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Literature › Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Frankenstein: 12:40pm On Aug 19, 2017

Pinkfeet:
wen i saw d name of dis story , i was asking myself dat how can a devil wear okirika .

but now i can see dat d devil in dis story put on okirika .

i pray dat God will reveal d evil person

Are you for real? You are praying over a fictional story?

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Literature › Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Frankenstein: 1:22pm On Aug 18, 2017

souloho19:
Thanks bro duly noted. Pls I would appreciate any observation and criticism...I understand you're very good at that

You have been doing a wonderful job so far. Sincerely, your writing style marvels me- the way you twist the plot and hide details in plain sight without being too predictable. Makes me want to start writing already.

You have managed to hold your audience guessing, captivated and yearning for more. That's all you need to know. The rest are secondary issues you could always tidy up. Keep it up! I hope this ends up into a book that will fetch you good money.

grin

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Literature › Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Frankenstein: 7:13pm On Aug 16, 2017

The devil is this, the devil is that.
grin

Souloho19, please take your time with the story. There is no deadline!
The last few updates were written in a rush.

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Literature › Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Frankenstein: 8:16pm On Aug 15, 2017

I can't get enough of this rib-cracker. Update! Update! Update!

Literature › Re: All About Me (naomi's Tale) by Frankenstein: 8:09pm On Aug 15, 2017

Writing about writing. This would be interesting!

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Literature › Re: Watchman by Frankenstein: 1:00pm On Aug 15, 2017

Update and then you will get more views.

Please take your time to add paragraphs. Put dialogue within quotation marks and attach dialogue tags.

This story is interesting but it would become a chore to read without the above.

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Literature › Re: Lilyjoe Wins Nairaland 200-Word Competition by Frankenstein: 7:48pm On Aug 14, 2017

meneski:
.. After you don like am abeg i will need the hard knock on my other thread.

I didn't mean I would offer negative criticism. It was to spur you to write better. I'd rather offer or link you to materials you could learn from.

Literature › Re: Lilyjoe Wins Nairaland 200-Word Competition by Frankenstein: 5:17pm On Aug 14, 2017

souloho19:
For the sins of my parents

"Madam has arrived, If I hear you say anything I'll kill you!" Oga shoves me roughly as he buckles his belt. I run out adjusting my gown and manage to enter the kitchen before madam. "Welcome ma"
"Idiot! hurry up and wash the fish then put it on fire!"
I already turn my cheek, expecting the slap. Madam isn't one to talk without leaving an exclamation mark on my face. I rush to the zinc as my face stings.

My name is Mosurat and I know you feel bad for me but don't. When I'm done and you see this on front page you'll hate me.

You see, I have a box of rat poison in the cupboard and I'm going to use it as an extra spice while preparing dinner.

My freedom was stolen when I was 8 and brought here by my poor parents with the promise of quality education. Instead I've been abused and raped everyday for six years.
Now I'm 14 and I plan to run away.
But they have to pay first.

I guess in every sense my innocence was taken from me.

I shake the thoughts and dish the melon soup into the bowl. It smells delicious and I add extra fish and poison.

They like eating together and this is their last supper. I start to smile as they begin to eat but my smile falters as I hear the words that taunt me to this very hour: "honey guess what? I'm pregnant"

Say NO to every FORM of child abuse

Just Wow. That twist at the ending was epic. You are the master! grin

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Literature › Re: Lilyjoe Wins Nairaland 200-Word Competition by Frankenstein: 5:14pm On Aug 14, 2017

meneski:
frankenstein I don drop oh.

Amazing piece! This is really good.

Literature › Re: Rate Me! - Testing My Writing Skills by Frankenstein: 12:58am On Aug 14, 2017

The story should have begun at
Our lips met, my hands moving in unknown places...

But what do I know? grin

OK. Write another piece, please.

Literature › Re: Rate Me! - Testing My Writing Skills by Frankenstein: 12:54am On Aug 14, 2017

Nice story.

But who wakes up broken, in an unknown room and starts making love with a cold unknown female?

Business › Re: Football (+Other Sports) Betting Season 11 by Frankenstein: 9:48pm On Aug 12, 2017

Virulent:
B929EETTTESRZS-3146574

Wow! This is sad.

Business › Re: Football (+Other Sports) Betting Season 11 by Frankenstein: 9:45pm On Aug 12, 2017

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Business › Re: Football (+Other Sports) Betting Season 11 by Frankenstein: 9:41pm On Aug 12, 2017

Frankenstein:
Chelsea did a big one on tickets today.

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Guys please! Today is the deadline.

