I came across this and i said let me look it up a bit. I must say you got we hooked to my screen till the last chapter. Typical whodunit. You're good... Hope there'll be a follow up to complete Joel's rescue mission

enirock:
You would have allowed the fight lead to her stabbing and not allow her be violated... I would have preferred she died than allowing Ezenwa violate her but I guess that's why I am not the writer and you are...

. YOU just typed my what i had in mind, too bad we ain't the writter but marvelous demsel

damselposh why?
And she was a virgin.
see eeehn, i dey vex for you damsel and the only way you can redeem yourself is to keep Melody alive somehow.

you no try at all.

Embellished:



I doubt that, because at the end, she wrote. "her already closed eyes gave him the impression that she was dead" so no, Melody is not dead.

I hope so

People's comment made our op do this, I'm not happy at all

Adesina12, i hope you are happy now? mtcheeerw

Damselposh have joined bad gang

purity23:
Damselposh have joined bad gang

hahaha,lol

i can't wait to hear that its a dream

Hmm, damselposh, you've done the undo-able ba, you've broken my heart into shreds with this episode
I believe Melody will survive but she'll be traumatized due to the violation.

Wtf!!!!!

Better she was stabbed while struggling na!! Why the rape

Oh well! Always expect the unexpected

I don chop you raw already for my mind. Jesus Christ! Damsel what did we do to deserve this heart break

OMG


OP abeg na who they dream this bad dream na?
Make the persin wake up joor

Ujunwa14:
Adesina12, i hope you are happy now?
mtcheeerw

What will I do with stubborn Yoruba girl body
She was stubborn and no dey hear word
When he get to the heaven gate he go tell baba God what transpired
Why she no dey follow simple instructions. Now the deed is done.
Thank you Damelposh babe, you’re now ranked A+ writer who uses her initiatives and not dance to the tune of readers comments
However, I hope Mels won’t die so as to rewrite her story on livings land
Ann2012, ujunwa14 and Mels fan home and away...how market�
Sweet popcorn for you all

Ujunwa14:
damselposh why?
And she was a virgin.
see eeehn, i dey vex for you damsel and the only way you can redeem yourself is to keep Melody alive somehow.

you no try at all.

Make she just let her die because if she save her, Melody will not remain the same and would deflect some of the blame to Joel

damselposh i don’t know you to be someone that writes horror stories or sad stories so plssssss ma pa mi biko

Aahhhh!!!
Damselposh have finished me.
Why did you allow our single bone to perish like that.?
What has our melody done to deserve this na, ehn?
Oh, am heartbroken.
Ezenwa u are gone.
You have bitten more than you can chew this time.
The holocaust is coming!
Thanks for the update anyways, gud job. I think i understand where ur going with this.

enirock:


Make she just let her die because if she save her, Melody will not remain the same and would deflect some of the blame to Joel

true!

Damselposh silver have initiated you abi

Why did you kill Melody?

What a bad way to loose a forbidden fruit


Thanks sweetie

Blood of Jesus Christ damselposh why? Am so angry right now. not only was she raped, she got stabbed too. damsel in fact i dey come your house tomorrow make me and you fight, i don vex.

Adesina12:


What will I do with stubborn Yoruba girl body
She was stubborn and no dey hear word
When he get to the heaven gate he go tell baba God what transpired
Why she no dey follow simple instructions. Now the deed is done.
Thank you Damelposh babe, you’re now ranked A+ writer who uses her initiatives and not dance to the tune of readers comments
However, I hope Mels won’t die so as to rewrite her story on livings land
Ann2012, ujunwa14 and Mels fan home and away...how market�
Sweet popcorn for you all

Bad belle

CHAPTER THIRTY SEVEN


"Step on it Man" Joel shouted at Okenwa as soon as they left Asaba town. The detective had insisted that Okenwa should take over the steering as he knew the farm house very well. There were 30 men on the whole Journeying to the forest. 15 soldiers and 10 police men were all in one long coaster bus, Joel, the detective, Chidiebube, Okenwa and Udoka occupied Joel's car with Okenwa on the wheel.


"Calm down captain, we will soon be there" Okenwa assured as they got to the highway just after they left Asaba town, Joel read all the sign posts on the road nodding at each of the names of the villages they passed. Okenwa finally diverted into a recently cleared path, Ebube turned back to check if the long coaster bus was at a close range.


The car came to a halt, Joel jumped down from the car giving Okenwa that look of "Can we please leave them and go?." A black Highlander was already parked there before they came. The detective waited around for the coaster bus to arrive, the men got down from the car all dressed in their uniforms, guns in their hands and smile eluded their faces.


