Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 12:27am On Jul 09, 2015 |
joseph1832: Happy birthday OMA4U. Thank you, sir Joseph. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The New Man By Femi Ademiluyi by OMA4U(m): 12:26am On Jul 09, 2015 |
timpaker: You read that book too? That book is classic! I wonder why it is not rated amongst the best books in Africa. That book is just too good. The plot, the twist, the characters, tragedy, in fact it's one of the best. It won ANA PROSE PRIZE 1994, and that's all. I hope it will be adapted into movie some day. It's classic! 7 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry By Marcus Garvey by OMA4U(m): 5:45pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
Garvey1: Poetry by Marcus Garvey,The world is Hell
The world is hell
as man shows it,
The creatures are of steel
To live is of superior wit
to fail is thus to feel
No smile is genuine my friend
its all a pleasing lie
Be ever ready to defend
or shape your mind to die. Nice one, Marcus. Keep it coming. |
Literature › Re: What Will You Do If Your New Book Sells 1 Million Copies? by OMA4U(m): 5:28pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
Rounakid: See mumu question ooo...
Then you put more copies into printing...
This is why ilike Igbo... They dnt ask dis kinda question...  Baba how far you na! Did you even read the post at all? Na wa! 1 Like |
Literature › Re: What Book Impacted You The Most? by OMA4U(m): 5:23pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
ApexTitan: The Alchemist is a classic. I read it many years ago but the story stuck. I recently came across another of Paulo Coehlo's work, Manuscripts Found in Accra, didn't like it much, it seemed like another type of The Prophet by Kahlil Gibran. I didn't even finish reading it. Kahlil Gibran's The Prophet is another classic book: full of wisdom and inspiration. Gibran was a good man to have written such a book. Madman by Gibran is also good. |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 5:19pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
Skimpledawg: HBD OMA4U, tho am not a poem fanatic, av heard of ya great work in d poetry section ... Keep up d good work boss!!! More grace n wisdom. Wishing u da best bdae eva filled with love... #nohomo Skimpledawg! Thank you, sir. More grace and wisdom to us all. Thank you. |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 5:15pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
texanomaly: How did I miss this one?
Happy birthday OMA4U!  Hey Tex! Thank you for the wishes and for standing firmly behind me all the time. Take my *hugs* |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 5:12pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
Divepen1: Happy Birthday Oma4u...
Happy Birthday baba
I don't know if you like bat a
but your life will never as bitter as batter
rather, it would be smooth like butter
because, to me, you are more than a brother
I pray your glory shine to yonder
where many would wonder
how such rare, prepared and unique had not been noticed before.
Please enjoy
Flendour
and have an always-sweet life as you grow in good health. Dive Boss!!! My gratitude is great, sir. Thank you. |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 5:09pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
BobUg28: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU COMRADE OMA4U
Over the years sir, you have made your marks across diverse areas of human endeavour and I/we(Nairalander(s) and poetry lovers) must continue to enjoy the indelible impression which your undisputed reputation has created.
So, with deep sense of ecstasy and a heart-full of delight, I wish to gladly express my profound gratitude for your indelible act of kindness, sense of humour,and lenient manner of approaching delicate matters/issues without degenerating profanity with your level of wits and level of acuity.
Happy birthday bru! I share in your happiness! Wow! Thank you so much, BobUg28. I appreciate your comment. God bless you, sir. |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 5:05pm On Jul 08, 2015 |
Jumizie13: Hbd OMA Thank you, baby. I appreciate you. |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 10:22am On Jul 08, 2015 |
Freemanan: Hailings...
More years Mate Thank you so much, Freemanan. Are you also 7 7? |
Literature › Re: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by OMA4U(m): 10:16am On Jul 08, 2015 |
LarrySun: Better late than never. It's never too late to celebrate a rare gem.
This was another glorious day a star was born. Because he lives, we can smile at the beauty the world has brought forth.
Thank you, OMA, for agreeing to stay alive when you were conceived. If you had declined the invitation into this world, World War III would have begun, Ebola would have wiped off humanity from the face of the earth, and perhaps, the ozone layer would have given way. Thank you, sir, for being born.
You are the knight on a white horse, You are a slayer of dragons, You are amazing. You're a literary warrior, You shoot them with bullets of syntax, And if your gun jams, You knock them down with its butt. You are the angel Who can dance on the head of a pin, And each time you sneeze, The world jumps through the eye of a needle.
God could not be everywhere, therefore He made you. You've healed me with your brilliant touch. Let the world dance and sing, for another joyful day is now.
Thank you for being my friend. Thank you for being a brother. I love you in more ways than one. And we'll remain together forever.
Happy birthday, OMA4U. An amazing poet, a great novelist and an awesome friend. Many happy returns.
