Literature › Re: Nairaland Writers Collaboration 2015 (Discussion Thread) by llaykorn: 6:53pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Oahray: Hmmm... I'd get to see Lla ykorn write a prose collabo
Larrysun kudos! Larrysun, please add Oahray to the list.  |
Poems For Review › Re: All Alone by llaykorn: 6:51pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Ycmia: Ilaykorn..thnks a lot, n for d observation I'll try and work on it...thnks once more!!! Welcome, bro. |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 4:49pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Sinizia, I think you can only tell members not to vote before they cast a vote. Rushing out to say someone is barred from voting only after they have given a win to your opponent sure isn't an ethical thing to do.  |
Poems For Review › Re: All Alone by llaykorn: 4:18pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Ycmia, this is a very cool piece. Extremely simple, and yet extremely striking. Good job!
Have you thought about punctuating your poetry just like you would punctuate your prose? |
Rap Battles › Re: +++++++ Road To Kings Tournament : Mikuz Vs Muhdg +++++++ by llaykorn: 7:29am On Oct 03, 2015 |
MuhdG: He said 20lines.
And i took it literally. I was even thinking my lines were too much Oh no! 20 lines means 10 bars. |
Rap Battles › Re: +++++++ Road To Kings Tournament : Mikuz Vs Muhdg +++++++ by llaykorn: 11:32pm On Oct 02, 2015 |
MVGT - mikuz
MuhdG, I don't understand why you didn't utilize to the maximum. You had a few bars less than mikuz. |
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Rap Battles › Re: Independence Day Aftermath Bloodbath: Sinizia Vs. Llaykorn by llaykorn: 9:45pm On Oct 02, 2015*. Modified: 10:03pm On Oct 02, 2015 |
To the Pastors in the house: Where in the bible, can we find the songs o' Solomon in/ thanks, bro, Mathew Chapter 4 to John three/ and where can we find Moses river crossing/ Daniel Chapter 8 to Job six/ hehe, the way I 'came with bible verses'....shows I'm here to 'destroy Sin' First, Deaconess Gladyys trampled o'er Sin, she was born again/ then faithful brother Lay left the innards of Sin torn away/ it's amazing how much the church did to end Sin's vicious reign....like he was science in Newton's age... Someone's gonna regret ever slighting Corn/ cos I have all weapons ready to fight this scum/ Folks wonder why I used haste in sharpening swords/ it's cos I need Sin maimed by this dawn/ so even if he were the 'tallest man in Biafra-land', he still wouldn't see 'the rising sun'.... We knew that Sin was fake when he claimed to be Hitler kid/ he's Badoo Omo Mushin while I'm Killer Bean/ Like Jericho walls his rhymes fall off when they see armies/ see, Lay is here; his rhymes won't be in United State...if they were the Statue Of Liberty... I'm pitilessly spilling your gravest secret, Sinizia! sinizia: Perreia should never replace Memphis on the wing no matter how poor Memphis is. Memphis was 100% better than Perreria. He came in and killed that wing. No speed, skill or intensity to match Young or Memphis at all. Bad sub!! ! Why was he jilted by his lover/ the girl couldn't take it when she discover/ that he's a Man-U Stan, he self-services at pictures of Reds' ballers/ he changed his name to Memphis, but kid black like Drogba/ so he couldn't get Deepay....like Osun state workers.. *the pay Sin can pretend to us that he rides in cool car/ but all his rants don't faze me like he's toddler/ you can shout all you want Sin/ you can brag all you want, but you 'can't shake me'.....like 'women in burqa'! Don't beg me Sin, it's too late, sir/ I brought bars flammable; so Lay will raze ya/ Daggers sharp enough; so Lay will slay ya/ but I go shook am with safety pin first to hear 'Sin gap awww'....like we battled in Asia.. *Singapore Sinizia, I swear your stay no dey Rap music/ you should be doing backup for Fatai Rolling Dollar or singing Fuji/ but if news reach you say 'sin is star'...then topic must be an 'American horror movie' He'll call me Daddy when I beat the fool/ My punches too fast he can't see the hook/ wait, let Sin count while I hit the crook/ But I'll swing so fast you'll lose a'count....like that vet who bet on Elmax to beat the Coog No one should feel mercy for Sin, it's typical/ Lay was an agbofinro and Sin was a criminal/ This is how Lay Corn put an end to sin...like the second coming of Christ was digital Hello, This is how Lay 'compute' an end to sin...like the second coming of Christ was 'digital' |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 9:33pm On Oct 02, 2015 |
