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danbrowndmf:Better than your previous verses - for the most part, the flow was ok - although not really fantastic. It appears you only do one-syllabic rhyme. Try doing two next time. For instance, the highlighted doesn't rhyme to me. A single word with two syllables like PLACES should also have two rhymes to match it, like you did with TAILOR/TRAITOR. ACES, BRACE, CASES, JAY-Z are examples. |
liricyst:Yeah, I wish we can do that. Me I don pass rusty level self. Need something to revive me. |
The semis will definitely hold down today. Choose whether to send me your verse or post yourselves. Deadline is 8pm. Elymaxiimus Liricyst Obesemf Darkenedrebel |
Congulatulashuns, Cherlene and Darkulabel! |
ELYMAXiimus:Please let's post the semis to Thursday. Darkrebel just finished his couple contest thing. Let's give him one day grace. Ma binu. |
Jbluv55:Sleek rhymes! Mehn, I'll do this thing next year. Voting Contestant T Cc: Tashaamania |
SIRcumalot:Bone Collector? Ok, I'll look for the movie. Thanks. |
SIRcumalot:I wish I knew him. Where can I find books about him? |
usermane:Nah! Batman is not really a detective. He's more of a superhero like Superman. |
Happy Birthday To You, Jazzobaino. LLNP! |
XBLadez:I know how to torment you. ![]()
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Battle closed. Supermiy wins this. CONGRATULATIONS! |
Danbrowndmf had the better materials to win this brawl but he just wasted them on shaky build-ups and corny wordplay. You need to learn how to rhyme too and stop using those unnecessary fillers. MVGT - Supermiy! |
XPLate: Your question doesn't make senseXbladez, you're lucky that room is locked; I for come punish you small. You claim you're a Madrid fan yet you don't know Di Maria has been playing for Man U since last year. Yeye pikin. ![]() |
gottoboy:I like his verse too, but it was just odd. He was doing whatever topical against the others' bragging right. |
XBLadez:Fake Madrid, shut up. ![]() |
Can I please chip in one question? To TheSonOfMark and Barcanista: there's this shady rumour in Camp Nou that Enrique is scouting for Di Maria to join Barca this coming season. Do you think he could make a better substitute for the ageing Iniesta, being a midfielder himself? ![]() |
This Literature people really fall my hand. |
misssclassy:Haha! I'd host a party if she was truly referring to me. ![]() |
Guys, please vote on this battle. https://www.nairaland.com/2429131/slaughter-house-ii-danbrowndmf-vs#35518358 |
Open for votes! Emaprince Ibime Mikuz Darkenedrebel Iceskidd Teddybiyasi Giyazz Jreyez Airmark Liricyst Obesemf Elymaxiimus Coogar Guykhena Ksslib Warriblood Lagunna1 Testerfuze Heywhizzy 007Bruce Jason21 Gladyys Jigsawkillah BARS Geoxpress RapAcme Etc |
Supermiy's Verse If you don't understand.. pls feel free to ask....leggo .. .. glocks,macs...am ready for what ever the tout raise/ you feel empty..true my punches drains/ sorry bro..but here you'd only be getting the pains/ and the battle would be tagged "JAW DROPPING".. why?..one punch would deform his "MOUTH FRAME"! .. .. you don't yield Anything good its ya season of draught/ ya boo needs me like mark Anthony's song/ she's good with joystick..when she gives me that Mouth Action/ we could go "7" rounds within "3" mins ...now that's one hell of a SLOT! .. .. you can't last reaching round 3/ am an Alpha...the rest follows me/ the truth is... there's nothing you can be/ only if you're a wolf behind a pack leader...that's the only way you're BETA than me! .. .. ...he ricks..i'm slick.../ my kicks would rip him quick/ i'll go all surgical with the blades i bring/ since he was bodied in his last brawl..call this action "splitting in two"..operation of the "sesaime twins"! .. .. i could give him the reggae tone beat like am from Porto Rico/ my style is wild and crazy.. you can tag me rico/ if you RICE to me...its doom ill bring to ya/ when the knife dice him 8 by 4...interpretation.. he'd be BAGGED so tight...there'd no more space for a DIRICA! .. .. i pondered whether i should kill the fellow/ he's just a kid..with bars as soft as Jello/ but if he claims he can match me... I'm dropping him 6ft below/ when one shot "STICKS" to his back...he's sure to die with a "SHELL"..."DONATELLO"! ... ... my bars produces heat...that's latent/ calm down..you've reached the brave end/ i should not lie to you for you're like a great friend/ ya bitch's mouth,pucci and ass..I've "FORKED" her in those 3 holes so many times...you could swear my dick was a "TRIDENT"! .. .. you're sure to fit into my bag/ dan is getting the Shake's first like the liquid drug ..mixmag/ one punch to kill the gay/ but if you choose to rap as a career and you think..you go FARTHER in life...its when you have a CHILD! |