Cheers! Wow! On seeing this, I'm but imbued with a great gust of emotion. LarrySun, as you celebrate a day I cherish with me, you will never know shame for the rest of your life. I'm glad to have you, my great brother. If, perhaps, there's another life, I hope our lines of lives intersect again. Thank you and God bless you, The Wordsmith. |
Literature › Re: What Book Impacted You The Most? by OMA4U(m): 6:22pm On Jul 07, 2015 |
The Alchemist by Paulo Coehlo. It's a must read for everyone who aspires to be great. 6 Likes 1 Share |
Literature › Re: HBD Larry by OMA4U(m): 11:44pm On Jul 01, 2015 |
wow! See as the babe cast Larry sha. Nice one!
Happy birthday once more. 1 Like |
Literature › Join Me To Wish Larry Sun Happy Birthday by OMA4U(op): 11:02am On Jul 01, 2015 |
Happy birthday, the great and ever brilliant writer, Larry Sun. May you know joy all the days of your life. Sound Mind shall not depart from you. Love shall abide with you forever.
Happy Birthday once again. 2 Likes |
Literature › Re: The Nemesis Of Daddy (A Short Story) by OMA4U(m): 11:20pm On Jun 29, 2015 |
'The execrable conducts of our pedigree has resulted in the superflous paucity in the theory of we members of the budding posterity.' Love this! |
Poems For Review › Re: The Convict by OMA4U(m): 11:15pm On Jun 27, 2015 |
I read this series all over. Sir Tim, you are a great poet!
Is this the end? Come and continue abeg |
Poems For Review › Re: Epitaph by OMA4U(m): 8:59pm On Jun 25, 2015 |
noble4d: Dedicated to my father.
Here lies humble heart daddy Who died while smiling himself witty He held my hands softly Thence closes his eyes gently. He promised to take me see matches Whence i have pass my worries. Now that nature shimmer He ended up six feet under. Accept my condolence, bro. Death is a rite of passage for every man. Be strong. By the way, how have you been doing? |
Romance › Re: "I Am Tired Of Being His Sex Machine And Abortion Bag" by OMA4U(m): 8:49pm On Jun 25, 2015 |
What I have observed on Nairaland prompted me to say this:
I don't think nairaland is the right place to seek advise. Yes! I wonder if some people are actually what or who they think or believe they are. The kind of reply you get on social media in Nigeria when you air your problems is PATHETIC. And it's more pathetic because some others have bigger problems.
Besides, some people find it so difficult to read, perhaps to read and understand, while some who never bother to read the first sentence will post a comment. Who do you expect?
If you can't help, you can simply skip the thread. It's better to do that than abusing (or adding salt to the wound) of the wounded.
It's my opinion. Geddatrigghttt? |
Poems For Review › Re: Sojourning Mind by OMA4U(m): 6:10pm On Jun 24, 2015 |
timpaker: [b] A GIRL UNLOVED
A girl unloved, A fondness she pleads, A friend, a companion Is all she needs.
While her shadow mocks her, In the loneliness of the hour Life's ferule caresses her skin Her hopes sags before her power.
Her face beautifully battered With tattooed tears and sorrows. Yesterday's scars glows today And uncertainty preepmt tomorrow.
Rejected by life, Parents eloped with death, The world admitted it ain't Ready for her birth.
Should she be proud Of her breath Or choke in the weakness Of her strenght?
Her heart is heavy With lead emptiness, Laughter is outlandish And so is happiness.
When a vulture Followed her to the meadow, She knew death has come To flirt with her and her shadow.
Into its arm, she ran To embrace it like a friend, Absconding into oblivion, Oh! Her pain has come to an end. A girl unloved, Here's the friend you've found A hungry bird dinning With you on the ground.[/b] The most striking feature of this poem is how the rhymes infuse FLOW and RHYTHM. Wow!The first time I'd read boss's poem and understand it at once. |
Literature › Re: On Wings Of Insanity (Short Story) by OMA4U(m): 11:26pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
LarrySun: On Wings of Insanity
Specially dedicated to OMA4U; a great poet and an awesome friend. Hehehehehe.... I don't even know what to say. All in all, thank you, brother. It's a castle of pride to be so honoured by the Great Larry Sun. Thank you, sir. Back to the story, from the opening sentences I sense another great story. Write on; write more; write well. |
Nairaland General › Re: Happy Birthday, Texanomaly by OMA4U(m): 8:47pm On Jun 09, 2015 |
I saw this now. Larry Sun, you are a blessing to our generation.
