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ZachHugo:a tourney is out of my mind currently. there are not enough active members for that to be a success. fluxmind:each team drops a verse each, so at the end, we're reading 2 verses and not 4. |
Poem I'm in my zone! I'm in my zone! Sadness course through my veins A life plagued with none but pains Emotional manacles binds me Flames of my temper blinds me I'm in my zone! I'm in my zone! Gents; I trust not these lots Yet, I share with them my spots Females; torture me they would So I have to be as mean as I could I'm in my zone! I'm in my zone! Action bitters sachets carpets the floor Black and clean smoke repaints my door I lay dazed, thoughts as pure as dew The older I get, the more I feel new High as the heavens be, I ink my life Vexed at my failures, I grip my knife I contemplate, how to self destruct Stab my flesh, and then deduct I am not in my zone I ooze of no confidence Shrill in my bones I reek of incompetence My zone is not true For I feel less Every evil you do I am the consequence Who loves and don't get loved? Say your name, that's a problem solved |
Great battle guys!!!! rereading the bars again. once again, great battle. well done folks for comporting yourselves. rereading again. meanwhile guykhena sinizia Laveda darkrebel101 iceskidd ibime mikuz emaprince funlordjnr your votes are needed here |
KidPaku:null. you're not a regular battler here, sorry. ZachHugo:why are you always like this? |
Battle Closed!!!!! Paayne wins!!! |
Battle Closed!!!! Whiz10 wins |
fluxmind:your opponent is not even ready. when he's ready, you both hit me up |
007Bruce....you could've voted and moved on, instead, you did what you did. I'm proud of you!!! Hydrog3n, you're a regular battler too so cast your vote. ZachHugo, Fluxmind and co....you're lucky I'm not a mod and that our mod has abandoned this section. you and your fellow detailers would've gone two weeks in NL Jail. |
opener: tie closer: tie rhymes: hydrog3n personals: nil punchlines: Hydrog3n metaphor: Hydrog3n wordplay: whiz10 flow: tie Mvgt: Hydrog3n |
verds needed here please elymaxiimus Laveda MrKang 007bruce devilmaycry iceskidd teddybiyasi and every regular battler on here |
votes needed here please emaprince Laveda richhommie mikuz testerfuze MrKang iceskidd warribloood sinizia darkrebel101 and every regular battler |
SalomonKane:people praise things depending on how they understand it. what if they're praising it for the message as they understood it? that afro guy should know this is the poem section. such squabbles will not be tolerated here. |
AfroSamurai:instead of attacking them, why not just tell us what the poem is lacking or if its cool? since when has it become wrong to praise something that looks nice to you? |
I'm here, you're there You know I want to chat I fear you'd lend no ear So I lay here on my back Love is cursed, of course No wonder I feel blessed But being alone, is worse I need eased off this stress So before, I Self Destruct I need you to hold me down Before I self destruct I need you to hold me down Sitting, cold, in the dark You came and held my hands Your kisses gave me spark Baby, do you want to dance? I understand my emotions yell But you understand me well For you, everything I can sell Can't lose you, my life is already hell So before, I Self Destruct I need you to hold me down Before I self destruct I need you to hold me down Emptiness engulfs my soul My past is uglier than my whole Right before I lose control I'll smash my brains with a pole Give me strength to pull this through If I don't, I know not what else to do Right before I end this dude A kiss, and I'll feel good So before, I Self Destruct I need you to hold me down Before I self destruct I need you to hold me down I can't leave my son alone This world is a cruel place I'd be insane to let my bone So young running this race But I have to go my way But I can't say my goodbyes So once again, I'll stay Just to look at those bulgy eyes But before I self destruct I need you to hold me down Before I self destruct I need you to hold me down No, until I self destruct I need you to hold me down My life, I'd reconstruct But you have to hold me down © Jigsawkillah |
Paayne vs ZachHugo Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point Rules - 40 lines. - Deadline is 8pm, Friday 30 December 2016. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. Goodluck!!! |
Whiz10 vs Hydrog3n Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point Rules - 20 lines. - Deadline is 8pm, Friday 30 December 2016. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. Goodluck!!! |
Battled Closed! Paayne Wins! |
MrKang:is this your verd? lol |
Hydrog3n:lol y'all would probably forget before then. hope y'all gonna bring the best bars though. |
Hydrog3n:reschedule and let me know cc whiz10 I should've created the thread yesterday. my bad, guys |
richommie:yes |
seriously guys, y'all need to put more effort into your rhymes. Kineticist got some nice schemes, poor execution meant it didn't hit as it was supposed to. Mvgt: Paayne two of my favorite bars Paayne: What I'm spitting here is clear nd Uncut... So our dear kineticist can hear nd concur.. Nd you can tell ah ain't joking from d verse I concoct.. Ah don't do this for fvcked reasons like d cheers nd comfort... So fvck the 'hair he z brought to support' his looks, Cos when I put d 'heat on him' , his 'head will combust'!!... Kineticist: I let the tec talk/ If I am ever in the mood for sex talk/ stomp his home,enter through his 'Windows'and tell his wife let's fu..uck/ If he disagrees, I hit him with the 'Mac' ..prolly leave him with head cuts/ ....then take his wife inside..shift everything aside then fuc..k her on the 'Desktop'/ |
Nice battle!!!! both emcees scheming! rereading again |
verdicts needed here please MrKang testerfuze ibime emaprince Laveda guykhena iceskidd llaykorn Gottoboy mikuz devilmaycry |
Paayne vs Kineticist Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point Rules - 20 lines. - Deadline is 4pm, Thursday 22 December 2016. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. Goodluck!!! |
MrKang:hope both battlers won't pull no-shows. I'd hate to call on àirmark but they'll have the threads |
TheSCRYPT:simply say so. we're not all llaykorns |
TheSCRYPT:it's open to everyone. all you gotta do is indicate |
Iceskidd:lol try ZachHugo first if you survive, MrKang is waiting. you're unproven enough to speak of battling a King. go battle his subjects for a start ![]() |
Jiggy wetin I do na? I just asked for thread to stitch some nigguh up, feel me? Sssh put the guns away na, we're in public... People go see us.
bros we don try,the way we carry the matter for head self... 

