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Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 3:59pm On Jun 16, 2017
missyadorable:
Hahaha
Go on, Michael
Screeew all your wife's maids
When she returns,rub it on her face and beat her up
She will forgive you and work hard to make the marriage work
Fooolish Claire.I hope Michael really hurts her bad, even infecting her with HIV...That will be nice.
I have no pity for her
Jeez sister calm down small na, ur blood dy hot too much how u go wish my poor Claire HIV
Re: United In Betrayal by xprezz02(f): 4:34pm On Jun 16, 2017
gtin:

Jeez sister calm down small na, ur blood dy hot too much how u go wish my poor Claire HIV
Claire is not poor jor,she's foolish

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Re: United In Betrayal by Only1mi(f): 5:03pm On Jun 16, 2017
xprezz02:
Claire is not poor jor,she's foolish

Unfortunately that's what happens in an abusive relationship, and leaving the place of abuse is more difficult than you think. Remember he did not show her that part of him in the beginning, he made sure she was fully in love with him before starting his madness. Usually it's the fear of apprehension from family members that keep abused people in abusive relationships.
Re: United In Betrayal by Tgold1(m): 6:08pm On Jun 16, 2017
Toyin223:
My Brother Am Thinking So Too
good.... let's keep observing how it goes.... Wassup ma'am?
Re: United In Betrayal by cerowo(f): 6:55pm On Jun 16, 2017
Mich is a bigggg jerk.... After all he has made Claire gone through, he hasn't changed a bit.... Can't jst wait 4 both of 2 split...wtf
Re: United In Betrayal by chisiudeh: 8:36pm On Jun 16, 2017
Fighting for what is yours and what you love isn't bad. No matter how high the pain threshold may be, there's always a breaking point. At that point, there's no going back.
Re: United In Betrayal by marvwhite: 9:02pm On Jun 16, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
wow! Wow! This is....is....(swallowing hard)..,..i mean....very.....very, very....infact totally.......

Pamelb, to be sincere am short of words!

Have been walking around with a rigid boner since I started reading this masterpiece!

How can I describe this work o! Gawd please endow my brain with complimentary words! Please abeg!

Chisos, how can someone write a story as this? Highly moralative, educative, sexylative, beautilative infact masturbative and rapinglative!


Am totally, spellbound, mesmerized, overwhelmed, floodwhelmed, oceanwhelmed and earthquakewhelmed by your Manchester in Betrayal PamelB.

You are the best o! I set my bomb for you o! Kwantinue and don't stop.


But how can you do this to me when you know that I just gave birth to twins? Its total wickedness, How can you make me want to hmmmmmm Chumzypinky again barely 3wks after the delievery of our twins with this konji provoking story? Eh? What a fvckinglative story!


Anyways, You never can tell, you may later give me another set of twins if you keep it up. But No let Chumzypinky see that o! That woman can jealous eh? Like Dora like Freda..... Happy sunday to you too
mehn! I swear you are crazy LOL....... Sometimes i subconsiously wait to see your comment like say na story updates,you too get lines full mouth like book pages... grin



#fromYourBiggestfan

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Re: United In Betrayal by xprezz02(f): 9:12am On Jun 17, 2017
Only1mi:


Unfortunately that's what happens in an abusive relationship, and leaving the place of abuse is more difficult than you think. Remember he did not show her that part of him in the beginning, he made sure she was fully in love with him before starting his madness. Usually it's the fear of apprehension from family members that keep abused people in abusive relationships.
you're right dear,the "what will people say" mentality is what is killing many young pple.I hope she won't die sha
Re: United In Betrayal by uminem02(m): 10:08am On Jun 17, 2017
xprezz02:
you're right dear,the "what will people say" mentality is what is killing many young pple.I hope she won't die sha
Make i no talk 4 ur marra sha
Re: United In Betrayal by Toyin223(f): 11:10am On Jun 17, 2017
PamelB We Ar Waiting For U Pls
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 4:32pm On Jun 17, 2017
PamelB y nah. y are you doing dis to us ehn it's not good o. pls we need update faster. Chop kisses
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 4:35pm On Jun 17, 2017
Abeg who knows another captivating story I can read pending the tym PamelB wee give us another update
Re: United In Betrayal by Jtmanager(m): 4:41pm On Jun 17, 2017
Omo its not a small tin
Started from page one now I'm here

I saw commotion on the way sha ,,
Some pipo no just kno how best to channel their opinion

PamelB ure doing a nice job,,, kudus

Besides that Ive noticed a lot of eligible wife material on this thread o,,,(gulps origin )
Chai let me goan make more money first b4 I continue

Once again kudus to the writer


started from page one now I'm here

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Re: United In Betrayal by Jtmanager(m): 4:42pm On Jun 17, 2017
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Re: United In Betrayal by Jtmanager(m): 4:42pm On Jun 17, 2017
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Re: United In Betrayal by marvwhite: 5:37pm On Jun 17, 2017
mehn! See nollywood movie
kudus ma'am..... I mean madam


#ride on
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 6:59pm On Jun 17, 2017
He was happy his dad didn't believe in class and status. He was only concerned about his happiness. Had asked him questions which were necessary and had given his blessings there after. He breathed in relief after the call and dialed his news wife's number;

"hello baby." he said into the receiver

"sir?" her surprised voice asked

"how are you?"