There are lyrics written across the sky
Songs are being sung high above
The dancing cloud has refused to die
To rejoice with her whose heart is a feather of dove
The stars assemble to etch beautiful words
On sacred tablet of the firmament
Beaming through the dark night -
Happy birthday, Amazing Tex. |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by OMA4U(m): 8:12pm On Jun 09, 2015 |
OMG! I have been too far away. I missed the poetry lessons. |
Nairaland General › Re: Happy Birthday Laykorn by OMA4U(m): 12:04am On Jun 05, 2015 |
Hey Our Own Powerful Laykorn!!! Our Own Honourable Vice President. Happy Belated Birthday, sir.
This is coming late. Pardon me, sir? |
Literature › Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag by OMA4U(m): 9:21pm On May 27, 2015 |
Sigh! I'm finally following Chilo's story back. Ishilove describes and narrates the life of Chilo that it begins to seem like a real being. Kudos to you, ma'am. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Black Maria by OMA4U(m): 10:05pm On May 16, 2015 |
A drop of Larry's ink is sweeter than honey; far more addictive than drugs. It has more affinities than a beautiful damsel and as well possesses an immense power of seduction.
I started reading BM from page 7 and now I'm here only within three hours. In fact, Larry is a ...... (no word can describe his prowess). God bless you, Sir. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) by OMA4U(m): 2:24pm On May 15, 2015 |
Let us know who Otega and Keziah were. Tell us our their past; their triumphs and failures.
The end part of the first post is poor too. Create suspense and make your story great. You have got a nice plot. Develop it well. Thank you. 7 Likes 1 Share |
Literature › Re: The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) by OMA4U(m): 2:19pm On May 15, 2015 |
akpobi: A bike headlight was seen by the police officers at a check point "who be that"?. I thought okada has been banned in this state,one of the officers said. Park well,come down. Remove your head gear. A female that looked as if she was in her late twenties was the face behind the head gear. "don't you know that they have banned bike in delta state". "No,i had no idea",she said."are you new in this place",the officer said."yeah i am". We cant just let you go like that na. So find kola for us or we will book you,and you will follow us to the station. "okay let me check". She tapped her right pocket. But it didn't sound as if there was anything in it. So she put her hand in her left pocket of her trouser. The looks on her face changed."i knew i didn't leave it",she said. The officers smiled. She brought out a gun and pulled the trigger on the two officers,collected their guns and decapitated the two officers and kept them in a bag and zoomed of
--- to be continued--- follow and reply This story is not well written. The opening sentence is poor. It could be better this way: The police officers at the checkpoint saw a bike headlight approaching.... My humble opinion, please. 12 Likes |
Literature › Re: A Toast Of Empty Cans - A Short Story by OMA4U(m): 7:39pm On May 14, 2015 |
Well narrated! I knew you were good, but now I realise you are better. Work on those parts that need to be worked on.
God bless you, Sir Laykorn. |
Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by OMA4U(m): 6:27am On May 13, 2015 |
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Poems For Review › Re: Sojourning Mind by OMA4U(m): 10:01pm On May 08, 2015 |
joseph1832: Nigeria the pot South Africa the kettle. Why? Tribalism and ethnic sentiment has been going on since the time we were amalgamated, even after then, the events of the civil war and post civil war speaks volumes about how we will murder our fellow Nigerians here in cold blood and feel good about it, only for us to cry wolf when we see them being beaten and murdered abroad!.
My opinion though!. Great analysis. Well done, sir. I love the diction used in this poem. I doff my hat, Sir Timpaker. |
Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by OMA4U(m): 9:08pm On May 08, 2015 |
LarrySun: Thank you so much, sir, for reading. I'm happier that you enjoyed reading it. I promise never to disappoint you, sir.
About publishing; I want to get published, I want to get published than anything else. But, unfortunately, publishing seems like a tough venture. With many attempts, I've discovered that you have to be connected with people of high status for you to get published with good publishers. I don't want to settle for less. I refuse to acknowledge the offers of the mushroom publishers who offer only paltry sums. This isn't pride; it's just that I've sacrificed too much for my stories to allow them fade into obscurity after a few months of getting published. I know nobody; I'm just a simple guy who lives alone with a table, chair, pen and paper. Many have advised me to delve into self-publishing, but fund is also another tiny straw. I finished The Brand of Cain in 2010; after five years, it has gotten to that stage where I'm no more in haste to get published. Funny enough, my frustration inspired me to create the Ariel character in the sequel . I'm sure that one day, somehow, my stories will bloom to the world. The light at the end of the bridge is what keeps me going; it's what's making me plot stories over stories, and I'm not going to stop until I give my last sigh, even if that light I see in the tunnel is the flash of an oncoming train, I'll remain steadfast.
Thank you so much, sir, for your concern. May God bless you and your family. Hopefully, one day, you will lie in your cosy room reading a paperback by Larry Sun . This is touching..... 1 Like |