Youngzubi more ink to your pen. carry on brother

Na confirm movie thriller be this oo

emperorblog:
"em! nor bother ya sef just help me hold the house straight i can open the door


this last part gt me laughing hard

weldone,boss


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God go bless your hustle brotherly,if to say e dey my power i swear i go make your blog better pass Facebook

Nice story bro..... I usually don't comment but keep it up ��

Keep the good work up bro

nice one keep it rolling

Youngzubi how I wish this story can be post by two episodes a day
You are too much your writing skills is extraordinary I fit norminate as a novel laureate bro you are good in your writing skill I hope I can wake up one day to have dis Una type of skills but Nigeria jajagags no allow we youth make we reason well sef

Ur story make sense die. Am just addicted to it lyk superglue. weldonsir.

Iceberg41:
Youngzubi how I wish this story can be post by two episodes a day
You are too much your writing skills is extraordinary I fit norminate as a novel laureate bro you are good in your writing skill I hope I can wake up one day to have dis Una type of skills but Nigeria jajagags no allow we youth make we reason well sef

thanks man,you can do it

youngzubi!!! guy nobody is dragging it with you, i had to read this last update 3 times consecutively due to how it captivates me,guy after you nah still u again and again
keep it up!,forget their comments your work is good thats all

Iceberg41:
Youngzubi how I wish this story can be post by two episodes a day
You are too much your writing skills is extraordinary I fit norminate as a novel laureate bro you are good in your writing skill I hope I can wake up one day to have dis Una type of skills but Nigeria jajagags no allow we youth make we reason well sef

guy you funny o!,nigeria jagajaga no fit allow us oo

phoenixchap:


I done show bro, and let me find out what the fun is around here. You know I love good works

guy hope u dey feel am sha?

Lwkmd Hold d house straight Lol

Youngzubi. i dey feel u. abeg continue jare 4get d comment

bros nor vex na 4rm kano i dy read ur tory..sory say i nova comment..bt na d 1st time i dy comment 4 person tory..e mke sence die..more pussy 2 ur dick

I will keep saying this until the whole of nairaland agrees with me, "guy you are a genius"

kdavid07:
Youngzubi. i dey feel u. abeg continue jare 4get d comment

bro no talk like dat abeg,comments be like inspiration,please always try to help the writer by commenting

Jalvin:
bros nor vex na 4rm kano i dy read ur tory..sory say i nova comment..bt na d 1st time i dy comment 4 person tory..e mke sence die..more pussy 2 ur dick

thanks man,but still,always support the ministry with your comments

care4val:
Ur story make sense die. Am just addicted to it lyk superglue. weldonsir.

thanks bro

tomgab:
I will keep saying this until the whole of nairaland agrees with me, "guy you are a genius"

i comot cap for u jare,thanks brotherly

kevspens:
Nice story bro..... I usually don't comment but keep it up ��

bro always try,just manage dey drop something,nah my only means of getting moral to continue

dyze:
Nice one. Always expecting your updates

naso me sef dey take expect your comments,my man always drop your thoughts nah

Atayis:
baba, u re creative. God bless you

thank you bro

YoungZubi my man. Just keep up the good work. More Ink to you fountain Pen. 3 gbossa for this last part... Got me rolling on the floor. "erm don't bother yourself just help me hold the house straight, i go open the door" ah ah ha Man wan kill me ooooo
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YoungZubi carry goooooo
I am just confident that you own this August Literature award... Please Lemme know when you update Bro #BrotherlyLove

Youngzubi:



God go bless your hustle brotherly,if to say e dey my power i swear i go make your blog better pass Facebook

ool abi nah

i just dey feel ur torry here

help us continue that bottle warrior also

make we know weather ur friend kick boclet

Hold the house straight make i unlock the door...... Crazy Spata ............Hahahaha.... More ink bro

Good work your are doing here

Keep it coming. I enjoy reading your story. The pigeon English make the story sweet more...

Em Youngzubi Just Help Me Hold The Thread Make I Comment, This One Goes Well But As Spana No Dey Board Who Wan Instruct Im Goons Na?

He sigh....

I read down everything quietly until and understood that apart from trying to learn,this is also fun to you.

But...

You failed woefully in some regard.
You didn't carry out research on many of the insinuations you initiatl
Admittedly, no one has monopoly of every information concerning every sphere of life that is why research is compulsory especially when writing a story/book based on one imaginary vision.

Vision/imaginations MUST be altered unless you encountered a TRUE LIFE experience otherwise the audience well versed in a certain area you mentioned in your story would laugh in disbelief and not take you seriously.

A policeman ORDERING a soldier?? IMPOSSIBLE!!!! Even a so called inspector general of police is no match for a merely sergeant in the military nor can he issue order to the said sergeant.

So the so called frank ordering a military man is an insult to the military.

Mmm,a bloody civilian entering into a military interrogation room with such audacity is far from possible. it doesn't happen. Even the wife of a military group captain doesn't have the authority to issue orders at all,at all. Hehehe....I didn't take that seriously and only assuming you are having fun....learning the rope as amateur.

Some audience are just woe by the sex scenes while other by the pigin English. Every heard of the phrase "too much of everything is bad"??

I tell you this most solemnly,the ability to pull the crowd and leave them eagerly anticipating repeatedly depends on the make belief of your story... too much of the sex would bore them.


Be real
Be unpredictable
Be detail in your description,
Create a picture highly difficult to dispute in the mind of your audience and would get them scrambling to refresh this page..

You just took the first step to become a giant in the literacy world.

Best wishes!!!

Oga na Oga,, bros u re d best. I'm loving every update... Keep d fire burning.

Men una done enter another one o with that guy o. Which house him wan hold straight? Drugs bad o lolll. Nice one guy, I dey feel u.....