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Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 7:25am On Feb 15, 2017 |
Pwettystarly:thank God. |
Re: Red Ashes by anneboy02(m): 8:42am On Feb 15, 2017 |
Pls cum nd update o Yesterday val was ful of fun |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:47am On Feb 15, 2017 |
anneboy02:for ur side ba? |
Re: Red Ashes by citas(f): 10:29am On Feb 15, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:chumzy where is ma val gift #crying# |
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 11:21am On Feb 15, 2017 |
ElajRita: chisus!!? lolzzz |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:24pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
sirblero:wetin be Chisus? Na valentine nah |
Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 4:15pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
sum ladies don't have courtesy...... making trouble in ur in law's house... |
Re: Red Ashes by ChizzyMaris(f): 5:14pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
Wow. I'm just speechless. Well-done Chumzypinky, this story is awesome. |
Re: Red Ashes by anneboy02(m): 5:24pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
[quote author=Chumzypinky post=53728637]
for ur side ba?
Yes o |
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 5:31pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:you mah know say I no fit be am nau.. amah cool man..your boo!! #lolz.. mummy pinky..we are waiting ooo |
Re: Red Ashes by uniqueogo(f): 7:26pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
woow miniature kainene Hmmmm so chuks is Chidinma's babies daddy
that man is a huge Disappointment
ride on mummyP |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:26pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
sirblero:lol |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 8:30pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
nawa o. Madam chumzypinky. O ti pe ju. O ti n di ose o. I don dae wait 4 ur update since mawning. |
Re: Red Ashes by marianneada(f): 8:38pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
Madam Chumzy, u're da best,i cant get enuf of ur story, may God give u d strength to update daily, tanx so much for always making my day with ur updates. Lots of love. |
Re: Red Ashes by marianneada(f): 8:43pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
Cant stop checking for update, pls ma'am we're hungry for ur update. |
Re: Red Ashes by crislyn(f): 8:44pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
Wow I made it. I thought I'd not see another female writer like AudreyTimms on NL but I was obviously wrong. Wonderful, and there is just something real about the story, from this story it seems you r a free spirited and playful person like the characters. Loads of lessons too! Wehdon MA! 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by kellyoneinamill: 9:02pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
are you okay mrs Pinky this is unlike you |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:06pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
crislyn:lol dear @bolded, u're right. I'm kind of freespirited and jovial, though i'm verrryyyy hottempered. You wouldnt want to see me angry, my vex dey boil hot water, lol *winks* 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:09pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
kellyoneinamill:my dear, i dont even know whats wrong with me sef. Its seem my brain is doing pinyo-pinyo today. I'm not rili in a very sound frame of mind so i dont want to update so i dont end up typing rubbish. You know sometimes some updates dont hold water right? Thats probably because the writer isnt in a right state of mind. I'm just in a badmood, moodswing actually. But tomorrow, i go drop fire to fire. Thank God i dropped about two-three updates yesterday. Thanks for understanding. Love ya loads 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 10:46pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
za oza rum is calling... anytime body dey do mummy chumzy like dis. I no say Na za oza rum issue.....abeg go mk bros rub ur mind...make u see road update tomorrow
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Re: Red Ashes by FreeSpirited: 11:29pm On Feb 15, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:Stop mentioning me....I am the real freespirited |
Re: Red Ashes by kellyoneinamill: 6:59am On Feb 16, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: okay. now i understand why this story is always on point. please dont rush it ya. take ya time and come up with something as good as what you always come up with.(but make the time no too many sha o. cos hunger for pinky is killing) |
Re: Red Ashes by Tgold1(m): 8:50am On Feb 16, 2017 |
TheBlessedMAN:medal pass medai 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 9:15am On Feb 16, 2017 |
U see, I think Chidinma aka Pamela should be Chuks nemesis and punishment. Chumzy use dat hot headed baby Mama to deal with Chuks mercilessly!!! |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:18am On Feb 16, 2017 |
FreeSpirited:hian! There's nothing we will not saw on NL |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:45am On Feb 16, 2017 |
