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how did y'all managed to displace bykebyke and his fighting mate? |
airmark:said he's busy saw his fb message not long ago |
mvgt: Rapacme better setups and rhymes added stings to the bars. mosflame, it's not about homophones, they have to at least play. |
opener: tie rhymes: blessedmarshall Punchlines: paayne metaphor: paayne wordplay: paayne flow: tie personal: nil closer: tie mvgt: Paayne |
LMandela:you have till midnight to post your bars |
airmark, please clean the thread Giyazz MuhdG Ibime Mikuz Teddibiyasi darkrebel101 testerfuze Gottoboy kr0ne votes needed please |
CIT344 has been rescheduled to go down on 16/11/2016 8am inform your pals |
ELYMAXiimus:ok I'm all ready |
teddibiyasi, just in case you're here before me tomorrow, after each thread created, notify me so I'll know where to pick it up from. and why are Laveda and Salomonkane not amongst the battlers? |
right on time!!!! elymaxiimus, whatever help you need, holla |
donbrowser:any idea when it's gonna be written? |
rhyming because I can the beast is on sabbatical writing, is God a man? why he made these animals? said we in his own image, he angry we fighting he fought Lucifer too, why we get punished then? God loves us but I get threatened with hell as my punishment key to heaven: earthly suffering is the accomplishment and they said don't question God. I'm sorry God, I need answers who do we really worship? you or those sleek bastàrds who say they the government, you see they in your churches now men of God who define God's blessings in purses now Government telling us what is right, and what's wrong the stories of your son's apostles are left unsung and cast out as bed time stories, why ain't you say none? you ain't sending fire from heaven to spray none and your Bible verses are missing, they gone they said Jesus got a wife, although it ain't wrong but you ain't acting, you're watching them lead us astray forcing philosophy on us, see how you give us away? I'm in my crib, burning the green you gave man before your usurpers come throw me in jail, damn! - Jigs |
hiswords7:they're supposed to use manuals. that's what other centers are doing |
anyone did CIT344 yesterday? |
Kruzilano:not online currently Donifez, please help out Mr Cruz, rule is: introduce yourself with a poem |
Anthonyo15:technical glitch or hack? have NOUN released an official statement? they need to desist from keeping us in the dark. this isn't getting funny anymore. I am not with the last bank printout I paid with. left it with the accountant when I was tired of going to the bank and finding out they barely get remita network. |
sitting here reminiscing, I'm thinking: is this blessing a curse? doomed to write my struggles on a piece of paper, my daily routine remains fight and hustle I find it hard to weep when I'm sad, I channel the sadness into writing pieces of art, drink a blunt, light more bottles RIP George, I miss you. so used to how every year feels with you how could I forget? I even shared your last meal with you even when tram became an issue, your paranoia was directed at your paper chase becoming a good father to your sons, we all made mistakes personally I think the weed was our saving grace how you drag when you're angry, then confide in me I was the listener, I was loyal to a fault when I fooled everyone with my cool acts, you knew I was a thug by default you're amongst the few I could share my weed with Benson and hedges in my pocket, when pressured, you wouldn't tell a secret many blame your murderer, I blame your drug addiction coming out in flying corners after a setback is a thug's ambition more than 20 cuts across your head and back, you didn't feel a thing but then you forgot your promises to hold on, you turned the cold one I still don't know how Great coped when he found out you wouldn't be with him your mom's health was shattered, she wouldn't get up for months you left questions unanswered, sometimes I talk God praying he received your soul hope Angel Gabriel found a way erase your past, delete the whole sins we'd at sometime indulged in, but I gotta ask why? why you gotta die before you let the matter die? why you gotta take the fight to that nigga's doorstep why ain't you lay low, and hope the nigga forgets then you screech on him, he couldn't withstand your punches why ain't you run when he started cutting? why you gotta leave your sons like that? and you mom like that? why you gotta fight a relative? ain't we one like that? why you gotta smoke more than you breathe? why you gotta swallow pills instead of a truck full of trees? why you let us eat from one plate, and never say goodbye? why boris didn't kill you, but cuts gotta make you die? I know I'm asking some foolish questions, but why you ain't told me someone foresaw your death? why you gotta smile, and beneath is a truckload of stress? why you gotta make me write this? why ain't you talking to me? you could appear in my dreams, you could start walking with me you were a brother, a friend, a colleague, I miss you bros I'm sure everyone who knew you does! RIP G.P - Jigs |
