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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by adebriana(f): 8:54pm On Mar 03, 2017
Chumzy, this is not fair o. why did you let them get this far, just to separate them like that, after everything. I suspected this from the beginning, but u denied it. What will happen to the child? A product of incest? How would they move on? This story is becoming tragic o

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Re: Red Ashes by TheBlessedMAN: 8:56pm On Mar 03, 2017
oh... And yet again... CHUMZYPINKY, THE PEN MISTRESS STRIKES AGAIN..!!..


*U wil knw the Writer is already taking it too personal, when her Custom starts raiding market womans shop 4 smuggled rice at 2.a.m midnight.

I wonder y all this Pen mistress likes purnishing the Nigerians that voted 4 Buhari in their stories!



Must u purnish Biafrans 4 the sins of ojukwu? Must u purnish ur characters with heavy heartbreaks and recessive happenings?


if u continue treating ur characters in this demeaning manners, i wonder which sane person wil volunteer to b ur next victimized character in ur next story... Even if u offer to pay them with all the Abacha loot... Am sure they won't want to experience any of ur kirikiri purnishments..


u are still wanted 4 the murder of Chioma, the rape of Jolade, the amnesia of Mabel, the revengeful death sentence of Chucks and the incèstuous acts of A certain guy... Yet, u dnt wanna repent? Now u wanna kill the latest Couple-to-be in Oshogbo kwara state? Its apparent that ur Conscience is already on low ba3..


[b] pls i pray liably that u cease fire b4 u run out of characters... And start employing ghostly characters..



I bow out in Anger.. Until u start showing ur readers why our Nigerians should vote 4 ur Buhari again..

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Re: Red Ashes by Shittaakeem(m): 9:18pm On Mar 03, 2017
haaaa what is this

which kind twist be this
mummy c u no try at all
Bleep Bleep Bleep

sad sad angry
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:19pm On Mar 03, 2017
Prettyhurts:


Is it your kidnap?? Are you the kidnapee or kidnapper. cheesy cheesy



Ywc dear. Maybe when your son will marry my future daughter we go kill all the edible living things till den manage that #5
lol, funny u. So frm 2day, u're ogom
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:22pm On Mar 03, 2017
cutediva87:
Bia my daughter namesake what's all this na ? does it mean that all the while that Mabel and Chioma reconciled, Mabel didn't remember that she slept with chioma's husband at on point in her life or she didn't know that Nene is chioma's daughter? biko clarify me I'm confused. by the I want to see you where is that you number let me add you on watssap and see your pics
Mabel had amnesia remember? She regained her memory on d weddin day
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:23pm On Mar 03, 2017
Queenbee123:
I cannot take it no more... In Tuface tone. It cant be

Who's mummyM, Kaka's mum? Abi nah mummy Mabel?
Please let this be a dream
What of their blood oat.....
Oh NOOOOOOOOOOO, THIS IS GETTING OUT OF HANDS.
SERIOUSLY CRYING HERE.
IT CANT BE. Please tell me its a LIE
mummyM is Mabel
Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 9:32pm On Mar 03, 2017
waoh! diz more Dan ridiculous.....
Re: Red Ashes by Hadampson(m): 9:35pm On Mar 03, 2017
harameede99:
wu dare du dat boo shld we evict im frm nairaland foreva?
Let leave her 4 now.. u knw she has been away 4rm nairaland 4 decade nw..
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 10:00pm On Mar 03, 2017
[quote author=Prettyhurts post=54245587]
Is it your kidnap?? Are you the kidnapee or kidnapper. cheesy cheesy


hmmmmm anything u talk is not my quamsine idgaf I have stated me mind

Re: Red Ashes by tusinsola(f): 10:00pm On Mar 03, 2017
In as much I fell in love with this story , I don't like the turn of event for Nene and Nathan.Good job Chumzypinky.
Re: Red Ashes by Ikigia: 10:19pm On Mar 03, 2017
Chumzypinky:

I regretted everything.

I regretted leaving my wife and daughter alone. I regretted causing the death of my life. I regretted sleeping with Mabel. I regretted signing those divorce papers.





