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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 10:01pm On Jul 17, 2017

ladyverere:
That's it, Linda hasn't learnt her lesson. She is yet to be truly repentant. I know she is suffering greatly but know this, we must all face the consequences of our actions. Even if we ask for forgiveness, God will surely forgive us but He will not take away the consequences of our disobedience. In that way, we learn our lessons the very hard way and our repentance becomes truly genuine and heartfelt because we now know first the consequences of a repeat of such disobedience.

So let's allow Leigh to write her story without whining about the horror of the events. Hopefully, there are some people out there who can really learn from this story and mend their disobedient ways.

thank you, what more can i add to such eloquent words ladyverere

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 10:00pm On Jul 17, 2017

ladyverere:
I suspected the same thing as well. Your writing is so graphic Leigh. So alive and very, very educative. Weldone.

hi ladyverere, thank you for staying with the story. I appreciate it.

Thank you for your kind words and your comments, they really help

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:57pm On Jul 17, 2017

greatface:
lleigh, i finally got up to speed with this amazing work after like one week. you got me thinking when you tried linking this with the river and i wanted to say something but my thoughts are just empty now.

let me read the river and hopefully, i may recall some memories.

but lleigh, your imaginations are teriffic and i wish i could get a girlfriend as versed as you. SERIOUS

the story is scary but not to me. am only pleading for those that fear.

hello greatface wink

you didn't forget what i mentioned in passing. You have been following my stories wink

thank you

As I mentioned above, the two stories have always been linked, without one there would not have been the other.

invariably I got more involved with Linda, she is such a character. cheesy

I realised that one the stories was too descriptive as someone told me on the thread, too much story isn't wanted. It helped explain why I had no comments.

So it's now straight to the action wink

Thank you for reading my stories though, much appreciated, when you come out of GM once in a while

And thank you for saying not to fear.

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:48pm On Jul 17, 2017

maran1983:
Leigh, I have never been one to comment on stories I read here (wonder why).

Anyway, I have been reading and following all your stories.

Yesterday, I read your last update, just before bed. Your narrative on the child's decapitation was so very vivid. I did not think much of it, said my prayers and went to bed.

For the first time in forever, I had a nightmare. I relieved all of that poor baby's suffering. Funny enough, I kept telling myself to wake up, that it was a dream.

When my husband eventually woke me up, as I was thrashing about so much, I quickly rushed to check up on my kids.

The essence of my essay, is to say, well done. Thank you for being an awesome writer and making my day.

More ink to your pen.

maran1983 I hope you are ok? I hope you sleep better tonight.

Thank you for reading it and thank you for your heart felt comment.

Yes that poor baby's suffering is very graphic, I could not write that at night as the image of the boy haunted me too.

But such things happen in society unfortunately.

Thank you.

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:41pm On Jul 17, 2017

iamharkinwaley:
What an intriguing thrilling piece u got here Miss Lleigh, so outstanding,unique,educative, entertaining,fantastic and brilliant Work.....

Always saw this title @ d literature section but will just scroll pass not knowing am missing alot especially d (Doing d Linda thing ) Thank God I came across d thread of top 10 stories to read for d weekend, making me go for AUCTION God bless d op.

This piece even not concluded yet should serve as a lesson to us all.....

Great piece once again Miss Lleigh, I believe Linda hasn't seen enough miss....

Pls do mention me in d next update......

I read here ur other stories are awesome
am off to read.....

Kudos...

Hi iamharkinwaley, thank you for taking a chance on the story. I appreciate it, Linda's story has not concluded yet

Just need to give her some time to get to her new destination.

I will make sure I mention you in the next update. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:35pm On Jul 17, 2017

meneski:
u deserve the week sis...congrats

Hi meneski thank you

Literature › Re: Introducing Top 10 Stories Of The Week ( Nomination Thread) by Lleigh(f): 9:15am On Jul 17, 2017

Thank you to my readers who nominated me and thank you Divepen1 for considering me

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:10am On Jul 17, 2017

Queensiju:
May God have mercy on Linda now she has realised that she is a sinner. Thanks for the update, Lleigh.

You're very welcome Queensiju

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:09am On Jul 17, 2017

queenitee:
Ah, yes ma

All I can say queenitee may we never encounter someone like wicked Linda

Literature › Re: Memoir Of A Sex Slave [struggle For Survival] by Lleigh(f): 10:44pm On Jul 16, 2017

Episode 8 By Lleigh

I quickly moved away from him and he paused in bringing out whatever he wanted to show me.

I don’t know why I went to sit away from the Uncle; I just did, I just had a feeling that if my Mum saw me near him she would slap me or even beat me.

