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Most welcome!

Most welcome riskie.
Hope to read more from you.

I dey here
No need for you to fear

I dey strong
listening to this never ending song

I get vision
it's far but i'll complete my mission

I get love
dropped on me like rain from above

I dey smile
tired but i've got just one more mile

I dey creative
not naive, from the day i became a native.

P.S -My first poetry posting,and it's in pidgin too!!

@Riskie.

Imagery is fantastic for 'imagination'.

@gamine
Unspoiled, straight from the heart type of feeling write up.
Great expressions!

@nanaboi
"Day i forgot to wake",is a deliberately vague write up.
'time,insensitive as time ticked on,inscrutable". I liked this part best.

Time is a mystery,and orphic in nature, that is, it's beyond ordinary understanding like the sun,moon and stars. It is really insensitive.

Always welcome,
hope to see more of that.

@Ruby
An engaging frankness about your poems.
All in all,great writing to keep you going.

Been away for a while, i see rotimy and oyinye-the duo,the pair,the couplet,the dyad,doing their thing still.

tijehi,'The Summons' is a great book!
I'm about to start 'The Prophet' written by Kahlil Gibran.

'This love', wrestles and weaves an emotional web,of the very thought of what love would do if present,and the after effect feelings of conflict, allegiance even. 'To heal fragmented memories' ,there's a famine of love that dwells in her, and the conflict arises because the sun that shines must set at one point,to rise again.
So a rebirth occurs, the loved becomes beloved and seeks love. Where is love?
I'd say it never left in the first place. Look within.

If you truly wrote that,it's fantastic.

Back in a short space of time,and my oh my.
Everyone,good looking out.
CaringSoul,no need to be on the offensive as this forum here's all about love. You know the next thing to do right? Yes,apologize.