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KunleAJ:
I really don't understand you cuz we are not talking about anyone completing someone else's story for them.

If you don't know the meaning of constructive criticism just ask and I will take the liberty of explaining to you in details

KunleAJ:
You still don't get my point, it was barely 24hrs after the two of them became friends. barely 24hrs after he forgave his parents. come on!

I am not talking Nigerian concept, I'm talking about how things should be.

Anyways, if you intend to keep it that way I can't change your mind but this story will never make it to FP if this is how you want to continue.


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KunleAJ:
Thank You Bro,

How can the son of a senate president pressure his father to give a man who barely knows anything about management an appointment and get a reply in form of a letter

Although the story is pure fiction reality should be embraced

I love the way your story started but if your characters are mismatched it will show a leak.

Rather than insult me check your story and make necessary corrections

KunleAJ:
Thank You Bro,

How can the son of a senate president pressure his father to give a man who barely knows anything about management an appointment and get a reply in form of a letter

Although the story is pure fiction reality should be embraced

I love the way your story started but if your characters are mismatched it will show a leak.

Rather than insult me check your story and make necessary corrections

sheikshegetto:
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Hiii guys....it's been over a year and a few days now since we started this memoir together....now we're an update or two away from the endline...i want to thank you guys for pushing me on through all the way...i swear nobody drops projects pass me, i mostly lose interest and pick up other stories, so a million thanks to y'all for ridding me of that habit.

P.S: to the ladies out there mailing me, as much as i like the attention and insults lol...abeg i am not Bioye o...although i can as well answer for a few guys like myself with an aunty rose of their own, this is simply a mixture of both friction and a collection of real life encounters.....i respect women and all and if this story and the sexual contents offends you guys in any ways whatsover.....I'm sorry, anything pass that you can continue your hate mails, I'm not responsible for your personal problems. Cheers.

sheikshegetto:
lool..... Update tomorrow

fabianiweka:
Why you no won finish the story.

Jwonder:
Nice write up, lovely writing. even though you're using your phone, try creating paragraphs, don't make the post choked up and hard to read, and also reduce the number of fiction in it, because you said you received 20k alert from Nancy which is obviously a lie because you never stated where she asked for your account number, just reduce the fiction and stop portraying yourself as a super hero also state areas you where turned down, make the story real and you will have a wonderful story.

Freebiez:
That was not what he said.

I quote:



The above statement implies the following:
•I have been reading the story for free
•I should give her the cover for free.

Therefore it also implies that:
• I have been enjoying the author's fruits of labour without doing anything in return.
•That I read her story on Nairaland for free, not on Okadabooks where it is sold for ₦500.

Which also implies the following insult:
•I'm a greedy person who takes without giving.
•The op cannot pay ₦100.

Therefore it concludes the following
• I should do the right thing and give the cover free because I'm a greedy person and the author can clearly not afford such funds.

That is why I'm insulted.

If he had simply said, "Why don't you make it free?"

Then that wouldn't have been an insult.

Freebiez:
Sorry, jare.

I have calmed down a bit.
I already was not in a good mood when I saw that comment.

Pls rachealfst if you don't want the cover, lemme know and I'll delete my post and advert before I chop another insult.

Pearl05:
Oba is now a nanny abi caregiver to an old man.

5 yrs already and he is yet to restore his Glory back. His hair hasn't grown back.
His oil had run dry completely and it seem like there is no hope.

I know that there is hope. God is still in the business of restoration.


But I want you to kill Crystal please.



I think the old man is the great dibia.

marychommy:
is only by his grace no man shld prevail. yea all sins has consequences an u think dem havnt suffer enough. in life some prosper cos of Der mother interventions. God is still a merciful God to whom he will show mercy he will show mercy

marychommy:
come lez reason together even our sin r as dark as scalet I will make it whiter Dan snow. HE came for d sinners not d righteous. I thank God for d second chance. he is indeed a merciful God

osuofia2:
When was the last update?

osuofia2:
the problem with most naira land story is that they like abandoning story ..dont start what you know you wont finish

dhamiylhola:
I'm guessing this is all a dream, but then again, not all stories has a happy ending of "they all live happily ever after". But lets see as it goes. By the way people, I am also starting my own story soon. It's titled 'AT LAST, WE ARRIVED SAFELY.' Its a Action Thriller. Wait on it!

cbella:
Lol ! Yeah, let's blame it on the devil.

You didn't reply my message.

aprilwise:
I know oba will return strong as Samson.

SapphirePRINCEX:
Chapter Twenty

Ever since Toshiba was locked up in Jail, James had only stayed with me twice and he went away. He never bothered about the well being of his friend and when I got pissed and called him on the phone to get dressed so we would visit his friend, all he said was that he was busy and not cut out for such stress.

I asked him if he was sure who he was talking with and he was like "ehhhee Sapphire the great, abeg make everybody carry their cross o, me an carrying mine". He now started telling me how his name was in the school blacklist for cultism and possible expulsion and his father who worked as a secretary in the admission block happened to see it.

Yet that didn't justify his actions, Toshiba was the reason for his release but trust humans, we can never be grateful. So that faithful evening was on a Sunday, I had gone to do Sunday ngwori with my husband and it was massive fun cause we were celebrating the entrance of another goal in my womb.

While still downing my Chicken, Toshiba got a call and the man who had promised he would have nothing to do with baggers again or even speak their language started the conversation with "aroh g.s wida wada". Hmmmm I was speechless and just kept looking at him. First I knew James was the stupid G.s calling and secondly I was sad Toshiba didn't know he was a fri-enemy.

He put the call on speak out just to let me know it was James and that made me lose my appetite. The first thing he said was "G.F did you know my name follow una for black list" and then I looked it completely but decided to keep my cool. After their call, Toshiba noticed I wasn't eating again and was like "common babe, it's an harmless call from James, your Aboi" .

I shaked my head severally and then reminded him of the promise he made and he kept quiet like "omg I have fuc.ked up o". I told him everything James said in his absence and he kept doubting me and said About wouldn't make such comments about him and then I told him "You were even sooo blind to notice that all he cared was about himself when he told you about the blacklist without even finding out how you were faring since your release" .

Toshiba was like, James didn't tell me about any blacklist let me call and verify. He called him back and asked if he did and he got a Yes but still, the devil was still brewing more wahala in his heart...

Tbc

badohemmy:
Awka is about an hour (if not less) from Asaba. True or Yes?