She had been in a bad mood when I left her in the room cleaning up her poo. She had looked like she was in a lot of pain and anger. For some reason some of that anger had been directed at me. If only I knew what I had done wrong I would have tried to do better. I loved my Mum, but sometimes I think my Mum does not love me.

I was still trying to understand what had happened between her and the other Uncle, why did he make her poo herself?

I only did that when I was scared, like when my Mum beat me very hard. I would pee myself sometimes, when she had threatened me with something bad I had nearly pooed myself once.

So I sat away from this Uncle, trying to hold on to the nice feeling the Uncle had given me, I felt happy.

I heard the footsteps get nearer as she got closer to the parlour.

I picked up my book of stories and the bag of sweets; I was still recovering from whatever the Uncle had done to me. I felt so nice, relaxed and happy.

“Would you love to see what is inside my trouser?” He asked me while I was far away from him.

I nodded my head both positively and negatively.

“Alright my love, I will show you” He said. This time, I nodded positively. He was unzipped already, when I looked up and saw my nightmare standing right in front of me!!

‘Tessy,’ she turned to me, ‘did I not tell you not to open the door to any one?’

“Did she see what happened?” My heart raced around that question.

She had been very specific with that instruction, I had disobeyed her.

I was in a lot of trouble.

I went back to being engrossed in my sweets and my book. I did not want to answer her as I knew I would be in a lot of trouble. I did not dare look up at her face as I knew what I would see there.

‘Tessy are you deaf I am talking to you.’

‘Get up and answer me you silly girl.’

I looked up and saw her wince. She must still be in pain with what she had done earlier with the other Uncle, I thought sadly to myself.

My Mum turned to the Uncle, ‘Tony what are you doing here.’

‘I told you I was coming you said it would be ok, or have you forgotten?’ He asked my Mum.

‘We did not fully agree, it was a suggestion Tony, I did not say yes.’

I wanted to go away from what they were talking about. I did not want to see another person argue with my Mother.

This Uncle Tony was ok, he had been good to me and he had come with sweets for me.

‘You told me to come Bose.’
My Mum’s name was Bose.

He actually called her by her name; some of the other Uncles when they came to our house, I heard them call her B!tch.

I don’t know what that name means. But when they said it, they never had a gentle tone in their voice. The Uncle who had made my mum poo poo had said that she was a B!tch.

‘I am not feeling well Tony,’ my Mum told the Uncle.

’I can’t do anything today.’

‘Since when has tiredness stopped you Bose.’ The nice Uncle said.

‘I did not come all the way over here for you not to render your services.’ He said to my Mum.

I did not understand what they were talking about, so I stopped listening intently and opened my bag of sweets.

‘Bose if you think you are not up to it, there is another female in the house she would make do very nicely.’

‘It must run in the family, since she’s come for me twice already today.’

My Mum’s loud scream was followed by
No!

‘Tessy.!!’ The way she screamed my name took my attention away from my sweets and I looked up at the two adults.

I did not know what Uncle Tony had said to my Mum to make her so upset.

‘Tessy go to your room now,’ she screamed at me, as she pulled me by the ear. I screamed as it hurt so much.

I knew I dared not complain, I ran to my room and cried. The short interlude of niceness from the Uncle was forgotten as I cried at why my Mum did not love me. I ran away from the parlour and was heading to my room, then I remembered to turn back a little bit.

What I saw wasn’t what I expected, and it made my heart break into pieces.

“No” I whispered as tears rolled down my eyes!!

To Be Continued

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:55pm On Jul 16, 2017*

Nickibeauty:
Pls tell me Linda is dreaming.

Hmm is she dreaming? is it real?

You know when you have a dream that is so real..

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:46pm On Jul 16, 2017

Olusojisorunmu:
Who the hell are you?

Aside the story, i took personal interest in reading ur comments and analysis.

I must confess ur Intelligence is Unrivalled.

Who the hell are you?

Aside the story, i took personal interest in reading ur comments and analysis.

I must confess ur Intelligence is Unrivalled.

Thumbs up.

She is a genius wink

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:45pm On Jul 16, 2017

Olusojisorunmu:
Lleigh, right now i can't find the right words to describe you or your writing skill.

All i can utter is that you are ''Extraordinary''

Olusojisorunmu thank you.

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:44pm On Jul 16, 2017

jalo1:
Her father!!!! she must die trust me datz beta

Hmm...Linda oh Linda

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:43pm On Jul 16, 2017

DarkRebel69:
Lleigh?

Hi DarkRebel69

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:42pm On Jul 16, 2017

queenitee:
Lleigh, Linda has confessed and prayed, please forgive her

queenitee we need to hear her confessions.

Her own confession pass everyone else ...she has done a lot of bad things.

Some are alluded to..

