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LogoDWhiz: hmm wheedling!!!

Learnt a new word from u today.

Lol... u don start d wheedling sef...

This is a work of fiction. The characters, incidents and dialogues are products of the writer's imagination and are not to be constructed as real. Any resemblance to actual events or person, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

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Copyright © 2014 TEMITOPE DANIEL ABIMBOLA.

ISBN: 978-1501016639

DANNIE~DEE KONSEPTS

TEL: 08038100629

EMAIL: danniedeekonsepts@gmail.com


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FACEBOOK: www.facebook.com/temitopePage

BLOG: www.temitopedaniel.

KingzPen: Letz go there Boss...

IZZY!!!! MY ABLE BOSS... E o ni te!

MidieMeliss: Thank God you're back.

I'm happy I met u hale and hearty! u 're great! I go follow ur story nah...

Divepen: Okay let us *went* there

Divepen!!!! Maybe na let's *GONE* there...

Balley: Waiting....

Aiit Balley... I dey kum!

jaymomma: Carry go.

*Benibank* Oya nah...

Gamesound: We're back 4 the BEST,,,, sips my zobo

My Boss! thanks for ur presence, U re d best!

LogoDWhiz: Reporting for duty...

Anticipating the best of your stories.
I know u won't disappoint.

No wheedling oh... lol!

samsondavid: First to comment o.

Front seat things.

Pop Corn and Drinks all the way.


keep it up bro. more ink to Ur pen

#Following

Bro! u deserve a medal! Thanks Oga Samson.

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congrats... my queen.

gbam! First to read... nice job boss, still following!

If not for d break... I might not be able to complete this, but now, COMPLETED! U 're going places Vonn, I'm sure this is jex d beginning of great works.

Thumbs up my NL boo*

Hey guys! Missed you seriously, I've been good ere.. uu?

I'll return back to NL fully on Friday- September 5th

I'm gonna return with a new story then because this story and all other ones by me will be under reconstruction to be placed on my blog. I also lost three of my stories during the data loss, those who also wanna read IFH, I'll start posting them all on my blog and facebook page this weekend.

You can follow my blog: www.temitopedaniel.

and fb page: www.facebook.com/temitopePage

wish to start making use of them all now...

My return here doesn't mean I'm returning as a perfect writer, but a better one, don't expect a perfect work but a better one, I'm still learning.


Title of the story: ..


Audery, I sight u oh... here z ma no. na.. 08038100629 Dipville, sorry for d sudden pause and disappointment, the story needs real editing for real. If I don't edit, it won't be easy for me to continue it.. with what I have seen ppl putting down, this is low to the standard.

At least, if you aren't d best, be distinguished!

Tee'Dan.

Audrey!!! may I have ur contact?

Now, conscience cleared! Noticed you've all been worried, If not.. wouldn't have come to mke confessions. I really love u all... I mean I LOVE u all! Thanks so much for the care, if not that I wanna make u guys to be rest assured wouldn't av logged in... I've been viewing as a guest and would soon return there...

By the way, I restored d factory setting on this handheld and I don't av the nos of all NLders again... this is jex to tell u not to feel embarrassed when next I receive a message from u and ask "who's this?"

I had to do that... I work as d spirit leads... I pray the spirit won't lead me to forest

#guestmodeactivated.

Elantracey: me too , he's message is not delivering and he's phone switched off.

It z on na...

MidieMeliss: I've been reading this piece as a guest, and I have one word to describe Mr. Temitope Daniel:
UNIQUE.

Your piece is awesome, and I'm still following dutifully.

yeah.. it is, I am but wanna b more unique! Thanks for signing up, u 're a rare gem and I'll get u informed if I wanna start anything ma'am, u 're loved!

HEY GUYS! T.DAN is here.

    Yesterday was a great day! I thank ThePatriot and PrinceAdepoju, may u guys never lack anything good! I hate to swear because it's wrong biblically but if I have to do that now so as to convince u guys that their criticisms has nothing to do with my silence, I will.

    Forget My Crony, forget T.Dan, forget who u 're and get this! Many ppl have the gifts of hearing and foreseeing things, I AM ONE OF THEM. Weeks back, I heard that thing that my sister was going to be involved in an accident, that I sud pray about it and I did. It was that week she had the accident but to God be the glory nothing happened.

    Many incidents like that which I will tell my parents that something like this or that will happen but they won't believe me until it manifests! This same thing told me my aunty would die and she didn't live to say Happy New Year, in 2014. Many things like that....

    After the criticisms sha, I wanted to continue typing and doing things my way but the spirit refused! It said if I did it, I wouldn't reach my destination ever.

