Literature › Re: Please I Need Honest Criticism On This Story(anya) by Sonamjs: 4:04pm On Aug 19, 2018 |
Well done for actually putting something out there for people to critique.
Depending on your reasons for doing this, check your tenses.
The formatting needs to be looked at as well. I.e spacing of sentences.
I know a poster noted that no one commented on this topic The literature section does not get a lot of traffic, however it's a good place to pick up good skills.
In this age of limited attention spans, you need to pay a lot of attention to format and spelling to compel people to read your stuff.
Don't give up though, keep on writing |
Crime › Re: I Have Never Had Sex With Any Man Before, Except Dogs – Nigerian Lady by Sonamjs: 4:02pm On Aug 18, 2017 |
A real life version of the girl in the auction by Lleigh
The truth is stranger than fiction |
Family › Re: How My Husband Turned Me To A Porn Addict by Sonamjs: 3:09pm On Aug 18, 2017 |
gazilion: Yes, but the sin of sexual immorality is the only sin God himself supervises the judgement!! Every other sin is outside the body, but he that commits sexual immorality sins against his/her own body which is the temple of God. The judgement has a ripple effect. It's a fearful thing!! Please, change your mind and ask God for HIS GRACE!! He so loved you, he answered your prayers for a baby, now will you spite him by doing what he hates? Sin of sexual immortality....what about all the men who do this. in our culture it's ok for the man ...but heaven forbid a woman does it, the quotes and everything come out. It should be the same rule for all men and women. |
Family › Re: How My Husband Turned Me To A Porn Addict by Sonamjs: 1:15pm On Aug 18, 2017 |
FortuneTeller: Lol. Being a sugar mummy means giving a man money. No one has to do that in the US unless you want to. I don't give men money. Never have, never will. As long as the man knows what to do, age doesn't matter to me. I know an 80 yr old woman who still has sex with her 80 yr old boyfriend. Believe me a lot of women have affairs. I know quite a few. Women are just quiet about it. That is soo true ...all this had been happening since time immemorial. Come to France....having affairs is the norm and discretion is observed. One of the reasons the women are well groomed |
Family › Re: How My Husband Turned Me To A Porn Addict by Sonamjs: 9:16am On Aug 18, 2017 |
@Brokenangel2
I have followed this thread keenly. You need to get up brush your self down and look after yourself.
Nothing wrong with self love but it gets boring after a while. Find something that stimulates your passion and get on with it.
You need to get your mojo back don't let this turn you into an old woman overnight.
Should you have an affair only you can answer that question.
You need practical solutions...
Sounds like your man is in love with someone else for the moment and does not want to sullie that image in his head with sleeping with you.
He needs to see that you're still a desirable sexy woman. Maybe when he sees men paying you attention he might buckle up. |
Family › Re: Mother Had Sex With Her Teen Daughter’s Husband by Sonamjs: 10:27pm On Aug 14, 2017 |
Mum was just helping out |
Romance › Re: Describe This "Slay Queen" In One Word (Viewers Discretion) by Sonamjs: 8:39pm On Aug 14, 2017 |
Menh: And if men call this one she will be doing shakara I cover any man that will approach this one with the blood of Zaccaria. What is that in the third picture. Omg looks like hard skin. How do you go down on that.. |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 10:51pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
[quote author=jalo1 post=58797467]when shuld we |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 11:09pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Oyindawealth: all dis u've listed are really happening....... It's so sad.. #the bitter truth# It is well said lleigh and oyindawealth 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: The River by Sonamjs: 8:30pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Just re read this story and i felt scared, the description of Margaret about the tornado.
I could feel it
Wow!!!!
Leigh PLEASE come and update this story o 1 Like 2 Shares |
Literature › Re: Red Ashes by Sonamjs: 6:38pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: its useless yet u spent a whole day reading it Nice answer  |
Romance › Re: Guy Invites Female Facebook Friend To His House… She Turns Out To Be A Gay Guy by Sonamjs: 4:42pm On Jul 21, 2017 |
That's some serious eye brows |
Romance › Re: British Woman Marries Dog. by Sonamjs: 4:07pm On Jul 21, 2017 |
Lleigh needs to see this ..
