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MuhdG:
Return what u've learnt. The lesson was for me, not u

LOL. Did that help? If you're still not sure about yourself yet, write whatever you can and send it over. I'll edit it and point out whatever you got wrong.

Danbrowndmf, can you continue with this? If you can't fit your words to the pattern, just script your verses, I'll edit. Or we might make your verses some kind'a refrain, you know.

I still wonder at old, young men
Who learn not to feel magic in the air.
How they still manage to be so blind,
To miracles light o' dawn left behind.

I still wonder at stains on villain's hands
That glitter in the suns of these plane lands.
How they still manage to be beautiful so,
When made of spilled blood n' crashed hopes.

olowookerekemi:
this is wat happen wen u smoke expired iwerri weed nd moreova wu teaches d op ao to create a thread wit dis grammers of his

Next time, don't criticize someone else's grammar.

danbrowndmf:
Thanks man.
What about our project na.?

LOL. It's still on. I'll tag you to a few verses I'll script tonight.

darkenedrebel:
Okay. .Tuesday 12pm..

Done!

obainojazz:
....llaykorn...are u sure u wanna do this

You doubt me? Haha

darkenedrebel:
Tomorrow 8pm. ..
8 bars only ...


Bring 6 pall bearers & a casket along. ...I'm turning NL into a funeral parlour

Tuesday.....?

MuhdG:
Lol. You vs dark.

Pwahahahahah

LOL. I suppose it's a love poem you wanna write.

A love poem can be written with this arrangement.

- Drop Lines About Some First Meeting
- Praise Her (Beauty, Intelligence, etc)
- Reassure Her (Know Whatta Mean?)

Firstly, brainstorm. What do you think of this person? As fast as you can, write out how you feel about this person, what happened the first time you saw him or her, when you fell in love, how you feel about the future, and whatever else comes to mind. Anything that you love for that specific person, and just keep thinking and writing. Don't stop to analyze or critique what you've written - just keep going. Write out a page or two, so you have plenty of material to use in your poem. After that, look through your page and bring out the most favorite to you of those you've written down. Structure them into something that makes sense, You could start with a few prose paragraphs.

And, from there you go. This way, you won't get stuck. Remember to avoid adverbs. Instead of 'very intelligent', use 'brilliant'. Instead of 'I really love you', say 'I adore you. Also, avoid cliches. Remember to avoid 'big words' too; don't write anything she won't understand.

There is one trick you can use though, if you have very refined prose paragraphs after the brainstorming. Just insert line breaks into the prose, and you have a poem.

Then, you have to be brave. Don't go halfway to express yourself. Hit that extreme, MuhdG. (Knwo whatta mean?)

Darkenedrebel, when do you want your death by 8 bullets?

MuhdG:
Nna, i wanna write a poem for my baby buh i don't know how

Can ye put me through?

The same way you write bars.

OlufemiOAP:
No way to thank you Enuff for dis Advice ..I should have u as my Fiery God-Father on Nairaland.

LMAO! Welcome.

Thanks for the mention, Microflux. I almost missed this; you know, I'm now llaykorn. Was this thread created to conduct a poll? If yes, then I vote a YES!

JigsawKillah:
na you and who wan lie?
i pop true stories

Sakulala! SAW, talk true. Aren't you one of 'em overfed Ajebo mummy's boys?

kr0ne:
Battle thread for Dklef and Captaincids.

Oh! I'm quite sure you made a mistake, sir. That is a link to Dark's last battle.

kr0ne:
Dklef vs Captaincids.
https://www.nairaland.com/2645272/road-kings-tournament-darkrebel-vs

LOL. What is this, sir?

MuhdG:
baby don't mind her joor. Iwill pay for everything

#OfficialMaga

sukkot:
its actually done by the illuminati with several machines. i will post a video but i know nigerians complain about megabyte eating. they use machines like CERN and HAARP. like most of the weather calamities you see are artificially created. the tsunami in new orleans was artificially created as well as the haiti earth-quake

You've been reading too many conspiracy theory novels.

Kudos to MuhdG for taking charge of this match and doing it well. You'll soon start getting tags to help brothers anchor matches.

Raplinx999:
Yo Ninjas, how many matches must i have to win b4 i start engaging in NL tourneys?? ...

With this, no one will stop you from engaging in any tournaments in the future, bro.

obainojazz:
facts about this battle....

*This is the first time mudgh is in charge of a battle..biting happened

*This is raplinx999 first battle here.....biting happened

*This is also captawesome first battle here....biting happened...he's the suarez(biter)

Would it be right then to say that CaptAwesome and MuhdG didn't have a good start in life?

danbrowndmf:
i know sabi anything for poem but i go try, so what do u intend we should work on.?

Nothing in mind, yet. It's you going out of your comfort zone so I think it would be more appropriate if you decide.

MuhdG:
FirstEVA dis ur profile pic get as e be

He done already rush go there go check as ground be like.

danbrowndmf:
feature u in one of my poem? Are u sure u quote the right person?

I did. Let's do some collaborated work.

danbrowndmf:
ni gba ti mi o kin se bruce jenner.

Come and feature me in one of your poems na.