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ojoawo: I am disappointed with the level of rhyming done by guykhena maybe because i expected better, your verse didnt rhymes, you could have tried in-rhymes at least if it was gonna affect your punches.
Jigsaw's verse is a drop for FFR not a battle... the punches didnt hurt

but I'll give guykhena the win

coogar: tell airmark to open that thread & ban any troublemaker there.

safarigirl: you've been noticed.

Now, kindly keep my name out of your wack lines. There's only one airmark, no time for other attention seekers

coogar: rant?
who was ranting there? niggaz were goading me & it was mandatory i spark back. should airmark lock an entire thread because one or two textcees are feeling salty about coogar?

It was drawing a lot of unwanted attentions,basically unknowns were flocking in to witness the 'Coogar drama',and in doing so they started derailing,check the last 2 pages,peeps were basically Chit-Chatting.
The FFR thread should be meant for bars,nothing else.
At least as the FFR thread is closed,peeps are getting use to this "Chat Thread",,,,
FFR should be opened at a latter time,not during this period.
https://www.nairaland.com/792526/re-flow-rank/1
You can use this for now..

coogar: airmark should open the FFR thread. what the heck is wrong with airmark?

JigsawKillah: What's that fool saying?/ who are u playing?/
guykhena quit rap and join ur dad in shoe making/
im going notorious, while ur 2chaining/
stick to what u do best in school....failing!

U call that a rap? Pressure than everest? Are u Kidding me?
tf is that? Yet some ffags gave u a win u lost easily/
slenderman be like 'oh guykhena is killing it/
lemme vote him, so i can get his ddick in me!!!!'/

i took 10mins to write, and still slayed ur prewrittens/
dumber than manchester united during the preseason/
necro feel ya? Tf is that? U skipped english classes?/
or is ur fear of dieing increasing as with every minute passing?/

rhyming jailer with dealer/ its frailer than sicklers/
he's an ebola patient, thats why we are afraid of the nigga/
so weak he dies when he tries to punch, the only thing he ever smoked was paper made cigars/

we cant read ur boring writtens/ that ur pouring cheaply/
limerick lauds u here, in secret he calls u nnitwit/
my flow's the humongous hulk stepping on the jumping chicken/
i swear he cant cross aroad without having his mummy with him/


SAW

wtf
Am I meant to reply this?

Kslib: I noticed..

I'm not talking ffr, i'm talking about a battle thread.

*** Guykhena and Jiggs.. Hope i'm not derailing you guys' thread?

Of cus you are... Since its you,you might get a free pass...
But on a serious note,take your chats to the Rap Battles Chat Thread,what should be discussesd here should be based on the battle and nothing else.
Giiyaz,easy......

airmark: Thanks for the response. I have received ckushy and fuckyouhard verses I will post them soon. We should know that guykhena vs jigsawkillah battle shouldn't be eclipsed. we should give a breathing space moreover 9pm is their deadline. ckushy, fuckyouhard be rest assured your verses are safe like teddybiyasi in Prince of Persia's villa.

fuckyouhard: let guykhena start hostin battles. airmark doesn't seem ready

coogar: no need to get salty about my verdict - 90% of the cats here will still give you the W cos they are all faggöts anyways. however, if you are a man of dignity & decorum, you should concede defeat & hope for a rematch!

coogar: in live battles, it depends on what was agreed. if the ish is unlimited then all kinda bullshit comes along. however, this was a time-limit battle. drop 20 lines & that's it. you went on a SSCE composition & it bored the fück outta me.

coogar: i dunno you from adam & i have got nothing against you. i don't judge personalities, i only judge the bars i see.

coogar: you built an expensive mansion on a poorly-laid foundation. if your bars can't be easily comprehended by the audience, what's the essence of spitting it?

Limerick: Nope, those extras made the verse boring at the end.

coogar: opener - jigsaw
rhymes - jigsaw
metaphor - TIE
punchlines - guykhena
personals - guykhena
flow - jigsaw
wordplay - guykhena
closer - jigsaw

MVGT - jigsaw

opener
no single punch was delivered by guykhena - he was even pampering his opponent. jigsaw's first sentence was a direct punch talking about guykhena's impotency. anyone that said opener was a tie is a complete idïot that should never judge here again.

rhymes
jigsaw took this by a countrymile. he kept it short, simple & concise. guykhena stretched his rhymes beyond the elastic limit & he hardly rhymed perfectly in any of the verse.

metaphor
none of them came through here. i guess they both agreed not to infuse deadly metaphors in their verses so this is almost redundant.

punchlines
guykhena got this but that's because he had more than 70 lines instead of the agreed 32 lines. airmark should have edited guykhena's verses to the same number of lines as jigsaw. it's unfair to jigsaw when his adversary has more than double his lines. everyone gets to spit within a time limit in a rap battle, the rule is the rule.

