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amicable212:
you are talented

wow thanks very much dear, I appreciate your comment.

Content: Poem
Type; Motivational
Title: I Quit

I QUIT

I Quit.
I quit being a victim all the time.
don't want my life to be as sour as lime.
feeling rejected is nothing but a crime.

I Quit.
I quit basking in eupathy and opinion conceived from elsewhere,
it must only be from my sphere.
I want to stand out all alone and battle-ready
like a musketeer.
I volunteer henceforth to preach my greatness
with zeal like a sermoneer.

I Quit.
I quit being a failure.
I hate being controlled like my life is on seizure.
what if i cut all the ties pulling me with a razor?
I think that might be a cure.

I Quit.
I quit being marginalized like am infected,
walking alone like am rejected.
I don't want to be neglected,
without being corrected.

I Quit.
I quit blaming myself for my misfortune
sitting down and grudging against myself from dawn to noon.
I choose to dance to motivational tune
now that am opportune

Copyright @PHILIP LUCKY

Divepen1 HumbledbYGrace lalasticlala pls help me move this to front page to motivate, encourage and help those who are facing challenges of any form in life. thanks

WordSayer:
Lovely. Spasmic. Apt.

thanks very much sir

4front:
That is Nigeria for you,I have close 1000 poems but Niger system sef no help. Poverty sef block our youth eyes to read to understanding. Bro,keep writing jaree

we Nigerians are very intelligent people. it's the hustling spirit that is depriving us of our abilities

WhySoShy:

thanks dear

Acepen:
This is cool

thanks very much dear

chuddyforlife:
I must commend you,,,u such a brillant fellow and i love your peom is much interesting!!
Keep going---jah bless your hustle

thanks a lot dear. am grateful for your encouragement

Divay22:
Hmmm Life sha

Life is Good. life is sweet my dear

dancok:
u can do that at d corner of ur room, pick ur nose and do the needful....

don't be surprised to hear that most of us still does that. lol

logan2:
nice one, still have 300poems no one has ever set their eyes on except me

thanks bro. bring your poem out to the public. someone needs it. the world needs it

iCauseTrouble:
Who can help me compose a makeup poem for my ex? I need her back badly.

I can help you. and she will come back begging you

Offpoint:
The best part of human life is their childhood, free of masturbation and bills for the guys.


Free of boobs and menstrual circle for the ladies.

What I missed most about it is picking my nose and eating it now it seems abnormal.
Aki and Pawpaw are just blessed.

thanks very much.. Childhood memories are incomparable

Boyooosa:
Nice piece

thanks dear

Avedonn:
Very interesting poem.
It'd make more sense to those born in the 80's when Nigeria was serene and habitable.

thanks very much. yeah Childhood memories of those born in the 80's and early 90's are mind blowing

megafaraday:
This is brilliant. What a nostalgic feeling reading this piece has brought.
Keep it up

thanks bro. I appreciate your comment

I wanna say a big thank you For your comments. it encourages me to keep writing more. wow! I made FP! I want to thank the Mods for pushing my post to the front-page. am grateful. anticipate for more of my works. thanks

Content: poem
title: Childhood


Starring at my old black and white portrait,
with beams of smile on my face,
i became nostalgic about my childhood.

A look which gluts of innocence,
and a mind filled with ignorance.
A brain rammed with untampered vision,
and void of bewilderment.

Playground became my encompassed abode,
Toys became my asset,
while playing became a thrilling task.
After a dutiful play,
an uncompromising and compulsive sleep follows.

Every folks around me depicts friendliness
and loveliness.
smiles and lovely words were my presents,
always amused and joyed at their sight.

When everything and anything seems free,
some were given without being asked for,
while some were at my disposal when needed.

Oh! how sweet were the memories of
my childhood.
Though now things of the past,
they are still fresh in my head.

Copyright : PHILIP LUCKY 2019
My fellow writers please comment on this poem. your advice and critics are important. . thanks