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Weldone pensmith. I commend the fact that you are penning down your experience while still serving. I hope to do mine after service year. You are an amazing writer, with a unique style. You also know how to make use of the write words for effects. Thanks for taking your time to share this beautiful experience with us.

As for my reaction towards your story, I'd say you are seriously starving us of details. I read your disclaimer from the beginning, but I was not expecting this kind of bland reading experience. The way you breezed past the three weeks of camping without sharing the adventurous escapades that ought to make your story juicy, makes the story looks like one you intend rushing.

As the story progresses, do well to feed our curiosity. When I see someone trying to relieve their service year experience, I expect lot of intriguing moments. Tell us about other people experiences if you don't have much of yours. Let us into Langtang North. You are the "I no like stress" kind of person, so I get why you are only dwelling on what you feel is important. But, for the sake of hooking your audience down, let's have the GHEN GHEN moments too...

Bring it on Miss Ghost. I am with you all the way of the ride.....

Prize received. Thank you Kinwayne and Lleigh. God bless you both...

princesa:
Congratulations to the winners, it was an honor having to judge your stories...
Remember Writing does pay,
So Stay imaginative...

It was the greatest honour having you judge my work. Started following your work as far back as 2014.. You are a real inspiration

To all my fellow contestants, thank you for participating... I pray one day, we'll all get to utilize the experience ganered from this platform in a great way. Congratulations to Gsteve01. You were awesome. And to the rest of us all, I say congrats too... We were all unique in our different ways.

To the judges, you guys were awesome. I don't know how you all did it, but somehow, someway, you pulled this through. I say a very big thank you to y'all..... God bless y'all

Iamlegend, thank you for your highly constructive critic of our stories. This little gesture of yours albeit gargantuan in our sight has provided a deep insight into our flaws and strengths... May God reward you abundantly

kinwayne:
The fourth placed winner:

Firstgentleman1

I don't know how to appreciate you well enough for this great platform.... For lack of words to say bro, I'd like to leave you with this short prayer; May your light shine even in the face of the strongest darkness. Amen.

kinwayne:
You sent your story to the previous mail rather than creating a new one

I am sorry bro... Forgive my carelessness

kinwayne:
FIRSTGENTLEMAN1, LAURELYN, JETJACKY, BARRIKADE. You guys gave me unnecessary hard work by replying and sending your stories to the previous email. Totally not cool.

To the rest of the participants, Most of you didn't follow the instruction when I said to paragraph your work. I should have just let your work be and posted it here unedited so you can read it, that's if you can as it's all clumsy and ill-packed. I decided to be lenient. Again, not cool people. Giving me unnecessary hard work.

Exhausted and tired.

More info coming up

I am sorry bro, there might have been some mix up. I edited mine properly. I made use of double line spacing all through. I am sorry if it turned out poorly at your side. So so sorry for the inconvenience....