360prince:
oops! When I first started this story it got to a point where it was forwarded to front page, so I don't they'll post it there again.

i think u should open another thread and make it part2, while u provide a link on the thread to the part 1, it will be forwarded again. Trust me.

@360prince,i really love ur writeups,i am highly impressed,i have been following dis thread 4rm ur 1st post,is jst dat i am kinda silent reader,thumbs up bro,more grease 2 ur elbow.

Nawa oooo,is this how dis story will end?

'Shawer' couldn't stop laughing

I beg when u go start d part two of dis story,na dis story make me register to Nairaland.I beg make it sharp I dey wait. interesting story anyway

Prince you are a very talented writter I love the story from page 1 to 80 though a lot of blunder were made but you tried, the story did'nt end well sha

Waw.i learnt a great deal frm ur story.coz it shows me God works in way we cant c.

Nice story prince Buh to be sincere I don't like d ending at all

Captainswag225:
i think u should open another thread and make it part2, while u provide a link on the thread to the part 1, it will be forwarded again. Trust me.

Thanks for your suggestions captain.. I'm gonna work on that.. Thanks for reading this Lil story.. Invite ur Friends to read it

tundexweb:
@360prince,i really love ur writeups,i am highly impressed,i have been following dis thread 4rm ur 1st post,is jst dat i am kinda silent reader,thumbs up bro,more grease 2 ur elbow.

don't be a silent reader bro.. Just wake and comment. I appreciate your encouragement

sheyflixy1:
Nawa oooo,is this how dis story will end?

nop. Just sit, search and expect the unthinkable from me. Thanks

360prince:
don't be a silent reader bro.. Just wake and comment. I appreciate your encouragement

ok.u are welcome...

Holanid:
Nice sha...bt d way u'v been describin aw wicked ur snrs r scares me... I cant imagine snrs doin dat,...coz i dnt tink d skul is a private skul... Or maybe tis just a fiction anyway

Man private skuls can b brutal
Back then our seniors bin de chance our teachers die
If teacher n our senior give different orders at same time we go rather obey d senior cos d teacher no go de dia when dem de brutalise us

For mind u don write story o , u still need to learn alot frm Rachealfst n co....

This is very interesting and catchy story but pls always keep focus and don't write why tired because it leads to misspelling and wrong arrangement. For example , you left Mrs grace room and arrived home at 9:45pm why Uduak is already waiting for you, then u follow Uduak to see her uncle and arrived there 8:30 or 8pm at same day. That was wrong. Pls keep note

"She boarded a 'cap' to move 'us' around town". 2. We ate sallat. Pls keep note and improve. Good work am following.

HOW CAN SHE (ESCOURTED) YOU,IS SHE A MILITARY,(ACCOMPNIED) IS THE WORD YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO USE THERE.

*summit- submit
*perhaps, you dare not disobey his command whenever he speaks - perhap means maybe which means ur sentence is wrong.
*I had sweated profusely and so, I reluctantly advanced to a mango tree and stood under it shades-means u did nt want 2 get out of d sun, drop d word reluctantly.
*I exhaled and located Miss Grace hostel block-u locate a place u are going 2 4 d first tym nd nt one u already know.
*she beckoned me to enter-beckoned is 2 cal someone wit a hand sign, hw do u do dat 2 sum1 who is behind a door.
*When i intruded into her room-intrude is entering without permission, she already permitted u nd also ur mum does nt intrude into d kitchen cos its hers; she's nt supossed 2 take permission frm u.
*i saw her tying towel as she was about dashing into the bathroom to shower-dash means run, mind hw u use it.
*I repeating same track when it stops playing-"i repeated the same track".
*She was drained from her hair down to her feet-she just had a shower, she's supposed 2 b wet.
*Sometime, she tempted me anytime she sees me around-"sometimes, she tempts me".
*Grace later advanced towards- change "advanced towards" to "moved to" or "went to".
*She came closer and threw her body on the bed spraying her legs apart-its spreading her legs, no need for the word "apart".
*The selected track was still playing when we started argument-"we started arguing" or "we started an argument".
Just write in plain english nd stop using big grammars, dats where ur problem is. U don't know how 2 use them properly

Prince Ma Real Gee! I Have Been Following Yaa Story Twas Wonderful Buhh Were Is D Part Or Season 2

Mind the use of Tenses. Your command of English is very poor.The story was so drab

Coming back later