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[color=olive]IBK. . sowwie, I mean Sabu took this one. . glaring![/color]

[color=olive]Bynum Cage - There is a name.[/color]

[color=olive]William Murphy - Let It Rise[/color]

[color=olive]@Chamotex,

I rate ya multies. . Nang!![/color]

[color=olive]Hmmn. . let's see. . Hope my critics ain't too critical[/color]

lalaboi:


yous like  cookies, line u up to bake in my oven tray
hmmmm, so sweet can't even hear the ish that u  say
[color=olive]not connective enough. . an opener should come harder, init?[/color]

i'm too hot, don't touch me u'll suffer servere burns
u did already, damn, the hospitals' at the next right turn
[color=olive]Well. . well. . erm. . okay but kind of unnecessary - it's a battle (oju ogun) - you have to fight ni o[/color]

my lines compared to java sources, need an AI to compile and translate
Dnt hate, u just might turn this into a debate.
[color=olive]Feeling the flow but don't get too carried away with rhyming or you'll convey nada in that bar.[/color]

all i see is mumbling words, are u a ventriloquist?
step ur game mahn, u dnt want me hittin u with ma fist
[color=olive]9ice[/color]

Attention!! At ease. that how they do it the naija army
calling y'll out too rap, not sing to cute little barbie
[color=olive]I really don't get the correlation of this bar with the battle verse, just a filler[/color]

my flow tight like the twin towers of a nun
ohhh, that was nasty, that not me, am just having fun
[color=olive]Lool @ metaphor in line 1 of this bar, but line 2, seriously uncomplimentary to the 1st line. . it dampened the bar.[/color]

Your puchlines are too weak, just like diluted palmwine
let me upgrade u, it don't mean i have buy u a dime
[color=olive]Just there[/color]

Its too much jor, my flow so dimorphic
understand the A way or B way, its so prolific
[color=olive]Nice closer[/color]


This is a freestyle oh. just wrote this now!

jassie:
I'm'ma keep it motherland y'all!

Me Fly, I Fly, I'm Flyer than an Eiye Adaba
Oops didn't mean Adaba, I meant a Bird like Asha
[color=olive]Self-glorification. . doesn't really blend with the nature of this verse, and yeah it's a freestyle, but its a written battle all the same, try to come harder. . your repetition of 'Adaba' dampens the expectation from you rverse because this is the opener bar. . gast to hit hard.[/color]

When am walking on the road no babe dey do me Shakara
But lalaboi sucks just like a burnt piece of Akara
[color=olive]Relevance is highly relevant. . and try using more connectives, line 2 is cool. . I just think you coulda used a better word than 'sucks'[/color]

Your pops gats no swagga, he can't even buy an Ankara
Lalaboi be peepin' em parties with fake pair of Adidas
[color=olive]I for one don't feel that diss the opponent's parents. . kind of childish. .notwithstanding, the bar's iite but damp   [/color]

I rock the party mayne, like Baba J, I wear em Agbadas
I'm conceited dawgz when it comes to rollin with suckas like Lala
[color=olive]Relativity and relevance! I can't see em. . perhaps they lurking in the shadows somewhere[/color]

Your flows be wack dude, if u know something its only a Nada
Wack Wacker Wackest, you can't even contest with em' Omo Alataz
[color=olive]A NADA?? You can't possibly say 'a nothing'. . that's something for the vocab aspect. . and the whole 'wack' repetition is getting on my nerves. . . .lol. . nah. . but it weakens the verse.[/color]

If you run to ATL like Eldee D Don I'll still be beating you in Atlanta
I gats one rap student, She goes by the name Mama Mulika
[color=olive]No relevance, bruh. . although the end words rhyme  [/color]

I'm sure you can't even rap her daughter, She goes by the name Mulika
I ain't interested in your rap skills cause you're what comes after the word 'Duller'
[color=olive]The first is as babyish as whatever, i don't like it!!, you sound like the Remedies now. . the bar rhymes quite all right. .the flows are constant.[/color]

Lala's skill be falling down! falling down! falling down! My wack Lala!
There ain't nothing you can say, just pick up your trash like em LAWMA
[color=olive]Nursery rhymer! Lol. . Come to think of it, that bar coulda hit harder if you made a correlation between Lala and the London bridge[/color]

When next I come on here mayne call me baba J the Agbalagba!
I come with the heat, gats noff swagga to scatter the matter!
[color=olive]lol. . nice multi. . i feel that closer[/color]

Peace! Oops low battery!

