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CHAPTER THIRTEEN

DEJA VU

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He stood firmly on his foot, staring at Lord Bazim with deadly intent. He was sure to disarm and knock out both men who stood in the room with him within seconds going by his strong physical appearance against theirs. Cencii charged furiously towards Lord Bazim who still pisses him off with a wicked grin which still hangs on his face. As Cencii was about an inch towards striking Lord Bazim a deadly blow, he felt an invisible force through him back to the mat roughly, he quickly stood up to rush towards Lord Bazim but he was again shut back. It then dawn on him that Lord Bazim wasn’t an ordinary man like he had thought, obviously there was something mystical about him. Lord Bazim laughed spitefully as he watched Cencii failed in accomplishing his mission. “You are no match for me, I could have your heart pulled out of your chest this moment but you are lucky that my Lord needs you alive”. He paused to watch Cencii crawled to go cuddle the lifeless Kara.

“Luckily for you” Lord Bazim continued “I know a way to bring her back but you must do something for me in return”.

Cencii’s eyes lightened up curiously at Lord Bazim “What will you have me do?”

Lord Bazim knelt to whisper into his ear, “Kill Prince Torberta in an open combat”.
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I promise you all that I will never abandon this story. Lately being going through some very personal issues that had prevented me from thinking straight in relation to the story. I will complete this story on this forum inshallah because I personally wish to know how it's going to end...I have a feeling there is a bigger twist coming ahead. Just give me this week to get my mind straight. love you all.

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CHAPTER TWELVE

THE COLD ONE

3107 BCE…

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“A little push my Queen…you can do it”

Zina the chief midwife urged Queen Nefertiti who laid on her bed within her chamber groaning in pain. For hours, the queen had found it very difficult delivering whatever was inside of her, she had been in continuous pain which many of the midwives and maids feared could lead to the loose of her life. The nurses had tried all sought of herbs, concoctions, treatment and prayers but still the queen was losing it, she couldn’t bear the labor pain anymore and the babies weren’t coming either. Zina an experienced nurse felt she needed to do something really drastic to save the life of not just her Queen but the fetuses hanging inside of her, she deepened a hand into the queen through the vagina and inside of her she felt something cold, she was confused of what objects laid inside of the queen, nothing like she had experienced before. Zina in her determination, held to the cold object before pulling it out carefully, there came the body of a baby that never cried, followed was another beautiful baby boy who cried out aloud. The full moon shun bright from the sky that it ray lightened up the entire chamber, the queen and the king and the entire city rejoiced for the birth of the princes. While the Pharaoh and his household rejoiced, Dakdar walked into the palace, he informed Lord Nok of the tragedy he had foreseen, narrating to him and his queen that one of the princes would be the cause of death to the other and that the only way to avert such tragedy would be that one of the babies be killed on the seventh day.



Dedicating this chapter to all my muslim brother and sisters in this Ramadan, may Allah accept our ibadah

(Catch-up with chapter thirteen next week)

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CHAPTER ELEVEN

MESSENGER OF DEATH


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Amirat stood stiffened in the corner of the kitchen where she hid herself and Tom beside her, she covered the little boy’s mouth with her hand to prevent him making any noise. She felt her heart hitting rapidly upon her chest with her body dripped of sweat as she heard footstep approaching the kitchen, then it stopped like it owner was thinking against it. She wouldn’t come out of hiding knowing for sure that wasn’t her brother’s style of stepping, Jamal wasn’t the type of man to take gentle steps in panicky times. Amirat tried to guess who it could be but no one came to mind, neither she nor Jamal had ever invited friends to the apartment, at that moment she wasn’t sure if Jamal had broken the rules by inviting one of his numerous customers to come check-out his artistic works rather than taking it out to the street or market.

“Who could that be?” she thought as soon as she heard the kitchen door slowly opened. She could hear her heart beat furiously within her quiet space, she thought of her brother, wondering why she couldn’t hear his footsteps or voice anywhere around. She had a great urge to come out of hiding from behind the fridge but she held back sensing something wasn’t right. The footstep stopped abruptly right in front of the fridge and it owner sniffing the air.

“My little Tom, it’s alright, you can come out from hiding” a soft spoken voice urged. It was a familiar voice and that prompted Amirat to meet its owner.



(Catch-up with chapter twelve any time next week).

Hi guys, my apology for the slow (weekly) updates as I can feel ur discomfort with it. I'm still a work in progress to standing by my commitments as I like to do my things slow but steady.
I really appreciate your lovely COMMENTS and LIKES, they had been really inspiring. At this juncture, I would love for you to correct me on some grammatical errors you've noticed so far as I would really love to learn from u guys as well so I would inculcate them as I make further updates.
One love #teamrelic.
God bless you all.