Ibime:congrats on your new child. you knew how to score after all! ![]() abeg where the grooving to tey take place for Naija na? abi you no want make boys drink 'omiovwo' drink? I dey miss Coogar |
this NOUN's site is even taking me somewhere else who else is trying it? |
007Bruce:nope. you show up once in a while and expect me to accept? |
joseph1832:checking if I still had that rhyming skill |
no DJ? |
Manure still don't know which of the Pogba they have ![]()
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[size=20pt]LONG MAY YOUR WOES CONTINUE!!!!! DOWN SHALL YOU GO UNTIL YOU HIT CRUDE OIL!!!!![/size] |
this is just me, don't think it's just weed the four-fifth, busting these dumb gees Godspeed! I just wish, the Forty dumping, you must think it's fûcked shît more clips, hits more gees and brushed knees scorched fings, all these the fours leave four spits as the Ford speeds, torched wits touched kids, fûck this, fûck streets a thug breed, drug cribs, done script thugs creed, dusting, we all frisk talk risks? pumps bleed and cops flees it's like Kanu on the pitch, dumbass we ball sick I'm playing with rhymes, bracing your minds spraying the nines, these verses be breaking your spines how much attention you paying the signs? we obliterating everyone who done forsaken these climes I'm aiming for dimes, so I'm slaving to crimes working for a potbelly Boss who spends all his day in his vines you shaking, it's fine, you brave? it's a lie a fiend for big Rolexes, I be taking your times you could get everything I feed that barrel 22 December clips, like Christmas Carol you didn't catch the wordplay, you ain't fit to battle that's why I boast the iron that your sisters grapple I'm bringing the gauge over, in the range rover we play soldier, popping bars at you, stay sober my team, balanced! these sneakers getting laced over these loafers on they heels so they won't get sprayed over the play's over, time to close the curtains niggas thought I was dead, I woke up, rose, resurfaced clips hit 'em, we split em, defeat em, deceased em all of your hoes, the D ceased em I'm reigning terror, it's the Jigs seas-on fifth get to do the talking when the Jigs sees em -Jigs |
007Bruce:last one was a classic tell me, you think you have what it takes? |
007Bruce:go and hustle to pay the services of Cassidy make sure he writes every bar for you when he's done, I'll script for you |
timpaker:i meant D**k lol Secondly, I believe the change in secondary rhymes in your second verse is intentional. I also observed you wrote as if the event has occurred and yet you used present tense(s) notable in verse 2 & 3 (especially verse 2 line 3 & 4).I was trying to let the reader see what I was seeing in the shortest way possible. I think I should use present tenses all through. you? Thirdly, I think there is a typo in verse 4 line 3, I guess you meant to write "brother" huh?I meant other. her(mother) other is supposed to be her husband Lastly, the poem depicts a heartbroken fella, lonely and depressed that his lover left him... But seeing her in hell is suicidal....... Oops! Yeah, before I self destruct..... I get it.tuale Boss! |
Joseph1832 Timpaker Texanomaly Firestar noble4d oahray et all criticise brutally please need to sharpen my pen |
Before I Self Destruct (Then Days Went By) I woke up at 5am, I got on my knees I prayed, and said Amen, then felt for my D's I look, I don't see you, I paused to review I remembered pecking you, that was true Your side of the bed, is unusually cold Felt like you haven't slept, you aren't home I scrambled to get my phone, I make a dial I feel chills down in my bones, I force a smile Your phone rings thrice, you wouldn't pick I rubbed my eyes and blinked twice, I'm still asleep I tried to recall midnight; I feel so weak The goodnight kiss feels nice, I go to sleep I called your mother, she said call later Then she said don't bother, about my daughter I called her other, he called me a gold chaser Who talked was your brother, like a man oughta I thought we was the best, opinions differ I brought the gun to my chest, smoked a reefer The gin I had laid to rest, I downed a litre Some words off my chest, before I click the heater You said I was secure, you only leave when you die His intentions were pure, then days went by You're all I had ever loved, I wish you well Before I Self Destruct, see you in hell ©Jigs |
osic:not yet |
Lordbenunited:you're not serious! when you are, let me know! |
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? Tired of all this wahala
