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dimssy:
From the foregoing ,it's like Paul got to the village before his announced arrival. My great mind tells me it's Paul.


Good work bro.....

Paul had a lot of opportunities with Amara. Besides, they met him at the park, days after the first killing. He couldn't have been living in the bush before then.

LarrySun:
Done, sir.

Thanks, man. It's reassuring to know that I put up a good fight. I will consider writing on Nairaland. Lots to learn from here.

Cheers to everyone that made it. Till another competition pops up.

LarrySun:
Selected Contestants:

1. OluwabuqqyYOLO

2. Gmike2Rule

Ah, the journey ends for me! It was worth it all through. Never knew I could piece together the entries I dropped until I tried.


Larrysun, a review/critique of my post, please. I would like to take corrections and improve my writing.

Congrats, OluwabuqqyYOLO.

Illicit, this is really good. Not edited, but got me spellbound. C'mon, get back to work on this!

souloho19:
Okudili smashed his bottle on a tree and joined the chanting. He tore his shirt from his body(which wasn't that difficult considering the material had low quality)

The Devil Wears Okirika continues, stay tuned!

skarlett:
When will the judges verdict come na

Tension is killing someborri here oh

Who has their PO Box addresses? We need to write to them.

Divepen1

Larrysun

Audreytimms

Repogirl

iamloyalty:
I still think is Stevenson
1. That why chinsa didn't suspect him.
2. He wears a particular kaki trousers.
3. He knew pastor osi without been told.
4. The devil is into beastlity too and that act is common with europeans.

Still keeping my options open.

You are correct! Chinaza's reaction and the serial nature of the crime flags him out. Okwudili is a drunk and seems too dense for the calculative deviousness of the DEVIL.

But Stevenson has been living in the village for a while before the rape cum murders began. Was he always the devil or did something make him snap?



cc souloho19

Love is whatever you call it. The bright morning sun or starlights at night.

Now, tell us your story.

What if the devil is Pastor Bartholomew?

souloho19:






I'm soo loving this

Now this is very true

Hihihihi. That feeling!

souloho19:






I'm soo loving this

Now this is very true

Hihihihi. That feeling!

Countrygirl:
Before I continue, I think Steve is the devil, how did he know osi is the pastor if not the bush where his evil plan was thwarted.

Then odili that is always with alcohol,

I'm confused oo, soul 'Joy wants more'

That's what makes a good writer. Keep the readers engaged and guessing!

meneski:
... Oboy you wan make me come back to this story oh. I swear these words mean the world to me. The other story i told you abt,the fantasy am still working on it. Pls whats the difference btw a fantasy n mythology?





Souloho19 n stephengee12 make una come see abandone project oh.hi
Abeg make only una waka come.


Time to resume never reach.

Some fantasies derive their plots and settings from mythology. I don't think mythology is an actual genre of literature.

Divepen1:
No. It will only move there when the winnee has been announced.

Oh. I was thinking the final stage would be anonymous like the blind audition and readers alone would vote without interference from the contestants.

Divepen1:
Lol.. I've been trying to figure it out.But I guess, I'll use only the mod thread. I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

Will the thread make Frontpage for the voting at the final stage? It would seem to be a popularity contest if the contestants campaign for votes.

You started off with a bang- a man comes to town and sets off series of actions. You hit it right with your MC by placing the first antagonist at the start: Henry, and his cheating and gambling habit. Flaws make interesting, relatable and believable characters.

I like the cliffhanger at the end of the sixth post. You did very well with the suspense! Try to tell us how that turned out in your next post.

Dialogue is the spice of every story. You didn't bore us with endless narration, you let your characters talk although you need to tone down the information dump. Most people would skip the list you made about the team players and their respective wings.

I will be back...

meneski:
... At last u caught me... When u gave me the prompt, i kept on praying u dnt c dis story. But one day i'd be back for it on a full scale. Any way thanks man. How is the battle going?

The battle is as intense as it could be! Sad to see you get dropped.

You should know that your plot was very interesting but I think it was your spelling and punctuation that let you down. Try to write with spellcheck activated on your device.

Yes, I still remember the 'prompt with a promise '. I will carefully go through this story and offer hard knocks!

meneski:
Divepen1 pls help me get better...



I just dnt know why i abandon dis piece.

#amature on the loose

Meneski, I admire your passion for writing. Against all odds, you keep trying, and that is the first and basic attribute of a good writer.

I think you should get down to the next stage by studying the ABC of prose.

Read, read and read. Read the big writers on Nairaland and follow their pattern - not style (This should be unique to you)