I saw it coming......well-done
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:25pm On Mar 03, 2017
But Mummy Chumzypinky, why break my heart this way na? Pls let them go for DNA test abeg
Re: Red Ashes by Maryclaire1(f): 10:31pm On Mar 03, 2017
shocked shocked shocked ..you have got to be kidding me...after all their gra gra lovey dovey cry....great work ma'am
Re: Red Ashes by Niwdog(m): 10:54pm On Mar 03, 2017
What kind of dream is that? Chumzy if na play stop am o
Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 11:11pm On Mar 03, 2017
Niwdog:
What kind of dream is that? Chumzy if na play stop am o
EXACTLY!!
maybe its all a dream but i can't figure out d starting point.
Re: Red Ashes by ADECULATE(f): 11:29pm On Mar 03, 2017
Pls chumzypinky nt dis pleeeeeeeeese. It shuld be a dream or sumtin. Pls do sumtin
Re: Red Ashes by paulgabrielz: 1:22am On Mar 04, 2017
baba chucks na father of all nations like 2baba.first chioma then Mabel and pamela .won't be suprised kaka mama self play away game with am. angrybaba chucks na father of all nations like 2baba.first chioma then Mabel and pamela .won't be suprised kaka mama self play away game with am.

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Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 5:35am On Mar 04, 2017
Pinky this must a dream cry cry

Yhu can't end this story this naw.....

Abeg oooo.....
Ah dey fear for dem pop

Afta all der went through to keep their love going...naw this?
No it can't be possible
It must be a dream lipsrsealed

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Re: Red Ashes by Queenbee123: 6:10am On Mar 04, 2017
Abeg oooooo, I don come with another question ooooo. Who did Nathan beat that led him to the cell and this same mummyM tell us say nah him papa. Abeg make nepa bring light may we see brighter ooooo
Re: Red Ashes by PrinceOFprince(m): 6:24am On Mar 04, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
oh... And yet again... CHUMZYPINKY, THE PEN MISTRESS STRIKES AGAIN..!!..


*U wil knw the Writer is already taking it too personal, when her Custom starts raiding market womans shop 4 smuggled rice at 2.a.m midnight.

I wonder y all this Pen mistress likes purnishing the Nigerians that voted 4 Buhari in their stories!



Must u purnish Biafrans 4 the sins of ojukwu? Must u purnish ur characters with heavy heartbreaks and recessive happenings?


if u continue treating ur characters in this demeaning manners, i wonder which sane person wil volunteer to b ur next victimized character in ur next story... Even if u offer to pay them with all the Abacha loot... Am sure they won't want to experience any of ur kirikiri purnishments..


u are still wanted 4 the murder of Chioma, the rape of Jolade, the amnesia of Mabel, the revengeful death sentence of Chucks and the incèstuous acts of A certain guy... Yet, u dnt wanna repent? Now u wanna kill the latest Couple-to-be in Oshogbo kwara state? Its apparent that ur Conscience is already on low ba3..


[b] pls i pray liably that u cease fire b4 u run out of characters... And start employing ghostly characters..



I bow out in Anger.. Until u start showing ur readers why our Nigerians should vote 4 ur Buhari again..
Mr Theblessed.. Yuh are really amazing with words... Hmmmm, yur sarcasm is out of this world...

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Re: Red Ashes by PrinceOFprince(m): 6:28am On Mar 04, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
Hmmmnyhemnnnyhe... * I sigh in Igbo language.. CHUMZYPINKY... Baby, I cork my gun 4 u 3times o..(take am *GBOSA! Gbosa!! Gbosa!!!)


It wil b d 2nd worst thing i eva do with my Godgiven Hands if i ever read a great and Nice story like this without commenting..(the 1st was masturbating anytime my Gf sends me a 'PLEASE CALL ME 'I LOVE U' sms) So i really have to comment very fast cos she just sent me another sms...

U wil know its a gud story, when its becoming a Regular candidate of Front Page...


