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Classic (18+) [Book 2 of Xav-Verse] [Completed] / "Ocean Of Secrets" A Story By Millieademi / Matrimony Of Secrets (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Kechbeau: 9:14am On Oct 31, 2020 |
This dele guy, I have always said it, I never liked his character from day one of this story.. This guy is fucking heartless, why don't he assist tinu in this period for now, then later they talk things out on how to handle the children... Must he show himself this period... ThankGod seyi is gradually moving on with her life, let dele continue with his stupid ego.. As for tinu, I don't really feel for her... Her anger landed her in this mess she had with veron, assuming she didn't take those kids away, she wouldn't have met veron.. Whether seyi confronted over something she suspected or not.. She is a woman, she would have faced seyi squarely n report everything to dele than all this twists n mess she is going through now... 2 Likes |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Khriztarl(f): 2:28pm On Oct 31, 2020 |
Tinu shouldn't be blamed for what she did. She acted on her emotions and didn't know she'll meet Mr. Veron. It's been four years. No cuddles. No kisses. No s.ex. She's no doll. To her, Chris Oduah is dead. Her mistake was going to the club. I Mean, she's still beautiful, alot of men should be at her heels. She could have gotten one and moved on. But she opted for a one night stand with a young guy. A mistake but she still doesn't deserve this. No one is perfect. We all make rash decisions. Well, Her's cost her alot, just like Seyifunmi. Dele. This Dele self, i thought you guys weren't just co-parenting. You guys turned friends now? Why did you still call her a w.hore? It's apparent, that hate you had for her only cooled down because of your kids. Egomaniac. Kwontinue o. ThankGod shey's is piling her broken pieces together. Rosanna and ose. This your ship. Me, I don't know o. 3 Likes |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by crislyn(f): 3:13pm On Nov 01, 2020 |
Khriztarl:Gbam! Tanchu...my thoughts exactly. To me Tinue is a victim here o, a victim of everything bad and suffering. 1 Like |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Khriztarl(f): 4:08pm On Nov 01, 2020 |
Happy new month y'all. 1 Like |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by EARLE99: 12:12pm On Nov 02, 2020 |
Dele, u wicked no b small... Shebi wen he lost everything n wanted his children, he came in all humility.. now he wants to take away wat she lives for.. unforgiving.... Such childishness 1 Like |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by enirock(m): 11:35pm On Nov 02, 2020 |
Tinu is a danger not just to herself but the kids. If she were willing to return to lagos, it would have been a whole different scenerio( she would have people checking on her from time to time, and even if she choses to be hospitalised, the kids would be just a stone throw for her) Dele could have asked that they return to lagos, but he may be unsure of the response he would get. He can't be thinking of how to grow his business empire and have that lingering doubt that his children are not safe . Ose somehow knows hugging Rossana will bring to fore the feelings he is trying to hide in/inside anger. Thanks Millie for the update, hope you have found that which you seek? 2 Likes |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Deo7(m): 9:45pm On Nov 12, 2020 |
Millie how far nah Admist the pandemic and mentally draining responds to the Endsars protest your story has been something worth looking forward to I hope you are fine though and I hope reconsider coming back to drop updates 2 Likes |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by millieademi: 6:39pm On Nov 20, 2020 |
Hi guys. Raises a shelf and white flag. I know it's been a while. Yeah, like I said I was doing a soul searching and I've found it. So I apologize for the silence. Please forgive me. So officially I'm placing the story on an indefinite hold. Why? I want to focus on rewriting book one and editing and then publish. I hope you understand. I'll be in need of beta readers. So anyone interested can send a mail. Thanks. 1 Like |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Slimynonny: 8:26pm On Nov 20, 2020 |
Hi writer kudos....here is my email nonnyben4@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by stevyno1(m): 10:56pm On Nov 20, 2020 |
Good work..... stevyn56@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Chinnems(m): 12:02am On Nov 21, 2020 |
What are beta readers? 1 Like |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Dacaller: 8:31am On Nov 21, 2020 |
Pls explain d beta reader to understand |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by nimat158(f): 1:58pm On Nov 21, 2020 |
wish u luck,, nimatmodupeola@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by BlessedNiel: 2:43pm On Nov 21, 2020 |
Best of luck Millieademi I'm also on hold so we can resume together |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by millieademi: 6:38pm On Nov 21, 2020 |
So beta readers are more lie readers cum editors who help the writer tie up loose ends in a work in progress before the final editing. So they point out mistakes and errors in the plot, plotholes, grammatical errors and help with character development amongst other things. Thanks to those who put up their email addresses. I'll be sending you a link to a google form once I'm ready. Till then, stay well. |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by winie(f): 7:24pm On Nov 21, 2020 |
My email marvelous201888@yahoo.com Remain blessed |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Josipov: 8:45pm On Nov 21, 2020 |
josephakinyode1989@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by ayshow6102(m): 9:51pm On Nov 21, 2020 |
My email - aytimothy7@gmail.com � Thanks |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Sammie4241(m): 5:31am On Nov 22, 2020 |
olalekansamuel60@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Holaetan: 7:19am On Nov 22, 2020 |
afolabizaynab@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by LOLATY: 8:47pm On Nov 22, 2020 |
Hi. Please, I'd to be a beta reader. Popoolatemity@gmail.com. |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by zika19(f): 9:00pm On Nov 22, 2020 |
Hi millieademi. Here is my Mail address- prinxzika@gmail.com Thanks 1 Like |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by AminatOpe247: 9:27am On Nov 23, 2020 |
Here's my email address. aminatopeyemi247@gmail.com. Thanks |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by MayrieSmallz: 10:51am On Nov 23, 2020 |
fejiromary7@gmail.com.. thanks |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by lkillbrokehoes: 9:42pm On Nov 24, 2020 |
heemah:Where are u from? |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Gamesound(m): 12:18am On Nov 25, 2020 |
Calebt247@gmail.com I'd love to join the better readers gang. |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Uniquechild(f): 9:04am On Nov 25, 2020 |
samueleunice552@gmail.com Thank you |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by Abosede512(f): 9:59am On Nov 25, 2020 |
Am in too, pls add me sanniabosede512@gmail.com. thanks |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by arinolar60: 10:33pm On Nov 25, 2020 |
millieademi:[quote][/quote] muhammedmuibatarinola@gmail.com |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by arinolar60: 10:34pm On Nov 25, 2020 |
arinolar60:Am in too please |
Re: Ocean Of Secrets: The Flow (ocean Of Secrets Saga; Book 2) by anuofGod(f): 4:44pm On Nov 26, 2020 |
akinremiraliat.com I'm in too...I love you millie |
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