Literature › Re: Stars 2017 Writing Competition Updates & Story Thread by Lleigh(f): 9:40pm On Jul 16, 2017

kinwayne:
Please judges. Go through the stories and submit your 7 nominations to my mail. "Chikerelance@gmail.com"

Please do this by tomorrow. Thank you

Lleigh
Divepen1
Kimberlywest
Princesa

Ok will do and will put on email and WhatsApp

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 4:58pm On Jul 16, 2017

[quote author=nikz post=58518427][/quote]Hi nikz thank you for staying with this story.

A few things in real life took me away from my fiction world. But if i need to go off grid I will let people know in advance.

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 3:42pm On Jul 16, 2017

Smooth278:
Hi Lleigh, this last update seems to be linked to your other story... The river... Am i right or is it just a coincidence

Hi Smooth278 you are right

Lleigh:
Smooth278 I don’t know how to link quotes but you are right. Please see above...

I hope my quote has come through

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 3:41pm On Jul 16, 2017

Lleigh:
Hi Audrinakane, I did predict someone would call it out.

Yes this story is linked to 'The River' it always has been.

Hence why I said I would need to catch up on a few things, The River being one of them.

'The Auction just seemed to push along quicker for me than The River.

I think the boy in the River scared me a lot

But I think I have banished the writers block, plus I have to do a lot of research on things.

We need to leave Linda for a while to reflect on what has happened before we return to her.

Thank you Audrinakane for reading my stories...

going back to the dark room

Smooth278...

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 9:38am On Jul 16, 2017

chii8 happy birthday

Literature › Re: Stars 2017 Writing Competition Updates & Story Thread by Lleigh(f): 6:47am On Jul 16, 2017

Well done kinwayne thanks.

Great stories too, well done writers

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 6:46am On Jul 16, 2017

marvwhite:
i dont like that phrase "YOU GOT ME THINKING" ........ Beacuse, " I WILL SPEAK TO MY PEN IN THE DARK ROOM" was not good to Linda,this might be worse..... #LindaWatchOut

Have faith marvwhite you never know

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 11:23pm On Jul 15, 2017

harunablezin:
Linda y waited till now before u ask for forgiveness?

Hey harunablezin yes she took her time.

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 11:14pm On Jul 15, 2017

astute28:
hmm Lleigh pls this pain is unbearable for linda will ask GOD for forgiveness and GOD do forgive us our iniquity bible say no sinner shall go unpunish but this punishement of linda is too much to bear i really pity linda and Lliegh u are the only one that can free linda i knw she had learnt her lesson pls lliegh free her for me biko n nu abeg .. thumb up sister kudos to u .i dont knw how to describe you in one word u a great ,. indeed more grease to ur elbow Lliegh more popcorn for u i cant wait for ur next update Lliegh

Thank you astute28 ..

Thank you for the popcorn

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 11:09pm On Jul 15, 2017

bummybummy:
Linda u just tink of asking for forgiveness wen u av done series of atrocities

As they say she met something bigger than her.

Linda... oh Linda

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 11:07pm On Jul 15, 2017*

marvwhite:
Lleigh

HOW CAN YOU BE THIS HEARTLESS? (rhetorical question)
How can you let a fictional character suffer like this? (na wa for me sef o). Some time ago,you told me .....

"I will speak to my magic pen in the dark room."
to lessen Linda's pitiable situation,but you continued

Linda is such a strong woman though,she might be broken emotionally,phychologically,even spiritually e.t.c ,i think she is a fighter....

Lliegh i know you might probably hear/see this everyday but.. #AmYourBiggestFan

marvwhite ....Linda just keeps on misbehaving..she get as she be

However...you got me thinking

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 11:05pm On Jul 15, 2017

Majesticniyi:
My oga, I'm sapoisexual and so I respect intelligent minds. I just get scared of them...especially when their imaginations run wild.

Majesticniyi nothing to be scared about. I can't hurt a fly self.

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 11:02pm On Jul 15, 2017

EvaJael:
Wow! You're my partner be that. I'm scared of every insect

We can scream at insects together wink

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 7:20pm On Jul 15, 2017

queenitee:
Phew, poor Kara

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Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 7:20pm On Jul 15, 2017

Just2million:
You're scared of cockroach with this hyperactive imagination Haba??

I know right, but those things scare me, for some it is spiders for me it is cockroach.

I scream, then realise the cockroach will not answer me undecided

Literature › Re: The Auction by Lleigh(op): 5:50pm On Jul 15, 2017

EvaJael:
Mehn I had a nightmare.about Linda and I stayed awake after that till daybreak. Thank God we're taking a break from her. Lleigh I'm officially afraid of u

EvaJael don't fear me I am scared of cockroaches..big time

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