U wil know the Authoress (name of a female writer) of the story is a firstclass graduate of 'STREET FIGHTING' when u see 2 beautiful, but sadly senseless Characters fighting and pinching each other to the extent of pouring Sand'ine' on each others mouth.. Thats not the work of the Devil, buh the handiwork of a renowned Street fighter Authoress..


U will know a Gud story when u see that Common sense is not excluded from any Update...


BACK TO KANIENE=>

*pls when will u grow up? U av been living this thugeretory life since the invention of Vanaculars in primary sch...

*THUGERY characters don't last.. They always gets overthrown by Silent, Mild and easy going characters like [fill in the gap]

The devil have been requesting 4 Whatsapp digits so that he can add u to the *THE BONAFIDE CANDIDATES OF HELL* group on whatsapp, and yet u plan on sucesfully giving him with this recessive attitude of urs?
..

* My dear Kaniene, U need to start acting maturely b4 Buhari gots deported back to the country by Donald Okechukwu Trump, just like other sturborn nigerians that refuses to come back home..


well, this are my little Pisses of advice 4 u Mrs Ruggedy.. Pls be safe and take care of that Next citizen of this country that u are harbouring in ur Womb


KAMSY... Pls keep up the gud work.. U av sucesfully overthrown that dreadlocked girl called Kaniene frm my favourite characters list.. U are really great... Thanks to Chumzypinky for giving us this wonderful character...


Well, i wait in higher Coma of expectation for either the Return of Buhari or Ur next common sense Update, Chumzy... Keep it up..


TEAM HERO..
this comment is the best i ever seen frm anyone... Yhu're really talented with words... Keep it up bro..

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Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 7:35am On Mar 04, 2017
Bia chumzypinky do u have any problem with weddings? Y cnt the weddings in this story ever end well? First Kamsy was left at d alter, Jolade discovered her husband is impotent, and now dis, i am nt finding it funny again oh

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Re: Red Ashes by Gideonzino(m): 7:36am On Mar 04, 2017
I don't know how to react to this o. Ma'am writer pls temper this harsh revelation with a speedy reconciliation so that both the honorable writer and the restive readers will be at peace again. Tanshu ma. *Kpoko for you from *Warri .
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:01am On Mar 04, 2017
Dis Story No Go Make Sense If Nathan And Kainaine Are Siblings Oh.After Followin Dere Romance Story 4 More Dan 2 Month My Dear U Cant End Dis Story Lyk This.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:35am On Mar 04, 2017
Queenbee123:
Abeg oooooo, I don come with another question ooooo. Who did Nathan beat that led him to the cell and this same mummyM tell us say nah him papa. Abeg make nepa bring light may we see brighter ooooo
Mabel lied to him dat Jude was his dad whereas Chuks was his father.
Re: Red Ashes by VeeGeeCee(f): 8:55am On Mar 04, 2017
angry grin why chuks come dis wedding now? Buh wetin MummyM do na 'Medicine After Death'.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:59am On Mar 04, 2017
Update deleted by author

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Re: Red Ashes by Queenbee123: 9:33am On Mar 04, 2017
This love in unbreakable. Chinese people dry marry them siblings nah. Nathan and Nene, elope jooooooo
Re: Red Ashes by Queenbee123: 9:35am On Mar 04, 2017
Chumzypinky:

Mabel had amnesia remember? She regained her memory on d weddin day

It's better she loss that memory patapata jaweh. Which kind stupid memory be that

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Re: Red Ashes by cutediva87(f): 10:07am On Mar 04, 2017
OK thanks chiommy since I've tried to reason with you no way, let me plead with pls, pls , pls and pls do your magic don't separate them by making them siblings I beg of you.. I'm crying already. **sobbing** thanks for the update by the way
Re: Red Ashes by cutediva87(f): 10:11am On Mar 04, 2017
Queenbee123:


It's better she loss that memory patapata jaweh. Which kind stupid memory be that
queenbee na God go Bless you, which kind stupid memory be that

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Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 10:17am On Mar 04, 2017
nawaooooo! y. must MummyM wait til the wedding day to regain her memory.....but wait ooooo, I tot she said Nathan belongs to one Senator... waz dat his name sef!?

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