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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:18am On Mar 04, 2017 |
cutediva87:lol |
Re: Red Ashes by clearboos(m): 10:34am On Mar 04, 2017 |
madam Chumzypinky,b4 mummyM lost her memory,she knew Kaniene and her mom,and were both frds,and she knew chuks was Kaniene father,she lost her memory, on the wedding day then remember that chuks is the father on Nathan, mummy Chumzypinky I am nt understanding u again o. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 11:07am On Mar 04, 2017 |
mummy pinky y are yhu doing this to oua blissful lover nah... 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 11:07am On Mar 04, 2017 |
mummy pinky y are yhu doing this to oua blissful lover nah... 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by domido(m): 11:35am On Mar 04, 2017 |
When this story started I didn't read it. I was like what's the difference between this and other romance stories. I did that even up to page 100,but the moment I started reading it I saw the twists in the story I was like wow!!! When u think you know what's gonna happen something comes up. I like this. Nice one sis. |
Re: Red Ashes by sexy377: 11:36am On Mar 04, 2017 |
hmmn this is where i sigh n say wahala don wear covershoe 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Paradise163(f): 11:37am On Mar 04, 2017 |
clearboos:If am right, before mummyM lost her memory, she know Kaniene but she never knew she's her Friend's daughter. Remember she never liked Kaniene then cos she had a plan to get Nathan married to Jolade before her memory loss 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:14pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
clearboos:its not me u are not understanding, its the story u're not understanding. Go back to previous updates. When Jude was in the hospital, you remember Mabel saying she had lied to d extent that she had started decieving herself? There was an update or updates where i bolded some sentences. If you go bak 2 dos updates and read the bolded parts, u'll understand everything now |
Re: Red Ashes by yusufibrahim(m): 12:27pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky thanks for the updates more grace to u |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:50pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Update deleted by author 10 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:56pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
wizsolzy: No wonder the oza oza blood is in you *****winks. Runs to carry broom in case of you know na***** |
Re: Red Ashes by VeeGeeCee(f): 1:59pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
what a wonderfull story. But it didnt end well for Kainene. And that Myra of a girl sha the thunder wey go faya am go come with doctor's prescribtions ; one in the morning, one in the afternoon, one in the night. Myra is to be blamed for Nath's death. |
Re: Red Ashes by katchycouture(f): 2:03pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
That kainene is a big idiot. ....she killed that Nathan with her stubborn attitude..... The girl was obviously a spoilt brat...her mum didn't bring her up well atall 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:04pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Wow...........wat a story.......... 4 me...........Nene is 2 blame. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:14pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: BLOOD OF TheBlessedMan. What in the world of bikini bottom is this. *****cleans eyes with hands, cleans ear with cotton Bud, places his hands on his head***** heeeeeeyyyyyyyyyy. Chumzypinky did I hear you say "SIBLINGS!!!!!!!!!!". mmbanu, it can't be possible, I say it can't be possible. Infact I'm going to consult amadioha. *****leaves nairaland enroute amadioha's shrine***** 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:16pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Shey you know say your husband dey view this thread. |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:27pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
One word "THRILLING" |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:35pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
So Nathan finally died, what a tragedy!!!.Please where is the continuation abi epilogue. Don't tell me that's the conclusion, please I can't take it. Myra supposed to pay for her sins, kaka married, chuks DEAD, Nene and Mabel accepting their mistakes. Seriously I blame Mabel for her annoying amnesia that decided to return with a lie, chuks for being a stupid father, Nene for her stubbornness. If only she dropped the gun, this wouldn't have happened. Truly the ASHES were really RED. You kept me glued to my phone like an addict, wanting and begging for more like a newborn baby. Now my data subscription can expire in peace and I won't be bothered. You're good Bae, very very good with your ink. I wish you safe delivery, may you have a stress-free, no drama delivery and may God bless you and your family. Ezinwaanyi dị ụkọ. 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by chara019: 2:46pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
lmao.....like seriously Nathan died?choi I'm really lol here o,thought the gun part was gonna be a dream,kai... ma chumzy well done,so Tory iyaff finish,thought it would be a 'and they lived happily ever after story'so so tragic, sorry Nene,*cries*ma chumzy let's rewrite the story that the accidental discharge, claimed Myra and Chuks life...not Nathan.....*wails* Thank you ma,for your time...have a safe delivery..... |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:57pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Prettyhurts:lol, thanks. Mabel was just confused sha. U know she was sleeping with Jude and Chuks together. And she slept with Chuks more so when d pregnancy clicked, she naturally thought it was Chuks. Thanks for reading dear. U were one of the people that inspired me more in this story 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by deewhydoski(m): 3:02pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
