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Bia my friend stop this madness

donsimoniiblog:
interesting story

Enjoy other stories on www.donsimonii.com

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Lolz..

He should stop making promises.

If he will make promise, let him add a proviso to it.

TheBlessedMAN:
Definition of a confused follower...

Lols...just be patient with the boss na..
.you don't know how he's doing outside the walls of the internet...

But not for long

skubido:
is out oooooooooo,, to continue is evil work..

Happy Birthday

MYKELDAYO:
To all my readers today is my birthday. wish me happy birthday

He no ban SARS o. He only ordered that their operation structure be overhauled. But the Transmission to Transition IGP just renamed SARS FSARS

okafor200:
Abeg una been don hear the latest news now make dey trend online?

Say osinbanjo don ban sars from operating for this our country

ahhhhhh the tin sweet me no be lie
chaiiiiii wetin those sars people
don do many guys ehhhh

u go pity for dem
now we fit waka in peace and we no go dey fear again
thank God for osibanjo

abeg make una tell buhari make travel out of the country
abeg tell am make him no bother to come back again
we no need am
we dey ok with osinbanjo
if the news been sweet u ehh
abeg drop ur comments

chaiiii bye bye for sars men

The first episode (the incidence with the groundnut seller) and the second episode (wey the call girl come run after sighing your long prick)

okafor200:
No wahala me don hear wetin una dey talk
but any how sha me go still dey update una my tori for here no shaking one love
abeg o me just won ask one question to una
me no know if una go fit tell me the episode make been funny pass abeg?
The one make sweet u personally

Hahahahahahaha.


This ya tori no be am for here o

Thanks @Mavikolo2020. I don see the reward.

Sensitivity1254:
08187675805

Sude, the fact that you read his work and choose not to critique his it puts you in the same category of people that you called 'sycophants'.

And the fact that you are here telling us that Larrysun is the last man standing shows that you are his sycophant and butlicker

Dude, if you can comfortably relate to all of these, then you're really weird. If, however, you can't, and chose not to criticize his work to make him work more on his outrageous fictitious narrations, then I don't see a reason why I shouldn't tag you a 'sycophant'.

Go take a quick look at floxyflow, flow1759 and therock5555's humorous fictitious work, then compare and contrast.

#peace[/quote]

For you not to know that anything can happen. A DPO can actually give orders to a soldier, and if you think that can't happen, then I have to ask you the part of the world you live in.

700m is an exaggeration reason it's fiction not real life story. You have to understand that people can pay anything for good sex.

Big mama saw something in that fraud that her husband's thugs beat up. And if you think that peeps who runs illegitimate biz uses saints for the biz, I will have to ask u again the part of the world you live in.

Your problem is that you are comparing him with others. You expect him to fill the shoes of others. If you want to critique his work, do so. Don't call those who choose not to names. That's the route men that lack in intelligence thread.

swiz123:
What did you relate to actually?

That a policeman can command soldiers? What business does a soldier have in a police station?

That soldiers would try to cut off your hand cos you slept with a policeman's wife?

That big mama would trust a fraud whom was beaten by his husband's thugs.?

That someone can actually pay 700 million for sex?

Dude, if you can comfortably relate to all of these, then you're really weird. If, however, you can't, and chose not to criticize his work to make him work more on his outrageous fictitious narrations, then I don't see a reason why I shouldn't tag you a 'sycophant'.

Go take a quick look at floxyflow, flow1759 and therock5555's humorous fictitious work, then compare and contrast.

#peace

Who are the sycophants??

You think that cos we don't do literary appreciation on his work that made us sycophants?? What a warped thinking.

We did not critique is his work cos we can relate with his work. In fact I can relate his work to something that happened to lots of people that o know and heard of.

No matter how poor a literary work is, as a student of literature, you have to relate it to real life. It's lack of depth and techniques of literature that makes not to be able to relate with it.

A good literature student don't is not afraid of making "cyber enemies".

Don't come here insulting peeps up and down in a bid to appear woke.

swiz123:
Those sycophants who read your stories won't make you become a better writer which you seek.

Your fictitious work is too fictitious. No one can relate it to real life. You are still young; you will definitely get better. Just try and tell your fans to criticize your work constructively; that will make you improve.

I don't comment on your thread cos I don't want to make cyber enemies.

Then go ahead and vote for him for the month of August. When he was a bit consistent, we voted for him and he won even though Soulho was more consistent than him.

Now, you guys are advocating that we vote for someone that haven't updated for close to a month.

Yes, he is talented.

Larrysun the last man standing?? This is taken the joke too far.

swiz123:
How old are you? I guess you are not more than 20.

Funny you made mention of how and author paints his or her story lol... Almost everyone here cried when larry was describing the ordeals black passed through as a boy. I ,for a sec, thought Larry was narrating a real life story which he bore witness to.

Most, if not all currents writers on nairaland lacks talent. Heck!!, they don't know shitt about literature.

In larrysun, i have witnessed tremendous talent; he is arguably the most talented person on this forum.

If you are voting for the most consistent writers, then youngzubi currently is. But, if you are voting for the best writer for the month August — which larrysun didn't update — then nobody should be voted cos they'all lack what it takes to be recognized as a writer.

The time when good writers graced here is long gone. Larrysun is the last man standing; but still no writer — since the inception of this forum— comes close to that genius.

08187675805

Mavikolo2020:
Ah Weldone, send me your contact,let me send your reward.but wait o, did you read the story from the beginning again?