Celebrities › Re: Toolz Calls Out NG Classic Store Using Her Beads For Advert by Frankenstein: 8:59pm On Aug 12, 2017

Please, forgive my bad manners, but gentlemen and ladies, I really need your help to win a competition on Nairaland literature section.

PLEASE CLICK like and share the post with my story Ikorodu Guard at the literature section.

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Romance › Re: 5 Places To Find Rich Husbands In Lagos by Frankenstein: 8:58pm On Aug 12, 2017

Please, forgive my bad manners, but gentlemen and ladies, I really need your help to win a competition on Nairaland literature section.

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Crime › Re: Man Shot Dead In Front Of His Shop In Alaba (Graphic Photos) by Frankenstein: 7:57pm On Aug 12, 2017

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Business › Re: Football (+Other Sports) Betting Season 11 by Frankenstein: 7:50pm On Aug 12, 2017

Chelsea did a big one on tickets today.

Please, forgive my bad manners, great punters but gentlemen and ladies, I really need your help to win a competition on Nairaland literature section.

Please click, like and share the post with my story Ikorodu Guard at the literature section.

It will barely take a few seconds of your time.

I know tomorrow's games would be favorable as you help me win.

gen2lpat (m ), Money4passion99 ,
Sholexyz (m ), GoggleB(m ), eprynce (m ),
Igwe007(m ), ExclusiveD (f ), Lordseyad(m ),
mannatech, besttbabe (f ), MadeOfBlaq(m ), ettybaba
(m ), chezholy (m ), ceeceebobo (m ), DrWise,
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yebokos (m ), elvischukie (m ), dejai99 , Shirleytemple
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Christianity Etc › Re: Man Is Caught Up In The Battle Of The Ages!! by Frankenstein: 7:05pm On Aug 12, 2017

jiggaz:
Alright. Just checked it out now, didn't see where to like and share your story.

Oh. You like and share the post with the story 'Ikorodu Guard'.

Thanks.

Literature › Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Frankenstein: 6:56pm On Aug 12, 2017

Divepen1, I have learnt enough marketing in one day. I will leave that career for the ladies.

When is the next competition?
grin

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Christianity Etc › Re: Man Is Caught Up In The Battle Of The Ages!! by Frankenstein: 6:28pm On Aug 12, 2017

jiggaz:
Evening

I have been reading, very elaborate teaching.

Please click, like and share my story at the literature section.

I need your likes and shares to qualify.

Politics › Re: Charly Boy: Biafra Will Not Change Anything, It Will Only Increase Suffering by Frankenstein: 6:26pm On Aug 12, 2017

meneski:
https://www.nairaland.com/3919666/seun-osewa-battle-moderator-judges/2#59322631

pls guys i need your help...pls follow the link above to vote my friend's story.. IKORODU GAURD.

PLS LIKE AND SHARE AND MY FRIEND WILL MAKE IT TO THE NEXT STAGE.

Thanks, man.

Literature › Re: My Path....my Joy....my Goal. by Frankenstein: 6:24pm On Aug 12, 2017

meneski:
.. You are right, but it does not have a title yet. I would like to use this story on this thread to get more iQ ...although am a brick layer... I hardly have time... But wit u by my side i fear no one.

See, something I've learnt about writing: you learn on the job.

If you are referring to grammar, vocabulary how to present your work, that should come as you keep writing and learning from criticisms.

You can take a shortcut by taking a writing course or reading materials on writing.

Literature › Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Frankenstein: 6:11pm On Aug 12, 2017

souloho19:
Bro Chelsea just come disorganize my brain sha... It should be ready by nyt fall

Ah! It was an unlucky match.
Waiting, hoping..

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Crime › Re: Woman Stabs Husband To Death During Argument In Adamawa State (graphic Photos) by Frankenstein: 5:50pm On Aug 12, 2017

NwaAmaikpe:

Please click, like and share my story at the literature section.

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Crime › Re: Woman Stabs Husband To Death During Argument In Adamawa State (graphic Photos) by Frankenstein: 5:48pm On Aug 12, 2017

Please click, like and share my story at the literature section.

I need your likes and shares to qualify.

Politics › Re: APC Is Boko Haram, PDP Is A Religion – Fayose by Frankenstein: 5:47pm On Aug 12, 2017

sarrki:
..
.ok

Thanks a lot.

Politics › Re: Nairaland Politicos, Let Us Vote by Frankenstein(op): 5:42pm On Aug 12, 2017

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Politics › Re: Dokpesi Names Factional Chair For APDA by Frankenstein: 5:37pm On Aug 12, 2017

TonyeBarcanista:
Where make I come abi go?

Please click, like and share my story at the literature section. Thanks.

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