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Sambroose, nice try, simple, the conclusion was unexpected for me, with a message to pass along. Good job, will keep the remainder of my opinion for later. |
Nasty Droid, you should have gone over and corrected the typos, doesn't give your work a good finish, rest of my comments reserved till later. |
Infomizer: Usually it's 'If only....'I'm sure she'll still look hot. What a weird thought. |
Ruby spice, is that all? Quite short. nudges, great work, got me laughing from beginning till the very end. You have a special way with words, well done, I enjoyed it. |
Mehn, the guy no bad at all.....what else? ![]() |
Preceedo: your a great writer. Ur narrative techniques and dictions are just breathtaking. I see another even better CHIMANDA ADICHIE emerging. You have the same potentials like her if not more. YES, life showed some people its white teeth but gives some people its dirty tongue to brush. Keep it up dear.woooooooow, all this for me? *bobs head up and down profusely* thank you so very much, I so appreciate it. |
I concur. |
kingphilip: so na so u de fear...hope say she no appear as u sleep shalol, I dey fear o but I slept well sha, with lights on. ![]() Sammy hoe, good work...although I had to use a thesaurus quite often. |
Na WA o, these horror / thriller writers, I know what you're up to, posting at night so we feel the impact more, right? na wa o, I'm scared to go back to sleep, my mind is conjuring images of old women with finger nails and wooden sticks for third legs. All izz well sha. Royver, kslib, good, good. |
Drama? :/ |
Hmmmm......HBG, way forward? |
HumbledbYGrace: your allowed to edit, modify your submission until the closing date.I support this, very fair. I'm sure fibre will be happy to hear this, I'm also happy. foxy, habatically, e never reach like dis nao.....calm down small abeg, the competition is just beginning, lets not start with chaos. The judges were not told earlier to keep their opinion to themselves. We've taken correction and writers have been given a chance to work on their stuff. If they like sef Dem fit change story. please calm down, let this thing be peaceful and enjoyable for everyone. |
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Aite HBG. |
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I nominate false pretenses by repogirl. genre : romance https://www.nairaland.com/1303810/false-pretenses |
Aijay vee, awww, you're welcome, good to have you here. Thank you too. ![]() rachelfred, thanks dear, I'll do my best. GUYS!!!! DID YOU KNOW LITERATURE SECTION AWARDS WAS GOING ON, COS I SURE DIDNT! SOME PEEPS HAVE ALREADY NOMINATED ME FOR THE ROMANCE GENRE, ollyfad, Vicky ro, candid and emy, thanks guys. as for the other peoples, God is watching o, well done. U fit still nominate but am not saying nominate me o, let d best man win but pls dnt keep silent. |
[quote author=Miss_Fibre]There is no harm in going first. My submission has been made. Oya, all my soldiers follow me. ![]() **Goes into praying and fasting mode**[/quote]owkay, I've gone through. Fantasy, Good job, i like your imagination, nice word play too, poetic kinda, vivid descriptions, good use of English. You get some points for opening the competition. Its still early, lets see what others have got for us. writers, Una never chop liver finish? I'm hungry o. p.s. @ mazi, am I free to write my shortcomings about the stories, or do I just keep it to myself. |
ReineViolet: Please could you send Americannah to me? ThanksIt was downloaded from the audible store onto my kindle so it can't be shared. Sowie. |
For me a think the 10000 words idea would b great....for subsequent editions anyway. The plot would be better developed. for me personally, it would be easier to write a 10000 word story to a 2500 word story cos there'll be more depth. 2500 words is more of an essay and quite short. Anyway, good luck, maybe there should be a prize for who submits first to ginger some people. I'm on standby o, waiting to read. |
Wow, Miss Efe, I have definitely taken down notes from your list of requirements up there for use when I'm going over my work. writers, no fear, just calm down and enjoy yourself. For me, humour is a plus, witty, suspenseful and thrilling story lines. Make me believe your story, I want to fall in love with your characters, romance writers, that's my genre , so do it right....or else ..... > ![]() also when writing short stories like this, be sure to start with a bang, if you can't catch my attention in the first few paragraphs, I might toss it away o. good luck guys, may the best man/ woman win. |
Wow,wow, thanks guys, jcgodfrey, thanks for the editing, I'll make the changes, corrections noted. I'll go over the story with a fine tooth comb when I'm done but I love what you did here. Thanks again. guys been off line for a few days but am back...kinda. sangarara, lol, u'll find out in my next post. @ermycrin, hmmmm,that one is a work I cannot fit to do now. My PC is down, why dnt u just read it here na? queenchizzy, tobex, emygreat, enough argument.....no spoilers from me sha. anyway thanks guys, I appreciate. |
*covers eyes* candis and c'est moi, una don catch me o...its still in early stages I still have a long way to go. False pretenses will be finished way before I put to bed. |
ninja4life: Enjoying d story,320million naira no be beans o.I was even thinking about making it $5 million before sef, almost a billion naira but I decided to take it easy. |
Yeah, op, some top hospitals aren't on that list. Exclusive hospitals like Diph and cedarcrest. |
Danhumprey: An half-cast,no doubt! But they look cute together.half cast is insulting, didn't you read Americannah? Its bi-racial! |
My issue with abuja clinics is that they usually have a lot of patients and not enough doctors on call, usually only one or two. Also, my daughter was seriously ill sometime and the doctoor wanted to place her on admission but all the wards were full. She had arecurring case of malaria that kept us going back every 2 months until we sWitched to Zankli hospitals where they immediately put her on admission and seriously dealth with the malaria. It hasn't been back for over a year now, she hasn't been sick since. Also the drugs these our hospitals stOck are local and poor quality, most oif the time, we have to buy better ones from pharmarcies. Before I forget, I gave birth to my first kid in abuja clinics and I almost died there o, I had a better birthing experience at zankli. Professionally I prefer Zankli but the wards and toilets aren't neat at all. While infrastructure wise, abua clinics has got equipments. Now am expecting my third kid and am with Nisa Premier, so far it looks promising, I think I prefer them to Abuja clinics. |
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