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This is good buh ....
I will comment after the next update

That sgt mike wan do us bad thing for this story, how de wan take go arrest terrorist alone, nna oga d tell that guy say odikwa very risky.

Clement and Ngozi take time, make wona settle wona self before wona spoil the fun of this our lovely story on how to arrest this dudes.

On a second thought, oga d do yu think that yu want end this story?

sorry biqwiq, i am at anambra state and the problem of liqht is affectinq badly. So the rate of my comments here and on litrature section would reduce.

Riqht now am usinq my 6taz phone read through updates,buh with my little readinq, i came across some ...

1. 'without digging an
hole in his pocket' - i think its a hole (no need for to much talkinq on it)

2. The rate at which you are rushinq the story. It just make the story loose its taste and inturn confuse the reader.

3. At the 2 or 3 last update, when debo was in the hospital. When the doctor came by, you should atleast ensured a comprehensive conservation to enable the doctor know if the culprit isnt fakinq up the story about loosinq his father or somethinq of such.

And still on that update, when the doctor came, debo never asked the doctor what he was doinq there and i saw the doctor tellinq him when and how he was admitted. It just make the doctor act like a madman.

Hope you understand. Nice work though

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The revenge mission is taking another dimension.
Am seeing repentance after tia might have done a very bad thing (guessin that).
Sister julie na you get us here, anywere you drag us in this your story na three we go land.

Happy new year, may this year bring us change (s), i mean change of position (s), so that we may experience his wonderful favour and may this year bring us unity and protection so that we may enjoy the fruits of our hard earned labour (s) and endeavour (s). IJN

Onemansquad:
Wishing masef, d9ty7, tecno4life,emzypaz, ogbarmey,stuff46, lilyomi,bigwig97, bluestarry, mention, florjay, seunviju, mhot42 adeh39, adewealth027, kristen12, uthman51, rounakid, zainharb, darus05, tiffanyj, handie, labaski, mariamferanmi, shankies215, kingphilip, tharuthlxx7, flakeey emmykul4love,fatalveli, kocvalour, fembleez1, ritababe, all thread members a happy new year, hapi new month , may ur wishes/prayers for the year 2015 come to pass
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i see yu ma nigga

Onemansquad:
mst u display ur madness evrywhr
Hw u take escape frm yaba sef??

how yu wan take know whem i escape, when yu still dey mad that time...

oga d take this thing nice and slimow.
kill and injure anybody you want, if people like oms and kovaco, hrh like make them remix the story make de no kill dier characters.


btw go and vote o
the troops dere is not encouraging and its ending today

abeg vantee, who be the imformant to lady suzan.
we need to do the needful.


Enjoying this piece like never before.

vote d9ty7

Skimpledawg:
Na dz same tin make me use psn do sacrifice last year by dz time .....no say I no warn u*frowns @ him and continues watchn Chistar's film*

Abeg use am abeg

the cake, oms bring knife

see that guy oh, you wan make don pedro kill him love.
shue?? He don dig him own grave by himself.
julie na yu o, happy new year in advance

nice updates buh that guy max bad, inside church. God go use he long koboko from heaven.
waiting for the next update

hard luck tdan, wishing u quick recovery

D9ty7:
Ah go watch am na

nice updates

Crowny1:
No break my door

if the door break abeg no need to put another one because the audience go too much for here.

Blue and oms hope you are weapon free(catapault and mazuka free)

must oll of them be yoruba?

naija as a country for you

hopin on this day mehn.
Divepen we are learninq,ride on

Divepen:
I no know which one I go do...
I want something new.
introducing Divepen Store
Buy all your desired things.
*Pop corn
* Non- Alcholic drinks
* Groundnut
* Garri
* Biscuit- all types
* COOKIES...
*Sweets and Chewing Gums

see this pastor_like man oh.
No Alomo,no Orinqin, no Sk, no bacardi. (diaris God o)

Me give me water. Buh onemansquad wont be happy.
The story is set, am in
onemansquad show abeg buh brinq bacardi for two

. Really complicated

op you for complete am here na, i cant use ma kb to open that site.
Though d story funny

The last typinq was it an update or an introduction to an update?
If not so, i think its to short to last a day

The story is really loosinq its touch and you cant keep hievinq blames on the young man. He has a life outside and we dont know what is keepinq him from updatinq. I am a silent follower all this while and have come to voice out from my own point that the young man is doinq great buh lets give him time to see if he can get back on track