sinizia: Mikuz, pop a thread for Llaykorn and I, we need to drop ASAP. Sin, I thought we agreed on a limit of 10 bars. |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 8:57pm On Oct 02, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 5:29pm On Oct 02, 2015 |
Voters no gree vote, oga mikuz no gree close thread. Issorait.  Darkenedrebel, abeg no forget our thread. |
Literature › Re: Nairaland Writers Collaboration 2015 (Discussion Thread) by llaykorn: 12:51pm On Oct 02, 2015 |
Mynd44: I wish I can join but I sound dont know how to write You've repeated this so many times it's starting to sound real and not anymore like the joke you want it to be.  2 Likes |
Rap Battles › Re: Flow For Rank by llaykorn: 9:06am On Oct 02, 2015 |
Ibime: Better late than never. . . . long day. . . .
I'm from a broken home. . . this nigga actually said/ My parents still together. . . . get that fact through your head/ Throwing stones from a glass house. . . . get you shattered instead/ Are your parents still together?. . . NO!. . .cos your daddy is dead!/ That ain’t a punchline. . . . that’s just stating a fact/ You mention Bis?. . . . I send you where that nigga taking his nap/ He came in boasting "Google Oba Aromo. . . . my family got rep son”/ Then Oba Aromolaran got exposed for stealing public cheque funds/ He started wailing. . . "my dad died. . . you didn’t google the correct one"/ Well, in my opinion . . . . the only good thief is a dead one!/ I didn’t wanna bring his dad in the cipher/ but he trampled a viper/ Soon as he brought family into it. . . . that’s the decider!/ Since the thief died. . . . his mother been attached to a heifer/ Breaching anti-gay laws. . . . and having ratchets inside her/ Peeping at the maid in the shower. . . . and making advance on the minor/ And they been engaging 'in sex'. . . . since the 'black widow spied her'!!/ (black widow spider) You cross the line. . . .. now we fully heartless nigga/ singing Gnarls Barkley. . . . Gone Daddy Gone. . . . for the departed father figure/ My father figured. . . to teach me 'indices'. . . so I won’t end up an artist nigga/ You an artist nigga. . . cos ya father 'in decease'. . . and never taught you father figures!/ Bipolar emotional bytch nigga. . . lacking masculine direction/ You’ll be heading for Yaba Left . . . without a rapid intervention/ You mentioning my wife . . . but my pipe is strong/ and my python long/ Been married 3 years. . . . and family planning. . . . cos my wife is young/ Something his father shoulda done. . . . to save this waste of a pipe/ Giyazz beat him to stupor. . . . now I'ma put his face on a spike/ cos if 'G-Let' him live. . . .then with these 'razors'. . . I’m taking his life!!/ Fact is this/ You'll never be respected by cats like Bis/ cos you act a bytch/ and ya rhymes contain a lot of grammar. . . but you lacking wit/ Long azz quatrains without landing a jab that hits/ I'm antonymous to a God-sent saint". . . "in other words, I'm wack as shyt"!/ Go against Bis and your days are done/ Real emcees dont need long quatrains to spit amazing puns/ That's for slow-witted lazy scum/ Only takes 2 lines from Bis . .and your fate is spun/ I'll force ropes through your mouth. . . and make you 'lace' your tongue/ You'll get 'dissed till'. . . they swear that I was making 'rum'!/ You a 'drug mule'. . . Giyazz, Max, Krone and 'co caned' your bum/ That's 3 plays in one Quatrain. . . you're done!/ But don't thank me for the training son/ Just phock off back to romance section. . . where they chased you from!/ Always boasting of ya family money . . . . immature bytch nigga/ This ain’t a punchline. . . . but this bytch nigga on FFR. . . . and brought along his big sister!/ I made wealth off my own sweat . . . . in your world. . . I’m a rich nigga/ But this gun’ll have you speaking 'Arabic'. . . . if you try to take 'Bis milla'!!/ Switch nigga. . . .the áss whipping will be a grevious offence/ You best use your next verse to plead and repent/. . . . before another beating commence!/
oNe! WOW! This is something else!!!  |
Literature › ... by llaykorn(op): 8:25am On Oct 02, 2015*. Modified: 6:59am On Nov 02, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 8:23pm On Oct 01, 2015 |
sinizia: llaykorn, remember it's tomorrow, 9pm. 10 bars.