    I naw sat and conversed with the spirit I can't see but can hear the it speaking through my mind. The spirit started the analysis:

I have written:
NO MATTER WHAT
TOTAL LOVE
SHADOW OF LOVE
LOVE AND WISDOM
I FOUND HER
GAME OF LOVE
NOW... MY CRONY AND PEACE AND APRIL

    Jokes apart naw, I'm really serious now. I think I'm not the T.Dan u knw earlier, all was equal to zero after the analysis. The stories are interesting but I lack something.

    It continued that I lacked something I ought to have searched for but I just sat and kept writing as soon as the inspiration comes. I felt bad.. I reasoned along. It was true, all of them were not up to standard, storyline- interesting but others=0

While I was sad, I still laughed when the spirit said "I even wonder how u won the best writer when you are equal to zero."
The spirit reminded me of these:

    During one of my stories.. Love and Wisdom, two ppl wrote:

1) "You ought to sell this ur story to primary sch students"

2) The second one said it was a story that would worth #70

    It continued that I never sat down to think of what I lacked that made them speak that way. It was true! I was criticized but I never examined it, I never thought about what I lacked.. I only said these ones are MAD after reading the two comments of those ppl.

    God should punish me if I've been lying! I can't frame all these up! I was given a crucial assignment by that spirit to take a tour round blogs of great writers, I should make researchs, I'M NOT WRITING JUST FOR WRITING SAKE, I'M WRITING BECAUSE I SEE A BRIGHT FUTURE IN IT. I'M WRITING BECAUSE I SEE THAT I WAS GIVEN THE GIFT, just that I have failed to work on it.

    ThePatriot said something that I have the potentials in me but not using it, I felt it when I sat down and started reading a story line yesterday evening. I didn't sleep until some minutes to twelve and within 24hrs I have gathered almost 200 words.. not jex words but phrases, clauses.

    I now saw all what ThePatriot, PrinceAdepoju and co, together with the spirit said, reflecting that I didn't work on them. NOTHING CAN MAKE ME QUIT WRITING BECAUSE IT'S MY LIFE, DESTINY AND ALL I LOVE DEEPLY. If I don't sit down now and make researches, learn more, I'll jex be writing interesting stories that have no quality.

    The spirit repeated what PrinceAdepoju said that my characters are too much! While I read other stories, I saw that everything HAMEENAT, SALLYCHIZZL, PRINCEADEPOJU, THEPATRIOT, NANCYDEARIE, TIPIFLEXY, LOGODWHIZ said was true!

    I saw that all of you wanted and still want the best for me, that's why I have started learning more from great writers. I don't know when it will last me but I'm sure it won't take up to a month. I've been reading as if I have an exam, u may see me as a jobless person, I'm not, it's something deposited in me and I know reading more and knowing more things will favour me. I researched on amnesia while writing PEACE AND APRIL and saw that mhen! Wherever they are talking about Amnesia, I can't keep quiet because I now know more.

   This is to u and all writers, if there's any place you've lacked something, a thing what ppl tell u that u are doing wrong, don't feel sad or annoyed, try to know why, try to know what you've lacked and work on it.

    The assignment given to me is not yet completed, I have to read a lot of stories and know more! My return to NL is the beginning of my best, I tell u. My return to NL is to start another story and reconstruct all the stories I have writen, including this. By the time I return you'll notice a change, even if not the best, I'm so sure you'll notice that No! This is not the T.Dan I knw before.

I LOVE ALL OF YOU, THIS HAS TO BE DONE TO BETTER MY LIFE! I SEE A BRIGHT FUTURE THAT CAN ONLY COME TO REALITY THIS WAY! NO ONE CAUSED MY LEAVE, I JEX WANNA GAIN MORE!

    ThePatriot, PrinceAdepoju and co, I want u to comment again, don't leave me, I'm still ur boy and I will be back soon, better.

BTW, Don't think I have cooked everything up, I'm really serious about the spirit stuff, if it doesn't happen to u, It does to me... we talk  like brothers... but don't mind me and my funny spirit oh, I jex talk to myself and laugh while walking sometimes and ppl around will think is this one okay?


I deliberately left whatsapp so that nairalanders won't make me change my mind.

Thanks so much Audrey, you and ur story are the sources of the beginning of my change, Love U! Special thanks to brothers from different mothers, bosses.. KingzPen and LogoDwhiz, they made me know many things too... and to TIPIFLEXY, u 're dah best!


It might look like a lie or super story to u but these are the things that bother me and that I want to change.
TEE'DAN.

EPISODE TWENTY SEVEN.

    6PM.

    Hakeem walked into Aishat's office after he had been told to. He looked serious as if he had come to sort out some issues with her. "Aishat." He called her name and approached her table more.

