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Oga bouncer, so u copy the people wey dey view this post com copy "go up" join. .

Mehn see traffic

Hehe....Thank GoD say na part one end ooOoo.....

@Wisdom-Me - honestly speaking, i doubt your sanity, you're the direct opposite of your moniker. #PunIntended

*SHOCKED* I hope i didn't just read the part that says this story is about to end. Wow! Wow! Wow! What a journey. . So what am i going to be reading now? *SAD FACE*

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Uduak maybe i go finish my story tomorrow then you fit open that thread.

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I thank GoD for my life ooOoo, it's not like i'm too brilliant... Alot of my friends wrote GCE in ss2 but i didn't. In ss3 i wrote WAEC only. When the result came out i was extremely happy cause i made it, some of my friends back then who wrote GCE, WAEC, and NECO all together are still writing S.S.C.E. That same year i finished secondary school i took JAMB, i had already gotten admission but they later increased my department cut-off-mark, i didn't get admitted. Same year i bought pre-degree form in the same school and now i'm a student of KSU. Abeg ASUU make una call off strike today ooOoo.. I just dey grow beard for house... I still be young guy but if una see my bear-bear una go know say osama bin laden na learner. .

kingphilip: John and samuel are for the accidents while henry is for the bar stuff

Ok, thanks.

chistar01: Morning guys. Its another weekend and my weekends are usually tight, I don't know if I'll be able to update, but if I do it would be on my blog and I'll drop a link here.

I'm off for now and I'll reply u all comments later on in the day. #bless.

And just for the record, School life E-book would be release this week.
PEACe.

week don almost end. *anticipating mood activated*

^^same thing here. Na gen i dey use charge these days. . .

What a SHOCKER....!!! I never saw that coming. Since his knows his status, he shouldn't bother marrying a woman, in the end Jummy would be the one to suffer.

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Is John, Samuel and Henry the guys they met during the accident spree or during the Car theft in the bar? I'm a lil confused here.

Ok, i com wake up about 04:20am, reads update. Uduak u try, it's not easy, but try 2 modify dis last update b4 u start anoda. I knw it's nt complete.

*Reading with Rocket speed*

I'm enjoying your story, not bad for a first timer. it made me reminisced those days in secondary school. Teen love is the best, or so i thought.

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Try to reduce the conversation in your story, it's killing the vibe, hence making it boring. Also try to be versatile, although it's a love story but touch other areas that has nothing to do with the story. I've observed that Segun is either at home or at school. Try to work on that also. I'll gladly point out other observations as i continue reading.

Hmmmmm, nice story, Currently on page2