"i am.......i am fine sir."

"uhm. i want you to come to abuja. We need to talk yea?"

"i will be writing an exam next week sir."

"can you just cut the sir thing? Getry, you're not working for me and i don't intend to have you as a worker in the near future so please, cut it off okay?"

"i... i'm sorry sir, i mean, kelvin. Please don't be upset as it will take time for me to......."

"take your time but let it not be forever. i'll book a flight for you after the exam. we need to talk."

"okay."

His phone notified him of an incoming call and he looked at his phone. "CLAIRE"

"alright baby. i will call you later tonight. take care okay."

"thanks for calling."

She hung up and he picked the incoming call;







He was on a call. she was about hanging up when he picked;

"hello pretty face." she heard him say

"evening kel. how are you?"

"i am good baby. you called just at the right time. i've got news. good news baby."

"let's talk over dinner then. you won't believe where i am but once you get my text, come straight here and don't ask questions huh?"

he chuckled from his end.

"are you in abuja?"

"just come to the location i'll send you. i've also got surprise for you."

"alright honey."

She hung up and quickly grafted a message which she forwarded immediately.




He woke up, showered and thought of what to do to keep himself busy when he thought of Kelvin. He lived in Abuja. How could he forget that a good friend stayed in this town? He picked up his phone and began to search for his number. He found it and dialed immediately but the call ended with no rings. He tried again but the server replied him with NETWORK ERROR.
Maybe Kelvin was in an area where network was poor. He would send a message later. For now, he needed to go through the documents for the proposed meeting.





She smiled in content. Her boss was snoring on top of her.
She just hit it big. This was one of her many fantasies.
Her boss was naughty, handsome, meaty down there, talented all round and could go hours non stop, not like Raheem the gateman who barely lasted ten minutes.
She would do anything to make sure this relationship doesn't come to an end. Maybe she would tie him to her using pregnancy. His wife may have turned barren after the miscarriage. She would do anything to make him happy; ANYTHING.




She picked out a denim bum short and white crop singlet. She would rock this outfit with her favorite white snicker. She had sent him her location and he had replied, telling her to dress hot for they would be clubbing all night. Abuja would know she was here. A little fun won't kill y'know.
She called her husband's number but it was switched off so she left a voice note for him and went to shower. He would be here for dinner and small talk before they'll leave for the club.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Dandeson1(m): 7:12pm On Jun 17, 2017
just wen i tot this story was coming to an end... Micheal went back to bn a baskard and yu bringn Phil back to d picture, Sarah meeting whu pass her, atleast getrud no loose, *claps*

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Re: United In Betrayal by yungeez(m): 7:23pm On Jun 17, 2017
Micheal is d biggest fool ever sad
Re: United In Betrayal by Jambo6630: 7:28pm On Jun 17, 2017
PamelB, short update these days, but thank you all the same. Don't keep us waiting for too long before the next update, please. God bless you!
Re: United In Betrayal by chisiudeh: 7:57pm On Jun 17, 2017
Thanks for the update though short . Nice work. The suspense is getting twisted
Re: United In Betrayal by xprezz02(f): 8:43pm On Jun 17, 2017
uminem02:
Make i no talk 4 ur marra sha
Wetin u wan talk b4
Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 8:45pm On Jun 17, 2017
Thanks for the update pamelb. But where did Claire go wrong Michael?
Re: United In Betrayal by uminem02(m): 8:55pm On Jun 17, 2017
xprezz02:
Wetin u wan talk b4
U knw na
Re: United In Betrayal by BlissfulJeff(m): 8:59pm On Jun 17, 2017
nice update
Re: United In Betrayal by Sarang(f): 11:05pm On Jun 17, 2017
crislyn:

I don't support them. Yeah Michael is doing something very bad but he won't realise it if she threads the same part with him. So the best revenge is to make them all realise her innocence, fight for her man and make him respect her and punish her ungrateful sister.
Except PamelB has a special plan to get Phil and Clair together.


What is she saying.. fighting for a LovePeddler? Dude's a LovePeddler. Claire is the only human here..anyway let me continue
Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 3:31am On Jun 18, 2017
Been a while we hear from Amara ooo.

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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 2:54pm On Jun 18, 2017
They were through with dinner and were catching up with interesting stories. He had come, dressed in a denim trouser, white gucci polo and a nike boot. Tonight would be fun.

