark.
Is not easy for someone(especially a mom of 3 & expecting 1 with a hubby to take care of) to combine her family chores and still come online to write. You're a mom too, one pikin self na work.

epp me tew her plz

no offence duo

ah will give her
9.99

What a wonderful story buh honestly this ending part is wat am still surprised about I mean d twist is too much....u shldnt hv killed Nathan lyk dat just nw that they hv started to enjoy their union. Coming to who is to blame, Chuks is d architect of all these things where Kainene is to be blamed comes when she cannot control her anger like they say"two wrongs can never make a right". Myra shouldn't go scot free ooo let karma visit her she contributed indirectly to the death of Nathan. All the same ....Kudos to ya and a safe delivery , u will give birth in a favour room not labour room and will
deliver like the Hebrew women

I Know Dis Story Iz Nt Gonna End Well When I Saw D Title.I Have Been Thinkin And Wondering How The Title Will Corroborate With D Story Bt Sha Welldone.

This story is just too tragic You should have just allowed things remain the way they were instead of bringing Myra into the picture, they did the test on a Saturday and the result was ready on Monday, I don't think she had the time to change it, how did she even know the hospital they were in? If you planned for the DNA test exchange, then Nathan shouldn't have died, or he should have died but they were really siblings.

I Know Dis Story Iz Nt Gonna End Well When I Saw D Title.I Have Been Thinkin And Wondering How The Title Will Corroborate With D Story Bt Sha Welldone.*Though Nt Happy Because Am Still Mourning Nathan Death*