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airmark: kr0ne when you are through lemme know so we drop earlier.

OK bro. Been visiting my folks. But I'll be through soon

deathstroke: jobless peeps......chai...na wah oooh





so surprise THE SO CALLED GOD DO BITE.


COOGER KUDOS TO U MAN

#TEAMCOOGER

Is this ^ ^ ^ a living thing? Smh

Ruuuuubish!!! We've had many build-up look alikes here on this forum. In fact, it happens everywhere! It's just like saying "I'll murk him". . .almost every textcee have used this line. A bite is when u take a non-generic PUNCHLINE word for word. Bis still the king!!!
Meanwhile, Airmark, I wan go swim today o, so easy, bro . . .it's a friendly match o. I no know why dem go call am brutal

Kinezeala: Ok bro, just holla when you're done writing.

Airmark please prep your verse - 24 lines please.

And send to your mail, right? If Airmark is ready, we can do a quick 24. I'll send mine tomorrow

Kinezeala: Kr0ne how far?

Make we create thread?

Kr0ne Vs Airmark

This weekend? I don't even know my schedule tomorrow

GIYAZZ: Lol Oga, but it's d0pe abi?

Sure, you really spent your time on it

GIYAZZ: Yo! Lemme explain the closer I used in finally bagging JigSawKillah; I know you may not feel it, maybe because you didn't get it. . . but I think, if I explain; you gon' feel it.

Next time use a punch that we're familiar with before u start sounding like Ibime. Most of his punches don't work in our local context. If you use that again in a brawl, I'll score you zero coz I wouldn't have the time to google

#joking tho#
But that doesn't mean Jigsaw ain't good. He's just like the beginning of DJ5naira. Dude was engrossed in cipher he couldn't differentiate between a battle verse and a free

airmark: Kr0ne that was d,ope. When are you battling mikuz or what's his new name?

Lol! Anytime. But let it be anything weekend. Too damn busy by weekdays

Limerick: You got a frog's voice I guess

YFB

You fit use voice buy Brazilian hair?

It's a demon designed art/ coz it's bleaching the lines black/
. . . . I'm back, don't twist it like peeps with their spines arched/ u fools keep watching the ceilings, I've reached the aligned stars/
put me in your dictionary, and see I define smart/
statistically average, yet you believe I rhyme hard/ and my piece of pie chart/
is the reason you grind hard!/
'strong men' leech to my rhymes . . . and leave with minds scarred/
ya know I'm apt to strike hard/ or use the reversal . . . push a biitch to ya side/
and get your 'braids' shaved, after a kiss from Delilah!

Guess I need a pry bar

. . . this stylish flow/ has guys filed in droves/
you can smile and joke/ but this journey still has miles to go/
at the finish point, I'll either slice ya throat/ or beat you square down like the tiles in ya home!

. . immune to writer's block/ fire busts from the walls this writer's stuck/
still your favorite, admired and loved/ I've got no desire to bluff/
Kr0ne is explosive . . .don't ask where the wire's tucked

or you'd be blasted with time bomb!

. . trapped in the office/ yet I arch for the calling/
these rappers here have lost it/ less beef I see than wrappers of sausage/
even them wacks now is thugging/

the worst shitss's being disposed in the cipher section/

. . .Jason going louder than gun/ why not see these bout calls as fun/
smile, I'm a happy dad, proud of my son/
no longer pissed at you, since Jig got his mouth on my cockk

and if the biitch dares sound the horn . . . . .

. . I'll outstretch his limits, with frees elastic/ he lacks this, but my streaks are massive/
harm me? Hardly/ he'd need an army/ but why 'shoot' the loser, after Giyazz bashed him/
he's now a little sad kid . . . I'm 'trigger' happy!

. . the phoenix still on/ and we bringing the force/ in the fields of war . . .we wielding the swords/ and the killing is fun/
coz you yield to the urge

. .but no need for a reverend, coz we bring you blessings . . .
and for defenses, we've built the fences/ so trespassers, please use a lesson . . ./
he touched the fold, but soon regretted/ coz he lost his post after a big foot edged him/
see? we're rudely mentioned/ but we still rule the section

. . .it's 'well' known my text is deep, you can't shed it from light/ but I keep telling your kind . . .
move a pen like Bis, and keep more belts in your prime/ true vets be in the field, ready for fights/
they don't get it from hypes/
though, I'm busy most times, and barely on sight/
yet my text is sublime/ and if they say I'm "alarmingly gifted". . .
it's no scary surprise!


THE PHOENIX

Opener - - - Giyazz

Rhymes - - - Jig

Similes/ Metaphor - - - Tie

Punchlines - - - - - Giyazz

Personals- - - - - Jig

Flow - - - - - - -Tie

Wordplay - - - - - Giyazz

Closer - - - - - Nil (I didn't feel both)

MVGT - - - - Giyazz

WARRIBLOOD: you know dat verdict aint true...bros..

Even elymax knows.....iamora won dis battle i swear

I wouldn't swear if I were you

And thus sayeth Allah, "Let there be bomb blasts" and there were bombs and blood sharing in the north. Smh for Muslims

airmark: ELYMAXiimus vs iamaromolaeran

Voting Criteria :
- No biting, swaying, stretching feeding or recycling.