KAINENE. Kaka hadnt texted me since. She hadnt even called to give me the info she said she wanted to give me. I was tired and exhausted and all i had in mind was a sound sleep. Having Nathan walk out on me earlier that day in the car weakened me the most. I was embarrassed, heartbroken and shattered. Never for once had i thought Nathan could one day harbour this kind of hatred for me, never had i imagined it. After managing myself two clubsandwiches and a soft drink, i retired to bed. Then i remembered i was moving out of the house the next day. Preparations had already been made to sell the house. *** KAKA. At exactly 11pm, we were still discussing. All the kids had retired to bed, leaving Meso, Chidinma and i. Meso's husband was with us for a while before deciding that this was an immediate family matter and left us alone. Mesonma was trying to roll peace between Chidinma and i but we were having none of it. At a point she became exhausted 'what do i do with the both of you now? The two of you are sisters, why this so much hatred?' 'she's the one causing all the palava here' Chidinma said pointing at me 'you know me nah, Meso, i dont look for trouble. But who looks for my trouble gets it double' 'thats not my problem sef. Mesonma, what i'm trying to understand is why you allowed this demonic beast into this house. Have you forgotten what dad said? He said he doesnt want to ever see this agricultural fowl close to any member of this family again else they face the judgement, have your forgotten so soon?' i asked. 'no i've not forgotten, i...' 'and who did you just call an agricultural fowl? I hope its not me sha. I just hope its not me' Chidinma interrupted. 'can you both just give me a break!' Messy said almost shouting 'allow me speak both of you. Kamsi,' she said turning to me 'Kamsi, there's something you need to understand about life' i sighed within me. Now here comes my philosophical sister again 'in this life, relationships are not easy to destroy. Yes, Chidinma messed up. And she did something very unforgiveable and unpardonable. And she was punished. But then, have you forgotten that she's also our blood? From the same groins? Eh Kamsi? She came out from the same womb with us. She's even your elder sister, she deserves some respect from you kwanu. You just cant throw away important relationships like this one because of mistakes that we all as humans are liable to. It might have been very easy for all of you to forget about Dinma here, but it wasnt easy for me and it would never be easy for me. She's my sister, we have the same blood running through our veins. And remember the saying, blood is thicker than water. I will also do the same thing if it were you, Amanda, Queen or Kelechi, because you all are my blood. If i dont care about you, who else will? When Chidinma left for Togo, we didnt communicate for a year or so. I didnt even bother contacting her and my soul was disturbed. After fighting with my spirit for about three months, i finally decided to reach out to her. And i called her. She was happy to hear my voice. We spoken on a lot of things and i happened to find out she was pregnant for her second child. She needed financial assistance as at that time because she claimed the man who impregnated her was irresponsible and not able to provide her needs even when he had the funds. She was my sister and i had to do something, i just could leave her like that. And so i sent her some money. And i told her that after delivering, she should leave that man and come over to Nigeria, then we could get her a job or even start up something for her. She was grateful. She's my sister. And then we started communicating on regular basis. When she delivered, i expected her to come down to Nigeria but to my chagrin, she remained with the man she termed irresponsible till he impregnated her the third time. I was very disappointed in her but that didnt stop me from caring about her. She had some complications when she birthed her third child and i had to run down to Togo to take care of her. That is what family do for one another. Its not very difficult for you to do if you're determined. What am i saying in essence? What i'm trying to say is that we should let love lead in this family. Let us care for one another as we are one. Kamsiyochukwu, i know you're a very strongheaded girl, you no dey hear word but i also know you have a very beautiful heart, you love caring for people and i appreciate that about you. And so i have a favor to ask of you, can you do that for me?' I swallowed a hiss 'what is that?' 'learn to care for Chidinma. Chidinma, i also want you to do same, the both of you are sisters for crying out loud. If you dont care for each other, who will?' 'you will' Chidinma said 'because as it is now, i'm not ready to forgive Kamsi, she has insulted me enough' I yawned sleepily 'i never had plans of asking for your forgiveness anyway. Goodnight Meso, i'll just check on Chinasa' TBC 8 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by BurnaKing21: 10:53am On Feb 16, 2017 |
Nice 1...... More inspiration 2 ur mendula |
Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 11:06am On Feb 16, 2017 |
Thanks for Update Ma'am.Hope u r feeling much better? |
Re: Red Ashes by rachealfst(f): 11:12am On Feb 16, 2017 |
I have a lot of catching up to do.....page75 |
Re: Red Ashes by mofy1(f): 11:19am On Feb 16, 2017 |
Kainene chill okay. Nathan is just teaching u some of the rules in dating because if carry this ur insecurity and bad mouth into marriage,it won't last. Chumzypinky keep doing the good job . |
Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 11:20am On Feb 16, 2017 |
mhmmmmm......sis, @logger head....make una take am easy ooooo, anyway blood is thicker dan water |
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 11:22am On Feb 16, 2017 |
thanks for the update ma'am.
quick recovery. . #more ideas to your story. |
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