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Just finished page 4. Kudos bruv, try to improve on your suspense

STILL ON PAGE 3
Guy you're good. At first when i started reading i was getting bored with the frequent conversations but you've greatly improved. Please reduce more of the conversation, you only do that when it's necessary.

-By the way, i don't understand the kind of love Segun and Nike has ooOoo, this moment they're friends, the next moment they're enemies.

-e be lik say na miracle centre u for rit dat exam if nt u for no fit challenge dat invigilator lik dat...

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NICE STORY, KEEP IT UP.

kingphilip: ^^guy hw far u now since wey i knw u na yettocome u de use na kekenapep or motorbike abi na legedisbenz u de use self

now that's funny. . .

@ROCk - This are my suggestions.

-If you'll have another title in the season2 then you should open a new thread.

-But you can still have something like "The preachers' son season 2 as a new thread, but i'll advice you to Continue with this thread since you already got the followers, you can decide to modify the topic to something like "The preachers son 1&2"

-Also do not make the mistake of modifying the title of this story to something else entirely. It will be a disaster.

Yettocome: The Rock.....
You want to force me out of my break, it won't work or so I thought....
Nice ending to a good story.

Thiss is what I call a situational autobiographical record of domiciliary and escapitudinal events of the highest order in the loci and crancum of the bermuda triangle.

Well done..
I am watching in 4D.

Lemme go and think for my next work.

Its already on my blog o. But sha, watch out for Ade's Chronicle.

Still I am Yettocome...

Hehe, na wen you turn patrick obahiagbon, go and start your new story and stop speaking big big grammer. Send me the link though.

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@ROCK I still dey follow you bumper to bumper

Ok, Noted.

By the way, i've started a new story, the link is below my signature. I'm expecting you there. @soCHISTAR

^ Is this not the part when you're supposed to start your story?!

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Good morning to una

Oh boy!, can't wait for the next update. .