Cc: Darkenedrebel. Yeah, sure!  |
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Literature › Re: Nairaland Writers Collaboration 2015 (Discussion Thread) by llaykorn: 3:21pm On Oct 01, 2015 |
Larrysun, I'm interested in doing this. |
Literature › Re: .. by llaykorn(op): 7:53am On Oct 01, 2015 |
slap1: Hmm. I think I could hazard a guess as to why... Goodluck. I think your guess is right. Thanks, bro. Are you in too? |
Rap Battles › Re: Flow For Rank by llaykorn: 7:21am On Oct 01, 2015 |
GIYAZZ: Awwww. . . Kudos bro. You talked to Liricyst with these lines. You're truly a poet. And if you continue this way, you will soon become a force to be reckoned with Rap-wise.
I love this script. All you need do is work on your rhymes, build-ups, and you're good to go. Once again, Kudos. Wow! I'm flattered. I'll make sure to effect a tune on those. Hehe; _Emaprince called my attention to exactly the same things. Thanks, bro!  |
Poems For Review › Re: I Am Old Now... by llaykorn(op): 7:09am On Oct 01, 2015 |
AlNelssyn: High five sire Thumbs up, sire! I haven't seen you post for some time. What's up, bro?  |
Poems For Review › Re: I Am Old Now... by llaykorn(op): 7:07am On Oct 01, 2015 |
OMA4U: wow! Wow! Wow! *Clapping* I'm proud of you, boss. What would be able the likes of us to do if not for the generous sips we took from the knowledge-filled cups of the likes of you, sir? Thanks, President! |
Rap Battles › Re: ++++++ Congratulations : Obesemf Is Lord Of The Rings 2015 ++++++ by llaykorn: 6:34pm On Sep 30, 2015 |
Iceskidd: hey you no announce who carry 3rd? Abeg, who carry this title for '13 and '14? |
Poems For Review › Re: The Rain Falls by llaykorn(op): 3:17pm On Sep 30, 2015 |
noble4d: I love this, great one Bro Thanks, sir. What's wrong with your WhatsApp? |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 2:52pm On Sep 30, 2015 |
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Romance › Re: What Is The Funniest Thing You Ever Found Yourself Doing Around Opposite Sex? by llaykorn: 11:12pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 10:32pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 10:21pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
Gottoboy  You travel go West Germany? Since all these years! |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 10:20pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
Classsyalabolas: _mhizkel... why did _mhizdeedy deactivate? Rebel, you like the boy?  |
Poems For Review › Re: I Am Old Now... by llaykorn(op): 10:12pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
desmondDessi: Ok...hav u done any? LOL. No, I haven't done any. If ever I get some things about it right enough, I might do a studio recording someday, or a video recording sef.  |
Literature › Re: Nairaland Fiction School ( Teaching Thread) by llaykorn: 9:40pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
Mynd44: Flash me when they start. I want to learn how to write fiction LOL.  Should I flash your Multilinks or Stracomms sim? |