I ave only one person to blame wch is nene...she is so aggressive, she never take things easily. I dont think killing chuks is d next thing for her to do. We all know dat chuks is a moster. She suppose to disown him and not to kill him. We all know what d laws entail, if u kill someone u shall also be killed by hanging...myra is a devil, even some women are devil. Guys u need to pray fervently befor u choose a partner. Nathan am sm sorry |
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 3:05pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
I don't really blame anyone. But Kainene is too hot headed and lacks patience. She is always jumping into the conclusion. A woman must have self restraints in everything. However, I don't know y U had to kill Nathan. Although a beautiful twist, it's kind of a kill joy. Gut shots hardly turn out fatal unless it hits a vital organ. U could have simply injured Nathan critically without killing him. It's so irritating. I know some injustices go unpunished but Myra should get something coming to her. Chuks already had his own. In all, I'll rate ur story 7.5 out of 10 points. U really tried. 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by esthyope(f): 3:05pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
mummy chumpzy iyaff kill me o........Holy jeeezzz!!!.....why do u av to kill Nathan-my red ashes crush nau? *crying* |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:07pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Ywc dear. Let me know when you start another interesting story. |
Re: Red Ashes by Maryclaire1(f): 3:14pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
I guess they all have their flaws. Part of the blame should be on chuks for always sticking his joystick in every skirt. Mabel too have Some share of the blame letting herself to be seduced by her friend's husbnd... Nene should have been a bit patience her being too forward and not taking things calmly has caused her Nate.... It sums everything up that we are humans we have our flaws that means we ain't perfect at all Well this has taught us a lesson we shouldn't be quick to take drastic actions concerning things that happens to us we might just end up getting burned chei...I did really picture a sweet, romantic, awesome happy ever after for Nene and Nate but u twist it and make us realise that life can't be all sugar.it's a bit complicated with its ups and down...that's really good and i must commend your good work and always finding time to put a smile on your readers faces thanks ma'am for this interesting piece You are simply unique more wisdom to u and God's blessing on u and your family. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 3:20pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
pinky am crying naw ooo y na choi yhu must buy bobo anbd indomie for me oo before ah stop crying for me ah fink chuks is too be blame for all this if he neva seduced mabel, she would neva had thought that nathan was his son and the weeding would have gone sucessfully.. meanwhile if nene control her temper for a minute jux a minute! nathan would be living naw and their will eventually be planning for their next wedding ok lawd wat appen to myra jux bcuz of a guy mehn left to me she must rot in jail madam pinky nice piece den though ah dunno like the ending buh the story line is awesome wif so many connection er and dere yhu are the best dear... ah wish yhu progress in yhur career(writing ah guess) lol buh yhu must still give me ma bobo o cuz am still crying 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:24pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
ladyverere: Mummy verere like seriously 7.5?? Wawuu!! If you're a lecturer you go stingy with mark. Is not easy for someone(especially a mom of 3 & expecting 1 with a hubby to take care of) to combine her family chores and still come online to write. You're a mom too, one pikin self na work. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 3:26pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Prettyhurts: epp me tew her plz no offence duo ah will give her 9.99 |
Re: Red Ashes by StephanieElla24: 3:38pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
What a wonderful story buh honestly this ending part is wat am still surprised about I mean d twist is too much....u shldnt hv killed Nathan lyk dat just nw that they hv started to enjoy their union. Coming to who is to blame, Chuks is d architect of all these things where Kainene is to be blamed comes when she cannot control her anger like they say"two wrongs can never make a right". Myra shouldn't go scot free ooo let karma visit her she contributed indirectly to the death of Nathan. All the same ....Kudos to ya and a safe delivery , u will give birth in a favour room not labour room and will deliver like the Hebrew women |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:40pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
I Know Dis Story Iz Nt Gonna End Well When I Saw D Title.I Have Been Thinkin And Wondering How The Title Will Corroborate With D Story Bt Sha Welldone. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by adebriana(f): 3:41pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
This story is just too tragic You should have just allowed things remain the way they were instead of bringing Myra into the picture, they did the test on a Saturday and the result was ready on Monday, I don't think she had the time to change it, how did she even know the hospital they were in? If you planned for the DNA test exchange, then Nathan shouldn't have died, or he should have died but they were really siblings. |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:41pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
I Know Dis Story Iz Nt Gonna End Well When I Saw D Title.I Have Been Thinkin And Wondering How The Title Will Corroborate With D Story Bt Sha Welldone.*Though Nt Happy Because Am Still Mourning Nathan Death* |
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