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rachealfst:
Thanks so much. I so much love that mug.

Deckline:
Baba,you no even get chill at all. must you quote the whole story

Don't mind me jare.... No vex

HARMYMY:
Mcweber don't everything......
Rachealfst is a nice writer
Don't try this again or with another writer
My little advice

Noted... Thanks

ndy87:
Meaning?

google.com is your friend

rachealfst:
Dedication:
Treasurewamiri, Mcweber, charytea, pweetyoge, laraemi, Queenflourish, igit270, Sandas11, Funnas, DebbieAce, olaayinkha, Born2Breed, spendidiva




Mummy Ejiofor
I tapped on Crystal's door lightly and went in.
"Mum, I don't get you, what are you insinuating?"
"Take, I bought this from the pharmacy yesterday"
"Mum what's this?"
"What does it look like. My friend go in there and pee on it" I said as I handed over the pregnancy test stick to her.
She took it reluctantly and still sat down looking at me.
"Mum, I know I'm late but it's because of the stress"
"Yes ma, just go in there and do as I say” I said pointing at her bathroom.
She stood up, dragged her feet sluggishly and went into the bathroom. I knew she would have suspected too, but she's not just bold enough to face it.

For like fifteen minutes my daughter still locked herself up in the bathroom.
"Crystal is the pee not coming?" I asked but she didn't answer. "I'm coming right in" I said and opened the door. She just sat on the toilet sit though she didn't cry out loud but tears was falling freely from eyes. Her top was already wet with tears. She handed over the stick to me, without checking I already know what it is. My daughter is pregnant.

"Clean up and get up" I reached out for her hand and pulled her up when she was through cleaning herself. I led her into her room and sat her down.
"Mum I'm pregnant!" She cried out and wept bitterly.
I couldn't stand seeing her in tears. I moved closer to her and hugged her.
"Mum I'm sorry.....
"It's ok my daughter"
"Mu...mmy... I'm having a child without a father"
Now that statement hit me like a blow. What I feared most in my life has finally happened. Having my own daughter make the same mistake I made. Her wailing interrupted my thought.
"Mum Oba left me the way Dad left you" she said crying uncontrollably.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
"Don't say that, that will never be your portion in Jesus name. Oba is coming back” I assured her.
My husband walked into the room, we did not even hear him knock.
"Now will someone tell me what's going on here” he demanded.
"Your daughter is pregnant!"
"She's what! I thought she said they never had….
"Yes, until the last time they saw each other"
"Oh my God and Oba is still no where to be found" He said gesturing with his hands.
"Afam!" I broke down into tears that I've been trying to control. "My daughter is having a baby without.....

He hushed me and hug me . "Don't you dare say that. He is not like me, he is coming back”
"When Daddy! Twenty six years later?" Crystal spoke up. He released me and pulled Crystal up and hugged her. He assured her like he assured me and release her after some seconds.
We all sat on her bed. But Crystal hasn't stop crying.
"Tears won't solve anything. You guys should dress up we have to find him by all means" He instructed and stood up.
"Where's are we going dad?"
"You are taking me to his parents, so start dressings up now" he said and left the room while I followed him.
Few hours later, we were at Oba's parents resident.
"Crystal! His mum said as she opened the door. Then she later realized she was not alone when she saw my parents. She ushered us in. We all exchanged greetings and we sat down quietly. She told us she's the only one at home. She offered to entertain us but we declined her offer.
"I hope there's no problem sir" She said facing my husband and I.
"Crystal is pregnant" He broke the news to her.
"I knew it, I knew this is the reason why he left. This pregnancy just confirmed it. So you two had sex despite all my warning and pleas" She said shedding tears.
"I warned them too. I told them there's a problem lingering if they refused to keep themselves" I added.
"I don't get you women, what is all this warning about. Is there something I need to know?" My husband asked.
"I had a dream and by the time I seek counsel concerning the dream. I was told my son's glory was about to be snatched from him and the only way he can avoid this is to abstain from sexual sins. I called him and warned him, infact I told him to be fast about the wedding but my son insisted on getting a good job before getting married" Mummy Oba explained.