    Aishat had been in a bad mood since Derin insulted her. She had been cerebrating on the issue, if Hakeem was real or fake. It had been long she heard anything about Azeezat again, she knew nothing about Derin and had been disturbed because Derin looked real.

    Is Hakeem real at all? Where did he meet that lady? I don't even know if anything is still going on between us, I guess not, I don't think so.

    "I hope we are not accounting anything tonight again?" Aishat asked.

    "Not at all, I came concerning the lady that harassed you earlier." He paused and sat down. "I don't know her at all, believe me."

    "Does it affect me? You shouldn't be telling me this, you should go and tell Azeezat." She replied and stood up.

    "Where are you now off to and who's Azeezat by the way?" He questioned.

    "I'm going home, I can't afford to get home late tonight again." Aishat replied him.

    "Let's finish this discussion, I assure it won't take much of your time." Hakeem said.

    "Hakeem, what is it you have to say? I really don't have time today." She looked uncomfortable due to his presence.

    "About the lady who insulted you. I'm sorry about it." He said.

    "Sorry? Alright." She said sharply.

    Hakeem smiled, he knew she was angry already. "Aishat." He drawled her name.

    "Hakeem, won't you go and meet your friends? I really don't have time for all this."

    "My friends just left, each of them went to important places." He replied.

    "Then, go home." She hissed and walked out.

    She must be really annoyed, to have done this. Hakeem walked after her.

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    Hakeem drove after Aishat. He almost got to General Gas road when he had a flat tyre. Hastrup had gone to meet his father again while Uthman had gone to visit Shukurat. He got down instantly and looked at Aishat's car as it drove away. He brought out his jack and extra tyre to change it quickly before it would be later than that.

    He concluded the fixing after six minutes. He was sweating already and packed the flat tyre and the jack. While he was carrying the tyre, his inhaler fell from his chest pocket on the floot. He shut the boot of the car and drove off, he never knew his inhaler had fallen where he changed the tyre.

    He picked up his phone and called Uthman to know what was going on between him and Shukurat then, Uthman sounded as if he was almost dead. "Please, just find something to cook for me. I'm really hungry." He told Hakeem.

    "Really? Why on earth didn't you go for lunch?" Hakeem questioned him.

    "I did, I took fried rice but I don't know where this hunger is coming from, hunger dey wire me. I'm just getting to the front of Shukurat's house."

    "Just getting there? She's going to give you food now." Hakeem smiled.

    "Abeg jurh, person wey dey vex me."

    "She's vexing you? That Derin should be the one vexing you, not Shuku."

    "Anyways, abeg prepare food for me."

"Alright." Hakeem replied and drove on.

*****

"The day was a bad day." Aishat stepped into the living room.

"Welcome." Tomisin greeted her.

"Yeah, thanks to you Tomi. How was your own day?" She sat down.

"It was cool, what made the day bad again?" Tomi asked her. She put down her left leg which had been placed on the stool before and faced Aishat. She had been at home throughout the day reading romance novels by Pastor Taiwo Iredele. That had been keeping her company because the woman was a genius at writing heart warming romance novels. She had three of the novels on the centre table and two with her on the sofa that time.

"You and novels!" Aishat smiled.

Tomi beamed. "I just have to read them, they've been keeping me company. Besides, I told you about this woman, she's a genius."

"I'll read all her novels soon." She told her and took off her handbag.

"Anyways, what happened to you today?" Tomi asked her.

"I was harassed by lady, I don't even know her." She frowned.

Tomisin smiled. "Where did you guys meet?"

"She came to Hakeem's office and behaved as if she was his.. his whatever."

"What?" Tomisin laughed.

Aishat smiled and continued. "I'm serious now, I can't even trust Hakeem any longer."

"Have you always trusted him?"

"You've started this your frustrating questions now, It's been long I heard about Azeezat."

"Do you expect him to keep telling you about her?" Tomi faced her novel this time and continued reading.

"To cut the long story short, the lady harassed me in his office because I mistakenly called him by name, she just did as if she was his wife-to-be."

"She might be it, who know?" Tomi smiled and peeked at Aishat.

"It seems something is wrong with you right... She can't be."

Tomi laughed and dropped the novel on the sofa. She faced her and pressed her lips together, though amused. "Aishat." She called her name and laughed out. "You still love this guy!" She kept laughing and hit Aishat.

"Abeg jurh." Aishat grinned and pushed her away.

"Tell the truth so thag we can know what to be done.."

"What? Have I ever told you I don't like him?"

"Neither have you ever told me you are jealous." Tomi laughed at her.

"Anyhow."


******

Aishat had a cold shower and retired to her bed that evening. She hadn't eaten dinner but wasn't hungry. She had collected one of the novels Tomi was reading so that she could read some pages before she finally slept.