MVGT - - - - Elymax
* Since Iam has stubbornly refused to adhere to the rule

mikuz: Iam's verse is definately way above 20 lines.
I do not believe Airmark said nothing about it.
Iam should reduce his verse to 20 lines or else nobody ll cast a vote here.
This is what is killing this country.

I believe he doesn't know yet cos he argued over it

iamaromolaeran: I AINT MODIFYING NOTHING--- 20 LINES IS WHAT I DROPPED.... MY RHYMES WERE IN-RHYMES..
COUNT THE SET-UPS AND PUNCH AS A LINE---NOT ONE BY ONE --THATS HOW WE DO IT ON FACEBOOK....SET-UPSTO A PUNCH AND THE PUNCH ARE COUNTED AS ONE------

Airmark, why not ask Iam to modify his verse na? He did 20 bars, not 20 lines
*Saving this space till further notice

This topic is too gay to appear in the front page

Tushkid74: off d dome:
Dope with the figure of speech,i spit methtaphors/
wring u fellas up/
all their texts are fraud/
am made of a better stuff/
the bar i weld are hot/
my poetic firearms,are knw in langley and pentagon/
check d label,prada's the vest for sure/
am beehooved,to be fly- pegasus/
Rainman, when my kim peek flow come raging its rill erosion/
feed a nigger,with .38 for showin weak emotions/
ur flow get banned ,mine get panned,we ain in d same level man/
drive d crowd crazy,like a psycho chaffeur with sebastian vettel's hand/
golds are what my medals are/
Lyrically am mansa musa,u carlos slim/
am rungs above u in d wealth hierachy/
spit bullion bars,from here to every land/
i do this 4 da A team ,ed sheeran/

Gangsta classic sh1t! Nice one, bro

yeyenatu: Yeah. The guy he was hating on because of a supposed 'girl'.


Your name is Tope. Oruko obinrin.
Btw: kr0ne!!! Can I use /political liar/ assassin for hire/arsenal backfire/ ? In lines?





YeaYeaNot

Lol! They don't rhyme very well

Krone is never scared. Just a busy person, and I try to avoid market women sh1t. Set the thread

Y'all better shush the empty hypes n rants/ and get back to penning lines n bars/
FFR is being derailed,
but hope I'm not being insane . . . I'm effing writing facts/

. . . stop fighting back/ like Oshodi market women adventure/ your yabs and noise do affect us/
if you can't work out some hard set puns/ then keep your lips shut like perfect cunts!

...sucks...

Karlculauz: Lwkmd


smh, hypocrite!

Lmao! I don see you

Karlculauz: Airmark, why did you ban me?

Your former id?

yeyenatu: The child is a coogar wannabe. For his mind now, he has mouth and his tongue carries venom. But it's nothing short of a toddler teething and spitting saliva. Odoyo things. People hhate on real Playas, not dumba55es with funny teeth like ketekete (donkey) o ma blow ni!!!!

Abeg, I dey go party jor. eid thinz. Who wanst checken laps? Lagunna you want? Kr0ne!!!! I'm lagging oooo. I am now ready for my bada55 rap lessons. Nothing to stop me from getting crazy with them hateful lines wey una dey call rap.




YeaYeaNot

Lol! So you've been fasting? No wonder we don't see you regularly. I don't think you need any lectures o. You're as good as any of us here. Just try harder on how u rhymes, that's all

peterrParker: Yh, something like:

I smash your skull,/back and balls/ with my gat and maul/. . .

This is 1 bar/line, it's still a sentence with triple-multisyllabic rhyme. This is what ibime tryna insinuate.

Sure, yet some would mistake your example as 3 lines since it has 3 forward slashes

peterrParker: 1bar = 1line. And you guys kicked that

But from Ibime's explanation that "1 line" can be broken down to 4 or six rhymes, using the forward slash pattern! And to use the 6, ur rhymes should be shorter than as u'd use it in 4. But if u don't use the slash method, u must do at least 4 multies in that 1 line. Now I get it

OK then,

Ibime, please come and explain o

Mind you, the forward slash (/) is used to mark a line. Normally, it's not supposed be more than 3 or 4 lines per bar in a battle verse, otherwise you'd be stretching. But you can go as long as u like in ciphers
When I newly came it took me time to adapt, cos I was used to using two rhyme scheme in one bar. I still do it at times though

ojoawo: even with that. go ask Ibime how may lines makes one bar

he has said it times without number that one bar is one line

Nah! I don't think so. The NL style was birthed by Ibime himself. I've seen his old verses as far back as 2008. He was doing, at least, 3 lines for one bar

gottoboy: It confused me a lot cudnt reallie diferentiate, I tried reading tru peoples post in em battles vets drop with different styles, buh ah dun dig am now wella

Yeah, Ojoawo is right. In Ckushy's brawl with Fuckyouhard, he thought one bar is one line and ended up dropping 10 bars/20 lines from the NL perspective

ojoawo: not every text battle site.... and what i wrote was inconclusive.
here on nairaland, you'll be shocked to see the amount of people that will tell you One bar is One line

Lol! But NL has a style already, initiated by Ibime, which corresponds with my given example

gottoboy: E.g
See lyrically Gotto is B.ad n ILL/ a Glad That Kills/ any opponent, so wen nxt u claim tu 'Deliver like a 'Psycho', imma prove u wrong, coz ah gat a Mad Man Skills/

You're on point!