[color=olive]Okay without muchos of ado, here's what I think:

[center]Flow - Tie
Rhymes - Tie
Relevance - None
Punchlines - None
Metaphors - Lalaboi
Vocab - Lalaboi, just by a bit
Originality - Both
Structure  None
Opener - None
Closer - Jassie

My VOTE goes to LALABOI . . but there's muchos roomos for improvement.[/center][/color]

[color=olive]Donnie McClurkin - Great is Your Mercy.[/color]

lalaboi:
where thou at mahn! want to do you before i do someone else! maybe shaz or Chamo

[color=olive]aww. . unfortunately, I don't battle anymore [/color]

[color=olive]@Lala,

Chill a little' bit. He's not going all the way extra.

@Sauron,

Poco a poco 

Lol. . let round 2 come up first, Khanye just might hit harder.[/color]

[color=olive]Lool . . The should even replace the inspector with the Tom guy.[/color]

[color=olive]Simply Andy - Bibles.[/color]

[color=olive]Ekundayo - TY Bello[/color]

[color=olive]Lmao. . SB is on a diarrhoea split.[/color]

[color=olive]Lol. . [/color]

[color=olive]The cubby dude is a joke on his own. . Still don't get the point of his vid.[/color]

[color=olive]Why didn't I ignore this thread sef?[/color]

[color=olive]Brid N Kina2,

Please keep it on the low-low. TY.[/color]

[color=olive]Hey guys, good work.

But posting links to other forums are prohibited on Nairaland and henceforth, if there are any threads containing links to AHH or other forums, no matter the reason, I might have to take it down completely.

Thanks for the co-op, guys. . More punches to ya lines.[/color]

[color=olive]Hi, welcome to NLand. Hope you have a jolly ride.[/color]

[color=olive]Wow, that's a huge blow.

That Kawasaki Disease of a thing is so dangerous, dealt with my little cousin like mad, although he survived it, but I thot you couldn't have it after the age of 8.

May His soul rest in peace[/color]

Cayon:
@shaz:

Could you please put in a good word for me. I TRULY TRULY need to change my screen name. Could you ask the bossman to change my name from Cayon to[b] FreezingHot[/b].

@Seun

Could you please please change screen name from Cayon to FreezingHot. I really don't want to start a new name. . . . .well unless this is impossible. And to understand my seriousness about the name change - I am on bending knees begging you. And if you ask me to hop on one leg for 6 hrs just to get my name change I'll do it

Thanks Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease

[color=olive]Looool. . iite, Freeze.[/color]

[color=olive]That's still kinda irrelevant.[/color]

[color=olive]@Darequam,

I have not deleted any thread on Nairaland so far, only moved them to appropriate child boards. [/color]

[color=olive]Make a post 'bout the thread here. Make sure you include a descriptive topic and the link to the thread. Good luck [/color]

[color=olive]@Brid, I'll holla at you soonest.

@Kina2, The thread has been opened . . . let me know when you want it closed. Plus check ya PMs.[/color]

[color=olive]Lol. . no. . Definately wouldn't try it either. .

What happened to the part of me tasting my soup to check if it's done? Lol[/color]

[color=olive]That sturv helped a lot, yuu know . . [/color]

~Sauron~:
It's a clear oversight. . . . . .Thanx for the acknowledgement, sis.

[color=olive]Kl, Sauron . . I know it was the other C you were looking for.[/color]

lilkid:
ok new kid on d block
              ok am like flow flow flow when i step on a mic, /
             heard yall were better dan me yeah rite, psych/
             am rapping am flowin am motherfuckin rappin, /
             rymes flowin my body cut me up and bleed lyrics/  
            mess when i spit i feel am d illest yall gotta kip up 2 be on ma pace, /
            chase race HA! 1 tin sucks cumin behind me second place/
            am d hottest kid unda d net look me up on google, /
            my lyrical insane 2 me shit don't make shit i gurgle swallow yall rymes/
            i be rappin a  rappin  a rap yall rappin a rappin yall never heard before c4 blow up
            so up NASA got 2 send them boiz up 2 get me down now that is up

[color=olive]Sowwie, it's a lil too late to join in now, lilkid. You can still spar o'er here. [/color]