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Apollux:
Well thanks for the criticism but there are some things u should take note of. One this is a fiction not realism. Two if u get to read the story very well, "Simon" was not alone he was standing with other guards who came out from the other car (and for the record he wasn't a don) . Killing seven people at one time is something u should understand about sniping, if u have been under fire during a sniper attack, u will get to know how easy it is for a sniper using a gun whose effective range is around 2miles to kill 7 people in 7 seconds.
Now foe the Bad English, this language is not my 1st language, if u had taken time to read through my introduction before the story, u will realize I informed all that this is not a prepared work, I type them as I log in to Nairaland. So this is not a professional work, it didn't go through any editing Moreover I'm not well educated, so dont expect my English to be polished. I never claimed this work to be the product of a professor.

Apollux:
Lol.... Twi of my stories are suffering from neglect o. Make I nust maintain before my followers for MEMOIRS OF BLOOD AND STEEL kill me

Cyberrex:
Baba writing no easy at all, that's why I opted in for engineering and moreover nepa dey bleep up

marvwhite:
watin go cause fight na you day wan do so.... Lala nor fit hold me o

meneski:
oboy ur own strong ooo...abeg no vex

Cyberrex:
bro meneski call in the next writer

nah here I go drop my pen, thank you all for reading, PEACE to u all

and good luck to the next writer

marvwhite:
Apollux


i know you probably hear/see this everyday,but #AmYourBiggestFan



#keep the good work sir

Apollux:
What do u guys think of Thrace attitude? Do u think he is of benefit in any way to the group?

Kimkardashain:
oga abeg i dnt understand oh

sleemoon:
Ehen.... Emi nikan tan?
[All these only for me]

Kare omo dada! [Well done Good child]

Kimkardashain:
oga abeg i dnt understand oh

Kimkardashain:
ok,*heads to the kitchen**1 hr later* oya have ur order

Kimkardashain:
ok, taken, evrybody pls place ur order

Kimkardashain:
meneski bro,i messed up biggie bt it aint really my fault.
abeg pity me.am bk

Apollux:
These are killers that he and his men do not have a chance again. He looked around and saw as the Al-hujinn dispatched with the last of his attackers. Bodies, both horses and men piled up around him. He is the deadliest of them all. A true Al-hujinn. Zakfir wailed within him and cursed all that had made him witnessed the famed actions of the Al-hujinn. All the horrors that the legends had narrated about the blood thirsty killers are true, everything to the minute detail. As he watched, the Al-hujinn turned to face him, also the giant and the little man in white. The far off man in a robe whom he believed now is a powerful sorcerer watched him from that distance as he toyed with lightning bolts on his fingers.
Just behind him are three of his youngest sons. “Yarkubri! “ (flee) he screamed. The three herdsmen behind him turned their horses and fled from the place with the horses cantering at great speed

Apollux:
So what do you guys think about their fighting prowess? Which of them has surprised you with their abilities

Apollux:
Lol good assessments... Well I will say nothing, just allow the story to unfold

stephenGee12:
I had actually updated since 1:27 pm but I was banned by the antispam biot till 1:27pm july 09. Was just unbanned by you knw who. So am gonna update right now and if u don't see it knw I have been banned again

Cc: meneski
Souloho19 I never forget am ooooo. And besides chelsea no fit sign player na una no get money like we the red devils ;P ;P ;P
Na why we hijack lukaku sheybi una dey pursue morata

stephenGee12:
Mhizgap. Sorry but I d don't understand who u are talking about here

queenitee:
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