Nope.

If I dey read stories that I dey get vibes from, I dey analyse am for jotter.

Mavikolo2020:
Ah Weldone, send me your contact,let me send your reward.but wait o, did you read the story from the beginning again?

Ah Don vote too but as e dey be, I no know if na two or three e be. Helep me check too

Youngzubi:
eazykolobo i sight u manly

ur vote don multiply o! ,nah two e dey ...... go modify one by writing only one dot( . ) thank u my man

Youngzubi

Mrs Azuk
Miss Azuk
Mr Obiro
False Accuser woman
Nina
Stephen
Peter
King Gedfrey
King Felix's thug 1
King Felix's thug 2
Sick slave boy
Boyo
Gavi
Three dead slaves due to the collapsed building
Rapheal
Mongula's assassin
Moyo
Clarrisa

20 dead

Mavikolo2020:
Guys since there is no update yet, why dont we play a game
200naira of any network to the person who answers the question correctly..
Question :How many people have died so far in this story and what are their names. The names should be arranged according to when, who after who.
Oya lets go.

Skubido
Baitullah
Mismore
Uniqueteco
afolabiwunmi
mcjesuspikin
emperorblog
Gabriel6
Risingstar2020
baryour769
amikeem
princesstee
jomalinks

Skubido mention the rest people i don tire.

Youngzubi

Sex na food

Wawu

Phobia66:
Ask and argue with your phone

This is getting interesting. Keep it coming

Lol.
What a mentality.....

iAreMozelle:
It's his work,his story,his thread...he owes no one anything..he will post when he can...you will wait till he does so or unfollow the thread. .its that simple folks

You kept your word and ended it with a masterstroke. I won't have ended it any better.

Live well, bro

sheikshegetto:
Appreciation

To everyone that have read this memoir...Both the silent readers and regular posters that helped saw this to the end...i salute you.

To the first to comment....adontcare & Criis when this story was still a few hundred words...Dear adontcare, although you stopped following after a while, probably because the story turned darker and too lewd for your likening sorry dear had to keep to the script, afterall our protagonist was an irresponsible entity.

To the real Helen...HelenBee, yunno i will never treat you like Bioye, just letting you know, yeah i shoot my shot.

And I'm also singling out Sensitivity1254, Uniquejames, and BiadeFolar for praise...thanks guys, we don see am finish like we promised.

Cheers to further works together.

Sheikshegetto.

As for Karen, she went far. Who knows what Obiora and gang has in store for you. If not for the timely intervention of your guys.

I have this nagging feeling that you and Gold still dey run show.

Finally, don't allow circumstances or events in your life to change who you are. Rather allow them make you a better you.

Sensitivity1254:
You have done marvellously well. You kept your promise to complete the story and here you are.

Thanks for sharing this. I have learnt a lot from it. Gold gave you and some of us here an invaluable advise. Once you give in to blackmail, the circle never ends until you pre-empt the blackmailer.

Shame on Obiora. I think he came to fight for his pride you bruised on the first day you guys met and the one that Karen undid by her constant bragging about your prowess.

My offer still stand. Anytime hustle carry you enter Bauchi, let me know.

You have done marvellously well. You kept your promise to complete the story and here you are.

Thanks for sharing this. I have learnt a lot from it. Gold gave you and some of us here an invaluable advise. Once you give in to blackmail, the circle never ends until you pre-empt the blackmailer.

Shame on Obiora. I think he came to fight for his pride you bruised on the first day you guys met and the one that Karen undid by her constant bragging about your prowess.

My offer still stand. Anytime hustle carry you enter Bauchi, let me know.

The way you guys talk at times amazes me

yewande1234:
we knw it's ur money nd brain u are using in posting d story, but we dat are reading it are also using our money nd brain to read it. If no one comment on ur post u will complain, if dey comment u will still complain. It's ur story if u like sell it, if u like don't. dats ur problem nt ours.

Peace nd Love....

This is height of irresponsibility. Did she tell you that Birthmark is on sale?? Can't you read other comments before you start vomiting the nonsense you vomited She clearly states that it's Twist of Fate that is on sale and that Birthmark is still a work in progress.

emilysmith:
Nawa o I hate this nonsense on nairaland wen you kwn you want to sell it why did u upload it for us to read mtcheww

I wonder why it's so easy for us to bring someone's parent into an issue they know nothing about.

hidhrhis:
on a crios note bro u suppose to apologise
the way u addressed her was very wrong
but pity ur father not me

Apologising for their inability to ask for clarification before jumping in?? They should be the ones apologising to you.

Asemark:
for those of you who are angry with me for saying 'this girl is a fool' without knows what I really mean am sorry.
for those I replied to rudely am sorry.
make una no vex

Souloho19

You will be pleasantly be surprised

Omzie:
Lol, I wonder why y’all bother, this story taught me a very good lesson, Never read a story on Nairaland that has not been completed. Who wants to bet that the OP won’t finish this project I bet he has even forgotten the plot twists and storylines.

You didn't read where Edwin refused to have anything to do with his parents? How convenient!!!!

sirBLUNT:
not only that bro,for example i think the senate president title is kinda loud and unrealistic...like are they attending a private or public uni in the country? and on campus only daniel seems to be the big boy amongs his friends instead of edwin cos we all that been a senate president son is a big deal,the euphoria that comes with it will have blown the school to let everyone knows who edwin is....Asemark great job bro just work on the details....

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