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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by rachealfst(f): 2:14pm On Feb 16, 2017
Wow!!! Finally I'm here. You're doing a great job here Mummy Chumzy. More strength to you in Jesus name.
My Kainene has suffered oooo. Nathan pls come back Nene needs you now than ever.
Re: Red Ashes by Adesina12: 2:19pm On Feb 16, 2017
rachealfst:
Wow!!! Finally I'm here. You're doing a great job here Mummy Chumzy. More strength to you in Jesus name.
My Kainene has suffered oooo. Nathan pls come back Nene needs you now than ever.

welcome on board grin

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Re: Red Ashes by Gideonzino(m): 3:54pm On Feb 16, 2017
Keneine.. just like someone I know. Well this punishment thing is kinda hard on her tho.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:16pm On Feb 16, 2017
Gideonzino:
Keneine.. just like someone I know. Well this punishment thing is kinda hard on her tho.
someone u know? Tell me about her
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 6:07pm On Feb 16, 2017
chumpzpinky y yhu elongating this story naw angry angry angry angry sad sad sad sad embarassed embarassed embarassed undecided undecided cry cry cry cry

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:42pm On Feb 16, 2017
talk2saintify:
chumpzpinky y yhu elongating this story naw angry angry angry angry sad sad sad sad embarassed embarassed embarassed undecided undecided cry cry cry cry
how?
Re: Red Ashes by Feyikemi12(f): 8:08pm On Feb 16, 2017
more updates pleeeeeeeaaaase
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:16pm On Feb 16, 2017
***Runs into thread panting*** thank God I ***bends down with his two hands one his knees to catch some breath*** finally caught upper with you guys.

Nice piece of literary work you got there chumzypinky

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:29pm On Feb 16, 2017
preciousuweh:
***Runs into thread panting*** thank God I ***bends down with his two hands one his knees to catch some breath*** finally caught upper with you guys.

Nice piece of literary work you got there chumzypinky
hian, abeg no faint oo

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Re: Red Ashes by GentleYoung(m): 6:24am On Feb 17, 2017
Chumzypinky where is Jolade na. I've missed that babe ooo
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 7:26am On Feb 17, 2017
Lolz Nvm...jux joking ah guess!!
Chumzypinky:

how?

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Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 7:26am On Feb 17, 2017
To much discussion er and Der...no vex ooo
Chumzypinky:
how?

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:10am On Feb 17, 2017
talk2saintify:
To much discussion er and Der...no vex ooo

lol
Re: Red Ashes by coltaine(m): 9:32am On Feb 17, 2017
I keep following this story like green follows grass, who wouldn't be stuck on a cool story such as this.........

kainene is been affected by the saying that "you don't know what you have until you lose it"................just what I hate most in my life, a saucy and nagging woman, still praying for the strength to be able to walk out when it gets to that time sha.....cos i av been made to understand, most women nag......

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Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 11:03am On Feb 17, 2017

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Re: Red Ashes by Nnnena(f): 12:41pm On Feb 17, 2017
Mummy chumzy i joined NL because of you. Really love your story more ideas ma
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 12:46pm On Feb 17, 2017
Nnnena:
Mummy chumzy i joined NL because of you. Really love your story more ideas ma
Chumzypinky pple ar joining NL because of u, dnt u tink u shud open ur own forum nd make money frm it:p
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 1:08pm On Feb 17, 2017
mummy oooo your children are hungry... we've not eaten since today..(lolzz)..ahbeg rojah us update..
#following..
Re: Red Ashes by ElajRita(f): 1:33pm On Feb 17, 2017
mummy chumzy, this thing that u are doing nau, is it good
Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 1:34pm On Feb 17, 2017
Mummy chumpzy! Where art thou??
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:30pm On Feb 17, 2017
gtin:

Chumzypinky pple ar joining NL because of u, dnt u tink u shud open ur own forum nd make money frm it:p
lol, lemme think abt dat
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:30pm On Feb 17, 2017
Nnnena:
Mummy chumzy i joined NL because of you. Really love your story more ideas ma
welcome to d family dearie. I love u
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:31pm On Feb 17, 2017
ElajRita:
mummy chumzy, this thing that u are doing nau, is it good
i'm so sorry dearie. It aint intentional
Re: Red Ashes by kellyoneinamill: 6:51pm On Feb 17, 2017
mrs pinky no inspiration yet? when it comes just know you owe us at least five updates at once

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Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 7:22pm On Feb 17, 2017
CHUMPZPINKY ARE YHU PREGNANT? wink wink

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Re: Red Ashes by Bibi294(f): 7:34pm On Feb 17, 2017
Mummy pinky.... How far you na!
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:54pm On Feb 17, 2017
talk2saintify:
CHUMPZPINKY ARE YHU PREGNANT? wink wink
Jamb Question!

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Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 9:05pm On Feb 17, 2017
na wa o. Chumzypinky.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:31pm On Feb 17, 2017
Chumzypinky:

hian, abeg no faint oo

My sister no be small run I don dey run since page 0.
But sha thanks for your concern.
Re: Red Ashes by Sayway(f): 9:45pm On Feb 17, 2017
Can't wait for the next update.
Nyc work ma'am.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:04pm On Feb 17, 2017
MABEL.
I kept staring at Nathan who looked carried away. He kept digging his fork into his food but he wasnt eating.
I ate, my gaze steadying on him. I wondered what he was thinking about.
Then i saw him smile 'Nathan?' i called and he jerked.

'yes mum?'

'why were you smiling?'

'me? Smiling? You must be mistaken. Who smiles while eating?'

'my son Nathan does' i smiled mischievously 'tell me, you and Claire made up already?'

'uhm, not really' he shook his head and laughed 'mum, you really should stop bothering yourself about Nene. We will make up at our own time' he winked.

'finally you've admitted that you two are finally going to make up very soon'

'of course we'd make up! Does it look like i'm totally over her to you?'

I stared at him confusedly 'then why put up such an act? Why did you act that way at the office?'

'i just wanted to make her learn her lesson. Mother, she has no right to constantly degrade me the way she does everytime. I'm a man, and as such i deserve some sort of respect from her'

'true talk son. But then, dont you think you were too harsh?'

'yes, maybe i was harsh. At that time, i'd already made up my mind never to accept her. But then, my resolve weakened' he smiled again.

'and if i may ask Mr Man,' i scooped some salad into my mouth 'what made your resolve weaken?'

'love i guess'

'love nwan tin tin'

'you can say that again' we both laughed.

I reached for his hand 'let me tell you something you dont know son, when you love someone, you dont give up on that person no matter what. Nobody is perfect, everyone has flaws and shortcomings and its your duty to correct your lover's mistakes. You dont give up on the people you claim to love, you teach them how to meet up to your standards instead, alright, loverboy?'

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Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 10:13pm On Feb 17, 2017
thanks for updating...

#am trilled..

I learnt something new today...(the last sentence)..love isn't perfect..you learn to Make it perfect..thanks mummy pinky!!


to you my bae .#elajrita..I dedicate them to you...
#lolzz...


#more updates and ideas to your story..

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