Danbrowndmf's Verse SUPERMIY IS DEAD! * Y'all should better tell supermiy to "look,sure, luke shaw" if he's ready to battle a vet like me/cus i'm bringing alcoholic bars that will make him "JONES" for me/cus even if eminem ghost write for him that wuldn't "MATA Matter" to me/winning me is like a premier league title for supermiy and even if u give him "MORE YEARS MOYES" he wuldn't still win me/ (look shaw,jones,mata,moyes= Man utd) * supermiy is wack i'm killing him tonight,jus wanna announce/...tell him to cm with a coffin and ambulance/...supermiy to survive death today,is jus like saying a cammel head will pass through a needle's hole,thats a tiny chance/...how can he say he's the baba(obasanjo) of this game when he never a steller performance (obasanjo + steller he's wife) *he's like a bad camera definately he cnt take shot/..am a demon caster losn today should be his thought/...i will beat him so bad,like heywhizy after dis battle he will be finding fualt/...he can never win me,he's like a new indian hemp smoker,is "wrap rap" are to short/ * if music was to be food,instead of eating urs,wuld rather eat ofada/...i will so much beat u like the yoruba drum,BATA/...dude u need to up ur game,u still old lines like the econet number/...cnt u see am like catridge,i'm always on top my game Sega... * your the wackest on this forum,i see how Krone tryna console u,say u gonna blow/...u'v been in dis forum for ages yet ur like buhari new title "baba go slow/...how u gonna survive my bars today,only God knows/ ur bars are as low as nokia torch light,so how do u think u gonna get a "Win though Window" * even on track u'v got a bad sound like a loose drum/...how do u think u will be successful wen u'v already been cursed by ur mum/...failure is ur hobby,u cant break from the Norm/...if u like pull of ur dick and Fvck ur wall clock ur time wuldn't still come... * see like i sang lowkey,i flowsick/..like the sperm of emmaprince who hasnt had sex for ages,so my bars are thick/..how will u understand my bars ur so healthy u aint even sosick/...no wonder my bars fly over ur head like a starving eagle who's about to carry a chick... * supermiy is an hungry rapper,i call him warri wolves,said he's eating newbies calling it lunch time/...said he's the people's elephant,so they call him Eyimba cus he killed every rapper in d ring when ts boing time/...but tell supermiy the battle line has been drawn,so he shuld open his eyes to see the punchlines.../cus i'm bringing his rain to and end, Sunshine... (Warri wolves,eyimba,sunshine=Nigeria Premier league) |
Voting Criteria : Opener Rhymes Similes/ Metaphor Punchlines Personals Flow Wordplay Closer Rules - 10bars - Deadline is ?? - Verses should be posted by both battlers - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments. - Voting is open to regular members only. Goodluck!!! |
obainojazz:H E I N E K E N. |
Ibime: My raps. . . are differentiated . . .from wack . . . and his are integrated!/ |
obainojazz:Happy birthday, man! |
Supermiy:You be Demolaxavi, aye? |
Supermiy:I don't know this new number of mine offhand. True. But if you have the contact of any of these guys (Darkrebel, Gottoboy, Giyazz, Lagunna, Limerick, Jigsawkillah) you can reach me through them. |
Supermiy:Mba. Send it to kroneanozie@yahoo.com |
Supermiy:Even if you send me your verse now, I won't open a thread and post it until tomorrow by 9am. So you still have the time to review it once more before sending. |
Trailii:Who be dis mumu? Oya prove me wrong. |
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