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CHAPTER TEN

THE BELIEVERS

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Voice of the narrator:

In the year 1952, four young men discovered a secluded grave in an underground just along the border of Mesopotamia (Present day Iraq) during one of their adventures, they had discovered strange things alongside the bones laying inside of it. They discovered the sketchy remains of a man who they believed had been of a wealthy and royal blood going by his ornament and decorated coffin. Beside the bones were five rocky slates with strange wordings to it surface. The men vandalized every ornament which they shared within themselves including the slates and afterwards...
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Tom regained consciousness, opened his eyes into an unfamiliar environment where everything inside of it were different from all he had grown to see and know of the orphanage home.


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Note: Pls no one should quote this story.

(Catch-up with chapter eleven next week)

Pilopher:
I dey c u

for God sake pls unquote my post, I don't like it. Try put others into consideration.

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CHAPTER NINE

ENVISION
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“Hey Tom, are you alright? Can you hear me?” he could hear father Paul’s voice echoing somewhere around his head as he tries to open his eyes.

“Father Paul, I suggest we get him to the clinic” he could tell that was Sister Rebecca with her shaky voice when in panic.

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(Catch-up with chapter ten next week. I dedicate this chapter to every lazy Nigerian youth out there, may God grant us a sensible government that understand our plight)

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CHAPTER EIGHT

TRANCE


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It’s been seven days since the awakening and yet the feeling was still awkward, one too hard to familiarize with and as well too strong to deny , she wasn’t sure what to say or what to do with her father’s soul housed within her son’s body.

Lord Seth in possession of prince Torberta’s body was delighted...

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(Catch-up with chapter nine anytime next week...go and get your PVC, 2019 is for the Nigeria youth. One love)

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CHAPTER SEVEN

BY THE CITY GATE

The sun crept upon the sky in full glare above the people within the city wall who went about their daily lives peacefully, the queen from the palace walked into the street, she was pleased to see everyone happy, many cheerful faces greeted as they passed by, the children running around the blocks playfully, she saw the traders sold happily to the rich buyers, the city was full of live, love and prosperity.

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(Catch-up with chapter eight anytime next week. One love)

youngoracle:
Chai! Can't believe u didn't invite me ur number one hardcore fan.
Some people are just too good with using their talents. You are one of my best writers among the leagues of extraordinary writers (LXWs) on nairaland, very calm, mature, on point and calculative like larrysun and Tiffanyj. Ghostwritter u are just too good with penning down your wonderful imagination, like dakdar i foresee u an international award winning writer very soon coz ur stories are always outstanding from any other on this forum. Lalasticlala Divepen1 seun abeg kon help me read.

sorry I never invited u and thank you so much sir for 'pulling my legs' with ur sweet words. I'm not yet fit enough to be classed with great writers on this forum whose works are MUST READ (me wey still dey learn from my mentors such as :Rachealfst, Bolape, Gh0sts, Bibi294, Repogirl, Tiffanyj, Royver, Ishilove, Mynd44, QueenNelly, Sleeqiam, Kayemjay, BiafranBushBoy, Souloho19, Divepen1, D9ty7, Babatope, Larrysun, Bibi123 and few more others) Taaa!! never place my works above theirs.
Ones again thank you sir for ur love.

Amen to your prayer and Thanks alot for ur words of encouragement.

@ Freebiez yadabomba!!
thank ya so much for da graphicx...me gonna holla ya for da email.

I have sent u a P.M reply as soon as possible.

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CHAPTER SIX

ALL HAIL THE QUEEN

She was four years of age when her father Lord Seth died, she was conscious enough at such age to acknowledge and as well mourn his death and the death of her siblings at the later years. The death of Gaya, Amon, Gamal and her only sister Maat had caused pain to her heart but it hurts more when she got wind that Aharon her own brother was the one who murdered Queen Maat and her entire family.

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(Catch-up with chapter seven anytime next week...happy Esther to all my christian fans)

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CHAPTER FIVE

REVENGE

Tom opened his eyes with severe pain in his head, it was unbearable but he couldn’t stop it as queen Nefertiti’s hands were still clapped to his head. Suddenly, she withdrew her hands from his head and stared into his weak and exhausted eyeballs.

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(Catch-up with chapter six anytime next week...one love)

Learn one thing here on nairaland, write good stories to entertain urself first and watch others come rushing in.
Nice work u've got here.

CHAPTER FOUR

CENCII

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Tom opened his eyes, he sat up on his bed and looked around the dark room. Everyone was fast asleep and that caused the room to fall in grave silence. He wondered whose voice had called the name, he was sure someone around had whispered the name into his ears while asleep. But looking across the room, he concluded it was his imagination.

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(Catch-up with chapter five anytime next week, one love)

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