"We will all match to the farm house in silence and make sure you get ready to shoot at anyone who tries to interfere" the detective said and they all nodded in unison. "Let's go" he said as they formed a single line because the path was narrow. few minutes after walking, they left the narrow path and found themselves in a broad and cleared piece of land with a cottage situated at the center.


"We are here" Okenwa said with a shrug. Joel tried rushing to the cottage but was dragged back by the detective.


"You don't need to rush Captain, we will send the men in" he told him with a sigh.


"Oh God" Joel muttered, annoyed. The detective signaled three of the police men to check the cottage but before he could finish, the door of the cottage opened and Ezenwa came out whistling happily. He froze on seeing them and within a split second, he took to his heels, one of the soldiers aimed at him and shot his leg, he fell down with a groan.


"You did well Agile" Joel said walking to where the stalker laid, blood oozing out from his leg. "Where is Melody?" he asked him but got no reply, he punched his face and shouted "Where the heck is my Melody?" The stalker groaned in pain, lifted his hand and pointed towards the southern direction of the cottage.


"Agile, take five men with you and go check it out" Joel said not shifting his gaze from the stalker. "your end has finally come, i will make you pay for all the pains you caused those innocent ladies" He spoke in agony. it didn't take long, the soldiers he sent came back.


"Boss, we found her, looks like she is dead" Agile spoke, he had Melody's body in his hands.


"Melody?" Joel shouted running towards the soldiers who all wore sadness like a cloth. His stomach turned on seeing her frail frame lying dead with a thin clothe covering her breast, he shifted the clothe and covered her breast very well "Melody, am sorry i came late but am here now, wake up please" his eyes burned as the tears gathered, when she didn't respond, the tears dropped. "Noooo," he roared like a wounded lion. "I failed again, history has repeated itself yet again, just like the time of Mercy" with his eyes bloodshot, he ran to where Ezenwa laid and stomped his wounded leg with his shoe.


"What have you done?" he kept on stomping his leg with his shoe, Ezenwa continued groaning and moaning in pain. "You raped her? that innocent girl was still a virgin, you screwed brain. you killed her, she was my life but you took her away from me" he stomped and stomped and stomped till the sole of his white sneakers got covered with blood.


"We need to do something, otherwise he will kill him" Chidiebube said to no one in particular. Okenwa hurriedly walked towards the soldier carrying Melody, he held her wrist for a while and then screamed "I feel a pulse" he looked at everyone. Joel looked back from where he stood "I feel a pulse" Okenwa said again. Joel ran towards him like a raging bull.


"You feel a pulse?" he asked again to be sure.


"Yes, but very fainty and we might lose her if we don't hurry to the hospital now" Okenwa replied slowly letting go of Melody's wrist. Joel pulled his Polo and carefully wore it on her, he took her from the soldiers hands and muttered "My Melody, please stay with me, don't go anywhere Bambi" he ran off, her body firmly placed in his hands.

The detective signaled three police men again to go bring the stalker, but then Chidiebube shouted.

"The killer is mine" he walked towards Ezenwa, the police men stepped back. He eyed him and said huskily "You just stepped on the Lion's tail, you have incurred the wrath of the captain and no one can be able to save you. you made a mistake, man, by touching his girl, I so pity you" he hijacked his wounded leg and dragged him on the ground walking to where the others stood, they all turned around and left the place hurriedly.

Embellished:
Did i just read correctly or did damselposh truly kill Melody.

Anyway i doubt that.
Adesina12 ngwanu come and carry her corpse.

Am sorry babe, but i didn't kill her

okikioluwafemi:
my melody is gone,ha

no sweetheart, she is not gone

okikioluwafemi:


you don kill her na

no babe, i didn't kill her

enirock:
You would have allowed the fight lead to her stabbing and not allow her be violated... I would have preferred she died than allowing Ezenwa violate her but I guess that's why I am not the writer and you are...

Am sorry boo, but sometimes life is not always fair.
the title of the story is "Roses and Thorns" it will not be Rosy all through.

Please allow her die in the hospital... Good morning dear and thanks for the update

enirock:


I can't fit to chop your head off... I am just pained that He got his way and it kinda brought some memories about someone I know.

Hmmm

I was pained too when i was writing it.
Am sorry for the memories.

Ven97:
damselposh why did you allow the stalker to rape her na? I dey vex for you sha

Am sorry boo, i won't do it again.

Kindler01:
I came across this and i said let me look it up a bit. I must say you got we hooked to my screen till the last chapter. Typical whodunit. You're good... Hope there'll be a follow up to complete Joel's rescue mission

thanks honey