"Now I get it, but why did he had to leave everything behind. I told him severally that he's free to come work for me but he refused. That is not even the issue now. Madam please where is Oba, where can we find him"
"Sir, ma, we don't know Oba's whereabout"
Oba's father walked into the discussion and greeted his August visitors.
"Sir, my wife is telling the truth, we can't know his whereabout and keep it away from you. I was here when he left despite his mother's cry and pleas. He only drop the car key and left. One thing I can tell you about my son is that he hate failure and he will make sure he fix that before he comes back home. When he’ll come back is what I don't know" he explained and everyone sighed heavily.
"But there must be a reason why he left" Afam said suspiciously.
"Wait I just remembered something" Crystal chirped in.
"What do you remember?" I asked anxiously.
"Oba is to resume work the next Monday, we plan to tell you in person and not on phone that very day. Infact we already choose our wedding date and we plan on telling you everything before the.....
"Go on we understand" My husband said.
"That day we both felt bad, I left when I don't understand him, he kept on saying he has destroyed his life. I took my things and left and because he didn't call me, I didn't call to ask after the job he was supposed to start.
"See the devil o, so Oba got a job" I said
"Yes, he did. He was offered a full-time job at Exxon Mobil" Crystal replied.
"Jesus!" They exclaimed at the news.
"And you even fixed the wedding date!" Oba's mum added.
"Yes ma, we were supposed to get married two months from now"
"Oh my God. What happened to the job" My husband asked.
"I don't think Oba got that job, I think we now know the reason why he left" Oba's father said.
"Hmm, you are right. I doubt if he got the job" Afam said nodding in support of what Oba's father said.
"Then we have to find out. Do you know anyone who works there?" Afam asked.
"No, he got the job without any connections"
"You can imagine. God did his part but you two didn't" Crystal's mum said.
"I have an idea, let me call his Pastor" Oba's mum said.
She went into the room to get her phone and came back with it. He made the call.
She sighed heavily and sat down after making the call.
"What did he say?" I asked as everyone is anxious to know.
"He said Oba lost the job. He said we should just continue to pray for him, that he will come back home" she said and started crying.
I tried comforting her but she was still Crying and Crystal too joined.
"When will he come back. Oh my God, I don't even know how my son is faring. Please God help help us, I know it’s our sin, please forgive us, forgive him, forgive both of them" she cried out.
They both stop crying after persuasive them. I later saw Crystal checking something on her phone, after some seconds, she tossed the phone on the chair and resumed her cry.
"What is it again Crystal" I was even scared because I don't know the information she got from the phone.
"I have access to Oba's email. I just thought of checking it now and I realized he was declined of the other jobs he applied for on that same Monday. The final interview he was supposed to have with the companies was cancelled, the mail said he should try again next time"
"Oh my God" I exclaimed while the two men in the room looked at each other and shaked their head.
"Ha.....ha....and you said my son it's fine. Hope he hasn't harm himself" Mummy Oba wailed.
"Easy woman. You know Oba, he will never do such a thing. He is a fighter and he will fight things through wherever he is" Oba's father said and the words calmed his wife down.
"I think we all now know the reason why he left. All the doors of opportunities shut at him all in one day and it's obvious, this is the aftermath of his actions. After all it had already been foretold" My husband concluded and stood up.
"You are very right sir" he stood up too.
"We all have to hope for the best and let's continue to pray for him. Any where he goes, may God be with him" Afam said and we all chorused "AMEN"
"We want to be on our way now" He said but Oba's mum stopped him.
"What about Crystal and her condition?" She asked.
"We will take care of her and the pregnancy. She is expecting your grandchild, so you are free to come check on her anytime" My husband replied her.
"We can take care of her too. Let her stay with us or better still I can go stay with her at Oba’s apartment, so I can watch her closely" She said.
"What my wife is trying to say is that it's better for her to come stay with us than to stay at her parents. You know our society, people will talk" Oba's father added.
"I appreciate your concern but I don't care about what people say. She will have the baby right under my roof and she will move on with her life. Remember they are not married”
My husband made the final decision. They all agreed and we left.
That very night, I couldn't sleep. I went into my closet to pray. I knelt down and wept bitterly before God.
"God is this a curse?" I asked and he replied me.
"Yes it is. But what did my word say?" God asked
"Your word says no causeless curse shall stand and every ordinances that is written against me is blotted out" I replied.
"Then be calmed it is settled" He said.
"Thank you Jesus. What about Oba?" I asked and he replied again and this time I held my peace. I returned into the bedroom and lay beside my husband who I thought was asleep. He held me close and soothed me. "All will be well" he said and replied him same as we drifted to sleep.

thanks for the dedication

Following bumper to bumper.....

The major line I saw in the last update must be "he rode me with passion"


Please don't call me a pervert, I'm still entitled to my own opinion

I love this story... Walahi

The thread has finally come alive again...thank God!!!

Following bumper to bumper

A young lady came out.... Hmm, hope crystal won't be thinking somehow now

Leesah:
exactly my thoughts but you know we ladies can be overprotective of our girlfriend(s) especially the ones we don't want to be hurt and the ones we could go extra miles for. she probably thinks soma is best for crystal so, she wants this movie kinda love where friends marry friends and no one breaks the circle, then they also go for vacation together and all. whatever her reason is, I hope it's for the best and I also hope she comes to accept the breakup and the new found love. rachealfst, more ideas to you.

well, lets just fold our arms and see how thing unfolds

Its like yawa wan gas..... But meanwhile, why is Enitan taking things personal cos me I'm not understanding

cbella:
I'm glad you said 'even if she's busy she should come online and say something as to why the updates are delaying' but just maybe whatever she's busy with includes not being able to come on here to tell us why update has delayed.


Just my opinion tho. I stand to be corrected but I'm pretty sure she's not so happy not updating for 24hrs and of course rachealfst has her readers in mind.

And she made mention the book is available on Okada books just incase............


I know it's your opinion and you chose your words carefully but there could be another reason she hasn't updated yet and thesame reason she hasn't said anything yet. Let's just pardon her.

Very well then... Your words just calm me down.

Thanks!!!

HARMYMY:
Mcweber...
Atleast give kudos to the OP
Do you think it easy to be a creative writer?
More over she not pay for putting this story on nairaland.
As the Op has the right to do and undo same to the followers has right to read or ignore.....

Kindly go through my post and I don't think there was any place I tried to castigate the OP and I must confess she has really tried but why not see things from our own perspective (the readers). You rush down here almost every hour to see if we have any new update, then you get to see none for over 24hrs now... It doesn't make sense to me. Even if the OP is damn busy, let her come online and like say something as to why the updates are delaying. No one is paying her of course, but when she starts raking in money from her stories, deep down she is going to say "nairaland brought me here", and of course, we the readers too

If you ask me one thing I'm always being skeptical of when I'm bout to start a new story here on nairaland is "will the update come in quickly or will the OP finish the story" I might sound a bit harsh but trust me, it doesn't make sense starting a story you cant keep up with especially when you have many people following the thread. I know the OP might have other things to do like work and other pending issues that calls for attention, the OP should understand people following this thread are also working and have things to attend to. We can't just come here all the time to check for updates and you don't get any for like 24hrs now.... That sh*t can be frustrating mehn..


In fact, I am angry right now *in lasisi elenu's voice*