She read the first six pages of the book and was surprised the storyline was like what was going on between her and Hakeem. It was about a lady who came for employment oppurtunity in the company of the guy she had broken up with. She kept on smiling because of the attitude of the guy to that of the lady in the story, it looked like that of herself and Hakeem.

As she got to the twenty-fifth page, she slept off.


********


Hakeem got home after some minutes he ended the call between him and Uthman. He went into the room and changed into a short knicker and white shirt. He had been thinking on what to prepare for his friends until he remembered he could prepare them rice and stew.

He walked to the kitchen and checked the freezer for the grounded pepper and brought it for it to defrost. He opened the cooler where the rice was and took three cups. He dropped it on the cabinet and put some water on fire.

He transferred the pepper into the microwave so that it would defrost faster and walked to the living room to switch on the television set. He sat and watched the movie that was being shown for some minutes before he walmed back to the kitchen. He rinsed another pot and placed it on fire after he had rinsed the rice. He poured the palm oil on the empty pot and rushed back to the living room. He could hear the dialogues from the kitchen and knew it had gotten to the place he'd like to watch.

He had watched the movie severally but still liked it because it was a comedy movie. As he got to the living room, he started laughing at the scene and forgot the pot with palm oil on fire until the smoke from it got to the living room. He covered his nose and rushed to the kitchen. The kitchen had already been overwhelmed with smoke and he was getting short of breath. If he left the pot on fire later than that, there would be a fire outbreak.

He removed his hand from his nose and had no choice than to start inhaling the smoke. He looked for the hand glove and towels he could use to csrry the pot away from the cooker after he had switched it off but couldn't find any. It was from the spot he started coughing continuously.

update drops by 2:30 prompt

chii8: To me,theres nothing wrong with this story,every writer has his own style,TeeD,dont dwell much on critics

There are many errors in it... try to read Unfulfilled Promises, you'll know what I mean... d structure and co... buh I go change. ..

loading**** I've been weak.

AudreyTimms: Amen. Tanx dear. Hpe ur mum is okay now.

so u kbow abt it? lol... she's naw really better. what of uu?

Lol at thepatriot.... love u guys... I can't blame Akin too for a reason best known to us.... He knows me well and knows what's going on with me.

Really love u guys, as in... Love u bosses!!!

My next piece will b d beginning of my change, I assure u.

PrinceAdepoju: We are not helping him if we keep quiet.

Be it regular updater or good writer, there's a difference in regular updates and just-updates.

@Akinpelumi. Okay, why do you think Audrey is gaining ground as a regular updater than T.Dan.
The last time I checked, T.Dan had started posting his stories before her. So, where did all those "her-voters come from?

You can imagine when SammyHoe was new on Nairaland too. The EBIAG story brought him many followers. . .i think it's Audrey's time now.

I have to second thepatriot's post.

I've tried very hard to keep this cos I don't want to sound harsh or rude. But, thank you for voicing out my mind sir.

It seems we are taking this voting thing too far. This is a faceless forum and there's nothing any writer can do if a reader doesn't vote him or her.
The voting should not be by force, it should be voluntary. I've seen some readers ask for the link to the voting thread cos they wanted to vote for Writer.

That's how it should be!

On the other hand, I've developed interest in some writers here on Nairaland. Thier write-ups are almost flawless.
I don't think AudreyTimms begged her readers before they start voting for her.... and she won in less than a month(which amazes me till tomorrow!)

I will support you, sir, in advising TemitopeDaniel to work on himself in terms of grammar and composition which you stated.

I'm really sorry to confess this that the story is getting boring to me. It maybe because of the interesting ones I've come accross.
But this will not stop me from following T.Dan.

It should be a challenge for T.Dan and others to buckle up and improve. I'm not a better writer though.

@all readers and followers, there are so many ways to encourage T.Dan other than the voting thing. If he wins, good; if he doesn't, good.

We can help him by humbly criticizing his works and confess our mind, not pretend. This will go a long way in developing him.

We should quit the pretense and confess our minds, please.

I pray you will find a way to forgive me for this, boss.

There's nothing to forgive u about, you are only helping me now... It's just for a while, for a while...

Update coming soon... Trypa, I sight u, THANKS for dropping by!

Audrey Timms.

Get well soon Audrey, God will heal u IJNA and I'm sure all z well!


TEE'DAN

dopevick: when do u update d one on ur blog replie asap

every saturday 5pm

Harmonyemerald: Sorry abt that but I didn't get the mail. I shaa contacted him but he said his system crashed and he lost it as well.

How do we na go abt it you should av told me when everything was fresh.. I think all stories have been deleted naw.. lemme go and try again sha