personals
guykhena went apeshït here as well. scooping out information like a deranged paparazzi. he concentrated too much on personals he forgot to rhyme perfectly or arrange his flow intelligently.

flow
jigsaw - not even debatable. his bars were structured. very concise & clear. his line compression skills were excellent here. he made sure his fillers were to the barest minimum.

guykhena rambled on & on like he was writing a thesis. no flow, no structure. irrelevant bullshyte waxed with baloney. this kid needs to learn how to compress his lines. rap verses should be like a telegram message, not a science textbook!

wordplay

guykhena took this - he had some gems dropped even though most were generic. jigsaw had one or two in this category & that wasn't enough to subdue guykhena.

closer
guykhena lost this by default. i don't even know what was meant to be the closer. he included a chat session in a rap verse. trust nigerians to turn everything into a village meeting standard. what the fück was that about? does he think we have all the time to read through his bunkum?



fück this - jigsaw won this & it wasn't even close. guykhena cheated by having more lines than the rules stated & he should work on his structure, flow and rhyme schemes.

ELYMAXiimus: Now i'm convinced, jigsaw killah is dareezyn, same pattern of shot flow with no real punches!

Opener = null (no punch from both)


rhymes = dareezyn ( he was more straight at it)

flow = dareezyn (guykhena stretched, which made his lines seem like it was up to 40)

punch = guykhena ( i saw only one punchline in jigsawkillah's verse. The rest were mere disses)

mets = guykhena

w/p = guykhena (nice wordies bro)

personal = no doubt, guykhena ( unveiling dareezyn the more)

closer = guykhena

i'm not happy with this!
Jigsaw messed up! This should have been a flaw if guykhena did'nt stretch!
Guykhena impressed a bit though!

:. Mvgt = GUYKHENA

coogar: are these people blind?

jigsawkillah won this convincingly. if it doesn't rhyme, don't spit it. if it over-stretches, it's rubbish. a verse with no rhymes, no flow & no structure is an essay. guykhena should be tied to a stake & beaten to death for this rubbish verse.

i'll be back with my breakdown.....i got a plane to catch

kr0ne: MVGT - - -Guykhena

Guykhena, you won this, no doubt, but you stretched the hell out of your bars, plus most of your lines didn't rhyme. I hope to see you improve soon. Kudos

ckushy: The verses influenced this. Guykhena verse's more than jigsaw's...

Opener - Guykhena
wordplay - Tie
Punchline - jigsaw
Personal - Guykhena. .
Metaphor - jigsaw
Flow/rhyme - jigsaw. . Guykhena rhymed poor.
closer - guykhena


Verdict - Tie

Nomski0: But whyyyy?

"Frederick, Freya, it's time for bed"

Just ah_dorable.

And ahem, it's my twins(and Ronaldo's) not our twins.

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we'll find out soon

Nomski0: Or maybe sex monster is like a Lord or Knight in Asgard working for Ingrid's grandfather-the king and was destined to marry Ingrid before she was banished by her grandpa.
That'll explain the sex and why she sleeps better after feeding him.
She could have loved him back in Asgard.

how many times am I gonna state that no sex took place.
But I agree on your Asgard,Grandpa theory tho

Nomski0: I'm not totally against him. I'm just saying Joanna shouldn't trust him. 400 years ago he betrayed his family.

Betrayed his family?
When they left him in Asgard to rot(in the middle of war)

Nomski0:
She'd be crazy to think he's completely changed. This is a supernatural world and you don't get to live very long if you keep trusting every Tom, Diick and Harry.

You can tell Friedrick's problem is with Wendy,and he did heal his Mum by putting the poison in his body ,with that alone he aced the trust thing

Nomski0: Married? She's his handler. She's obviously exploiting him now that he's far away from the true love of his life.

did you watch the end credits scene of "Next Week On The Witches Of East End",if you did then you'll understand what am talking about..

Nomski0:
Freya will so kick her buttt. When it comes to Killian she can move the planets out of the solar system to protect him.
Owl girl is in for a rude awakening if she thinks she has him eating out of her ugly claws.

mean the Owl basically chased Freya and Friedrick away from the spirit realm with just a 'scream',
Compared to the real life! Freya has no chance...

Nomski0: He won't get a chance for revenge.
He'll soon be locked up in an asylum. Hearing voices, hallucinating, talking to yourself, Dash is slowly losing it. Soon he's hunger for revenge will be the last thing on his mind when he's locked up in a psycharitric ward and chained to the bed. Hahahaha

And how will it be possible locking the all Powerful Dash up
Dash powers are rising fast,and it seems they only pop up when he's angry,so for him to get hold of it,he gotta channel his powers through Anger,and his Anger is with Freya ,so you see how all these links...

Nomski0:
@bold, are we keeping scores now

I've been keeping scores since day one..

ckushy: Thought it's 20 lines... I'm confused, how am I gonna vote. Guykhena's verse's past 20 lines, its even more than 25lines.

airmark: sorry bro, i have reposted it. Guykhena