The Auction has two dogs sleeping with one woman |
Crime › Re: Man Stabbed Son In Neck, Stomach (photo) by Sonamjs: 5:40pm On Jul 19, 2017 |
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Crime › Re: Man Stabbed Son In Neck, Stomach (photo) by Sonamjs: 5:39pm On Jul 19, 2017 |
And please no one should say spiritual warfare.
This man is bitter. I bet the new woman has been threatening with no action. If he doesn't sort out his troublesome child.
Silly man |
Family › Re: At What Age Should I Open Bank Account For My Child? by Sonamjs: 3:44pm On Jul 19, 2017 |
The day the child is born and put birthday money etc in it. Put a token amount in each month. Then hand over to child at the age of 25  |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 1:55pm On Jul 19, 2017 |
Enitan....oh dear..  |
Crime › Re: 13-Year-Old Boy Hangs Himself In Lagos To Protest Mum’s Abuse by Sonamjs: 2:40pm On Jul 15, 2017 |
How can a mother say go hang to her child.
How? |
Romance › Re: I Got All A Man Needs In A Lady , But I Can’t Find Who Can Satisfy Me Lady Drops by Sonamjs: 2:10pm On Jul 15, 2017 |
She definitely has a bosom |
Literature › Re: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Sonamjs: 11:34am On Jul 15, 2017 |
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Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 6:58am On Jul 15, 2017 |
chii8: Please leigh, I want to ask, what do you do for a living.? Or better still what inspires you,or what kind of movies,books do you read? .....
Summarily, how you dey do this thing? Good question chii8... Lleigh are you are man as you are good at torture  |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 11:45pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
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Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 6:35pm On Jul 13, 2017 |
Lleigh: Hi EpBerezi thank you for such a a glowing endorsement.
Omg I like horror but I could not watch SAW!! 
This Linda girl won't leave me alone either. I asked her to give me a break, but no she came back.
As such there will be an unscheduled update this weekend. Please hurry o we are waiting  1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: Introducing Top 10 Stories Of The Week ( Nomination Thread) by Sonamjs: 7:11am On Jul 13, 2017 |
The Auction by Lleigh is so real you can feel what is happening
You then realise it is fiction.
That Linda have suffer.
Keep it up Lleigh 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: The River by Sonamjs: 6:53am On Jul 12, 2017 |
Lleigh nice to see you back.
Please come here and update us o.
This one na horror... 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 8:45am On Jul 11, 2017 |
[quote author=queenitee post=58336225]You are right tho, but the positive side is for those thinking of doing those things. I'm sure by now they would be having a second thought...
Or referred to lleigh. I fear her....
Please help Linda... |
Literature › Re: Introducing Top 10 Stories Of The Week ( Nomination Thread) by Sonamjs: 11:05pm On Jul 09, 2017*. Modified: 6:56am On Jul 10, 2017 |
The Auction by Lleigh
Must be the scariest story on here. This lady knows how to torture.
Tradition by chumpzpinky Lovely story one man 6 wives... 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Literature › Re: Memoir Of A Sex Slave [struggle For Survival] by Sonamjs: 10:59pm On Jul 09, 2017 |
Following..
Interesting collaboration |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 7:49am On Jul 09, 2017 |
Linda made me laugh. Fashion brand, she is a bit dumb 1 Like 1 Share |
Family › Re: Zimbabwean Married Woman Thanks Wrong Man For ‘Hot Sex’ by Sonamjs: 5:54am On Jul 09, 2017 |
Jones4: Any woman that cheat in marriage is a devil Any man that cheats in marriage is a devil too |
Literature › Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 11:29pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Linda truly has suffered. |
Family › Re: Zimbabwean Married Woman Thanks Wrong Man For ‘Hot Sex’ by Sonamjs: 11:27pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
NwaAmaikpe:

Still trying to imagine how and why she ran away from her marital home.
It's no big deal, almost every woman does this.
The husband should just dust himself up, get a condom and head for a brothel; get his fair share then come back home and everything goes back to normal. Chikina.
Folks need to understand than humans just like animals are polygamous in nature. Society and religion have nurtured us to neglect nature Animals are polygamous..... humans too. However humans have emotions... jealousy |