"so have you told her yet?" Claire asked excitedly

"no dear. she'll be coming here after an exam next week. i need her to be looking at me while i propose. i need to know her reaction, babe, i need her to be looking into my eyes so she won't say no. you don't know how excited i am right now."

"easy lover boy. how come i didn't notice that you had feelings for Gertrude? wow."

"i too didn't see it coming. i'm glad you're with me on this."

"i'm here for you handsome man."

"thank you madam face of jiji. Micheal is so lucky to have you as a companion."

she smiled. first agenda back in Lagos would be to reunite this two friends/brothers. No woman, especially Sarah had the right to separate this two.




A message alert rang out in the sitting room and she picked her phone with shaky hands. she recalled all that happened in the restroom as fresh tears came running down her face.
She had tried to kick his groin but he was faster. he had used that opportunity to ram his fingers into her womanhood and had ended up fisting her. unlike her normal self, she had cried and begged him to stop but he had laughed her to scorn, telling her that the night was just getting started. all her pleas fell on deaf ears.
she stopped begging when another employee walked in on them. she had also pleaded with him to help her but he had ended up being the one to penetrate her while Greg watched from a corner, pleasuring himself with his hands.
They had left her wasted and she had cried her way home.
Life was unfair and she regretted her past.

"hoping to see you on monday baby. you screw well."

she cried out. she blamed no one but herself for what she was passing through. she had paved this path for herself so she won't blame anyone for whatever she was passing through.

Like it wasn't enough, he began to call her;

"what do you want from me? Greg what have i done to you Greg?"

he gave a wicked laugh

"i'm the one who has been sent to ruin you, i'm your shadow baby and you can't run away from me."

"who are you?"

"karma is a b1tch honey. 22nd september 2012. i won't stop till i end you baby. you don't know how happy i was when i saw you at the office for the very first time, your coming to this branch is God's way of telling me that the pain i harboured in my heart for long was necessary and called for. you ruined my sister's life and who am i to do less?"

and he hung up.


22nd september 2012, she thought.
how can she forget? the day she was initiated into the viking world. her first assignment was to inject any of her enemies with a hiv positive blood. she had chosen her course rep, Tochi. Everyone called her T. How was she to know that someone had seen her?

Just as she channeled her thoughts to how T had always insulted her for being a cheap layabout and not accepting to do assignments for her, another text message came in;

"if i were you, i'll run to the hospital in two weeks. rumour has it that George is a carrier. we would love to be careful, won't we?"

And she passed out.





He had just finished speaking to the driver that would be their chaffeur for the night when his phone rang. PHILLIP.
He smiled and picked the call.

"hello Phil."

"what's up man? i dey your town o."

"are you being serious right now?"

"of course. what's your location?"

"i'll text you the name and address of where we will be clubbing tonight. you don't mind, do you?"

"wow. i don't mind dude."

He looked at Claire who was taking a call few steps away.

"dress code is denim and white. don't take long." he said as Claire started walking to him.

"alright. see you soon." he hung up.

"who was that?" Claire asked

"you'll see. ready?"

"of course."

"you better get a sticker and place MARRIED to your face cause i know most guys will be feeling what i'm already feeling."

she laughed innocently and got into the car while Kelvin followed.



HAPPY SUNDAY GUYS

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Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 3:14pm On Jun 18, 2017
Timson01:
everyone derserve a secound chance dont say u have not made mistake in life bw4 our mistake should always be our motivation for change once u have accepted ur flaws no one can use them against u

you said what michael did was a mistake. hope you are still following the story. He is a man LovePeddler who shld be dumped like tissue paper. Abi you wan find another excuse for him.

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Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 3:14pm On Jun 18, 2017
Happy Sunday to u too pamelb, it's abt to go dwn

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Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 3:22pm On Jun 18, 2017
Ehn Phil again!!!! Lemme watch jejely

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Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 3:27pm On Jun 18, 2017
yungeez:

Note: m nt in support to any form of abuse be it in or outside marriage."nw bk 2 d mata",u met nd fell inluv wit a guy so greatly dat u went 2 d altar nd vow 2 stand by each oda till death, along d line he startd misbehavin, u jst dnt throw away dat vow, dey r scared vows, u outh 2 stand by him nd nd giv up on him easily...(i no dat dere quiet a numba of athesist in our society 2day so m writin dis wit d belief dat u arnt 1 of dem), so m gonna say if jesus had given up on us we wont av been here...m sory 2 say bt MARRIAGE is nt 4 evry1, if u r nt strong enough dnt go into it, nobody will kill u, go bcom a babymama to sum1 nd face judgement on d last day

God forbid ooo, but hope if your wife eventually cheats on you, you will come up with all this sermon. Somethings are easier said than done. Hope you will say same thing to a man whose wife cheats on with her Secretary, brother and house help.

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